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S.I.D-Sound - Smile (Short Ver.) [Osu|Taiko]

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UI Hirasawa wrote:

My first modding
Hard
00:04:729 hitsound "finish"
00:10:509 (1) apply hitsound "clap"
00:10:891 (2) apply hitsound "clap"
00:11:082 (3) apply hitsound "clap"
00:11:464 (4) apply hitsound "clap"
00:11:656 (5) apply hitsound "clap"
00:15:668 (6) apply hitsound "clap"
00:15:859 (7) apply hitsound "clap"
00:17:770 (4) apply hitsound "clap"
00:17:961 (5) apply hitsound "clap"
00:31:337 (4) apply hitsound "clap"
00:47:770 (6) apply hitsound "clap"
00:49:299 slider finish apply hitsound "clap"
00:55:414 slider finish apply hitsound "clap"
01:00:955 (1) apply hitsound "clap"
01:01:337 (2) apply hitsound "clap"
01:01:528 (3) apply hitsound "clap"
01:01:910 (4) apply hitsound "clap"
01:02:101 (5) apply hitsound "clap"
01:06:687 (2) apply hitsound "clap"
01:08:407 (5) apply hitsound "clap"
01:14:522 (1) apply hitsound "clap"
01:26:656 (3) apply hitsound "clap"
01:26:942 (4) apply hitsound "clap"
01:27:133 slider start apply hitsound "clap"

I point out hitsound

wish your beatmap rank ~
All fixed thank you~

:)
- i N o R i -_old
[General]

음.. 전체적으로 제가 이 부분은 못건들어서요...
하지만..제안은 해볼게요..
offset 이 0이네요..?
설정하셔야겠어요...
포럼 > timingcheck 에 가셔서 한번 확인해보세요!
(저도 여기서 도움을 받아봤어요~ )
태그에는 노래제목이 있으면 안된다네요..!
(저도 이지적받아봐서 알아요..ㅠ)

[Easy]

x

[Normal]

노말치고는 HP드레인이 낮은것같네요.. 3,4 정도로 해주면 좋을거 같네요..(꼭 이지가틈..!)

00:00:191 (1) - 00:02:597 에서 끝나는게 좋을거 같네요.
00:06:878 (5) - 이 부분 슬라이더를 x:320,y:240으로 옴겨주면 좋을거같네요..! 3,4 부분과 간격이 달라서 이상해요..!
00:15:095 (3) - 이 슬라이더 어색한데... 으음..요긴 패스 !
00:17:388 (3) - 이 서클도 x:96,y:265로 옴겨주세요..!
00:19:490 (2,3,4) - 간격 비슷하게 해주세요.
00:29:426 (1,2,3) - 이 부분도 간격 맞춰주세요.
00:45:095 (1) - 00:45:095 에서 시작해 00:48:917 에서 끝나는게 괜찮을거 같네요.
00:56:560 (1) - 뉴콤보가 필요할거 같네요.

[Hard]

00:00:382 (1) - 이 슬라이더 를 00:01:337 에서 시작해 00:03:057 로 끝내주는게 더 괜찮을거 같네요.. 처음부터 바로 시작하는건...
00:15:668 (6,7) - 이 부분의 점프는 일부로 그러신거 아니라면 같게 만들어주세요!
00:35:159 (1,2) - 이 부분 제대로 수정해주세요 슬라이더 뒤에께 안붙어있네요..
01:24:076 (1,2) - 위와 동일
01:33:821 (2,3,4,5) - 간격 같게 !

[Insane]

x

곡은 너무좋아요..ㅠ
그냥 곡이 좋으니깐 끌려서 하게됫네요..ㅇㅁㅇ !
~
저의 모딩은 제안이니 별루다 싶으면 안고치셔두 대요..!
!
이 비트맵은 끝까지 만들어야 해요 ! 화이팅~>w<
그럼..!
Topic Starter
SeeU_old
thanks ~ :)
jossieP
timing check under corean post @v@
BPM: 157,000 (current)
Offset: 15 (+15 on current)
Topic Starter
SeeU_old
Thank you :)
Sun Rainbow
Can I make Insane diff?
Topic Starter
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Sun Rainbow wrote:

Can I make Insane diff?
Sure ! :)
Ranger
모딩 들어갑니다

[General]
노래폴더에 있는 .osb파일을 지워주세요
스토리보드를 쓰지않는한 필요없습니다

[Easy]
음...BG가 없는것 같군요

우선 한가지 조언을 해드리자면
이지랑 노멀 난이도는 Distance Snap을 통해 간격을 일정하게 맞추는것이 좋습니다
특히 이지에서 노트사이의 간격이 뒤죽박죽이면 언랭요소가 될수도 있어요


00:12:244 (1) - 시작부분에 피니시
00:17:785 (1) - 스페이싱 에러입니다 x:264 y:168에 놓아주세요
00:30:588 (3) - 시작부분에 피니시
00:39:378 (1) - 스페이싱 에러입니다만....으아아 놓을부분이 없군요.슬라이더를 새로 만드는걸 추천합니다
00:45:492 (1) - 피니시
01:02:690 (1) - 시작부분에 피니시
01:14:919 (1) - 피니시
01:25:906 (1) - ^

[Normal]
일단 위에서 말한 피니시는 다 넣어주세요

00:00:206 (1) - 스핀을 여기까지 놓아주세요
00:27:529 (2,3,4,3) - 아마 여기가 점프구간인것 같은데...노멀에 점프를 넣으면 안된다고 알고있습니다
01:06:128 (1,2) - 이부분은 초보들한테는 좀 어려울것 같습니다
밑에 슬라이더는 제안이니 그냥 무시해도 됩니다
01:19:122 (4,5) - ^
01:26:001 (1) - 슬라이더를 이렇게 바꾸는게 좋을듯 합니다(Grid Size:Tiny[G를 눌러 변경가능])
01:35:173 (5) - 역시 마찬가지로 이부분은 초보한테 좀 어렵습니다.슬라이더 하나로 때우시는게 좋을듯 해요

[Hard]
마찬가지로 이지에 적은 피니시를 넣어주세요

00:03:454 (2,3,4,5) - Grid Size를 Tiny로 바꾸시고 아래 이미지처럼 해주세요

00:03:454 (2) - x:356 y:128
00:03:645 (3) - x:256 y:128
00:03:836 (4) - x:156 y:128
00:11:862 (6) - 박자가 뭔가 어색합니다.슬라이더를 지우시고 00:12:244이부분에 노트를 하나 추가하는게 더 좋다고 생각합니다
00:25:429 (3) - 지우는게 좋을듯 합니다

랭크되시길 바랍니다~
Topic Starter
SeeU_old
>_<
reet610
However.. have not Easy BG
File fomat change to .Png file

:)
Topic Starter
SeeU_old
Thank you for star and modding ~ :)
Topic Starter
SeeU_old
:)
[ S o R a ]
(short ver.) --> (Short Ver.)

Change the title please. ;)
Topic Starter
SeeU_old

[ S o R a ] wrote:

(short ver.) --> (Short Ver.)

Change the title please. ;)
Thanks :)
I U
Nice song~
KDS
Topic Starter
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:)
Topic Starter
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plz moding ~ >w<
B2IN
안녕하세요 @ v @ 한국인 모딩큐에서 왔습니다.

[General]

bg를 1024*768으로 바꿔주세요 .안되면 800*600 (근데 이 노래는 찾기 좀 힘들어보이네요 ;ㅅ; 제가 찾아서 파일드릴랬는데 못 찾았습니다.

Kiai타임은 게스트 난이도를 제외하고 모두 같아야합니다. (길이)

쓰지않는 타이밍포인트는 다지워주세요

[Easy]
이지모드는 슬라이더 속도 변화 주지않습니다 지워주세요
00:03:836 (x) - 노트추가
00:45:491 (1) - 피니시 제거하시고 끝을 00:47:785로 해주세요 (빈공간은 노트추가)
01:18:358 (6) - 커브슬라이더로 만들어주세요
01:19:696 (1) - 뉴콤보제거
[Normal]
슬라이더 속도변화 이렇게 많이써주시지 말아주세요
00:06:892 (5) - 끝을 00:07:658로 해주세요
00:09:186 (2) - 00:09:569 (3)랑 순서를 바꿔주세요 http://puu.sh/ltxh
00:10:715 (1) - 00:11:862가 끝으로 오게해주세요 (00:12:244 노트추가)
00:13:772 (2) - 00:14:919가 슬라이더 끝으로 만들고(커다란 커브 슬라이더로 만들면 되겠네요) 00:15:110 (3) 은 00:15:301로 00:15:492 (4)은 00:15:683로 이동시켜주세요
00:15:873 (1) - 00:16:065로 이동 슬라이더 끝은 똑같이 끝내주세요
00:45:491 (1) - 피니시 제거하시고 끝을 00:47:785로 해주세요 (빈공간은 노트추가)
00:53:899 (1) - 커브슬라이더로 만들어주세요
[Hard]
한 난이도에 이렇게 많은 슬라이더 속도가 쓰면 안됩니다.
게다가 하드니까 좀만 줄여주세요 ..
00:01:352 (1) - 00:00:015 에 시작해서 00:03:072로 끝나는 스핀도 괜찮아보이네요 ( http://puu.sh/ltgI ) ( http://puu.sh/ltgV )
00:11:862 (1) - 두번째점 가운대로 오게해서 이쁘게 바꿔주세요
00:16:161 (2) - 가사 '매일' 이라는 거에 맞추시려면 그냥 서클노트로 바꿔주세요 그리고 00:16:257 여기로 옮겨주세요
00:20:269 (7) - 이쁘게 바꿔주세요 ex)http://puu.sh/ltpM
01:02:307 (6) - 슬라이더 꼬리를 01:02:690에 제대로 끝까지 오게 해주세요그리고 꼬리부분만 피니쉬
01:02:881 (1) - 머리피니쉬 제거
01:02:881 (1) - 삭제하고 01:03:072 부터 노트 찍어주세요
01:14:537 (1) - 뉴콤제거
01:17:212 (4) - 커브슬라이더 만들어주세요
01:25:989 (1,2,3,4) - 그냥 평범한 디스텐스에 맞는 점프가 나을거같아요
01:39:938 (7) - 가장 마지막 부분에 피니쉬 넣어주세요
이것들 말고도 고쳐야할 부분은 많은데 너무 많아서 이거밖에 찝지 못했네요 죄송합니다.
Topic Starter
SeeU_old
move to WIP
Topic Starter
SeeU_old
Restart!
popner
Hi.

Just suggestions:

[General]
  1. Mp3 file must be 128~192kbps.
  2. Since you map all osu standard diff yourself, you must use same Kiai section in them.
  3. Preview points are needed in all diffs.
[Easy]
00:04:600 (2,4) - the spacing should be 0.8x
00:21:225 (1) - same suggestion as [SeeU] (map the break section)
00:37:467 (1) - the shape is not good..This is better:

00:57:339 (3) - same as 00:21:225 (1)
01:19:696 (1,1) - a little overlap. Move 01:21:034 (1)? Like this:


[Normal]
AR+1 OD+2?
Keep constant spacing in Normal (open distance snap)
00:03:454 (1) - make a symmetric shape? Like this:


[SeeU]
00:03:072 (1) - add finish on slider head? (You can decrease the volume a little)
00:05:365 (4) - extend to 00:05:747? Or there will be a pause. It is weird and unexpected while playing.
00:22:562 (10) - why don't map this section? It is mapable and you don't need a break in such a short song. Also the sudden stop at 00:22:562 is unexpected.
00:29:823 (1,1) - remove NCs?
00:33:741 (1) - start at 00:33:645?
00:45:492 (1) - end at 00:47:212? So there will be enough time for player to prepare for next note.
00:57:339 (7,8,9) - spacing issue. Move farther?
01:02:594 - add a note here to catch the vocal?
01:12:817 (1,2) - the rhythm don't fit the vocal..
01:17:116 (3) - ^
01:17:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:24:569 (9) - add once repeat

GL~
Topic Starter
SeeU_old

popner wrote:

Hi.

Just suggestions:

[General]
  1. Mp3 file must be 128~192kbps.
  2. Since you map all osu standard diff yourself, you must use same Kiai section in them.
  3. Preview points are needed in all diffs.
[Easy]
00:04:600 (2,4) - the spacing should be 0.8x
00:21:225 (1) - same suggestion as [SeeU] (map the break section)
00:37:467 (1) - the shape is not good..This is better:

00:57:339 (3) - same as 00:21:225 (1)
01:19:696 (1,1) - a little overlap. Move 01:21:034 (1)? Like this:


[Normal]
AR+1 OD+2?
Keep constant spacing in Normal (open distance snap)
00:03:454 (1) - make a symmetric shape? Like this:


[SeeU]
00:03:072 (1) - add finish on slider head? (You can decrease the volume a little)
00:05:365 (4) - extend to 00:05:747? Or there will be a pause. It is weird and unexpected while playing.
00:22:562 (10) - why don't map this section? It is mapable and you don't need a break in such a short song. Also the sudden stop at 00:22:562 is unexpected.
00:29:823 (1,1) - remove NCs?
00:33:741 (1) - start at 00:33:645?
00:45:492 (1) - end at 00:47:212? So there will be enough time for player to prepare for next note.
00:57:339 (7,8,9) - spacing issue. Move farther?
01:02:594 - add a note here to catch the vocal?
01:12:817 (1,2) - the rhythm don't fit the vocal..
01:17:116 (3) - ^
01:17:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:24:569 (9) - add once repeat

GL~






All Fixed
thank you!
and I'm sorry that checked for late
Deni

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General

Hi from #modreqs.

Your background image is very pixelated, maybe find a new one with higher quality...

Remove Maplestory from the tags since it's already in the source.

Easy

Always remember to use distance snap in this difficulty. Sometimes spacing is 1.00 and then suddenly it's 0.50 or 1.86.. It always has to be the same. +- 0.2

You need a bit more work on the sliders. Add curves, make them symmetrical... Here's a useful link: t/37194

00:12:244 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! You have to change that!
00:21:034 Why break here?
00:30:588 (3) - Add a curve make it look more interesting
00:42:435 (1) - ^
00:48:167 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! You have to change that!
00:48:167 (1,2,3) - 1 and 2 are overlapping with 3. Not so pretty.
00:55:811 (1) - Add a curve make it look more interesting
01:02:690 (1) - ^
01:04:600 (3) - ^
01:15:301 (2) - ^
01:16:830 (4) - ^
01:27:530 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! You have to change that!
01:32:116 (1) - Add a curve make it look more interesting
01:35:938 (1) - Veeeerryy long slider maybe start it later and map something before..

Normal

Always remember to use distance snap in this difficulty. You often didn't use it.

00:03:454 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
00:12:626 (1) - ^ + Make it look more interesting add a curve.
00:13:772 (2) - Make it more symmetrical
00:18:358 (4) - Add a curve or something ;)
00:24:854 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
00:37:084 (1) - This circle is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
00:37:466 (2) - Add a curve or something ;)
00:48:167 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
01:21:034 (3) - Add a curve make it more interesting...
01:26:002 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal! + Very boring slider lol
01:36:416 (1) - Same as in Easy
Topic Starter
SeeU_old

Deni wrote:


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General

Hi from #modreqs.

Your background image is very pixelated, maybe find a new one with higher quality...

Remove Maplestory from the tags since it's already in the source.

Easy

Always remember to use distance snap in this difficulty. Sometimes spacing is 1.00 and then suddenly it's 0.50 or 1.86.. It always has to be the same. +- 0.2

You need a bit more work on the sliders. Add curves, make them symmetrical... Here's a useful link: t/37194

00:12:244 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! You have to change that!
00:21:034 Why break here?
00:30:588 (3) - Add a curve make it look more interesting
00:42:435 (1) - ^
00:48:167 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! You have to change that!
00:48:167 (1,2,3) - 1 and 2 are overlapping with 3. Not so pretty.
00:55:811 (1) - Add a curve make it look more interesting
01:02:690 (1) - ^
01:04:600 (3) - ^
01:15:301 (2) - ^
01:16:830 (4) - ^
01:27:530 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Easy! You have to change that!
01:32:116 (1) - Add a curve make it look more interesting
01:35:938 (1) - Veeeerryy long slider maybe start it later and map something before..

Normal

Always remember to use distance snap in this difficulty. You often didn't use it.

00:03:454 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
00:12:626 (1) - ^ + Make it look more interesting add a curve.
00:13:772 (2) - Make it more symmetrical
00:18:358 (4) - Add a curve or something ;)
00:24:854 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
00:37:084 (1) - This circle is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
00:37:466 (2) - Add a curve or something ;)
00:48:167 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal!
01:21:034 (3) - Add a curve make it more interesting...
01:26:002 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner before for Normal! + Very boring slider lol
01:36:416 (1) - Same as in Easy


Thank you for advice :)
Topic Starter
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It is hard to rank for beatmap :(
Topic Starter
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Restart !
plz modding ~ :)

Edit : move to pending
KingKrishna
THIS IS A m4m mod! please remeber to mod one of my songs.
Such a cute song!
EASY
00:21:129 is this break really needed?
00:58:826^
00:50:314(3) make this slider more curvy ?
NORMAL
starting out with a spinner is kinda hard for the player since they cant even get ready :P
00:50:460(2) make this go to x 224 y 352
01:06:215(7) make this slider face upwards also more curvey?
01:32:116(1) please fix this slider ;-;... it looks bad
HARD
00:19:792(5,7) these sliders look kinda wierd..
01:14:919(1) i like this slider :D
01:22:658(6) this slider is to choppy make it more smoother (curvey)?

Please tell me what you liked about this mod and didnt, also tell me why you did not accept some of my suggestions so i can improve.
Topic Starter
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mebins wrote:

THIS IS A m4m mod! please remeber to mod one of my songs. Okay ~ in the near future
Such a cute song!
EASY
00:21:129 is this break really needed? removed and added new notes !
00:58:826^
00:50:314(3) make this slider more curvy ?
NORMAL
starting out with a spinner is kinda hard for the player since they cant even get ready :P
00:50:460(2) make this go to x 224 y 352
01:06:215(7) make this slider face upwards also more curvey?
01:32:116(1) please fix this slider ;-;... it looks bad Fixed !
HARD
00:19:792(5,7) these sliders look kinda wierd.. I love these slider type so I passed this point
01:14:919(1) i like this slider :D Me tooo
01:22:658(6) this slider is to choppy make it more smoother (curvey)?

Please tell me what you liked about this mod and didnt, also tell me why you did not accept some of my suggestions so i can improve.
Thank you for advice and star ~
except personal opinion ..
I think that your mod is good in generally :)
Dark Fang
안녕하세요

[General]

offset +16 (31)

맵들의 표면적 상태를 보았을때 큰 문제는 없어 보입니다. 잡자면, Distance 가 일정하지 않다는 것입니다.
맵을 한번 다시한번 새로 만드셔 보는걸 추천드리고요. 만약 새로 만드시면 슬라이더도 예쁘게 만들어주시고( 요즘 도입된 새로운 시스템에는 슬라이더를 둥글고 예쁘게 만들 수 있는 시스템이 있습니다.)Distance도 일정하게 해주세요.
제 도움이 필요하시면 연락 주시고요.

I like this song <3
if you need my help. Call me via Forum, In-Game
Topic Starter
SeeU_old

Dark Fang wrote:

안녕하세요

[General]

offset +16 (31)

맵들의 표면적 상태를 보았을때 큰 문제는 없어 보입니다. 잡자면, Distance 가 일정하지 않다는 것입니다.
맵을 한번 다시한번 새로 만드셔 보는걸 추천드리고요. 만약 새로 만드시면 슬라이더도 예쁘게 만들어주시고( 요즘 도입된 새로운 시스템에는 슬라이더를 둥글고 예쁘게 만들 수 있는 시스템이 있습니다.)Distance도 일정하게 해주세요.
제 도움이 필요하시면 연락 주시고요.

I like this song <3
if you need my help. Call me via Forum, In-Game


저도 솔직히 사실 이 비트맵이 만든지 일년이 다되가는거라
속히.. 매핑에 대해서 많이 알지 못하고 그때는 지금 처럼 에디트 기능이 좋지(?) 않았던 편이라 ;
다시 만들까 생각도 했었는데 이렇게 말씀하시니 다시 만들어야겠네요
오프셋 잡아주신거랑 쪽지로 주신 정보 감사합니다 :)
HelloSCV
From mentee's reuqest xD

SPOILER
AIBat
이지 하고 노말은 00:00:031 - 이 오프셋인데 하드는 00:00:032 - 고 태고같은경우는 00:00:015 네요 조절해주세요
이지 하드 태고 난이도의 태그에 KDS 추가해주세요

General
개인적으로 인세인이 없는게 좀 아쉽네요 ㅠ 노래도 좋고 박자감도 있어서 좋을듯 한데
아티스트를 S.I.D-Sound 로 고쳐주세요 http://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/S.I.D-Sound
키아이 타임이 01:06:910 - 여기서 갑자기 끝나는데 저기 끝지점을 01:14:554 - 여기로 옮기시면 좋을거 같아요 ( 전난이도 공통 )
그리고 몇몇 Inherited point 가 언스냅으로 되어있어요 ( 초록색선 ) 특히 키아이 타임은 절때로 언스냅이 되면 안되니 조절해주세요
01:40:923 - 마지막 키아이 여기서 끝내주세요

Easy
이지에선 스피너 뒤 노트 간격이 좀 좁네요 적어도 2박을 비우시는걸 추천 하는데 좀 애매하네요;

00:08:056 (5) - 뉴콤보?
00:12:260 (1) - 끝에 피니시 삭제
00:33:661 (1) - 스피너 이동하시고 00:34:999 - 여기서 스피너 끝내주세요
00:45:508 (1) - 이건 00:47:228 - 여기서 끝
01:08:820 (1,2,3) - 이런 박자는 조금 그런거 같은데 http://puu.sh/1QkQu 이건 어떨까요?
01:21:050 (1,2,3) - ^

Normal
00:21:050 (9,10) - http://puu.sh/1QkEx 이건 어떨까요?
00:33:278 (4) - 노트 추가 + 00:33:661 (1) - 스피너 이동 ( 물론 뒤에 스피너 길이 조절해주시구요 )
00:45:508 (4) - ^ 00:45:890 (1) - ^
00:52:004 (7) - 뉴콤보
00:53:916 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제
00:55:061 (7) - 뉴콤보
00:56:590 (1) - 여긴 뉴콤보 삭제
00:58:120 (1) - 반복 1번줄이시고 00:58:693 (2) - 여기로 2번 슬라이더 이동 00:59:457 (3) - 노트추가
01:17:991 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제
01:19:330 (8) - 뉴콤보
01:21:050 (1) - 뉴콤보삭제
01:23:725 (1) - 스피너 이동
01:36:337 (1) - 여기로 스피너 이동

Hard
00:06:910 (1) - 리핏 1번 제거?
00:12:261 (1,2) - 박자 반대로 하시면 더 어울릴거 같아요
00:14:363 (7,8) - ^
00:22:579 (5) - 여기 슬라이더 보다 00:22:579 (5) - 00:22:770 (6) - 노트 2개가 더 박자에 맞는거 같아요
01:08:821 (1,2) - 요것도 박자 반대
01:09:586 (3,4) - ^
01:11:305 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2) - http://puu.sh/1QkzW 이게 더 박자에 잘맞지 않을까요?

힛사 넣는 방법에 대한 간단한 팁*
SPOILER

자 저기 마우스로 5분여간 그리다가 빡쳐서 그냥 동그라미 툴로 그린 원이 그려져있죠?
바로 저기에 클랩이나 휘슬같은걸 넣어주시면 어떤곡이든 잘맞는 편이에요 ㅋㅋ

맵이 깔끔하고 좋네요 xD 저도 시드사운드 좋아하는 편인데 ㅋㅋ
잘하면 빠른 시일내로 랭크가 가능할거 같아요
Good luck for rank!
Topic Starter
SeeU_old

HelloSCV wrote:

From mentee's reuqest xD

SPOILER
AIBat
이지 하고 노말은 00:00:031 - 이 오프셋인데 하드는 00:00:032 - 고 태고같은경우는 00:00:015 네요 조절해주세요
이지 하드 태고 난이도의 태그에 KDS 추가해주세요

General
개인적으로 인세인이 없는게 좀 아쉽네요 ㅠ 노래도 좋고 박자감도 있어서 좋을듯 한데
아티스트를 S.I.D-Sound 로 고쳐주세요 http://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/S.I.D-Sound
키아이 타임이 01:06:910 - 여기서 갑자기 끝나는데 저기 끝지점을 01:14:554 - 여기로 옮기시면 좋을거 같아요 ( 전난이도 공통 )
그리고 몇몇 Inherited point 가 언스냅으로 되어있어요 ( 초록색선 ) 특히 키아이 타임은 절때로 언스냅이 되면 안되니 조절해주세요
01:40:923 - 마지막 키아이 여기서 끝내주세요

Easy
이지에선 스피너 뒤 노트 간격이 좀 좁네요 적어도 2박을 비우시는걸 추천 하는데 좀 애매하네요;

00:08:056 (5) - 뉴콤보?
00:12:260 (1) - 끝에 피니시 삭제
00:33:661 (1) - 스피너 이동하시고 00:34:999 - 여기서 스피너 끝내주세요
00:45:508 (1) - 이건 00:47:228 - 여기서 끝
01:08:820 (1,2,3) - 이런 박자는 조금 그런거 같은데 http://puu.sh/1QkQu 이건 어떨까요?
01:21:050 (1,2,3) - ^

Normal
00:21:050 (9,10) - http://puu.sh/1QkEx 이건 어떨까요?
00:33:278 (4) - 노트 추가 + 00:33:661 (1) - 스피너 이동 ( 물론 뒤에 스피너 길이 조절해주시구요 )
00:45:508 (4) - ^ 00:45:890 (1) - ^
00:52:004 (7) - 뉴콤보
00:53:916 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제
00:55:061 (7) - 뉴콤보
00:56:590 (1) - 여긴 뉴콤보 삭제
00:58:120 (1) - 반복 1번줄이시고 00:58:693 (2) - 여기로 2번 슬라이더 이동 00:59:457 (3) - 노트추가
01:17:991 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제
01:19:330 (8) - 뉴콤보
01:21:050 (1) - 뉴콤보삭제
01:23:725 (1) - 스피너 이동
01:36:337 (1) - 여기로 스피너 이동

Hard
00:06:910 (1) - 리핏 1번 제거?
00:12:261 (1,2) - 박자 반대로 하시면 더 어울릴거 같아요
00:14:363 (7,8) - ^
00:22:579 (5) - 여기 슬라이더 보다 00:22:579 (5) - 00:22:770 (6) - 노트 2개가 더 박자에 맞는거 같아요
01:08:821 (1,2) - 요것도 박자 반대
01:09:586 (3,4) - ^
01:11:305 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2) - http://puu.sh/1QkzW 이게 더 박자에 잘맞지 않을까요?

힛사 넣는 방법에 대한 간단한 팁*
SPOILER

자 저기 마우스로 5분여간 그리다가 빡쳐서 그냥 동그라미 툴로 그린 원이 그려져있죠?
바로 저기에 클랩이나 휘슬같은걸 넣어주시면 어떤곡이든 잘맞는 편이에요 ㅋㅋ

맵이 깔끔하고 좋네요 xD 저도 시드사운드 좋아하는 편인데 ㅋㅋ
잘하면 빠른 시일내로 랭크가 가능할거 같아요
Good luck for rank!

수정완료!
감사합니다 :)
Tony
Hi. I'm here because you posted on my queue :)

[General]
Too much kiai. delete the first section...
end the 3rd kiai 01:25:636 - instead of here 01:25:445 -

[Easy]
OD +1 or +2. The current settings are too low for it.
00:12:260 (1) - this is really ugly, and a little to early after a spinner.... maybe remove the spinner which in my opinion doesn't fit there.
00:21:432 (1) - ^
00:25:253 (4,5) - try ctrl+g for these two notes. the rhythm will sound better
00:49:330 (2) - this clap is awesome add some in that section of the song ... I'll help you with them
00:50:859 (4) - clap
00:52:005 (7) - clap on reverse
00:53:534 (9) - clap on end
00:56:973 (4) - clap
00:57:929 (1) - delete slider and map that part. It's so random there...don't be lazy please D:
01:01:368 (1,2) - fix distance between them
01:11:878 (5) - clap on end and remove clap from start
01:12:642 (6) - clap on end
01:13:406 (7) - whistle instead of clap
01:13:788 (8) - clap on end
01:14:935 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:33:279 (2) - finish on start?
01:35:954 (1) - add finish on this spinner :p

[Normal]
00:06:909 (4) - awww this is placed so wrong. try moving it somewhere else. it plays awful
00:11:495 (6) - try an 1/2 triplet here instead
00:12:260 (1,2,3) - rhythm is so bad... try like this : http://puu.sh/1Rtqe
00:16:081 (5) - delete the clap from end. it's random
00:16:655 (1) - add finish here
00:19:520 (6) - add a new combo
00:22:196 (10) - delete finish
00:48:183 (1) - finish on end
01:02:706 - you can improve rhythm by changing like this http://puu.sh/1Rtqe
01:05:762 (5,6) - ctrl+g these two
01:36:336 (1) - add finish like I said in easy

[Hard]
00:13:598 (5,6) - ctrl+g these two for better rhythm.
00:22:770 (6,1) - the distance between them is too small. move (1) farther
00:44:363 (1,2) - ctrl+g these two for better rhythm.
01:08:821 (1,2) - ^
01:09:586 (3,4) - ^
01:25:446 (6,1,2) - the distance between them is too smal... try to fix this please :)


Cute song. You need more mods. Good luck with it :)
Topic Starter
SeeU_old

Tony wrote:

Hi. I'm here because you posted on my queue :)

[General]
Too much kiai. delete the first section...
end the 3rd kiai 01:25:636 - instead of here 01:25:445 -

[Easy]
OD +1 or +2. The current settings are too low for it.
00:12:260 (1) - this is really ugly, and a little to early after a spinner.... maybe remove the spinner which in my opinion doesn't fit there.
00:21:432 (1) - ^
00:25:253 (4,5) - try ctrl+g for these two notes. the rhythm will sound better
00:49:330 (2) - this clap is awesome add some in that section of the song ... I'll help you with them
00:50:859 (4) - clap
00:52:005 (7) - clap on reverse
00:53:534 (9) - clap on end
00:56:973 (4) - clap
00:57:929 (1) - delete slider and map that part. It's so random there...don't be lazy please D:
01:01:368 (1,2) - fix distance between them
01:11:878 (5) - clap on end and remove clap from start
01:12:642 (6) - clap on end
01:13:406 (7) - whistle instead of clap
01:13:788 (8) - clap on end
01:14:935 (1) - finish instead of clap
01:33:279 (2) - finish on start?
01:35:954 (1) - add finish on this spinner :p

[Normal]
00:06:909 (4) - awww this is placed so wrong. try moving it somewhere else. it plays awful
00:11:495 (6) - try an 1/2 triplet here instead
00:12:260 (1,2,3) - rhythm is so bad... try like this : http://puu.sh/1Rtqe
00:16:081 (5) - delete the clap from end. it's random
00:16:655 (1) - add finish here
00:19:520 (6) - add a new combo
00:22:196 (10) - delete finish
00:48:183 (1) - finish on end
01:02:706 - you can improve rhythm by changing like this http://puu.sh/1Rtqe
01:05:762 (5,6) - ctrl+g these two
01:36:336 (1) - add finish like I said in easy

[Hard]
00:13:598 (5,6) - ctrl+g these two for better rhythm.
00:22:770 (6,1) - the distance between them is too small. move (1) farther
00:44:363 (1,2) - ctrl+g these two for better rhythm.
01:08:821 (1,2) - ^
01:09:586 (3,4) - ^
01:25:446 (6,1,2) - the distance between them is too smal... try to fix this please :)


Cute song. You need more mods. Good luck with it :)


Thank you Tony !
your mod is soooo good :)
MerryGate
from #modreqs

Only standard diff.

[General]
->AudioLeadIn change to 1500.
->You should adjust volume.
Please refer to example.


[Hard]
->Vol example
00:03:088 - Vol.80%
00:06:909 - 100%
00:07:674 - 80%
00:09:202 - 85%
00:10:540 - 90%
00:35:190 - 80%
00:35:572 - 75%
00:35:954 - 70%
00:36:336 - 65%
00:36:718 - 80%
01:02:706 - 100%
01:26:018 - 90%
01:27:164 - 100%

Try to avoid overlap as possible.
Take advantage of the stack.(But,you shouldnt use hard to read stack.)
That is small things. But that will make big difference to looks.


00:03:088 (1) - add finish to start
00:06:909 (1) - ~ 00:10:348 (9) - Doesnt fit to the music.
00:07:674 (2) - finish to start
00:08:438 (4) - ^
00:09:202 (6) - ^
00:09:967 (8) - ^
00:12:261 (1) - make symmetry
00:13:789 (6) - ^
00:13:597 (5) - remove whistle
00:13:788 (6) - whistle and finish to start
00:16:656 (1,2,3) - finish to start
00:20:000 (6) - whistle
00:20:094 (7) - whistle to start
00:20:477 (8) - finish to start
00:21:433 (1,2,3,4) - unnatural
00:22:196 (3,4,5,6) - uniform spacing
00:23:725 (2) - hmm...whistle to triple?
00:25:253 - Here should be the starting point of the object. Probably slider is suitable. and,whistle.
00:25:637 (6) - remove whistle
00:26:019 (7) - change to slider. and,whitsle
00:26:400 (8) - remove whistle
00:26:782 (10) - Listen to the music and,finish to end.
00:30:413 -~ 00:33:471 - Doesnt really fit the music...
Well,but,some of the triple may be omitted.
00:36:719 (5) - NC. and,finish to start
00:37:102 (1) - reNC
00:36:719 ~ very noisy. because you used so many whistle. I think just enough to add whistle to second and fourth white lines.
00:47:419 ~ 00:47:610 - Music doesnt exist.Over mapping.
00:47:228 (1) - finish to start
00:47:611 (2) - finish to end
00:48:949 (6) - NC
00:49:331 (1) - reNC
00:54:299 (1,2,3,4) - clap
01:00:796 (5) - clap to end
01:02:324 (5) - finish to start. and stack to 01:02:324 (5) -
01:02:706 - Here should be the starting point of the object.
01:07:102 (6,7,8) - finish to start
01:08:821 (1) -
01:13:025 (1) - finish to end
01:13:981 (5) - clap to end
01:17:801 (1) - finish to start
01:22:578 (6) - ^*4
01:26:019 ~ It is the same as described above.

I was going to mod to all diff.
But,I am tired. Because so many point out.
Refer to this mod,should be able to fix also other diff.

good luck.
Topic Starter
SeeU_old

MerryGate wrote:

from #modreqs

Only standard diff.

[General]
->AudioLeadIn change to 1500.
->You should adjust volume.
Please refer to example.


[Hard]
->Vol example
00:03:088 - Vol.80%
00:06:909 - 100%
00:07:674 - 80%
00:09:202 - 85%
00:10:540 - 90%
00:35:190 - 80%
00:35:572 - 75%
00:35:954 - 70%
00:36:336 - 65%
00:36:718 - 80%
01:02:706 - 100%
01:26:018 - 90%
01:27:164 - 100%

Try to avoid overlap as possible.
Take advantage of the stack.(But,you shouldnt use hard to read stack.)
That is small things. But that will make big difference to looks.


00:03:088 (1) - add finish to start
00:06:909 (1) - ~ 00:10:348 (9) - Doesnt fit to the music.
00:07:674 (2) - finish to start
00:08:438 (4) - ^
00:09:202 (6) - ^
00:09:967 (8) - ^
00:12:261 (1) - make symmetry
00:13:789 (6) - ^
00:13:597 (5) - remove whistle
00:13:788 (6) - whistle and finish to start
00:16:656 (1,2,3) - finish to start
00:20:000 (6) - whistle
00:20:094 (7) - whistle to start
00:20:477 (8) - finish to start
00:21:433 (1,2,3,4) - unnatural
00:22:196 (3,4,5,6) - uniform spacing
00:23:725 (2) - hmm...whistle to triple?
00:25:253 - Here should be the starting point of the object. Probably slider is suitable. and,whistle.
00:25:637 (6) - remove whistle
00:26:019 (7) - change to slider. and,whitsle
00:26:400 (8) - remove whistle
00:26:782 (10) - Listen to the music and,finish to end.
00:30:413 -~ 00:33:471 - Doesnt really fit the music...
Well,but,some of the triple may be omitted.
00:36:719 (5) - NC. and,finish to start
00:37:102 (1) - reNC
00:36:719 ~ very noisy. because you used so many whistle. I think just enough to add whistle to second and fourth white lines.
00:47:419 ~ 00:47:610 - Music doesnt exist.Over mapping.
00:47:228 (1) - finish to start
00:47:611 (2) - finish to end
00:48:949 (6) - NC
00:49:331 (1) - reNC
00:54:299 (1,2,3,4) - clap
01:00:796 (5) - clap to end
01:02:324 (5) - finish to start. and stack to 01:02:324 (5) -
01:02:706 - Here should be the starting point of the object.
01:07:102 (6,7,8) - finish to start
01:08:821 (1) -
01:13:025 (1) - finish to end
01:13:981 (5) - clap to end
01:17:801 (1) - finish to start
01:22:578 (6) - ^*4
01:26:019 ~ It is the same as described above.

I was going to mod to all diff.
But,I am tired. Because so many point out.
Refer to this mod,should be able to fix also other diff.

good luck.
Thank you ! :)
Cloudchaser


Suggestions, comments.
High recommend.

☢ Timing: offset 1572?

☢ Hard ☢

00:49:140 (2) - clap

Nothing else I can say about hard diff, cuz is very good :D

☢ Normal ☢

00:22:196 (5) - clap
00:50:859 (5) - clap on the top
00:52:387 (2) - ^
00:56:973 (5) - remove whiste and add a clap
01:03:851 (2) - clap on the top

☢ Easy ☢

CS -1

00:08:820 (2) - increase distance, it isn't enough.
01:24:871 (6) - ^

Nice song~
I hope this will be useful ;)
Reply this, please.

Good luck
Topic Starter
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-Cloudchaser wrote:



Suggestions, comments.
High recommend.

☢ Timing: offset 1572?

☢ Hard ☢

00:49:140 (2) - clap

Nothing else I can say about hard diff, cuz is very good :D

☢ Normal ☢

00:22:196 (5) - clap
00:50:859 (5) - clap on the top
00:52:387 (2) - ^
00:56:973 (5) - remove whiste and add a clap
01:03:851 (2) - clap on the top

☢ Easy ☢

CS -1

00:08:820 (2) - increase distance, it isn't enough. If this note increases distance , It's unrankable point :3
01:24:871 (6) - ^

Nice song~
I hope this will be useful ;)
Reply this, please.
Good luck

I think your mod is useful
Thank you Cloudchaser :)
K i A i
스마일~~
일꾼님 M4M에서 왔습니다 :D

+이지 노멀 부분에 변속이 있군요.. 배치나 모양이나 힛사는 나쁘진 않은데 변속은 별로 좋지 않습니다;
+노멀과 하드의 난이도 격차가 심합니다. 하드를 인세인으로 바꾸시고, 노멀과 인세인 난이도 사이의 난이도를 구하는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

[이지]
00:00:413 (1) - 스피너 시작 부분을 00:00:031 로 당겨주세요~
00:11:878 (7) - 3그리드 오른쪽으로, 1그리드 아래로 내려주세요~
00:17:801 (1) - NC 제거
00:18:374 (2) - NC + 시작 부분에 피니시
00:23:725 (2) - 끝 부분에 피니시
00:33:661 (1) - 피니시~!
00:38:247 (2) - 중간 부분에 휘슬 제거
00:48:183 (1) - 끝 부분에 피니시

[노멀]
00:05:381 (2) - 1 그리드 왼쪽으로 옮겨주세요~
00:06:909 (4) - ^
00:12:260 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시~ + 좀 더 둥글게 만들어보세요~
00:21:050 (4) - 변속 없애주시고 디스턴스 지켜주세요

[하드]
00:06:910 (1) - 리버스 하나 더 늘려주세요~
00:07:866 (3) - 시작 부분 피니시 제거
00:08:630 (5,7,9) - ^
00:12:261 (1) - 시작 부분 피니시
00:35:000 (8) - 피니시
00:38:248 (7,9) - 모양을 둥글게 바꿔보세요~
00:47:801 (1) - 1그리드 위로 올려보세요~
00:55:063 (5) - NC + 피니시
01:20:668 (10) - 방향 y축 기준으로 대칭 되게 바꿔보세요
01:24:107 (2,3,5) - 모양을 조금만 둥글게 바꿔주세요
01:27:165 (3) - ^
01:27:165 (3) - NC
01:36:528 (5) - 모양을 둥글게 바꿔주세요

이상입니다~
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