11:12 Garven: : Easy: 00:29:270 (2,3) - You could probably make these sliders into circles easily
11:13 Garven: : 00:36:574 (1,2,3) - Hm
11:13 Garven: : Having this really slow section
11:13 tutuhaha: : Fix
11:13 Garven: : 00:44:922 (1) - then not repeating it here
11:13 Garven: : Felt really weird
11:13 Garven: : The pacing feels off imo
11:14 Garven: : You should repeat the 1 single circles with lots of time between
11:14 Garven: : It would flow a lot better
11:14 Garven: : Besides
11:14 Garven: : 00:47:531 (1,2,1,2,3) - This sort of rhythm is pretty complex for an Easy anyway
11:15 Garven: : 00:53:270 (1) - repeat is covered by hitburst from 00:51:183 (1) -
11:15 tutuhaha: : slow down D:...........
11:16 Garven: : If you have questions just ask. I can return. You can review the text later
11:16 tutuhaha: : :O
11:16 Garven: : I need to work fast so I can finish before I sleep q:
11:16 tutuhaha: : ok
11:16 tutuhaha: : ok ok ok
11:17 Garven: : 01:25:618 (2,3) - I wonder if we can simplify this rhythm a little
11:18 Garven: : Do something like a circle at 01:25:618 - then continue with antoher circle at 01:26:139 -
11:18 Garven: : It's just rhythmically dense with a reallyhigh SV
11:18 Garven: : Feels really really hard for a difficulty labeled as Easy
11:18 Garven: : 01:35:661 (2,3) - This kind of flow can be pretty disorienting imo
11:19 Garven: : The slider makes you want to keep moving right, but the next note is down, and also very quick
11:20 Garven: : 02:04:487 (2) - I really don't recommend using such short repeat sliders in Easy difficulties
11:20 Garven: : 02:06:313 (1) - Same suggestion as the previous time
11:21 Garven: : 02:18:362 - Um, is this supposed to be displaying in this difficulty?
http://puu.sh/GlGC11:21 tutuhaha: : this diff's mapper is cmn
11:21 Garven: : Oooh okay
11:21 tutuhaha: : i can help her fix mod
11:21 Garven: : I thought it was only that section and it was a break, haha
11:21 tutuhaha: : XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
11:22 Garven: : 02:43:879 (1,2) - This part feels so off rhythmically
11:22 Garven: : Better to do something like this
http://puu.sh/GlHR11:22 Garven: : 02:47:009 (2,3) - Same rhythmic suggestion as the last chorus
11:23 Garven: : 02:49:096 (2,3) - etc
11:23 Garven: : 02:56:400 (1,2) - misaligned
11:23 Garven: : 03:22:487 (2,3) - ugly overlap
11:23 Garven: : Considering the majority of the map doesn't have any
11:24 Garven: : 03:46:487 (1,2) - eeeh not in an easy please
11:24 Garven: : 03:50:922 (2) - ^
11:24 Garven: : 03:49:618 (2,2) - overlap
11:24 Garven: : 03:55:618 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an easy at this BPM
11:25 Garven: : Maybe just delete 03:55:618 (1) -
11:25 Garven: : 03:59:792 (1) - ^
11:25 Garven: : 04:03:966 (1) - ^
11:26 Garven: : 04:04:226 (2,1) - Way too close
11:26 Garven: : You can see both on the screen at the same time, so they need more distance apart
11:26 Garven: : Normal:
11:27 Garven: : 00:31:357 (3,4) - This rhythm didn't make much sense compared to the way the rest of this verse was mapped
11:27 Garven: : 01:02:661 (3,4) - Same thing here
11:28 Garven: : 01:19:357 (3) - I can here what it's mapped to, but it doesn't fit rhythmically with the rest of the chorus' map
11:29 Garven: : 01:36:574 (2) - Same here
11:30 Garven: : 01:47:531 (1,2) - You see,these ones work here since you use them more frequently
11:30 Garven: : And it's a refreshing change for the next verse
11:30 Garven: : So leave these ones. The first ones should reflect the same phrasing used within the set they were a part of.
11:32 Garven: : 02:41:792 - During this section, I have a suggestion
11:32 Garven: : I think you'll have a lot more power if you went with the strings instead of the vocals
11:32 Garven: : It gives a huge amount of tension that helps build up for the last string of chorus' to finish the piece off
11:33 Garven: : So something like
thishttp://puu.sh/GlPf11:33 Garven: : Nice and simple, but it gives a lot of power with that rest between notes
11:34 Garven: : 03:18:313 (1,2,3) - The flow here is really back-and-forth in a bad manner, imo
11:35 Garven: : 03:19:748 (2,3) - Maybe rotate these by ~55 degrees
11:35 Garven: : And move near the bottom
11:35 Garven: :
http://puu.sh/GlQS11:35 Garven: : Something like that
11:36 Garven: : 04:03:705 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for a Normal. I'd keep it like the previous spinner and start at 04:03:966 -
11:37 Garven: : Taiko Oni has Vocaloid2 in tags
11:37 Garven: : No other diff has that
11:38 Garven: : Hard: 00:27:183 (3) - A 4-hit slider? I wasn't expecting that - especially so early in the song
11:39 Garven: : AR -1 OD +1
11:39 Garven: : 00:52:487 (2,3,4) - These jumps are pretty big considering the map up to this point...
11:40 Garven: : 00:56:661 (1,2,3) - here too
11:40 Garven: : hm
11:40 Garven: : Maybe do 1.5x spacing instead of 2x
11:40 Garven: : It'll be more fair imo
11:41 Garven: : 01:22:487 (4,5) - This rhythm was weird to have stacked considering all the other slider pairs weren't
11:41 Garven: : 01:40:226 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hm
11:41 Garven: : The problem with stacks like this is that, well, osu! stacks the notes
11:42 Garven: : it looks ugly with the four sliders around it, and adjusting the stack doesn't really help it much. You might want to consider a different
11:42 Garven: : pattern.
11:42 Garven: : 01:41:009 (6,1) - Huuuge jump ;_;
11:42 Garven: : 01:47:270 (4,1) - again ;_;
11:42 Garven: : Lots of 3x jumps here
11:43 Garven: : Tone them down please. This is a Hard, not an Insane
11:43 Garven: : 02:07:748 (5,6) - Wow, uh, big jump with a fast rhythm here
11:43 Garven: : Slider->slider might be okay
11:43 Garven: : But not with a circle
11:44 Garven: : 02:29:270 (4) - The soft claps sound bad during this part. Probably better using whistle instad
11:44 Garven: : instead*
11:45 Garven: : 02:48:835 (3,1) - Stacking makes this really ugly. Adjust them or try a different pattern
11:45 Garven: : 02:53:792 (5,6) - I'm not feeling these anti-jumps
11:46 Garven: : Especially after all those super-large spacing that should be toned down a bit
11:47 Garven: : 03:16:226 (3) - Changing up the stack rhythm is pretty trick - especially during a slower paced part of the map (compare to 03:14:922 (7)
11:47 Garven: : -
11:49 Garven: : 04:00:053 (2) - Repeat arrow is covered by the spinner-osu
http://puu.sh/Gm0C11:49 Garven: : 04:07:226 (3,4) - Bad spacing
11:51 Garven: : Insane:
11:51 Garven: : OD +2
11:53 Garven: : 02:41:792 (1,2,3,4) - The same rhythmic suggestion from the Normal here too
11:53 Garven: : Following the synth feels so much more powerful imo
11:55 Garven: : Collab:
11:55 Garven: : OD +2
11:56 Garven: : Ugh, AR 9 feels fast for how it is mapped
11:56 Garven: : Not liking all the extra 1/4 rhythms everywhere too.
11:57 Garven: : They feel like they were added in just for added difficulty instead of adding to the music
11:58 Garven: : 02:28:487 (1) - Yeah, use whistle instead of clap please ><
12:00 Garven: : 03:02:139 (1) - This slider was pretty much hidden underneath hitbursts
12:01 Garven: : Yeah, AR8 fits this map's pacign much better than AR9
12:01 Garven: : If you use AR8, move OD to 8 instead of 9
12:02 tutuhaha: : ;v;
12:03 tutuhaha: : I keep up with you ;v;b
12:03 Garven: : Haha
12:03 Garven: : Good job~
12:03 Garven: : Just checking the taiko now
12:03 tutuhaha: : ;v;
12:03 Garven: : I'll sleep a little late >_>
12:04 Garven: : This taiko is crazy
12:04 Garven: : But looks okay so far
12:04 tutuhaha: : ;v; nice
12:06 Garven: : Yeesh
12:06 Garven: : Anyway, I guess that's the mod
我發現沒有taiko diff我才來做...
其他部分做的很好 這張map做的流暢度很高 所以其他地方沒有實質方面的建議了
