tutuhaha wrote:

沙发，是用来放歌词的

1. fine

1. 00:20:290 - 这里不考虑来个break么？正好是前奏结束。
2. 00:22:957 (2) - Finish音量太大了导致听着有些吵，看看能不能降低一点？后面和其他难度也有类似问题……不再重复了但是确实不好听
3. 01:49:457 - 这finish的位置听着有点别扭……落在红线上了诶……
4. 03:15:624 (1) - 感觉可以删掉……

1. 00:20:123 - 依然break建议
2. 00:25:623 (2) - 向前延长到红线吧听着舒服一点。
3. 00:30:623 (5) - 考虑加个折返？
4. 03:32:290 (3,4) - 改成slider或者稍微错开一点点位置吧？
5. 04:01:124 (3) - 加个折返吧，这里跟vocal的话后面明显少个音……

1. 00:20:373 - 继续break建议
2. 00:36:123 - 这里加个note？
3. 01:45:957 - 改成slider吧到后面红线
4. 01:46:290 - ^
5. 02:26:957 (1) - 去掉finish
6. 03:22:624 (4) - 放去和(5)叠吧
7. 03:32:290 (9) - 拿掉finish
8. 03:43:457 (2) - 向后挪动到白线并且和(3)叠？
9. 04:01:124 (5) - 加个折返？
10. 04:04:290 (2) - 从前面红线开始？

1. 00:09:457 - 这里感觉可以加点什么，note或者延长slider都好
2. 00:20:123 - break.......
3. 00:44:124 (1) - 去掉finish?
4. 00:52:957 (3) - Ctrl+r?
5. 00:59:624 (3) - ^
6. 01:08:624 (2) - ^
7. 01:09:290 (4) - ^....其实01:08:290 (1) - 这里我觉得拉开ds然后做成对称形的slider会比现在这个排列更舒服，比如说
   
   不过这样的话后面排版也要动～
8. 01:18:623 (2,1) - 距离拉大一点吧
9. 02:02:623 (5) - Ctrl+r?
10. 02:10:457 (3) - 头部位置不变，然后尾巴的方向旋转个180度吧或者旋转到水平向右
11. 02:12:290 (1) - 放到260:364附近？
12. 02:46:624 (4) - 延长到白线？
13. 02:49:290 - 要是我的话估计会从这里开始下一大段stream一直到02:53:623 XD
14. 03:01:624 (1) - 加个note？
15. 03:41:957 (2) - 这里考虑摆个造型？
    

1. fine, 星数貌似有点高?

1. 02:06:623 (4,1) - 往左上移两格...

1. 02:00:957 (4) - 最后一个点放到(126,68)这里
2. 02:31:957 (8) - 1/4 slider + reverse
3. 03:11:123 - add note

1. 00:34:790 (1) - 这里直接跳过去感觉不是太适合, 在滑条尾叠起吧
2. 01:21:623 (1,2) - 闪的有点看不清...
3. 02:32:290 (3) - 删了这个note比较好...

1. You need a Approachcircle in your file for complete the Hitcirlce skin set.
2. Because you are using a custom skin is too advisable force the sliderborder in the .osu file for mantain the colour of your skin set, then add this under the combo colours in the .osu of each diff: SliderBorder : 255,255,255
3. The last timing section really is neccesary with x0.5 of Slider Velocity? I only see a spinner and a spinner don't requieres this...

1. Hmm IMO the AR is too high, maybe reduce by 1 or 2?
2. 01:25:623 (2) - Add finish at the start, the track suggest this and [Forest] have this finish.
3. 02:00:123 (1) - Add finish at the start same the others diffs.
4. 02:07:623 (4) - Put finish instead whistle at the repeat.
5. 03:00:624 (2) - Add whistle at the start, now sound a bit empty...
6. 03:09:290 (1) - Combo suggestion: Remove this new combo, add the new combo to the next note and finally remove the new combo here 03:11:957 (1).
7. 03:15:624 (1) - Change the whistle at the end for clap?
8. 03:36:290 (3) - Finish at the start.
9. 03:57:624 (1) - Remove the new combo, yeah the track change but really just a slider to an new combo is a bit weird (weird because your combo pattern have at least two notes...)

1. 00:27:290 (1) - Remove this new combo.
2. 00:54:790 (1) - Try put a finish at the end, imo the track suggest this and sound good...
3. 01:25:623 (3) - Missing finish at the start.
4. 02:01:457 - A circle should be stay here if you want follow the voice... my suggestion: Reduce the lenght of this slider 02:00:957 (3) for 1/2 and after put a circle here stacked with 02:01:623 (5).
5. 02:30:957 (3) - Missing Finish at the start.
6. 03:15:957 (2) - Change the whistle for clap?
7. 03:36:290 (1) - IMO a finish here sounds nice, if you agree this in any diff be consistent with the others.
8. 03:40:290 (1) - Whistle at the start.

1. 00:22:457 (5) - The space between this and the before slider is big, therefore add new combo here and delete the new combo in the next slider.
2. 01:02:790 (1) - Change the whistle at the start for finish.
3. 01:04:124 (1) - Okaaay, remove the new combo here and put it at the next note because the track change in 01:04:623 and no before.
4. 01:25:623 (4,5) - These sliders sound best if you put finish at the start. Plus: If you want add a new combo here 01:25:623 (4).
5. 02:00:123 (1) - Finish like the others diffs.
6. 02:30:957 (5) - Missing finish at the start.
7. 02:45:624 (1,3) - Add whistle here and remove the whistle of (2), really try it!
8. 03:13:624 (1) - Remove the finish of here, in the others diff sound nice because the spinner end 1/2 after.
9. 03:15:957 (4) - Same as Easy and Normal.
10. 03:36:290 (1) - Same as before.

1. 01:05:123 (2) - Change this slider for one like Hard (A slider 1/4 with a repeat) or a triplet, this is Insane really?
2. 01:25:957 (2) - Try put finish at the start.
3. 02:11:623 (1) - IMO the new combo is needless because the pattern is symmetric/the same pattern than the before and this make the jump more easiest to read. Check it 02:14:290 (3) is the same pattern and no requieres new combo, be consistent please.
4. 02:28:957 (1,2) - Hmm this combo is too short, maybe remove it? or remove new combo here 02:29:623 (1).
5. 03:15:957 (4) - Same as the others diffs.
6. 03:37:624 (1) - Missing Finish at the start?
7. Awww this diff are enjoyable <3

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
少了approachcircle.png跟SliderBorder

[Easy]
difficulty setting太高了，HD AR OD全部减1试试？
03:14:790 - spinner这里结束吧，好听得多
04:09:957 - 结尾音量5%吧
这难度比起普通的Easy来说真心难太多了0.0

[Normal]
OD-1？
02:01:623 (4) - 这个shape最好调整下，接近unrankble了
03:15:624 (1,2) - 离spinner有点远，弄近点吧。或者也可以考虑spinner end at 03:14:790 -
04:09:957 - 5%音量？

[Hard]
HD+1？如果觉得高了可以再OD-1
04:09:957 - 5%。。

[Forest]
HD+1
03:14:790 - spinner这里结束好点
04:09:957 - 5%

可乐子不肯泡的话再找我吧0.0

Garven wrote:

Ahoy, 2ha~

[General]
I downloaded this with the video, but I didn't get a video file. Is there one? Reupload. If there isn't, you need to remove the video tags from the .osu files.
I like tick rate 2 with this, but that would count as a bubble pop if you choose to change it, just as a warning.

[Easy]
Wow, this is pretty tough for an easy.
00:54:790 (1,2,3) - This rhythm didn't feel right against the music.

Edit: Graaaah this time Beuchu ninja'd me, haha.

Byakugan249 wrote:

omg you actually modded this

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Byakugan249 wrote:

omg you actually modded this

I asked for it D:

[General]
- The HP Bar covers the first of the numbers on the score, maybe make a custom HP Bar? (you can make the default one a bit shorter, if you like that one).

[Easy]
00:54:790 (1,2) - I'm not sure about this. It does sound better, but maybe a bit too hard for an Easy. Then again, the diff itself is pretty tough already... I'll leave it to your decision

Beuchi-chan wrote:

This new IA Vocaloid sounds so Miku-ish xD

Anyways, this sweet song is now...
RANKED!!

Byakugan249 wrote:

HURRAY congratz on the rank 2-chan :3