1. 01:24:013 and 02:39:013: In RJ's difficulty, the breaks are dragged to this points. Somehow this looks great while playing, so I'd like to suggest applying this to every other difficulty as well.

1. I believe that tick rate 3 sounds like too noisy. In my opinion, tick rate 1 would fit the song perfectly and not overload it with sounds. This change doesn't affect the playability at all so it isn't something necessary, just a matter of taste. Consider doing it.
   (Actually, some sliders shorten when you change the tick rate, somehow. This is probably a bug, but if you do it, you have to check the whole map just in case)
2. 00:47:919 ~ 01:01:513 - Fifteen seconds without hitsounds? It sounds a bit boring, honestly. You could work out some sort of clap for the 2nd and 4th ticks (like the normal-hitclap you're currently using), and use something softer for the rest of the ticks, maybe?
   There are some other sections like this that could use more hitsounds, so if you find something that's fits the description above and you like it, you should check the map for more possible implementations.
3. 02:48:388 (2,3) - Such weird sliders! Wouldn't this work better?
   
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4. 04:09:951 (1) - Try to work out your blankets a bit more. Like this:
   
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1. Tick rate 3 sounds too noisy as well, consider using 1.
2. 00:36:201 (1) - I'm ultra nazi with sliders so just:
   
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   It's just a little more round, consider doing this to the similar sliders, like 00:50:732 (4).
3. 00:38:388 (3) - Doesn't sound like a clap should go there somehow... I suggest removing it.
4. 01:24:951 (1) - Starting a kiai with a spinner is so... Not kiai xD If you could, I'd like to suggest adding a slider of the same length.
5. 02:15:576 (4,5) - This is kinda confusing if you ask me. The 2/3 separation hadn't been used (correct me if I'm wrong), and the stack doesn't really help to understand it. I suggest adding a slider from 02:15:57 to 02:15:888, and then a circle (which can be stacked) at 02:16:357. I'd then get a separation oh 1/1, which feels much more intuitive in my opinion.
6. 02:39:951 (1) - Same as before about spinners at the start of kiais.
7. 04:06:201 (1) - (^)

1. I could bug you with your blankets:
   
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   Which I know could be better, coming from you
   But I don't know, maybe it's too much work for something too little that few people would catch...

1. 01:10:419 (1) - Oh Aleks why ;_;
   
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2. Hitsounds in the first kiai sound odd sometimes... I don't have any concrete suggestion, but I invite you to hear them out and see if you don't find anything weird. Maybe it's just me

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
fine

[MystykAMV's Caveat]
01:30:576 (2,3) - slider first and circle later? fit the song much better, maybe need to change a few patterns
04:32:451 (1,2,3) - why not symmetrical here? move then left a bit
waiting

[Bourdon's Unrest]
02:15:576 (4) - how about ending this slider at 02:16:044 - , to follow drums here is better than vocal imo no, as naraku said it was only one 2/3 spacing in whole diff, so we decided to set 1/1 rhythm. But some whistles were added to this diff

[RJ's Riot]
OD-1? it's kinda high for this diff imo i decided to leave od7, cuz this diff quite easy even with od7
00:36:201 (2) - I suggest change a shape or move it down a bit, it touched the HP bar no :s
02:00:888 - add newcombo here, or the comco is too long ok
02:10:263 - add a note here to follow the vocal? sound better to me ok
04:02:451 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest reduce spacing a bit, is's really large spacing now ok, a bit
04:32:451 (1) - 1 gird up plz, it's nearly out of the screen ok

[Revolution]
01:02:294 (3) - here can jump a bit larger imo done
01:22:607 (2) - this slider is blancket well, but it's not symmetrical, hope you can fix this done
03:07:607 (7) - I suggest repeat 1 time less, and add a note after it. short repeat sliders have different repeat times is kinda hard to read the rhyme slider was turned into 2 usual sliders, come notes after were replaced

that's all for now
let me know when this is done :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

[MystykAMV's Caveat]
01:30:576 (2,3) - slider first and circle later? fit the song much better, maybe need to change a few patterns
04:32:451 (1,2,3) - why not symmetrical here? move then left a bit