kosiga wrote:

hi~ M a n a

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Difficult - I think Hard diff is necessary for this map. or Please change the name of the Insane diff to Hard.
   Easy⇒Normal⇒Blank⇒Insane　is not good >< I wait nekonomitsu to make this diff. But I'm not sure he can finish it soon
2. Timing - Slider Tick Rate - Only Normal diff is different ( 2 ). Please change the Normal diff to 1. My bad xAx

[Normal]

1. 00:06:455 (3) - tick move to 00:06:616. i think that this matches me
2. 00:22:338 (1) - add finish
3. 00:53:140 (1,2,3) - add clap to end of the slider ?
4. 00:55:065 (1) - add finish ?
5. 01:05:814 (4) - add NC
6. 01:06:616 (5,6) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/gTzY
7. 01:53:461 (1) - remove finish
8. 02:03:728 (1,2,3) - add clap to end of the slider ?
9. 02:05:653 (1) - add finish ?
10. 02:33:407 (4) - add whistle ?
11. 02:34:851 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/gTDB
12. 03:34:530 (1) - add finish instead to clap to end of the slider
13. 03:50:092 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
14. 03:53:461 (3) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/gTFX
15. 03:57:632 (4) - add NC and 03:58:594 (1) - remove NC
16. 04:02:284 (4) - remove whistle to repeat of the slider. and add whistle to start of the slider ?

[Insane]

1. 00:58:274 (1) - add finish instead to clap to start of the slider
2. 01:04:530 (9) - add NC and 01:05:011 (1) - remove NC
3. 01:05:814 (3) - add NC
4. 03:06:295 (3) - spacing too far. 03:05:332 (1,2) - Rhythm is not it the same as here plz change DS
5. 03:18:808 (4) - add NC
6. 03:24:584 (5) - add NC ?
7. 03:35:172 (5) - add NC
8. 04:02:284 (1) - add whistle

that's all ~

good rhythm and map >w< star☆~

Good luck ~

Thanks for mod and star! ><

nekonomitsu wrote:

I almost forgot. I need to add a star to this~
So star~

Thanks for star!>A<~

Yosha~ Hard's done >w<b . I'm so slow >.>
Change anything you want and maybe remind me to update it if I need to.

nekonomitsu wrote:

Yosha~ Hard's done >w<b . I'm so slow >.>
Change anything you want and maybe remind me to update it if I need to.

Thanks for hard diff!
Updated!~
Edit : I add your name to the tags
00:47:685 (7) - Maybe remove finish and add finish at 00:48:006 (1) (in the beginig)?

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

Naryuga's easy

• change diff's name of Naryuga's Easy plz >< - It's my fault lol fixed.

1. AR and OD -1 - both disagree... since Normal uses AR5 & OD4, I feel a bit gap in the way... sorry
2. 00:06:295 (1) - maybe add a note in 00:06:937 instead of this? if yes, dont forget add a NC here ofc - sorry but I love this pattern...><
3. 00:28:755 (4) - *nazi* something like this plz >< - re-shaped it
4. 00:31:963 (3,4) - slider instead of this? - ok
5. 00:39:985 (5) - remove? - ok
6. 00:51:536 (2) - ^ - ok
7. 00:53:140 (1,2,3) - maybe like this? - ok
8. 01:09:503 (2) - remove? - umm... ok
9. 01:45:439 (5) - ^ - ok
10. 02:02:124 (3) - ^ - ok
11. 02:03:728 (1,2,3) - maybe like this? ;D - ok
12. 02:35:814 (3) - change this slider PLZ its not for easy - fixed
13. 03:26:830 (3) - remove? - umm... Ilove this pattern... but that looks not so good, I obey
14. 03:29:397 (3) - ^ - ^
15. 03:58:594 (2,3) - ^ one of these - changed to a slider

kosiga wrote:

1. 00:06:295 (1,2) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/gTk7 - ok
2. 00:45:439 (1) - スライダー頭にfinish ? - ok
3. 00:49:290 (2) - スライダーendにfinish - ok
4. 00:53:140 (1,2,3) - それぞれスライダー頭にfinishもしくはwhistle - whistleに変更しました
5. 01:23:140 - KIAI endがスピナーの中に入っちゃってるので、01:23:782にした方が良いと思います。- ok
6. 01:45:760 (1) - スライダー頭にfinish - ok
7. 02:03:728 (1,2,3) - それぞれスライダー頭にfinishもしくはwhistle - 上に同じく
8. 02:26:910 (1) - ズレています。白線に乗せましょう - 修正
9. 02:35:814 (3) - easyなのでキックスライダーを使わず、普通のスライダーに変更した方が良いと思います。 - 修正
10. 03:18:167 (1,2,3) - それぞれスライダー頭にfinishもしくはwhistle - 上に同じく
11. 03:49:450 - 01:23:140と同じ理由で03:50:092に。- ok
12. 03:59:236 (4) - 提案: 普通のスライダーに変更してendは03:59:717に- ok

Thank you very much >w<)!
...and star☆彡

Download: Natsuko Asou - Diamond Star (M a n a) [Naryuga's Easy].osu

Updated!
Star thanks ><

M a n a wrote:

00:47:685 (7) - Maybe remove finish and add finish at 00:48:006 (1) (in the beginig)?

Lol OK updated

[attachment=0:1792d]Natsuko Asou - Diamond Star (M a n a) [neko's Hard].osu[/attachment:1792d]

OK~
Updated :3~

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~ ( 2 diffs mod )
  　
  General :
  　

1. Some slider that you make is very ugly... Read This!! I think it will help you so much ^_^
   　
   Naryuga's Easy :
   　
   (You have to be careful to put NC)
   　
2. Do not change the slider speed on easy diff...
3. 00:48:648 (1) - Remove NC
4. 00:53:140 (1) - Remove NC
5. 02:36:616 (1) - Remove NC
   　
   Insane :
   　
   (This diff have too many spacing... I am very worried about this...)
   
   

   peppy wrote:

   A maximum of three slider velocities should be used (including 1x). For example, you could have a single map using 0.6x, 0.8x, and 1x; or 0.75x, 1x, and 1.5x; etc. If more than three slider velocities are used, then they should make sense and be intuitive. If slider velocity changes are able to be merged (e.g. close values like 0.8x and 0.7x) while still flowing/working correctly, then they should be. I think you need to follow this rule

6. 00:25:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - about these, The spacing is too chaos!! Make it the same~
7. 00:42:712 (1) - move back 1/2 sounds better
8. 01:17:685 (5) - Maybe Stack with 01:17:044 (3) -
9. 01:22:819 (7,8,9) - This part is too ugly for me >_< try this :
   
   
   SPOILER

   

   188,192,82819,1,2
   256,120,82979,1,0
   324,192,83140,2,0,B|348:260|328:332|256:344|184:332|164:260|188:192,1,340,4|4

10. 01:35:172 (1) - Remove NC
11. 01:53:140 (1) - move back 1/2 sounds better
    　
    
    You must to read~!

    red: I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.

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Nice song!!!~~
Good Luck :3

bossandy wrote:

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~ ( 2 diffs mod )
  　
  General :
  　

1. Some slider that you make is very ugly... Read This!! I think it will help you so much ^_^
   
   Insane :
   　
   (This diff have too many spacing... I am very worried about this...) Sorry for that... This is first time i make insane diff ><
   
   

   peppy wrote:

   A maximum of three slider velocities should be used (including 1x). For example, you could have a single map using 0.6x, 0.8x, and 1x; or 0.75x, 1x, and 1.5x; etc. If more than three slider velocities are used, then they should make sense and be intuitive. If slider velocity changes are able to be merged (e.g. close values like 0.8x and 0.7x) while still flowing/working correctly, then they should be. I think you need to follow this rule

2. 00:25:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - about these, The spacing is too chaos!! Make it the same~
3. 00:42:712 (1) - move back 1/2 sounds better
4. 01:17:685 (5) - Maybe Stack with 01:17:044 (3) -
5. 01:22:819 (7,8,9) - This part is too ugly for me >_< try this :
   
   
   SPOILER

   

   188,192,82819,1,2
   256,120,82979,1,0
   324,192,83140,2,0,B|348:260|328:332|256:344|184:332|164:260|188:192,1,340,4|4

6. 01:35:172 (1) - Remove NC
7. 01:53:140 (1) - move back 1/2 sounds better
   　
   
   You must to read~!

   red: I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.

--------------------------------------------------------
Nice song!!!~~
Good Luck :3

Thanks mod :3

bossandy wrote:

• 
  　
  General :
  　

1. Some slider that you make is very ugly... Read This!! I think it will help you so much ^_^ Thanks! some fixed.
   　
   Naryuga's Easy :
   　
   (You have to be careful to put NC) - some changed
   　
2. Do not change the slider speed on easy diff...- umm... ok, remapped
3. 00:48:648 (1) - Remove NC - ok
4. 00:53:140 (1) - Remove NC - Sorry, I disagree. it doesn't fit...
5. 02:36:616 (1) - Remove NC - ok
   　

--------------------------------------------------------
Nice song!!!~~
Good Luck :3

Thank you~ >ω<)/

Download: Natsuko Asou - Diamond Star (M a n a) [Naryuga's Easy].osu

Updated!
Sorry for late ><

M a n a wrote:

Insane - Done

Where Insane?

Muya wrote:

M a n a wrote:

Insane - Done

Where Insane?

I'll do something to Insane diff,but I'm not sure I'll finish that diff,so I removed it >A<"

Sorry a little late.

Neko's Hard

hey o/

long mod

Some unsnapped slider ends

00:06:295 (10) - remove note plz
00:07:739 (5,6) - spacing is a little off.
00:09:503 (2,3,4) - this is awkward. http://puu.sh/i78j this rhythm fits much better.
00:21:536 (2) - end the slider at 00:21:696 -
00:25:546 (2,3,4) - The vocals are playing red ticks while you are placing white tick hit circles. It's a little weird.
00:33:086 (1) - you should either delete this spinner and map that part. OR start the spinner at 00:32:605 - and delete 00:32:445 (1). Right now, the spinner starts in a weird place.
00:37:685 (11,12) - ummm, something weird is happening here lol. resnap them to the blue and white ticks.
00:42:552 (1) - start spinner at 00:42:712 - and end it at 00:44:156. Then perhaps add a slider at 00:44:477 -
00:51:856 (3,4,5,6) - move all notes 1/2 tick back to follow vocals, and rearrange spacing if needed. Then add a note at 00:52:979. You are completely off of the vocals so it's just a little awkward to play.
00:59:183 (7,8) - why is this snaped to the purple ticks? D: there needs to be three hitcircles between these sliders. two on the blue ticks and one on the white tick
01:00:038 (11,12) - switch notes around and add a note at 01:00:680 - http://puu.sh/i7cl
01:04:530 (4,5) - You shouldn't throw away rhythm just make shapes like this. It's awkward to play since it's off from the music. http://puu.sh/i7d4
01:05:653 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/i7dd and http://puu.sh/i7df is better.
01:09:664 (6,7,8) - switch notes around like this http://puu.sh/i7dF to match vocals
01:14:584 (4,5) - weird snapping. blue and white ticks.
01:36:776 (3,4,5) - if you're going to anti space, it should at least follow the music, which is doesn't since it is off from the vocals. I find it necessary to ant-space anyways.
01:43:674 (1) - same as 00:33:086 (1) -
01:48:273 (11,12) - snap correctly.
01:53:140 (1) - same as 00:42:552 (1) -
02:01:482 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - off from vocals.
02:08:380 - seeing as this section is basically copy and pasted but flipped horizontally, It has pretty much the same issues as listed above.
02:50:840 (4,5) - snap correctly.
02:55:065 (1) - slider should end at 02:55:225 - or alternatively you could just add another repeat
02:56:028 (3) - ^
02:57:632 (1,3) - ^
03:13:033 (1,2,3,4) - not as awkward but it's still off from the vocals :/
03:24:102 - same problems as other kiai time.

Normal

00:15:600 (3) - use the same rhythm as combo 1 and 2 or just use white ticks like 00:16:883 (4,5,1,2) .
00:42:872 (1) - http://puu.sh/i7j0
00:46:402 (2) - http://puu.sh/i7kf and http://puu.sh/i7ki sounds better imo.
02:01:963 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/i7lr
02:34:851 (1) - sounds better if it started at 02:34:691 -
02:36:616 (1) - I wouldn't stack but ok.

sorry, i'll finish later. kinda busy right now.
still good luck~~ hope this helps.

[Naryuga's Easy]:
03:22:017 - add break time

[Normal]:
HP -1?
00:12:552 (2,4) - hidden reverse http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250284
00:13:514 (4) - add whistle to 3rd note
00:14:477 (1,3) - please dont overlap please. hard to newbie player
00:51:696 (2,1) - same as ^
00:55:065 (1) - add clap
01:03:086 (4) - overlap score http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250292
01:23:140 (6) - add whistle to 1st note
01:58:594 (1,1) - please dont overlap please. hard to newbie player
02:31:963 (1,2,3) - remove whistle from 2nd note. add whistle to 1st note
02:36:295 (3,1) - don't stack please
03:49:129 (4) - add whistle to 3rd note
04:02:284 (4) - same as ^

[neko's Hard]:
OD+2 or 3 please. very low now
00:37:685 (11,12) - 1/4 snap is better.
00:59:156 (7,8) - same as ^. and some spacing please
01:14:584 (4,5) - 1/4 snap is better.
01:48:273 (11,12) - same as ^
02:09:771 (7,8,9) - same as ^ . and some spacing please
02:25:172 (4,5) - 1/4 snap is better.
02:25:546 (6,7) - can't find a reverse http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250273
02:36:776 (3) - move to 02:36:937
02:50:840 (4,5) - 1/4 snap is better.
02:55:065 (1,2,3) - make a reverse and fix a spacing
02:57:632 (1,2,3) - same as ^
03:20:092 (1) - end at 03:21:856. also resnap green section
03:25:493 (7,8,9) - 1/4 snap is better.
03:26:509 (12) - Touching hp bar http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250279
03:36:134 (7) - off screen http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250280
03:40:894 (4,5) - 1/4 snap is better.
03:41:910 (7) - can't find a reverse http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250281
04:03:648 - don't need this section

Fixed all xD
Thanks for mod guys~

Naryuga's

Using only white ticks can be a little boring imo :/, and it's off from the vocals.

00:09:503 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/ijxF follows vocals a little better and works better imo, but it's still up to you
01:04:690 (2) - works better if the slider started at 01:04:530. It may also make 01:05:813 (1) - easier to read imo.
01:56:028 (1,2) - followingthe vocals may be better here. http://puu.sh/ijzr
02:15:279 (2) - start at 02:15:118?
03:31:001 (2) - similar to above

little to say about easy. just sometimes using red tick may be better.

don't kds since u already gave me one.

sorry for late reply

Muya wrote:

[Naryuga's Easy]:
03:22:017 - add break time - ok

winber1 wrote:

Naryuga's
Using only white ticks can be a little boring imo :/, and it's off from the vocals. - some of the others changed.

00:09:503 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/ijxF follows vocals a little better and works better imo, but it's still up to you - ok, I try
01:04:690 (2) - works better if the slider started at 01:04:530. It may also make 01:05:813 (1) - easier to read imo.- ok
01:56:028 (1,2) - followingthe vocals may be better here. http://puu.sh/ijzr - done in a similar way
02:15:279 (2) - start at 02:15:118? - ok
03:31:001 (2) - similar to above - ok

little to say about easy. just sometimes using red tick may be better.

Thank you for mods~ >w<)!

Download: Natsuko Asou - Diamond Star (M a n a) [Naryuga's Easy].osu

Updated :3

Halloww~
You requested in my queue~

[Normal]
-Approach Rate -1
-00:03:728 (x) - Add a note?

[neko's Hard]
-HP Drain Rate +2
-Overall Difficulity +2
-You have unsnapped sliders at:
00:06:455 (1)
00:07:739 (5)
00:11:749 (9)
00:16:402 (4)
00:18:167 (6)
00:19:290 (9)
00:20:252 (5)
00:23:942 (4)
00:24:423 (5)
-03:16:883 (4) - New combo.
-04:02:284 (1) - End spinner at 04:03:407 and add a finish.

Nice song~
Star~

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue



General

1. Consider change your kiai times consistency to all difficulties
   
   Naryuga's Easy:
   　　1st kiai ends - 01:23:782
   　　3rd kiai ends - 03:50:092
   
   Normal:
   　　1st kiai ends - 01:23:140
   　　3rd kiai ends - 03:49:450
   
   
   neko's Hard:
   　　1st kiai ends - 01:23:140
   　　3rd kiai ends - 03:49:450
2. Try to avoid breaks that longer than 15000ms on 02:37:097 ~
3. Hitsounds are kinda quite...

Naryuga's Easy


00:51:215 (1,2) - Consider adding whistles on these two notes



Normal


AR+1, overlaps are complicated with current AR
http://puu.sh/jnbL

00:27:311 (4) - This should start at 00:27:471 -
00:45:439 - Do this volume changing esstential?



neko's Hard




00:10:466 (5) - eh..what's problem with this slider, it should be starts at 00:10:306 - and ends at 00:10:626 -
00:11:268 (7) - Delete
00:19:290 (9) - New combo
00:28:434 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm suggestion
http://puu.sh/jnjx

00:33:086 (1) - start spinner at 00:32:605 - or 00:32:685 -
00:42:552 (1) - start at 00:42:712 -
00:59:183 (7,8,9) - Why using quadrupl here? It doesn't fits music
01:05:814 (1,2,3) - Rhythm suggestion
http://puu.sh/jnqb

01:36:616 (3,4,5) - ^
http://puu.sh/jnqV

01:43:674 (1) - same as 00:33:086
01:59:236 (2,3,4) - better don't stack these..
02:09:771 (7,8,9) - same as 00:59:183
02:16:562 (2) - same as 01:05:814
02:36:616 (2,3) - Delete, or place like this
http://puu.sh/jnvI

02:55:065 (1,2,3) - These should be 1/2
02:57:632 (1,2,3) - ^
03:25:493 (7,8,9) - same as 00:59:183
03:25:493 (7,8,9) - same as 01:05:814
04:03:648 - unused timing section

Please place notes on the right rhythm, use headphone to map would helps



To mapper:
neko's diff may needs more improvement, please tell him/her to fix those unsnapped items before asking for futher mod, nice song

LKs wrote:

General

1. Try to avoid breaks that longer than 15000ms on 02:37:097 ~ - mapped from 02:47:204
2. Hitsounds are kinda quite... - you mean quiet? anyway increased the volume

Naryuga's Easy

00:51:215 (1,2) - Consider adding whistles on these two notes - ok

As for the KIAI time, I think mine would work better.

Download: Natsuko Asou - Diamond Star (M a n a) [Naryuga's Easy].osu

Thank you~ *>ω<)/

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue



General

1. Consider change your kiai times consistency to all difficulties Then follow Naryuga's KIAI
   
   Naryuga's Easy:
   　　1st kiai ends - 01:23:782
   　　3rd kiai ends - 03:50:092
   
   Normal:
   　　1st kiai ends - 01:23:140
   　　3rd kiai ends - 03:49:450
   
   
   neko's Hard:
   　　1st kiai ends - 01:23:140
   　　3rd kiai ends - 03:49:450
2. Try to avoid breaks that longer than 15000ms on 02:37:097 ~ Start map from 02:47:204 same as Naryuga and nekonomitsu
3. Hitsounds are kinda quite...Increase the volume

Normal


AR+1, overlaps are complicated with current AR I think AR 6 is hard,so I follow Crystal's suggestion
http://puu.sh/jnbL

00:27:311 (4) - This should start at 00:27:471 - Save it
00:45:439 - Do this volume changing esstential? Deleted

To mapper:
neko's diff may needs more improvement, please tell him/her to fix those unsnapped items before asking for futher mod, nice song Sorry about that oAo; I'll try to contact him ><

Thanks for Mod

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww~
You requested in my queue~

[Normal]
-Approach Rate -1 Ok
-00:03:728 (x) - Add a note? Save it

Nice song~
Star~

Thanks for mod & star! ><

@Pokie : Thanks for star oAo

Btw,updated~

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