Melophobia wrote:

完全に好みで書いたｗｗｗｗｗ
から、気に入らないのは全部無視でok desu :;(∩´﹏`∩);:

Normal
sorry nazi mod orz
00:34:976 (1) - 1grid下～ fixed
00:36:137 (2,3) - spacing fixed
00:47:750 (3,1) - spacing fixed
00:52:008 (1) - 1,0xの範囲内？だけど1grid右にした方が見た目的にイイかな fixed
00:53:944 (2,1) - spacing fixed
01:09:040 (4) - 両端finishでいいんじゃないかなｗ fixed
01:16:782 (1,1) - ここもそんなかんじ
01:26:847 (5) - ^
01:40:008 (1) - ^
01:44:653 (3,4,1) - 三角形に～
02:14:460 (2) - 始点clap
02:21:428 (2,3) - ちょい近い fixed
02:28:008 (2) - 始点clap fixed
02:31:105 (6) - nc fixed
02:35:363 (3) - clap fixed
02:36:911 (1) - clap fixed
02:39:234 (3,4,5) - 揃えた方が綺麗かな fixed

Hard
00:38:653 (1) - 終点clap? fixed
01:23:169 (2,3,4) - くっついてるからちょっと広げよう！ fixed
01:36:137 (3) - 終点clap　1grid右 fixed
01:36:524 (4) - 始点clap fixed
01:48:911 (2) - 矢印のclapを始点に
02:13:879 (2) - clap fixed


Lunatic
00:25:686 (1) - finish fixed
00:42:331 (1) - 始点clap fixed
00:45:040 (1) - 三角の中心にあるといいかな見た目的な意味で
00:47:557 (3,4) - 3のclapを4に
00:48:524 (1) - 始点clap
00:52:008 (1) - 矢印にclap fixed
00:53:169 (2) - clap
00:53:557 (3) - 始点じゃなくて矢印にclap
01:02:847 (9) - 終点finish？fixed
01:22:782 (1,2,3) - x:448, y:272で左右対称に～ fixed
01:24:137 (7) - clap fixed
01:35:944 (5) - 終点clap fixed
02:15:234 (2) - clap
02:18:718 (1) - 始点finishのが合うと思うんですがどうでしょ
02:43:298 (3,4) - restack~
02:47:169 (1) - remove newcombo fixed
02:54:137 (7) - newcombo! fixed

おしまいｗ

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello　

General:
- Fine

Normal:
- 00:34:976 >> Remove new combo and add new combo on the next slider fixed
- 00:48:137 (3,1) >> Add clap at the end of (3) and remove clap from (1) fixed
- 00:54:178 (1,2) >> I don't suggest using stacks because novice players will also play this diff and stacks may be hard for them. Consider unstacking fixed!
- 01:00:524 (5,1) >> Add clap to (5), remove clap from (1) fixed
- 01:55:105 >> Make a 1/1 slider and add finish to the end fixed
- 02:29:557 >> New combo fixed

Hard:
- 00:38:653 >> Remove new combo ? fixed
- 00:58:782 >> New combo ? fixed
- 01:48:331 >> Remove new combo ? fixed
- 01:55:492 >> Add a note with finish fixed

Lunatic:
- 01:55:492 >> Put streams until this point and at the final note add a finish ? fixed
- 02:47:169 >> Covered by previous note's hitburst, I guess you can read it by the approach circle but it is really hard and tricky so I suggest you move this somewhere fixed
- 02:50:073 >> Touches a little the hp bar fixed

* Really nice!

-kevincela- wrote:

Hi,sorry for the really big delay (probably caused by my lazyness),but here's my mod! ^^

[Normal]

1. 00:42:718 (2) - Put them like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:19:105 (2,3,4) - Put them like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:30:137 (1) - Remove New Combo?
2. 00:30:718 (2) - Add New Combo?
3. 01:02:847 (6) - Flip horizontally? fixed
4. 01:46:008 (1) - Remove New Combo?
5. 01:46:589 (2) - Add New Combo?
6. 01:52:202 (1) - Remove New Combo?
7. 01:52:782 (2) - Add New Combo?

[Lunatic]

1. 01:08:073 (4) - 1 grid up and right? fixed
2. 01:30:331 (1) - Remove New Combo?
3. 02:46:202 (1) - ^

Pretty solid map,keep going! ^^

kurohana wrote:

usa <33
my mod ^^
very good map, i couldn't find something wrong
good luck^^
EDIT: oh, bubbled xD good luck for rank ^^

abalee wrote:

useless file in your folder
"Halozy - ShiningSTREAM (Thite).osb"
remove it and full submit please.

[Hard]
01:02:460 (4) - little complain on the spacing with 01:02:653 (5) - , move it like the picture below looks better in my opinion.
[attachment=0:699a8]sapcing.jpg[/attachment:699a8]

Garven wrote:

'sup Thite　\o/

[Normal]
01:04:008 (5) - Delete? Feels extraneous. fixed
01:16:782 (1) - Remove finish from the end fixed
01:53:169 (2) - This was a lot cooler if you did something like this:
fixed
02:32:266 (4) - Delete? Feels extraneous. fixed

[Hard]
01:05:944 (4,5) - Spacing is a little close fixed
01:06:718 (8,1) - Easily avoidable overlap fixed

[Insane]
00:50:847 (3,4) - After all that jumping, this felt rather close sorry i dont want to change this o.o
01:30:331 (1,2,3,4) - Hm, the spacing on this stream is drastically different from all of your other streams. Think you could get things more consistent? fixed
02:07:492 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
02:13:298 (1,2,3,4) - Um, all four of these have different distance snap.

Breeze wrote:

Bubble poped and rebubbled so many time
Let me finish it