Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello...

[General]

1. Change siryou in the tags to shiryou. fixed
2. Add Night Sakura of Dead Spirits, ZUN, Ten Desires to the tags? add tendesires
3. Fix kiai in Lunatic. It must be consistent with other diffs.
4. You must cut-off the mp3 as you used only 65,6% of it,you should have used at least 80%. i will cut it later
5. There's a pretty big gap between normal and hard.. I'd suggest to lighten it, remove all jumps, as you have Lunatic. Otherwise you'll have to map another diff between them.

[Normal]

1. 00:25:610 (1) - not symmetrical, check out other sliders, please fixed
2. 01:02:771 (4) - finish fixed
3. 01:08:964 (3) - ^ ^
4. 01:15:158 (3) - ^ ^
5. 01:16:706 (1) - whistle to the body >:3 fixed
6. 01:26:384 (2,3,1,2) - make the square :O fixed
7. 01:54:642 (4) - remove finish
8. 01:55:416 (x) - add a note with finish
9. 01:53:868 (3,4) - use this rhythm: fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:17:093 (2,3,4) - finishes fixed
11. 02:24:835 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
12. 02:32:577 (1) - whistle to the body

fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:02:771 (6) - finish to all slider
2. 01:08:964 (4) - ^
3. 01:36:835 (1) - finish fixed
4. 01:55:416 (x) - add a note with finish
5. 02:18:642 (6) - finishes fixed
6. 02:24:835 (1) - ^ ^
   Overall it's good. But too many big jumps.

[Lunatic]

1. 00:45:158 (2,3) - ctrl+R? For better flow fixed
2. 01:54:448 (1) - use this rhythm:
   
   SPOILER

   

Good map!

1. 00:57:621 (2,3) - Ctrl+r (?

KayeSara wrote:

I'm fond of this song XD
And pretty nice map!!!

[Lunatic]

1. 00:57:621 (2,3) - Ctrl+r (?

dragonxcz wrote:

Here is my mod. (Request in modding queue)

[-General-]

Lunatic missing "sumi" tag. Add it behind tag "halozy". fixed
1st kiai (Lunatic) ends on 01:42:137, it must be the same like Hard and Normal, so put 1st kiai end on 01:42:718. fixed

[-Hard-]

AR - 8 (+1)

Melophobia wrote:

完全に好みで書いたｗｗｗｗｗ
から、気に入らないのは全部無視でok desu :;(∩´﹏`∩);:

Normal
sorry nazi mod orz
00:34:976 (1) - 1grid下～ fixed
00:36:137 (2,3) - spacing fixed
00:47:750 (3,1) - spacing fixed
00:52:008 (1) - 1,0xの範囲内？だけど1grid右にした方が見た目的にイイかな fixed
00:53:944 (2,1) - spacing fixed
01:09:040 (4) - 両端finishでいいんじゃないかなｗ fixed
01:16:782 (1,1) - ここもそんなかんじ
01:26:847 (5) - ^
01:40:008 (1) - ^
01:44:653 (3,4,1) - 三角形に～
02:14:460 (2) - 始点clap
02:21:428 (2,3) - ちょい近い fixed
02:28:008 (2) - 始点clap fixed
02:31:105 (6) - nc fixed
02:35:363 (3) - clap fixed
02:36:911 (1) - clap fixed
02:39:234 (3,4,5) - 揃えた方が綺麗かな fixed

Hard
00:38:653 (1) - 終点clap? fixed
01:23:169 (2,3,4) - くっついてるからちょっと広げよう！ fixed
01:36:137 (3) - 終点clap　1grid右 fixed
01:36:524 (4) - 始点clap fixed
01:48:911 (2) - 矢印のclapを始点に
02:13:879 (2) - clap fixed


Lunatic
00:25:686 (1) - finish fixed
00:42:331 (1) - 始点clap fixed
00:45:040 (1) - 三角の中心にあるといいかな見た目的な意味で
00:47:557 (3,4) - 3のclapを4に
00:48:524 (1) - 始点clap
00:52:008 (1) - 矢印にclap fixed
00:53:169 (2) - clap
00:53:557 (3) - 始点じゃなくて矢印にclap
01:02:847 (9) - 終点finish？fixed
01:22:782 (1,2,3) - x:448, y:272で左右対称に～ fixed
01:24:137 (7) - clap fixed
01:35:944 (5) - 終点clap fixed
02:15:234 (2) - clap
02:18:718 (1) - 始点finishのが合うと思うんですがどうでしょ
02:43:298 (3,4) - restack~
02:47:169 (1) - remove newcombo fixed
02:54:137 (7) - newcombo! fixed

おしまいｗ

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello　

General:
- Fine

Normal:
- 00:34:976 >> Remove new combo and add new combo on the next slider fixed
- 00:48:137 (3,1) >> Add clap at the end of (3) and remove clap from (1) fixed
- 00:54:178 (1,2) >> I don't suggest using stacks because novice players will also play this diff and stacks may be hard for them. Consider unstacking fixed!
- 01:00:524 (5,1) >> Add clap to (5), remove clap from (1) fixed
- 01:55:105 >> Make a 1/1 slider and add finish to the end fixed
- 02:29:557 >> New combo fixed

Hard:
- 00:38:653 >> Remove new combo ? fixed
- 00:58:782 >> New combo ? fixed
- 01:48:331 >> Remove new combo ? fixed
- 01:55:492 >> Add a note with finish fixed

Lunatic:
- 01:55:492 >> Put streams until this point and at the final note add a finish ? fixed
- 02:47:169 >> Covered by previous note's hitburst, I guess you can read it by the approach circle but it is really hard and tricky so I suggest you move this somewhere fixed
- 02:50:073 >> Touches a little the hp bar fixed

* Really nice!

-kevincela- wrote:

Hi,sorry for the really big delay (probably caused by my lazyness),but here's my mod! ^^

[Normal]

1. 00:42:718 (2) - Put them like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:19:105 (2,3,4) - Put them like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:30:137 (1) - Remove New Combo?
2. 00:30:718 (2) - Add New Combo?
3. 01:02:847 (6) - Flip horizontally? fixed
4. 01:46:008 (1) - Remove New Combo?
5. 01:46:589 (2) - Add New Combo?
6. 01:52:202 (1) - Remove New Combo?
7. 01:52:782 (2) - Add New Combo?

[Lunatic]

1. 01:08:073 (4) - 1 grid up and right? fixed
2. 01:30:331 (1) - Remove New Combo?
3. 02:46:202 (1) - ^

Pretty solid map,keep going! ^^

kurohana wrote:

usa <33
my mod ^^
very good map, i couldn't find something wrong
good luck^^
EDIT: oh, bubbled xD good luck for rank ^^

abalee wrote:

useless file in your folder
"Halozy - ShiningSTREAM (Thite).osb"
remove it and full submit please.

[Hard]
01:02:460 (4) - little complain on the spacing with 01:02:653 (5) - , move it like the picture below looks better in my opinion.
[attachment=0:699a8]sapcing.jpg[/attachment:699a8]

Garven wrote:

'sup Thite　\o/

[Normal]
01:04:008 (5) - Delete? Feels extraneous. fixed
01:16:782 (1) - Remove finish from the end fixed
01:53:169 (2) - This was a lot cooler if you did something like this:
fixed
02:32:266 (4) - Delete? Feels extraneous. fixed

[Hard]
01:05:944 (4,5) - Spacing is a little close fixed
01:06:718 (8,1) - Easily avoidable overlap fixed

[Insane]
00:50:847 (3,4) - After all that jumping, this felt rather close sorry i dont want to change this o.o
01:30:331 (1,2,3,4) - Hm, the spacing on this stream is drastically different from all of your other streams. Think you could get things more consistent? fixed
02:07:492 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
02:13:298 (1,2,3,4) - Um, all four of these have different distance snap.

Breeze wrote:

Bubble poped and rebubbled so many time
Let me finish it