Faust wrote:

Hi.

If possible, try looking for a better mp3. This one is quite low-quality. Offset: 675
Be sure to resnap all notes and kiai sections.

Easy: Pretty much nothing of concern.

- 00:03:181 (2) - Why did you suddenly use this kind of slider?

Normal: Couple of suggestions. Take them if you like them.

- 00:00:681 (1) - Add a repeat.

- 00:01:514 (2) - Delete this note.

- 00:01:931 (2) - Shift this note to - 00:01:722 -

- 00:04:014 (1) - Shoften to 1/4 slider. Remove hit-finish hitsound. Then add a repeat.

- 00:05:264 (2) - Shift to - 00:05:056 - . If you like this rhythm that I suggested, then you can do this for similar parts in the song.

- 00:23:597 (6) - Minor spacing thing.

- 01:00:674 (5) - New Combo.

- 01:13:389 (5) - To be honest, these kinds of sliders are too short for you to consider using sliderpoints.

So you should probably just do a normal slider like this instead:

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- 01:17:764 (6) - 2 grids right.

- 01:20:681 (3,4) - Rather you do this:

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- 01:29:431 (4) - 1 grid left.

Loner0032 wrote:

It is a good song, you're making a well

Jacob wrote:

Two cookiezi diffs.

TheSlave wrote:

Star~

Ra-s wrote:

Suirenn♥Cookiezi


[General]

Background Image should be 1024*768

SPOILER

Easy diff should be like other diffs

[Easy]

00:27:347 (1) - move to (x:448,y72) done
00:54:014 (1) - add finish on start and remove finish on end of slide done
00:57:347 (1) - ^ done
01:00:680 (1) - ^ done
01:19:847 (2) - remove finish done
01:27:347 (1) - add finish on start done


[Normal]

00:25:264 (4) - add finish on end of slider done
00:26:097 (5) - add finish on start slider and end of slider done
00:26:931 (6) - remove finish done
00:27:347 (1) - add finish done
00:54:014 (1) - add finish on start done
00:56:930 (5) - remove finish on start and add finish middle of slider done
00:57:350 - unsnapped inherited (green) timing point done
01:00:264 (4) - remove finish done
01:00:674 - unsnapped inherited (green) timing point done
01:00:680 (5) - add finish done
01:07:347 (1) - add finish on start done
01:09:847 (4) - distance is too far... done
01:14:014 (1) - add finish on start done
01:20:681 (3) - ^ done
01:27:347 (1) - add finish done



m4m

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ suirenn05 ~

Random mod for this ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening,galgame' in tags.
2. Change AudioLeadIn:2000(3000 is too long).

[Cookiezi' Insane]

1. 00:00:681 (1) - Make more better slider.
   

   216,64,681,2,0,B|240:40|272:40|296:64,1,90,2|0

2. 00:27:972 (5,6,7) - Make a symmetry.
   

   320,312,27972,1,2
   360,328,28076,1,0
   400,312,28181,1,2

3. 00:38:181 (4) - Move 1 grid down.
4. 01:20:264 (1) - Remove too short new combo.
5. 01:26:306 (7) - Move 1 grid left(symmetry).

[Cookiezi' Hard]

1. 01:25:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try like this part.
   

[Normal]

1. 00:14:014 - Add finish.done
2. 00:20:681 - ^done
3. 01:00:680 (5) - Add new combo.

done

That's all ~ hope this ranked it,fight ><

Good luck ~

YGOkid8 wrote:

irc modded Cookiezi's diffs, cause those were the only diffs. i thought were okay to be ranked (with a bit of work). suirenn05's diffs. need work imo. also i think there's too big a jump from Normal to Cookiezi's Hard, so i recommend both upping Easy and Normal's difficulty.

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02:05 <Cookiezi> : hey~, maybe busy?
02:05 <YGOkid8> : depends~
02:06 <YGOkid8> : what can i do for you?
02:06 <Cookiezi> : just request mod a map :3.. it's ok?
02:07 <YGOkid8> : i only mod maps if i think they're ready to be ranked
02:07 <YGOkid8> : so i'll test it first
02:07 <YGOkid8> : test =/= mod, that okay?
02:07 <Cookiezi> : yes :D
02:07 <YGOkid8> : link me then :D
02:07  *Cookiezi is listening to (Hashimoto Miyuki - Symphonic Love (Short Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43337]
02:08 <YGOkid8> : lol i was expecting a map you've mapped :U
02:08 <YGOkid8> : oh wait
02:08 <YGOkid8> : guest diff.
02:08 <Cookiezi> : almost all mine
02:08 <Cookiezi> : :D
02:08 <YGOkid8> : yeah, haha
02:08  *YGOkid8 is listening to (Hashimoto Miyuki - Symphonic Love (Short Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43337]
02:12 <YGOkid8> : in terms of your diffs. specifically
02:12 <YGOkid8> : i like your Hard better
02:14 <Cookiezi> : :D..
02:15 <YGOkid8> : hmm
02:15 <Cookiezi> : how do you think..?
02:16 <YGOkid8> : it's alright
02:16 <YGOkid8> : both you and the mapper's diff.
02:16 <YGOkid8> : problem is
02:16 <YGOkid8> : his easy and normal are too similar in difficulty
02:16 <YGOkid8> : and your hard and insane are also to similar in difficulty
02:16 <YGOkid8> : in your insane
02:16 <YGOkid8> : you've tried to make it harder by including ar9
02:16 <YGOkid8> : but imo it doesn't suit the map
02:17 <Cookiezi> : make 8?
02:17 <YGOkid8> : Easy: SV 0.7, Normal: SV 0.8, Hard: SV 1.6, Insane: SV1.8
02:17 <YGOkid8> : even if you did that
02:17 <YGOkid8> : the difficulty between those two are too similar
02:18 <YGOkid8> : imo anyway
02:18 <YGOkid8> : no actually
02:18 <YGOkid8> : your diffs. are fine
02:18 <YGOkid8> : just decrease insane ar to 8
02:19 <Cookiezi> : ok :D
02:19 <Cookiezi> : and?
02:20 <YGOkid8> : don't really like suirenn05's diffs., i like yours better
02:20 <YGOkid8> : i won't fully mod, but i can do a quick one for your diffs.
02:20 <Cookiezi> : hmm, ok, thanks :)
02:21 <YGOkid8> : hard diff.
02:21 <YGOkid8> : 00:19:014 - feels empty here, add a hitcircle
02:21 <YGOkid8> : 00:05:264 (2) - delete
02:22 <YGOkid8> : 00:04:014 (8,1) - switch new combos
02:22 <YGOkid8> : 00:06:097 (2,3) - delete (2) and adjust (3) to fit spacing
02:22 <YGOkid8> : 00:06:931 (4) - and delete
02:23 <YGOkid8> : 00:14:639 - add a beat here
02:23 <YGOkid8> : 00:21:306 - ^
02:23 <YGOkid8> : 00:41:306 - ^
02:24 <YGOkid8> : 01:04:014 (1) - start spinner on 01:03:806 - instead (end at same place)
02:25 <YGOkid8> : 01:08:181 - add a beat
02:25 <YGOkid8> : 01:14:639 (2,3) - do what you did the first time with two sliders, imo that plays better
02:26 <YGOkid8> : 01:16:722 (8) - change into a 1/2 slider
02:26 <YGOkid8> : 01:18:389 (4) - same here
02:26 <YGOkid8> : 01:23:389 (7) - same
02:28 <YGOkid8> : 01:27:347 (1,2,1,2) - use this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/mE2v
02:28 <YGOkid8> : 01:30:264 - add beat
02:28 <YGOkid8> : 01:30:889 (2) - change to 1/2 slider
02:28 <YGOkid8> : 01:31:722 (2) - ^
02:30 <Cookiezi> : end?
02:30 <YGOkid8> : yep
02:30 <Cookiezi> : ok :D
02:30 <YGOkid8> : insane diff.
02:30 <YGOkid8> : 00:05:264 (4) - delete
02:31 <YGOkid8> : 00:06:514 (5) - flip the shape horizontally, but still starting in the same place
02:31 <YGOkid8> : 00:06:931 (6) - and delete
02:32 <YGOkid8> : 00:18:389 (4) - ctrl + r
02:33 <YGOkid8> : 00:28:181 (7,8,9) - you have a jump from (7) to (8), but no jump from (8) to (9), so i reckon you should 
02:33 <YGOkid8> : have a jump there with the same distance from (7) to (8)
02:34 <YGOkid8> : it'll play better imo
02:34 <YGOkid8> : 00:35:264 - add a beat
02:34 <YGOkid8> : 00:36:931 - ^
02:34 <YGOkid8> : 00:43:806 - ^
02:35 <YGOkid8> : 00:43:910 - ^
02:35 <YGOkid8> : 00:53:389 - ^
02:35 <YGOkid8> : 00:53:597 - then 5 beat stream would be nice
02:36 <YGOkid8> : 01:16:931 - add beat
02:37 <YGOkid8> : 01:21:514 - ^
02:37 <YGOkid8> : 01:22:347 - ^
02:37 <YGOkid8> : 01:23:597 - ^
02:37 <YGOkid8> : 01:28:181 - ^
02:37 <YGOkid8> :  01:30:264 - ^
02:38 <YGOkid8> : that's it
02:38 <Cookiezi> : ok, done :3
02:39 <Cookiezi> : no need to change shape~, thanks :)
02:39 <YGOkid8> : np

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ suirenn05 ~

Random mod for this ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening,galgame' in tags.
2. Change AudioLeadIn:2000(3000 is too long).

[Cookiezi' Insane]

1. 00:00:681 (1) - Make more better slider.
   

   216,64,681,2,0,B|240:40|272:40|296:64,1,90,2|0

2. 00:27:972 (5,6,7) - Make a symmetry.
   

   320,312,27972,1,2
   360,328,28076,1,0
   400,312,28181,1,2

3. 00:38:181 (4) - Move 1 grid down.
4. 01:20:264 (1) - Remove too short new combo.
5. 01:26:306 (7) - Move 1 grid left(symmetry).

[Cookiezi' Hard]

1. 01:25:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try like this part.
   

[Normal]

1. 00:14:014 - Add finish.
2. 00:20:681 - ^
3. 01:00:680 (5) - Add new combo.

That's all ~ hope this ranked it,fight ><

Good luck ~

M a n a wrote:

Hi~
Random mod

[General]

Combo colour 1 & 3 are a bit similar ><,change it with another color?

[Easy]

00:00:681 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - A bit dissapointed with the slider ><
00:54:014 - Don't make the volume 100% it's noisy IMO
00:57:347 - ^
01:00:681 - ^

[Normal]

You use too much finish sound,it's noisy...and you add finish in the wrong place.
00:55:680 (4) - Inconsistent spacing,1 grid up?
01:24:847 (3) - ^
01:29:847 (5) -

[Hard]

AR -1 or -2? AR 8 it's too fast for Hard diff ;_;
00:12:347 (1) - Add finish instead of whistle? (in the begining)
00:40:681 ~ 01:33:180 - Don't make the volume 100% it's noisy IMO

[Insane]

I don't like the way you use triplets,it makes overmapped ;_; Well,maybe it just me? (Because I'm noob ;w;")
00:52:347 (1) - Iconsistent spacing,maybe 1 grid up? or 1 grid left?

That's all~
Star~
And good luck~

wcx19911123 wrote:

yo

[General]
timing is really off imo, offset=671(-10) plz
lead-in=3000 is too huge, use 2000 plz

[Easy]
HD-1 plz, it's now too high as Easy diff
01:33:181 - remove finish, it sound really odd to me

[Normal]
00:03:597 - the finish sound really odd, and doesn't fit the song at all, remove it plz
00:04:431 - ^
00:05:264 - ^
00:06:097 - ^
00:11:514 - ^
00:14:847 - ^
00:15:681 - ^
ok, I ignore the finish from now on.. there are too many this kind of finish, they sound really odd
00:34:014 - and I don't know why here hasn't finish.. add finish here plz
patterns are fine in this diff, but the hitsounds are terrible.. I suggest to remap hitsounds in this diff..

[Cookiezi's Hard]
fine o.o

[Cookiezi's Insane]
also fine o.o

Easy and Normal need some more works imo
otherwise, the map's diff spread is bad, there is a huge difficulty distance between Normal and Hard diff. plz make Normal diff harder and make Hard diff easier, or add a new diff between the 2 diffs
good luck

136,116,39004,6,0,B|180:56|256:32|332:56|376:116,1,280,0|2
39004 is the time, open .osu by notepad and instead.

Faust wrote:

Easy:

- 00:24:004 - Actually, a spinner here would be better.done

Normal:

- 00:50:670 (5) - New Combo.done
- 00:57:337 (8) - New Combo.done
- 00:58:170 (1) - Remove New Combo.done

Taiko DS:

RESNAP ALL NOTES PROPERLY AND RE-CHECK.

Cookiezi's Insane:

- 00:23:796 (1) - Might want to move this aside, because of the previous hitbursts covering it.
- 00:44:629 (3) - - Stack nicely on the previous (8)
- 01:16:504 (2) - Kinda blocked by the previous slider.

That's about it

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Bubble owo