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IOSYS - Ojousama DAYS

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Kanon
215 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kanon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月12日 at 16:40:15

Artist: IOSYS
Title: Ojousama DAYS
Source: Touhou
Tags: Precious Ryuuseisyoujo MonoROSETTA Asana fanzhen0019 Selee Nymph
BPM: 165
Filesize: 4046kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fan's Lunatic (5 stars, 421 notes)
  2. Hard (4.91 stars, 464 notes)
  3. Nymph's Easy (1.89 stars, 152 notes)
  4. Selee's Normal (4.16 stars, 242 notes)
Download: IOSYS - Ojousama DAYS
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th
Lunatic by fanzhen0019
Normal by selee
Easy by nymph

Thanks for Selee's hitsound help~
Last edited by Kanon , edited 21 times in total.
bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
bakabaka
液~ 沙發 :3
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
hao
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
[General]

  • Preview Point?

    Artist: "IOSYS feat. Asana" or just "IOSYS"

    Source: Touhou

    Tags: Precious Ryuuseisyoujo MonoROSETTA

    New mp3 with fades here http://puu.sh/ddbM
    New offset: -285

    Remove useless countdown?

    Add 1 sec lead-in since you start mapping from 00:01:169?
[Hard]

---fixed hitsounds/new combo
http://puu.sh/ddvR
大部分都改了 preview可以参考 artist, source记得改
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Kanon ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Using same audioLeadIn please.(Hard it's 1004)
  2. Resize your BG for 1024*768.
  3. Delete Enable countdown.

[Fan's Lunatic]


  1. 00:01:169 - Add finish.
  2. 00:22:260 - Add whistle.
  3. 00:36:442 (3) - You can try change locations? because the batter was blocked numbers.
  4. 00:53:533 - Add finish.
  5. 01:01:715 (2) - Try this, will be better with me.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:09:169 (1) - Remove too short new combo.
  7. 01:10:260 (5) - Move to here X:72 Y:152.
  8. 01:16:805 - Add finish.
  9. 01:25:533 - ^
  10. 01:39:987 (7) - Remove this note and 01:40:078 (1) not stack on 01:39:896 (6),
    I feel this is not suitable for triple.
  11. 01:51:715 - Add soft finish.
  12. 01:57:533 - Add finish.
  13. 01:58:987 (7) - Ctrl+R will be fine.
  14. 02:09:169 - Add finish.
  15. 02:13:169 (1) - Remove too short new combo.

[Hard]


  1. AR-1,not need same as Lunatic diff.
  2. 00:01:169 - Add finish and Remove whistle.
  3. 00:12:805 - ^
  4. 00:14:623 (1) - Remove too short new combo.
  5. 00:24:442 - ^
  6. 00:26:986 (5) - Try move to here X:160 Y:184.
  7. 00:28:805 (6) - Add new combo, because vocal start to here.
  8. 00:31:714 (5) - ^
  9. 00:35:532 (2) - Suggestion change a 1/4 repeat slider will be fine with me. like this.
    SPOILER
  10. 00:37:169 (4) - Add new combo.
  11. 00:40:077 (4) - ^
  12. 00:41:895 (8) - ^
  13. 00:47:715 - Add finish and Remove clap.
  14. 01:05:169 - ^
  15. 00:46:259 (1) - This spinner end point should be normal hitsound.
  16. 01:10:805 (1) - ^
  17. 01:16:805 - Add finish and Remove whistle.
  18. 01:28:442 - Add finish.
  19. 01:31:350 (7) - Add new combo.
  20. 01:39:532 (2) - same as 00:35:532 (2).
  21. 01:41:168 (4) - Add new combo.
  22. 01:51:715 - Add finish and Remove clap.
  23. 01:58:986 (8) - Add new combo.
  24. 02:02:441 (13) - Add new combo, because vocal and jump to here.
  25. 02:03:351 - Add finish and Remove clap.
  26. 02:14:715 (1) - Suggestion start to here 02:14:715.

That's all ~ nice mapset ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck ~ ;)
Kanon
215 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kanon

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Kanon ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Using same audioLeadIn please.(Hard it's 1004) fixed
  2. Resize your BG for 1024*768. lazy.. i'll do it later~XD
  3. Delete Enable countdown.fixed

[Hard]


  1. AR-1,not need same as Lunatic diff. done
  2. 00:01:169 - Add finish and Remove whistle. done
  3. 00:12:805 - ^ no need imo
  4. 00:14:623 (1) - Remove too short new combo. fix in other way
  5. 00:24:442 - ^ no need imo
  6. 00:26:986 (5) - Try move to here X:160 Y:184. moved a bit
  7. 00:28:805 (6) - Add new combo, because vocal start to here. done
  8. 00:31:714 (5) - ^ done
  9. 00:35:532 (2) - Suggestion change a 1/4 repeat slider will be fine with me. like this.
    SPOILER
    hmm seems good but i think triples here is too sudden, and i am following the drums, so sry
  10. 00:37:169 (4) - Add new combo. i want to keep it for some personal reason. XD
  11. 00:40:077 (4) - ^ ^
  12. 00:41:895 (8) - ^ OK
  13. 00:47:715 - Add finish and Remove clap. I think clap sounds better here..
  14. 01:05:169 - ^ fix in other way
  15. 00:46:259 (1) - This spinner end point should be normal hitsound. yes fixed
  16. 01:10:805 (1) - ^ not good imo..
  17. 01:16:805 - Add finish and Remove whistle. ok
  18. 01:28:442 - Add finish. add whistle instead
  19. 01:31:350 (7) - Add new combo. done
  20. 01:39:532 (2) - same as 00:35:532 (2). i'll keep this
  21. 01:41:168 (4) - Add new combo. same with former
  22. 01:51:715 - Add finish and Remove clap. ^
  23. 01:58:986 (8) - Add new combo. done
  24. 02:02:441 (13) - Add new combo, because vocal and jump to here. done
  25. 02:03:351 - Add finish and Remove clap. same with former
  26. 02:14:715 (1) - Suggestion start to here 02:14:715. ok changed

That's all ~ nice mapset ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck ~ ;)

Thank you~ Rika
Your mod is really helped~ :)
Also thanks for your star~
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Fan's Lunatic]


  1. 00:01:169 - Add finish. :arrow: ok
  2. 00:22:260 - Add whistle. :arrow: done
  3. 00:36:442 (3) - You can try change locations? because the batter was blocked numbers. :arrow: ok
  4. 00:53:533 - Add finish. :arrow: ok
  5. 01:01:715 (2) - Try this, will be better with me. :arrow: ah..okay
    SPOILER
  6. 01:09:169 (1) - Remove too short new combo. :arrow: yes
  7. 01:10:260 (5) - Move to here X:72 Y:152. :arrow: k
  8. 01:16:805 - Add finish. :arrow: k
  9. 01:25:533 - ^ :arrow: too many finish this part..so not
  10. 01:39:987 (7) - Remove this note and 01:40:078 (1) not stack on 01:39:896 (6),
    I feel this is not suitable for triple. :arrow: changed the pattern
  11. 01:51:715 - Add soft finish. :arrow: ok
  12. 01:57:533 - Add finish. :arrow: okay
  13. 01:58:987 (7) - Ctrl+R will be fine. :arrow: nop
  14. 02:09:169 - Add finish. :arrow: k
  15. 02:13:169 (1) - Remove too short new combo. :arrow: okay
thanks for modding :D

Download: IOSYS - Ojousama DAYS (Kanon) [Fan's Lunatic].osu
lkp
270 posts
Joined May 2010
lkp
好久不見了~
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21
hi.. from my queue :D

[Selee's Normal]
00:02:987 (4) - x:440 y:256
00:41:896 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/euHb
01:06:260 (2) - x:400 y:112
01:58:260 (3,4,5,6,1) - a bit hard for a beginner.. change it to slider?
02:11:715 (4) - remove this
02:10:624 (3) - end it 02:11:169

GL :D
winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
late mod sorry.

--Add Selee and Nymph in to the tags
--There's an inconsistency in letterbox during breaks, and countdowns. Please disable them all (or enable them if you want)
--Selee and nymph's easy has different lead in time than the rest
--combo 1 and 2 seems a little close imo. or maybe it's just my skin.

Fan's Lunatic

--there are different kiai times in this diff

00:16:987 (5,6) - maybe it's just me, but this just feels too close together
00:51:715 (3,4) - seems a little high. it also touches the hp bar.
01:02:442 - i'm inclined to click here even tho there isn't a hitcircle. So perhaps add a note? I fits better imo because you have constant 1/2 ticks before for a measure or two despite the vocals playing a different melody.
01:30:442 (7) - i'd rather change this slider into two notes and a slider http://puu.sh/gcmt
01:36:260 (8) - ^
02:00:987 (4) - new combo to match previous pattern
02:01:715 (7) - new combo

Hard

AR-1?
--this is hard is quite... hard... (ironically) for a hard difficulty with all the anti-spacing and jumps you put it, and there's a pretty big diff gap between hard and normal :/

00:06:623 (1) - remove combo
00:06:986 (3) - add new combo
00:36:987 - adding a note fits better imo.
00:39:896 - ^
00:43:350 (1) - move note to 00:43:533 -
01:26:805 (9) - new combo?
01:39:168 (1,2,3) - i would space this equally. it just looks a little weird imo right now.
01:40:987 - asdfasdf, it just fits so much better imo if you add a note imo. idk why. i guess it's more personal opinion, but you should still consider adding one.
01:43:896 - ^
01:50:260 (1) - perhaps you could do the same thing you did at 00:46:259 (1) -

Selee's

--unsnapped notes

00:36:078 (6) - new combo?
00:37:532 (2,3) - move both notes back 1/2 tick http://puu.sh/gctb
00:38:987 (4) - new combo?
00:40:441 (2,3,4,5) - you could try something like this http://puu.sh/gctS It's a normal diff and there's an easy diff in this mapset, so i don't think you need to be worried about using 1/2 tick notes.
00:57:715 (6) - i'm a little hesitant to stack this. you could consider unstacking if you want
01:09:533 (5) - new combo?
01:17:533 (2,3,4) - space equally? DDD:
01:26:986 (3) - you should start this slider 1/2 tick ealier http://puu.sh/gcv5
01:38:624 (3,4,5) - you could definitely do something more interesting and something that fits the vocals more than this.
01:40:078 (6) - new combo?
01:41:169 (1,2,3) - same thing as earlier
01:42:987 (4) - new combo?
01:44:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - same thing as earlier
02:13:533 (5) - new combo?

Nymph's

00:21:533 (3) - try this http://puu.sh/gcwT fits the vocals better. you could try something similar to this in later parts to try to match the vocals more.
00:46:078 (1) - there needs to be a note here imo, also delete combo 4
01:50:078 - ^

nothing much to say other than that.

good luck~~
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph

Kanon wrote:

[*]Nmyph's Easy (1.35 stars, 124 notes)
不能这样。。
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue


Nmyph's Easy

  1. 除了难度名不科学就没什么问题了
  2. 02:09:169 (1) - end at 02:09:896?
Selee's Normal

  1. 00:02:624 (3,4) - 去掉这两个whistle?
  2. others fine
Hard

  1. 这个难度有点太难了, 那个lunatic比较简单, diff spread不是很理想...
  2. 00:32:987 - 这个删掉?
  3. 00:44:259 (4,5,6) - 这里感觉很难接上= =...
  4. 00:45:350 (9) - spacing
  5. 01:09:532 (1) - why jump
  6. 01:39:168 (1,2,3) - 这是什么= = 不合音乐而且很坑爹
Fan's Lunatic

  1. 00:29:896 (7) - 这个有点看不清
  2. 00:51:715 (3,4) - 这里太高碰到HP bar了
  3. 00:45:533 (3,4) - 间距好像有点大... = =容易看成oo oo的那种
  4. 01:25:169 (5) - 这个也有点看不清...
  5. 02:00:351 (13) - ^
that's all

Good luck~
Gundam
136 posts
Joined January 2011
Gundam
Hi~from my queue

General

BG好萌不过大小不合规格T T 帮你resize了
http://puu.sh/gB9l
把Nymph和selee添加到TAG里


Nymph's Easy

diff名太不科学(slap
00:17:533 (x) -add circle
00:19:160 (x) -^
00:49:533 (x) -^ 节奏略单调……
01:01:169 (x) -^
01:53:533 (x) -^
02:05:169 (x) -^


Selee's Normal

HD-1


Hard

AR太高啦Q_Q AR-1
02:01:169 (2,3,4,5,6) -滥用嫌疑
02:01:896 (2,3,4,5,6) -^


Insane

fine!


edit:BG我调错了T T用下面这个吧OTL
http://puu.sh/gBq3
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
ok

Download: IOSYS - Ojousama DAYS (Kanon) [Nymph's Easy].osu
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
=w=
[quote="winber1]Selee's

--unsnapped notes fixed

00:36:078 (6) - new combo?
00:37:532 (2,3) - move both notes back 1/2 tick http://puu.sh/gctb
00:38:987 (4) - new combo?
00:40:441 (2,3,4,5) - you could try something like this http://puu.sh/gctS It's a normal diff and there's an easy diff in this mapset, so i don't think you need to be worried about using 1/2 tick notes.
00:57:715 (6) - i'm a little hesitant to stack this. you could consider unstacking if you wantFixed
01:09:533 (5) - new combo?
01:17:533 (2,3,4) - space equally? DDD: lol, okay.
01:26:986 (3) - you should start this slider 1/2 tick ealier http://puu.sh/gcv5
01:38:624 (3,4,5) - you could definitely do something more interesting and something that fits the vocals more than this.Fixed
01:40:078 (6) - new combo?
01:41:169 (1,2,3) - same thing as earlier
01:42:987 (4) - new combo?
01:44:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - same thing as earlier
02:13:533 (5) - new combo?
good luck~~[/quote]
Kanon
215 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kanon
reply

winber1 wrote:

late mod sorry.

--Add Selee and Nymph in to the tags done
--There's an inconsistency in letterbox during breaks, and countdowns. Please disable them all (or enable them if you want) fixed
--Selee and nymph's easy has different lead in time than the rest fixed
--combo 1 and 2 seems a little close imo. or maybe it's just my skin. it's fine imo

Hard

AR-1? AR7 make this map even more hard to play ,trust me.
--this is hard is quite... hard... (ironically) for a hard difficulty with all the anti-spacing and jumps you put it, and there's a pretty big diff gap between hard and normal :/

Originally i want to make this song with only hard and normal diff. So this hard diff is a bit harder.


00:06:623 (1) - remove combo k
00:06:986 (3) - add new combo k
00:36:987 - adding a note fits better imo. k
00:39:896 - ^ k
00:43:350 (1) - move note to 00:43:533 - no i know this follows the drum,but plays weird.
01:26:805 (9) - new combo? k
01:39:168 (1,2,3) - i would space this equally. it just looks a little weird imo right now. ok changed
01:40:987 - asdfasdf, it just fits so much better imo if you add a note imo. idk why. i guess it's more personal opinion, but you should still consider adding one.
01:43:896 - ^ ok changed both
01:50:260 (1) - perhaps you could do the same thing you did at 00:46:259 (1) - dont understarnd what you say here, but i think now is fine.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hard

  1. 这个难度有点太难了, 那个lunatic比较简单, diff spread不是很理想... 我原来打算2diff的 hard做的难了点。。
  2. 00:32:987 - 这个删掉? 觉得不太好
  3. 00:44:259 (4,5,6) - 这里感觉很难接上= =... 是么 我觉得ds不算大啊
  4. 00:45:350 (9) - spacing fixed
  5. 01:09:532 (1) - why jump 重音jump
  6. 01:39:168 (1,2,3) - 这是什么= = 不合音乐而且很坑爹 仔细听 有鼓声的

Gundam wrote:

Hi~from my queue

General

BG好萌不过大小不合规格T T 帮你resize了 好 谢了~
http://puu.sh/gB9l
把Nymph和selee添加到TAG里 fixed




Hard

AR太高啦Q_Q AR-1 AR7我觉得真心读图会很难的。。
02:01:169 (2,3,4,5,6) -滥用嫌疑 的确不好 改了一下
02:01:896 (2,3,4,5,6) -^



edit:BG我调错了T T用下面这个吧OTL
http://puu.sh/gBq3
Thanks for you all 's mod and especially for winber's star :p
updated
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Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Nymph told me to mod this so here I am

[General]
  1. The audio lead in on Nymph's and Selee's diff is different from the other 2 diff (only 4ms though =3=)
  2. And might as well remove the count down on their diff too (not that it really matters =3=)
[Nymph's Easy]
  1. It seems that you don't use any soft finish on the non kiai section. I can clearly hear finish on the music and using finish my give more varieties to your hitsound (that is unless you hate finish =3=)
[Selee's Normal]
  1. 00:47:714 (1) - Oops, unsnapped slider end. It also quit far from the center, you may have to move it a bit closer
  2. 01:58:805 (6) - Change this into slider instead? kinda like below
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:623 (3,4) - Make this into normal spacing place the jump to 00:06:986 (1), flows better if you make a jump to the downbeat kinda like this
    SPOILER
  2. 01:07:533 (1) - I can read the anti-jump first time playing, however the flow is not good at all. Consider how there are jumps on the previous objects, might as well change the anti-jump to normal spacing or a normal jump
  3. 01:27:532 (3) - Quite a massive jump for a Hard diff. I suggest to make the jump on 01:27:350 (2) instead so the jump are balanced, kinda like example below (you may want to change the shape of the slider if you don't like it)
    SPOILER
  4. 01:36:441 (1) - The jump is random, it doesn't fit the song cause there's no change whatsoever in the vocal or in the music. Normal spacing works better here
[Fan's Insane]
  1. 00:05:351 (5) - This is a bit surprising. I suggest to change it to circles so it'll be triple circle in that place
  2. 00:06:987 - Please map the break. The break itself is kinda weird cause it's still early in the map and seeing how you map to the music in the beginning, it's kinda awkward to map only the first half then throw a break on it
  3. 00:29:896 (7) - This is quite difficult to see. It's almost covered by the hitburst from the previous object. Try to reposition this slider
  4. 01:19:624 (6) - The circle is practically covered by the hitburst and you can't see until you actually missed it
  5. 01:22:169 (7) - ^
  6. 01:57:533 (1) - This 3/4 sounds very awkward. A simple 1/2 beat slider sounds and fit better with the song
Try to use soft whistle like on Seele's diff, he use it quite nicely
That's all from me. Good Luck~
LKs
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LKs
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