wmfchris wrote:

[Gu's Hard]
00:02:616 (1) - slider 尾也靜掉 K
00:39:765 (1,2) - 這個有點誤導性吧 o_o 改成三连了
01:01:561 (8) - remove clap at the beginning? No
01:28:280 (s) - 把spinner靜掉 K

1/2拍差距用0.5x 1拍差距用0.0x 這個會誤導人啊 : < 最好改一下 我觉得这样的停顿比较适合这歌打起来也比较舒服._.嘛，实在不行再改吧

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Gu's Hard]

1. Stack Leniency : 7,I do not recommend using 5. using 5 can only a little stack
2. 00:36:483 (2) - Try flip this slider, like this. :3 nice
3. 00:51:483 (7,8) - Overlap here is not recommended. I like
4. 00:57:577 (2) - This slider should end to here 00:58:046.intentionally
   

lovhin456 wrote:

Gu's Hard:
- 00:48:085 (5,6) >> Move (5) here and (6) to the next tick K
- 01:00:155 >> Finish K
- 01:23:593 >> ^K

lovhin456 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod but I got a bunch of things in real life ;w; Again, I'm sorry

General:
- Fine

Easy:
- Seems ok

Aisha's Normal:
- 00:49:140 (1,2) >> Spacing ?
- 00:51:015 (1,2,3) >> ^
- 00:54:296 (3,4) >> ^

Gu's Hard:
- 00:52:186 >> Maybe the new combo here is not so necessary ?

Insane:
- Fine

* Ok, call me back after the fixes

haha, it's ok. real life is more important than a Game
Thx for mod!!!~ All Fixed!!~

lovhin456 wrote:

Sorry for taking so long
Bubbled

• 
  Kiais&SB:

1. 00:41:640 - This fountain, combined with the SB in that part, almost left me blind xD (I play with shader effects on) I suggest removing this fountain, the SB is more than enough imo.
2. 01:13:515 - Well I guess there's nothing to do with this one xD Maybe make the white image in the storyboard a little more transparent? Perhaps you could do that with the previous suggestion, too.
   
   Tags:
3. Just asking, 'cause I don't know... What is the "Eiru" in the tags?

1. 00:02:265 (1,2) - This doesn't really fit the music. I think you should be emphasizing the vocals, and for that, (1) should finish at 00:02:499 -
2. 00:09:765 (1,2) - (^)
3. 00:33:202 (3,4) - This jump doesn't really flow so well, because of the direction in which (3) finishes. If you're gonna do it, try something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:40:468 - How about adding a circle here, stacked with the end of the slider? I felt that it would fit the music very well!

narakucrimson wrote:

Yo

[General]

• 
  Kiais&SB:

1. 00:41:640 - This fountain, combined with the SB in that part, almost left me blind xD (I play with shader effects on) I suggest removing this fountain, the SB is more than enough imo. Fixed~
2. 01:13:515 - Well I guess there's nothing to do with this one xD Maybe make the white image in the storyboard a little more transparent? Perhaps you could do that with the previous suggestion, too. Fixed~
   
   Tags:
3. Just asking, 'cause I don't know... What is the "Eiru" in the tags?

lovhin456 wrote:

Song's Info:
- Tags: Might as well add "Eiru" since it seems like some people say the correct artist is Aoi Eiru (it was pointed out in the ranked map also)

So...

[Gu's Hard]

1. 00:02:265 (1,2) - This doesn't really fit the music. I think you should be emphasizing the vocals, and for that, (1) should finish at 00:02:499 - Fixed~
2. 00:09:765 (1,2) - (^) Fixed~
3. 00:33:202 (3,4) - This jump doesn't really flow so well, because of the direction in which (3) finishes. If you're gonna do it, try something like this: Fixed~
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:40:468 - How about adding a circle here, stacked with the end of the slider? I felt that it would fit the music very well!

Fixed~

Ok that's all! Nice work!

Thx for your mod

• 
  Offset:

1. In the section from 00:00:390 to 00:01:327, there is no music, so the offset isn't right at 00:00:390.
   You should move it to 00:01:327, and then add an extra red timing section at 00:02:265 to fix the metronome.
   
   SB:
2. The use of Black.png can be avoided simply to save some SB load and some file size. I was discussion this with SapphireGhost, and we deemed it important.
   All you have to do is fade the background. The default background is black, so it creates the same effect.
   Then, open the .osu file, and under //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background), add this code:
   

   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
    S,0,0,,1,0.625

   That way you will scale your background to the right size. After that, proceed to do the fade as you did it before.

narakucrimson wrote:

Alright! Two more things to mention:

• 
  Offset:

1. In the section from 00:00:390 to 00:01:327, there is no music, so the offset isn't right at 00:00:390.
   You should move it to 00:01:327, and then add an extra red timing section at 00:02:265 to fix the metronome.
   
   SB:
2. The use of Black.png can be avoided simply to save some SB load and some file size. I was discussion this with SapphireGhost, and we deemed it important.
   All you have to do is fade the background. The default background is black, so it creates the same effect.
   Then, open the .osu file, and under //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background), add this code:
   

   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
    S,0,0,,1,0.625

   That way you will scale your background to the right size. After that, proceed to do the fade as you did it before.

Well, just that! After that, I can probably rebubble this! ALSO NO KUDOSU FOR THIS POST

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Easy]

01:26:405 (1) - I think this should end at 01:28:397. Fixed

[Aisha's Normal]

00:38:358 (4,5) - I think they're too close. You will also need to fix the spacing after these sliders. Fixed
01:26:405 (1) - Same as the spinner on Easy. Fixed

[Gu's Hard]

01:26:522 (1) - Same as the spinner on Easy. Fixed

[Sp3's Taiko]

Change the Slider Velocity to 1,40. Fixed

There's an extra line that there shouldn't be on this difficulty, look at this. Fixed

01:26:522 (1) - Same as the spinner on Easy. Fixed

[Insane]

01:26:522 (1) - Same as the spinner on Easy. Fixed

Sorry but I have to pop this!

lolcubes wrote:

Hey there!

[Insane]
00:11:640 (5) - Shorten it by 1/4, it sounds wrong like it is now. You have vocals landing on that tick I'm suggesting too. Fixed
00:57:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't understand why you want a stream here, it's not in the music. Mapping vocals with jumps would feel much better if you ask me. Ok! Fixed to two notes to follow the vocal ^_^
01:07:890 (1) - Also shorten it by 1/4, sounds much better and follows the vocals better. ok~
01:22:421 (4) - I think you're missing a finish at the end here. You used it at 01:07:421 (4) and this is the same thing. :p Oops! fixed~
01:22:890 (1) - Also shorten it by 1/4, same reason. ok~

[Gu's Hard]
00:01:327 (1) - Completely silenced hitobjects are highly unrankable. Slider ends are allowed to be silenced only when they fit, this is not the case. You need to make this audible. Fixed~
00:15:390 (1) - Same here. Here, however, a silenced slider end fits, so you can move your 5% volume timing section 1 tick forward, to 00:15:507. Because slider speed x0.5 here , so I make 00:15:390 volume to 30% , and add a gren timong section with 5% volume to 00:15:507
00:57:577 (2) - End it at 00:58:046 instead, like it is now is very weird and I actually had a 100 here cause the music is different compared to this slider. Oh!! , sorry I don't notice this , now fixed to follow the vocal

[Aisha's Normal]
00:56:640 (6) - Make this note louder, I can't hear it well. Ok, add 10 % high~ , now 40% volume

[Easy]
AR+1, AR2 seems a bit too slow.
00:54:765 (1) - Make the end a bit louder please, otherwise that finish on it makes no sense as it's almost inaudible. I think it would give a nice impact too. 40% volume now~~
01:06:015 (1) - Some nazi, since you have to fix other stuff. Midpoint 2 grids right and 1 grid down, would make the slider look much better imo. Do the same change (but mirrored) to 01:08:827 (4) as well then.
ya!! nice catch~~ Fixed!!

Everything else looks good, nice SB too. Taiko rhythms seemed quite odd to me at a first glance but they do make sense (the kiai). It's his style
Apply the changes and I can rank this right away.