As requested
[
General]
Didn't notice any problem (most were mentioned in the first few mod posts anyways). Didn't check for unused custom hitsound and SB, so sorry if I miss anything there.
[
Easy]
-1 od, it's the same as Normal right now.
- 0.8x distant snap 
00:11:640 (2) - Looks better if you make it like this
http://puu.sh/cYSp00:39:765 (3) - The red point on this slider doesn't fit the music (red points give a more sudden/jerky feel while the singer is singing this note really smoothly). I recommend a normal curve slider instead.
01:03:202 (3) - Touches hp bar, would be cleaner if you can get it not to touch it (try wave slider?)
00:57:577 - 01:09:296 - You're focusing your mapping in the center. Would be nicer if you try to spread it out more.
01:16:327 - Curve this slider, looks nicer to me.
01:17:733 (2,3) - Not sure if you want to get your slider perfectly or not, but most of your slider were pretty good so I recommend trying to make these sliders better, they look a bit unsymmetrical to me.
Pretty nice diff, would prefer 1.0x distant snap, but there is no problem as you didn't place any note too close to each other in the timeline.
[
Normal]
- This is the only diff to use slider tick rate 2, can you use slider tick rate 1 to be consistent with the rest of the map? You don't have to since this is a guest diff, but just seem nicer if you keep it consistent with the rest of the map.
- +1 hp & od, current hp setting make the difficulty jump to Hard quite high
00:23:827 (2) - I'm sure unless the person know the song or played the map before, they would miss the last repeat. Please remove a repeat and add a hit circle instead like at 00:25:936.
00:26:640 (2) - This is why you shouldn't use 0.8x distant snap, this overlap doesn't look really nice, I would probably have use 1.2x distant for the entire map instead. I recommend aligning (1) & (2) on the y axis
http://puu.sh/cYTP Looks nicer then this considering 00:27:108 (1,2) are both straight sliders, and doing this make it also straight and consistent with those sliders.
00:37:421 (6,7,1) - Just a preference, but I would like repeating slider instead, due to the distant snap used, this look like a spaced out stream to me. Or stack them instead.
00:39:765 (4,5,6) - ^
00:49:140 (1,2,3) - Pattern here seem to be quite linear, how about copying 00:51:015 (5,6,7) then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J then fix spacing so end result is something like this
http://puu.sh/cYV91/2 stacks and rhythms plays well enough due to low bpm, don't recommend using lot of 1/2 for higher bpm song through. But this is quite a nice map.
[
Hard]
00:02:265 (1) - Please silence end of this slider (20% volume or less, don't do below 5% if you want it to be rankable), this blue tick sound really offbeat and bad to me.
00:02:733 (2) - Stacking this play nicer then spacing it out, when I read this by spacing, I keep hitting this late.
00:31:796 (4) - Curving this slider make this pattern look nicer
http://puu.sh/cYXr00:43:515 (1,2) - Same as 00:02:265 & 00:02:733
00:52:186 (8) - Why stack this one when you didn't stack (7) to the end of (6)? So space it out with 0.5x distant snap like (7).
00:57:577 (2) - This slider look really unsymmetrical to me, I guess you copied from 00:56:640, but I recommend adjusting it manually since this slider looks really horrible.
00:59:686 (3) - Why stack this slider? You didn't stack for 01:00:858 (6) & 01:02:733 (2) so don't do it here as well for consistency.
01:08:124 (4) - ^
01:15:624 (4) - ^
I don't really like the 0.5x distant snap stream after a slider (especially at 00:31:796) , would play better stacked imo. Map looks good through.
[
Insane]
- Don't think Insane fits with this song, slider velocity and approach rate feel too fast compare to feel of the music for me.
00:16:327 (1,2,3,4) - I feel this pattern play weird, make more sense to me if you Ctrl+R (2,4) so that it goes in the same direction as 00:15:390 (1,2,3,4), nicer to play imo.
00:27:811 (1,2,3) - Weird jump, make more sense if 00:26:171 (4) were 3 hit circles instead to do a jump there (like at 00:27:811) and put a repeating slider here instead.
00:31:796 (5,6,7) - I find stacking (5) with begin of (4) weird, especially after a 2.0x jump, would prefer if you space it out
http://puu.sh/cZ18, lead nicer to the upcoming jumps as well.
00:36:015 (1,2,3,4) - This 3.3x jump just seem to be there to make this diff harder. I recommend Ctrl+Ring (2,3) and ctrl+ring each ot the slider to they point to the same direction
http://puu.sh/cZ1V00:42:577 (2,3) - 1.8x jump instead, current size of the jump doesn't feel too nice for me, especially after playing a repeating slider with a repeat on the blue tick.
01:02:030 (6,7,1) - You should do compressed stream considering how you used compressed stream for streams like at 00:57:577. It's weird to see a compressed stream then a normally spaced stream.
01:02:499 (2,3,4) - ^
01:04:374 (2) - This jump just feel out of place and doesn't play well, I recommend making (1,2) into a slider then used 1.5x distant snap for the notes
http://puu.sh/cZ4801:24:061 (3,4,5) - Use compressed stream (0.8x distant snap).
Plays pretty well for the most part, but really don't think Insane fits this song.
No real problem, you get a star from me.
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