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Tony

Armin wrote:

tell me that you felt reeeaaaaly lazy. :P
D:
everything fixed :3
thanks Armin!
updated~
-kevincela-
Hi \o/

[Puppet]


  1. 02:34:570 (2) - I would add a New combo here.
  2. 02:46:438 (3) - Move this here:

[Marionette]


  1. 00:49:075 (1) - Put this on the note 2?

Wow,I'm impressed. Pretty cool map and music. Take this star!
Topic Starter
Tony

-kevincela- wrote:

Hi \o/

[Puppet]


  1. 02:34:570 (2) - I would add a New combo here. Nah~
  2. 02:46:438 (3) - Move this here: Fixed. Good thing you pointed that out. I realised that I mapped that part with 1.1x instead of 1.0x lol

[Marionette]


  1. 00:49:075 (1) - Put this on the note 2?Nah~

Wow,I'm impressed. Pretty cool map and music. Take this star!
Thanks for all :D
lovhin456
Hello ~

Song's Info:
- Tags: Add the album this song comes from ?

General:
- Puppet seems a bit difficult actually ... I'm not sure if it suits as the easiest diff

Puppet:
- If you still want to keep Puppet as the easier diff, then most of my suggestion will be to reduce the difficulty
- 00:17:427 (1,2)(3,4) >> Stacks are not easy for new players or novice players so I suggest to unstack
- 00:27:976 (1,2)(3,4) >> ^
- 00:36:987 (2,3,4,1) >> ^ also replace (4) with just a note at 00:37:866
- 00:39:625 (2,3,4) >> Here too, consider unstacking also replace (4) with a note at 00:40:504
- 00:42:482 >> Just put a note here instead of the current slider
- 00:43:141 (4,1) >> Consider unstacking
- 00:44:899 (2,3) >> ^
- 00:45:779 >> Instead of the repeat slider just put a note here
- 00:49:075 (3,4) >> Consider unstacking
- 00:56:987 >> Many hitobjects one after another, it can be a little difficult so consider doing something else
- 01:41:163 >> Replace current slider with just a note here
- 01:42:921 >> Basically the same as 00:42:482
- 01:45:779 >> Replace current hitobject with a note here
- 02:00:284 >> Same as 00:56:987
- 02:47:757 >> New combo
- 02:55:669 >> Many hitobjects in a row, try changing if possible
- 03:06:218 (1,2)(3,4) >> Consider unstacking
- 03:11:493 (1,2)(3,4) >> ^

Marionette:
- 02:42:482 >> Remove whistle ?
- 03:32:372 >> Switch to soft sample set
- Really nice diff

* Good overall
Topic Starter
Tony
Hey. I unstacked most of them. But I still think [Puppet] is good at the current difficulty stage.
Antonia does not have an Album atm D:
thanks for mod ~
updated :D
Kiddo-Kun
Hi.

[General]

• The video lead in you have seems off. I suggest you change it to 4480ms.
• I think you should rearrange the claps. It would sound a lot better at every second white tick.

[Marionette]

• 00:24:460 - Feels a tad empty here. It would match the music and 00:21:163 (5,6) if you added a note here and one on the white tick next to it.
• 01:51:053 (1) - Remove the new combo here and add it on 01:52:592 (6) so you can match the previous kiai start [00:49:075 (1)]
• 01:22:042 (4,5,6) - I think this would play better and flow better if you did this
• 02:08:196 (3,4,5,6) - I think it would be more visually appealing to do this.
Topic Starter
Tony

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Hi.

[General]

• The video lead in you have seems off. I suggest you change it to 4480ms. Fixed! You're right! it does work alot better
• I think you should rearrange the claps. It would sound a lot better at every second white tick.Fixed!

[Marionette]

• 00:24:460 - Feels a tad empty here. It would match the music and 00:21:163 (5,6) if you added a note here and one on the white tick next to it. You're right! fixed :D
• 01:51:053 (1) - Remove the new combo here and add it on 01:52:592 (6) so you can match the previous kiai start [00:49:075 (1)] woops! fixed :3
• 01:22:042 (4,5,6) - I think this would play better and flow better if you did this I dun like it :(
• 02:08:196 (3,4,5,6) - I think it would be more visually appealing to do this.you're right! fix'd :D
thanks a lot! It really improved the mapset :D
Armin
Some ircmod about hitsounds (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/245219 and so oooon) and after another recheck consider this bubbled!

Keep making good maps, Tony!
Topic Starter
Tony
I wannaaa beee your Marionette :D thanks Armin!
Faust
Hi.

BPM: 136.51
Offset: 4,230

BPM: 91.00
Offset: 14,778

The first 3 notes that fall on the vocals are in 1/4, and after that it's 1/3 but you'll notice when you apply what I gave above.
Remember to resnap your notes according to the snapping or it'll go wrong.

Enjoyed the video.
Topic Starter
Tony

Faust wrote:

Hi.

BPM: 136.51
Offset: 4,230

BPM: 91.00
Offset: 14,778

The first 3 notes that fall on the vocals are in 1/4, and after that it's 1/3 but you'll notice when you apply what I gave above.
Remember to resnap your notes according to the snapping or it'll go wrong.

Enjoyed the video.
done! thanks Faust!
Armin
Everything is fine. Thanks to Faust & Gonzvlo, I love you!

Rebubbled.
Gonzvlo
Less than 3!

Ranked.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Dino99
Congratz!!~
bossandy
Tony!!!
Congratz!!~!!!
Armin
Congratulations, Tony :D
Topic Starter
Tony
omg! Thanks!!! I love you all <3
Louis Cyphre
gratz
Reiji-RJ
Gratz, To~ny!! ;3
kikoredog
pretty good map! grats on ranked
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