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Alphabeat - Fascination

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Symbolic
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GladiOol
Ik moet zeggen, dat dat kleine stukje heel erg lekker speelt :D, ga ermee door plz :P
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Symbolic
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Larto
Like I said, this map needs breaks. Imho, breaks should be:

00:34:505 - 00:43:010
01:01:574 - 01:04:512
01:22:289 - 01:33:269

However, you can plan the breaks yourself, too, I just gave my opinion on them, that DOESN'T mean you have to follow them, of course.


I think the timing is almost perfect, I think you should use the Offset "175".

Then, I think you could let this song end better if you make a spinner from 02:55:851 - 02:58:170.
Also, place a timing section on 02:55:851 with the same timing but Normal Sound Sample set if you make that spinner.
This is just a suggestion, if you think, it doesn't work, don't do it!

Everything else works great. <3 I give you a Larto Star (A star that doesn't make your beatmap starred.)
mrtn
fun map. Didn't find much wrong with it, timing seems ok. Although I don't really like the bpm, it sounds ok...


Here's a normal version I made. It's your call whether to use it or make your own ;)

Download: Alphabeat - Fascination (Symbolic) [mrtn's normal].osu
Topic Starter
Symbolic
Larto: Thx for modding :), I didn't follow ur suggestions sorry :P didn't really like them.

mrtn: Thx for modding :), and nice job at the Normal, thanks :D
awp
TIMING: OK

[Hard]
00:33:66 (2,3,4) - Breaks the flow starting on an eighth note imo - move these notes to 33:584 pls

[Normal]
n/a

k that was easy
Echo
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Topic Starter
Symbolic
awp: Didn't follow your comment because it was at the wrong kind of beat. When I put the 2, 3, 4 at 00:33:66. My meaning was to put it on the basses, it still was at the wrong beatgrid so I changed the 2, 3, 4 to 00:33:738. Thanks for modding :)

Echo: Followed your comment, thanks for modding.
mrtn
huh no star in the modding CP even though awp starred it?
Echo
Here's your bubble.
Topic Starter
Symbolic
Thanks Echo :)
Seibei4211
02:45:95 (3) - On Normal AND Hard, move this 1/4 beat to the left.

This map really needs breaks. Seriously. At least one in the middle. Give the player SOMETHING, man.
mrtn
The beat needs to be adjusted indeed, but breaks are not necessary imo.

I had no problem whatsoever playing through the map. There was never a moment I thought: gee i want a break, while usually I'm the first to need breaks.
Topic Starter
Symbolic
Seibei4211: Thanks for modding, fixed ur 1st point, the breaks aren't necessary imo.
CheeseWarlock
Hard:
00:33:73 (2,3,4) - It's odd to have these three faster beats in here; they stand out too much. Remove them or add in at least a few more like them.
02:55:23 (4) - Nazi-ing the end here. It just lacks... pizazz. Turn it into a slider or spinner with a length of 3/4.
James
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Seibei4211
Oh snap, I knew something was fishy about my post. I forgot timing. Yeah, this BPM probably should've been double what it is, but this works, so whatever. Offset 189 I'd say.
mrtn
@Seibei and james:

james claimes the offset is kinda late then seibei gives an offset that's even later than the current meaning James would deem Seibei's even more late... Yet awp deemed the timing OK a couple of posts back.

I don't want to offend anyone but seriously this timing discussion is probably the weirdest one I've ever read on the osu forums.

Just my 2 cents...
foulcoon
Eh, map came out pretty well. ;D

My original timing:

BPM: 97
Offset: 182

Just for reference.
Topic Starter
Symbolic
1: James: If the offset is late, which i dont think because DawnII and awp both said it was solid, tell me how to set it right? You are complaining but not telling me what to change..
Fixed the inherit box, I think it's a public release bug because I never checked the box.

2: Seibei: See mrtn's post.

3: CheeseWarlock: 00:33:73 (2,3,4) - It's the only part in the song where the music flows like that. And I think it's a fun part in the song.

02:55:23 (4) - What do you mean by pizazz? Changed the 4 beats into 2 sliders. Ok now?
Seibei4211
I believe awp said timing was "OK". Ok =/= perfect. James is not complaining, he is pointing out what he noticed. I gave you an offset that I feel is write. I feel the offset is early, not late. Our methods of finding the offset could have been different or we could've judged the offset from different things, but the one thing we seem to agree is that your offset is off. 189 is a bit late now that I look at it, so 186. So either take the offset or let the map rot some more so someone else can look at it.
m980
After a large argument, everyone agreed on 178 offset. 182 offset. 190/192 offset.

Changes that I suggested
The intro. Change the whistles to claps.
01:02:03 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Get rid of the whistles.

And now I feel that it is ready. So

Bubble'd
Topic Starter
Symbolic
Thanks, followed ur comments :)
Seibei4211
Resnap both difficulties. I noticed the first note of each difficulty isn't snapped.
mrtn
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Topic Starter
Symbolic
Resnapped. Weird that the first note didn't resnap while the rest did.
James
"Not yet Snake, its not over yet!" - Liquid @ MGS1

hard:
02:12:87 (2,3) - intentional? i mean theyre not in a straight line
02:15:34 (2) - this one too... just asking. it doesnt need to be changed.
02:30:19 (4) - farther

normal:
00:03:43 (6) - 1 grid lower yeyeyeye im the nazi man
00:38:54 (1) - 1 grid higher
01:28:02 (1) - 1 grid higher yeyeyeyeyeyeye
01:36:22 (5) - move 1 grid to the right
02:03:74 (1) - shorten the slider by 1/4 beat. sounds better

your bg image remind's me of one of jacopop's beatmaps that i played
Topic Starter
Symbolic
hard:
02:12:87 (2,3) - yeah it's intentional
02:15:34 (2) - also intentional
02:30:19 (4) - fixed

normal:
00:03:43 (6) - fixed
00:38:54 (1) - fixed
01:28:02 (1) - fixed
01:36:22 (5) - fixed
02:03:74 (1) - fixed

Thanks for pointing out the spacing issues (with the 1 grids etc). Weird that they occured even though I used distance snap.
James
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