Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue
Please reply this post to tell me where u fixed or not, thanks

General:

1. Fine

Easy:

1. 00:08:676 (1,2,3) - i don't think overlap is necessary in an Easy diff, and the spacing of (2) is inconsistent, try to make it to 1.0x
   and of course, try to avoid overlap because it may confuse new player it is 1,04x with a tiny overlap, I think it is okay
2. 00:31:926 (2,3,4) - change to a reverse slider? nah, the circles make more fun
3. 00:51:801 - 0%volumn is UNRANKABLE, so raise it at least 5%, 10% is recommended. Won't mention it again at other parts (including other diffs) I want silent spinners, so I changed it to 5% now

Normal:

1. 00:10:551 (3,4) - try to make them more smooth? okay
2. 00:24:051 (1,2) - avoid to use this pattern in Normal diff - confusing okay
3. 00:26:113 (4,5) - change to a slider? no
4. 00:58:551 (1,2,3,4) - note a good stack, try to make the away? no
5. 01:01:551 (2,3) - slider tick overlap MAY BE claimed by MATs, but i like thie pattern oh well, the ticks are exactly on the same spot, I hope it is okay
6. 01:05:301 (2,4) - Out of screen ..... answer: only in Edit mode, in Play mode they are in the screen
7. 01:10:551 (1,2) - change them to sliders? (two 1/1 slider) okay
8. 01:24:801 (2,3,4) - reduce spacing or stack no
9. 01:27:051 (1,2,3,4) - unnecessary overlap hm

Hard:

1. 00:19:551 (1,3) - Out not while playing
2. 00:42:051 (1) - i suppose it's better to stack with (7) okay
3. 01:23:301 (2,4) - bad slider overlap, maybe unrankable not really, the slider is seeable
4. Genrally, nice diff

Insane:

1. 00:18:988 (5,6) - i suppose a reverse slider is more suitable okay
2. 00:29:488 (7,8,9) - change to slider? NEVER
3. 01:20:488 (5,6) - move 1 tick late and stack to (7), heard better no

phaZ's Another:

1. 00:08:113 - add a note or reverse here. +1 circle
2. 00:14:301 (1) - spinner is too short and next note is too close to it and far away from centre. Highly recommend to change here. no
3. I think u'd better select a suitable and consistent spacing of streams different stream spacings keep them interesting, 0.8x may be a good idea, and 1.0x is too high. too high? no, too much fun
4. 00:25:926 (1,2,3) - change to a slider no
5. 00:33:801 (3,4) - i think it's better to put a note and then a reverse slider here the would destroy this nice pattern (which is well playable)
6. 00:39:051 (1) - too close to spinner moved the following slider closer to the center
7. 00:41:113 (8) - out not while playing
8. 00:51:801 (1) - same as above no changes here
9. 01:11:676 (5) - out no
10. 01:17:301 (5) - ^ ^
11. 01:18:801 (2) - change to notes this slider keeps it interesting okay

that's all, and i suppose Another still need more work, gl

Darksonic wrote:

Hello~ Request from my queue.

General:

Sections with 0% volume are unrankable, fix that ofc

Easy:

00:22:551 (2): I don't like where this slider ends, maybe try this ? ofc
00:37:926 (4): Remove clap. ok
00:57:051 (1,2): Spacing. fixed
01:03:051 (3): It would be better if you do this slider like the previous one, and then add a note, like this. yes
01:12:051 (4): Add a clap when the slider start. no, sounds not good
01:13:551 (4,1): Spacing. fixed
01:15:051 (1,2): ^ ^
01:33:051 (1): Try soft hitsound for the spinner, and not normal. yes

Normal:

00:18:426 (2): 1 grid up. no
00:36:801 (1,2): Spacing. this is no problem here
00:54:801 (6): Lot of claps, maybe add a whistle here to make it a little different? yes
00:59:676 (4): Whistle? ok
01:07:176 (5): Remove Clap and Add Whistle when slider starts. nah
01:08:301 (1): Slider here instead note would be better. ok
01:09:801 (4): Clap instead Finish? no
01:21:801 (1): Remove Whistle. no
01:22:551 (1): Remove NC. no
01:33:051 (1): Same as Easy, and increase Volume to 5%. ok

Hard:

00:13:551 (1): Remove Finish. yes
00:18:426 (2): Whistle instead Clap? no
00:20:301 (3): Add Whistle? ok
00:34:926 (3,4): Spacing. fixed
00:36:051 (5,1): ^ ^
00:50:676: Increase volume to 5% or 10%. already done because of General
00:55:551 (3): Add a Whistle here. ok
00:56:301 (5): ^ ^
00:58:551 (1,2,3,4): I don't like this pattern, try this ? (1,2,3 are sliders). I don't see the problem >.<
01:07:551 (3): Add Whistle? ok
01:08:301 (5): ^ ^
01:33:051 (1): Same as Normal. yes, yes

Insane:

00:10:363 (6): Add Clap? no
00:11:863 (5): ^ ^
00:13:926 (1): This spinner would be better if it starts at 00:13:738. hm
00:19:832 (2,3,4,5,6): This stream doesn't fit with the song. no problem
00:26:676 (5): NC. ok
00:31:176 (5,6): Spacing. Huh? Where is the problem? All notes have the same spacing here.
00:37:551 (4,5): ^ Eh, what? Jumpy pattern?
00:54:988 (9): 3 grids down. no
01:03:051 (1): Finish this spinner at 01:04:176. no, this would decrease the flow imo
01:04:363: Increase volume. no, I want a (nearly) silent spinner here
01:14:676 (7,8): x:256 y:224 Maybe it's better if you stack this. maybe, but not imo
01:26:113 (4): 3 grids up. no (you really seem to like horicontal patterns, but they are sometimes boring imo)
01:29:488 (2,3,4): You should remove these three notes, this pattern doesn't fit. it is the end of the song/map, so I think it does fit
01:33:051 (1): Same as Normal. yeah

You should add more whistles on this. Well, if you don't have any specific suggestions I won't add them, because I am the hitsound noob.

That's all for me, Good luck~

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Source should be just "Dance Dance Revolution".
Add 2010 to tags; add 2011 if you wish since it wasn't released for XBox until 2011. ok

[Easy]
00:50:301 (1) - Move spinner ahead to white tick it actually is on a white tick

[Normal]
00:30:988 (3) - Remove whistle from kickback no
00:35:488 (5) - Add whistle to head and tail ok
01:24:988 (3) - Remove note ok

[Hard]
00:41:676 (7) - Add clap to head ok
00:42:238 (2) - Add clap to kickback ok
00:43:176 (4) - Add clap to head ok
00:43:926 (6) - ^ ^
00:44:301 (7) - Add clap to tail ok
00:45:051 (1) - Add clap to kickback ok
00:46:176 (3) - Add clap ok
00:46:738 (5) - Add clap to tail ok
00:47:488 (7) - Add clap to kickback ok
00:48:613 (3,4,5) - Try whistle to notes and slider tail ok
01:16:832 (2) - Add clap to tail ok
01:17:676 (5) - Add clap ok
01:18:332 (2) - Add clap to tail ok
01:19:176 (5) - Add clap ok
01:19:926 (2) - Add clap to head and tail ok
01:21:426 (2) - Add clap ok
01:22:176 (4) - Add clap to head ok
01:22:551 (1) - Add clap to tail ok
01:23:676 (3) - Add clap to head ok
01:24:051 (4) - Add clap to tail ok
01:24:988 (6) - Add clap to kickback ok
01:25:926 (2,5) - Add clap ok
01:30:051 (3) - Add finish ok (and volume down)

[phaZ's Another]
Guest, so I'll be brief.
Try AR-1 no, AR 8 sucks in a jump map like this, OD+1 ok
The x2.00 SV change is way too much difference especially if your sv is 2.00 to begin with. Yeah! (phaZ wants to keep them)

[Insane]
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Good luck getting this ranked! :3

Shadoras wrote:

[Easy]
00:23:301 clap jo
00:55:926 kein clap jo
00:56:301 clap jo

[Hard]
00:41:676 Was wolltest du hier mit den whistles? Die Stimme nachpfeifen? Dann muessen die whistles aber auf http://puu.sh/newr jo, die waren wohl irgendwie ziemlich random
00:55:551 Warum hier die whistles? Find ich nur gut wenn sich das irgendwo nochmal wiederholt (z.B. auf den Slidern 01:01:551) du weißt ja, ich bin der Hitsound-Noob
01:07:551 s.o. mit Slidern 01:13:551 ^
01:30:144 Der Spinner ist am Ende bissl zu laut. Wuerde passen wenn er ausfadet (etwa so: http://puu.sh/nezn&#41;. ok Außerdem ist er ne Sechzehntelnote zu frueh. nö, eigentlich ist er sogar 1/16 zu spät, aber da ist ja schon der circle

[Insane]
Hier laesst sich nix finden -_- ist doch schön
Ansonsten nur bei 01:30:238 s.o. jo

[phaZ's Another]
01:12:613 Warum finish? no idea
Kanns nicht weiter beurteilen, dafur musste ich die diff erstmal schaffen ...

Sieht alles in allem ziemlich gut aus.

Crok425 wrote:

Hi, from mod queue.
I gotta say, man; your map alreay looks awesome and I like the song, so you deserve a star. Also, since it looks pretty good, it will be difficult for me to mod, I'll probaly do some hit sound mod the most, so sorry of it isn't appropriate. it's okay since I am not sooo good with hitsounds

[General]
End that Kiai mode in 01:15:051 and start it again at 01:16:551 and finish it in 01:30:051 . That part like kind of stands out more. You are kind of right, but I think this would be just too much kiai time then.

[Easy]
00:18:426 Circle. That part has three notes, it would sound better with the previous notes. I know, some part next in the song also have three notes, but in the part I told you, is kind of very necessary, it won't change the diff stars okay
00:27:051 Finisher at the beginning. okay
00:39:051 ^ okay
00:52:551 ^ okay
01:04:551 Finisher. okay
I couldn't find anything else.

[Normal]
00:52:551 Finisher. okay
00:58:551 ^ okay
01:04:551 Finisher at the beginning. okay
01:10:551 ^ okay
I couldn't find anything else.

[Hard]
00:27:051 Finisher at the beginning. For me, the finishers are one of the most important hit sounds of this game. Besides, with this song, it could go constantly... again, for me at least. okay
00:52:551 ^ okay
00:58:551 Finisher. One more thing, when a note starts like this, in this part, a finisher could go very well. okay
01:16:551 Finisher. okay
Couldn't find anything else.

[phaZ]
01:30:238 Shouldn't that spinner end just like in the other diffs? yes, it should, but phaZ has a mind of his own, sooo...
Too good.

[Insane]
00:27:051 Finisher at the beginning. okay
00:52:551 ^ Instead of clap or with clap. okay
01:04:551 ^ okay
Couldn't... you know the line. haha
___________________________________________

And that's all I can do. Your map is very well done, very difficult for me to mod, so as I said, I mod mostly (only) the hit sounds, I hope it helps you. Good luck getting it ranked. And as I said, STAR!

stickmeister wrote:

General
Combo colors are inconsistent in phaz's Another. Grey is a bad combo color in the first place. For a guest diff itis fine to have different combo colors. Furthermore grey is an interesting combo color and phaZ wants to keep it.

Easy
No problems.

Normal
No problems.

Hard
00:30:051 - Move this note somewhere else? I don't exactly understand why I should do this but well, I moved it.
00:35:488 - Bad spacing. But the pattern is nice :O

Insane
00:50:207 - New combo. No, I don't want to look the stream interrupted. Furthermore it is not neccesary to make this stream easier since it has only 160 bpm.
00:57:801 - New combo. Hm, okay.

phaz's Another
Can't play it, so I have no problems to report.

Sorry I couldn't find much. Star.

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

[*]General

Feel dull if it just have smoke gray and prussian blue colors in phaZ's Another.

And it doesn't keep in harmony to hues.

Grey is not so good. phaZ (and me too) likes this.

[*]Easy

00:12:801 - Sounds a bit strange,it is isolated,so del this clap. yes
00:48:051 - add a NC yes
01:15:051 - add finish at the begining of slider okay
01:33:051 - Raise the volume to 20% or fade away. fade

[*]Normal

00:27:051 - add finish okay
00:31:176 - remove whistle? no
01:15:051 - add finish okay
01:33:051 - It just a bit sudden,i recommend you raise the volume to 20% or fade away. fade

[*]Hard

00:54:238 (2,3,4) - move 1 grid right (lv3) you meant (3,4,5) I guess, don't know why I didn't see this earlier
01:16:176 - raise the volume to 50% like Insane diff? okay

[*]Insane

01:04:363 - raise the volume to 20% okay

[*]phaZ's Another

01:02:863 - add a NC yes

Good luck!

-kevincela- wrote:

Hi~

[General]

1. There are some combo colours unconsistency between your diffs and phaZ's one. AFAIK you could leave the combo colours as it is without any problems,but if you want (or if THE MAPPER wants) you could use your colours in phaZ's diff I already stated this many times, phaZ (and me too) likes them

[Easy]

1. 00:09:801 (1) - New combo? not sure if yes or no, for the moment I say yes
2. 00:27:051 (1) - Curve this down yes
3. 00:49:551 (6) - Remove this note and add a repeat at 00:48:801 (5) - ? yes
4. 00:55:551 (1) - You should rotate this 90° anticlockwise,because some beginners could miss this part because of the slider's position yes
5. 01:12:051 (4) - CTRL+H? not this, but I changed the slider

[Normal]

1. 00:15:801 (1) - Imo this pattern would flow better like this: didn't use your suggestion but changed it
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:25:551 (3) - You could copy paste the slider 2 here and make it rotate 119° clockwise,so it will look and flow better okay
3. 00:43:551 (1) - CTRL+J? yes
4. 00:58:551 (1,2,3,4) - It would be better not to stack these notes,because these overlaps don't look good. Maybe you could do some manua stacking here. To do this,just move the note 2 1 grid up,the note 3 2 grids up,and the slider 4 3 grids up (grid level 4). okay
5. 01:09:051 (2,3,4) - Just like ^ okay
6. 01:27:051 (1,2,3) - Make them slightly curved like in the picture? okay
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:09:051 (2) - New combo? okay
2. 00:27:801 (2,3,4) - First,you sould allign these with the slider 1 by moving this 2 grids up. Second: it would be better if you make the slider 4 just like the slider 1,but using CTRL+J,of course (if you do this,remember to fix the spacing of the following notes!) yes
3. 00:44:301 (7) - Curve this slightly on the down okay
4. 00:54:238 (3,4,5) - Move these 1 grid right to mantain the right spacing between these notes and 00:53:676 (2) - and 00:54:801 (6) - ? yes, don't know why I didn't see this

[Insane]

1. 00:21:426 (2) - Allign this with 00:21:613 (3) - by moving it 2 grids up? okay
2. 00:30:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why don't you make a star formation with these notes? It would look and flow nicer. Here's an example: no no no no no, first of all I don't like stars, second I love it the way it is now, I will never ever change it
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:37:551 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe here you could use a square/diamond formation here. Here's once again an example: yes
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:11:863 (5) - CTRL+R and stack with 01:11:676 (4) - ? no, the flow is better now
5. 01:14:676 (7,8) - Place them where the note 5 currently is? okay

[PhaZ's Another]
phaZ comment on your stack suggestions: "No, nice patterns > stacked hitbursts (or whatever)."

1. 00:11:488 (4) - Put this where the slider 00:10:551 (1) - ends
2. 00:11:676 (5) - 2 grids right -
3. 00:12:051 (1) - 2 grids down and 1 left? -
4. 00:19:926 (4) - 1 grid up -
5. 00:20:113 (5) - It would be better to place this where the note 3 is no, 00:19:926 (4,5,6) is a triangle actually
6. 00:39:988 (4) - 5 grids left and up no, the current pattern is so nice great to play
7. 00:45:613 (2) - 6 grids right and 2 down no, no reason why this should be better (?)
8. 01:01:738 (3) - CTRL+R? no, less flow
9. 01:05:488 (4) - 3 grids left? -
10. 01:05:863 (5) - 3 grids right if you did ^ -
11. 01:16:363 (1) - This note feels totally unnecessary. Delete this? okay
12. 01:29:488 (2) - 2 grids up yes
13. 01:29:676 (3) - ^ yes

bomber34 wrote:

Another I will talk to phaZ tomorrow about this, I hope I don't forget it.

1. 00:13:551 (1,1) - I actually think these are impossible to read cause the tick rate is to low to see a speed change but this is "another" ...
2. 00:20:113 (5) - I think it would be better to stack it under (1) or (3)
3. 00:41:863 (1) - AFAIK these sliders who manipulate the speed aren't allowed anymore
4. 00:43:176 (1) - ^
5. 01:05:863 (5) - looks a tiny bit bad because it overlapps a little with 01:05:113 (3) -
6. 01:14:394 (6) - this overlap looks a bad
7. 01:26:676 (4) - ^
8. 01:29:301 (1) - hard to see
   Edit: okay, phaZ is now done with it, too lazy to write down the changes now

Insane

1. 00:57:051 (1,2) - ugly sliders tiny change, you will probably still complain
2. 01:06:801 (8) - dunno. NC could fit it does not D:
3. 01:29:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - i can't hear any HS which makes this jump unnecessary harder ~ what?

Hard

1. 00:24:051 (1) - ugly slider yeah, I must have been on crack or something
2. 00:57:051 (1,2) - I admit it is a bit nitpicking but 1/2 sliders are rarely nice with slider structures that look nice on 1/1 ~ just my opinion though * no changes
3. 01:05:863 (3,5) - make a better bow please yeah
4. 01:16:832 (2) - like I said at * only this time it is even worse with a 1/4 reworked this part
5. 01:18:332 (2) - ^ ^
6. 01:29:301 (1,2) - better bow pls yes

Normal

1. 00:36:051 (1,2) - slider that overlap themself are ugly if it wouldn't be a Normal I hadn't changed it
2. 01:00:801 (6) - don't know 1/2 HC behind SL don't fit in a Normal diff. imo someone told me to do this T_T, now I remove it again
3. 01:12:801 (4) - ugly SL. SL would have to be longer so the shape would turn out nicely yeah, again I don't know why I did such a crappy slider

Easy

1. 01:00:051 (3,4) - it is a bit nazi but i would prefer that the HC don't overlap even slightly with (1) or (2) it is fine imo

Yeah this mod seems to be abit nazi ~ But I have to say it is a very fine mapset ... well maybe "Another" needs some more tweaks