1. Gu's Easy (1.72 stars, 87 notes)
2. Hard (4.51 stars, 189 notes)
3. tutuhaha's Normal (3.77 stars, 121 notes)

No_Gu wrote:

哦0 0我喜欢这歌。有GD吗现在

tutuhaha wrote:

IRC液！

10:56 <tutuhaha> : 00:06:446 (1) - 这个finish去掉
10:56 <Minos2012> : 好啊 我真愁没人呢
10:56 <tutuhaha> : 00:09:446 (1) - 这个finish也去掉
10:56 <Minos2012> : OK
10:57 <tutuhaha> : 00:14:446 (1) - 这一段
10:58 <tutuhaha> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207691
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 用这个节奏
10:58 <Minos2012> : 我觉得开头4段 前两段用各一个Finish，后两段各两个Finish好一些吗？
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 太吵了
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 用这个节奏的原因一
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 我刚刚打的时候完全就是看不清楚
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 然后你那个slider又放在红线开头
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 基本上是读不出来什么时候点
10:59 <Minos2012> : 嘛。。我分了3种颜色嘛。。
10:59 <Minos2012> : 可能颜色太接近了
10:59 <tutuhaha> : 前面有个spinner，转完了后一般不会消失
10:59 <tutuhaha> : 所以看不清啊亲
10:59 <tutuhaha> : 00:15:446 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一段你可以稍微拉大点距离
10:59 <tutuhaha> : 和前面
11:00 <Minos2012> : 不会 = =
11:00 <tutuhaha> : 唔1.3的DS不错
11:00 <Minos2012> : 是哪里拉大呢
11:01 <tutuhaha> : 唔你按照我给你的节奏排好了么？
11:01 <Minos2012> : 在摆
11:01 <tutuhaha> : 你先排，我好复制黏贴............
11:02 <Minos2012> : 感觉节奏不是很合呀
11:02 <tutuhaha> : 00:16:071 (X) - 把这个circle去掉
11:03 <tutuhaha> : 就合了-A-
11:03 <Minos2012> : 我试试
11:04 <Minos2012> : 主要是这个不合
11:04 <Minos2012> : 00:14:821 (4,1) -
11:04 <tutuhaha> : 这个先放一下
11:04 <tutuhaha> : 等会我给你贴代码上去
11:04 <Minos2012> : 嗯好吧
11:04 <Minos2012> : 那个Slider是故意放在那的 感觉舒服一些
11:05 <tutuhaha> : 看不见啊
11:05 <Minos2012> : 被转盘遮住了么？
11:05 <tutuhaha> : 恩
11:05 <Minos2012> : 那我换种摆法？
11:05 <tutuhaha> : 我打的时候完全看不见
11:06 <Minos2012> : 恩 知道了，之后换个位置放
11:07 <tutuhaha> : 00:56:321 (X) - 这边加个circle
11:07 <tutuhaha> : 原来你的1和2距离太近了
11:07 <tutuhaha> : 而你前面放的又那么大
11:08 <tutuhaha> : 让人有种后面的是1/4节奏的感觉
11:08 <tutuhaha> : 可惜...是1/2....
11:08 <Minos2012> : 前面是跳
11:08 <Minos2012> : 后面不知道怎么过渡
11:08 <tutuhaha> : 恩没让你改跳
11:08 <tutuhaha> : 在这里加个circle就全部解决
11:09 <Minos2012> : 那后面的排版要改了= =
11:09 <tutuhaha> : 不会吧
11:09 <tutuhaha> : 教你个投机的方法
11:09 <Minos2012> : 差不多 看起来还行
11:09 <tutuhaha> : 吧ds关了
11:09 <tutuhaha> : 然后手动
11:10 <Minos2012> : 。。。
11:10 <tutuhaha> : 00:56:321 (X) - x88 y252
11:10 <tutuhaha> : 这个距离就差不多
11:10 <Minos2012> : 那会被人喷00:56:321 (2) -
11:10 <Minos2012> : 恩
11:10 <Minos2012> : 我放好了
11:10 <Minos2012> : 节奏也不错
11:11 <tutuhaha> : 01:08:446 (1) - 把你放在这个slider上的音轨给我去掉
11:11 <tutuhaha> : 太刺耳了
11:11 <tutuhaha> : 01:09:196 (2) - 这个也一样
11:11 <Minos2012> : 音轨？
11:11 <Minos2012> : tick?
11:12 <tutuhaha> : 唔怎么说
11:12 <tutuhaha> : 当你要在slider的前头或尾巴上面加音效的时候
11:12 <Minos2012> : 嗯
11:12 <tutuhaha> : 都是双击两下然后它的前头或者后头的note会显示为黑色的
11:13 <tutuhaha> : 但是嘞
11:13 <tutuhaha> : 有时候有的人一手抖
11:13 <Minos2012> : 理解了
11:13 <Minos2012> : 全选了
11:13 <tutuhaha> : - -b聪明
11:13 <Minos2012> : = =
11:14 <tutuhaha> : 01:17:821 (X) - 这里加个circle
11:14 <tutuhaha> : 前面的节奏都很紧到这里变松了感觉怪怪的
11:15 <Minos2012> : 还是不加了 加了后面还得加的
11:15 <tutuhaha> : 01:30:196 (8) - 要不要考虑放到X436 y136
11:15 <tutuhaha> : 和前面的5重合
11:15 <Minos2012> : 其实 我是所有的都摆完以后才加的连打
11:15 <tutuhaha> : 然后slider1还在7和8的中间
11:16 <tutuhaha> : 你现在这个距离太坑了一不小心就看成1/4
11:16 <tutuhaha> : 嘛随便啦~~~
11:16 <Minos2012> : 嘛。。确实有点坑
11:17 <tutuhaha> : 01:32:446 (1,2,3,4) - 这个我告诉你个另外的摆法吧吧
11:17 <Minos2012> : 坐等你喷最后的跳。。。
11:17 <Minos2012> : 恩
11:17 <tutuhaha> : 纯粹私心因为我打的时候这个距离实在跳不过去Orz
11:17 <Minos2012> : 我是之前看到一个图也是这么摆的
11:17 <tutuhaha> : 你把2和4换个位置
11:17 <tutuhaha> : 这样的摆发反正我不怎么喜欢
11:17 <tutuhaha> : 噗打错
11:18 <tutuhaha> : 吧2和3换个位置
11:18 <Minos2012> : 2和4换？
11:18 <Minos2012> : = =
11:18 <tutuhaha> : 停
11:18 <tutuhaha> : 恩我没打错
11:18 <tutuhaha> : 是2和4换
11:18 <tutuhaha> : 2和4换个位置就好了
11:19 <tutuhaha> : 直接拖上面的note
11:19 <tutuhaha> : 这样摆比你现在的要有创意而且又好打╮(￣▽￣")╭
11:19 <Minos2012> : 那这个怎么办。。
11:19 <Minos2012> : 01:34:446 (1) -
11:19 <tutuhaha> : 这个放那里别管
11:19 <Minos2012> : 嘛 其实跳的距离都差不多
11:19 <tutuhaha> : 别动它
11:20 <tutuhaha> : 看起来差不多
11:20 <tutuhaha> : 可是我打起来的时候觉得舒服多了-A-...
11:20 <Minos2012> : 恩 我还是改一下吧
11:20 <tutuhaha> : 01:34:446 (1,2) - 这俩间距改一下
11:20 <tutuhaha> : 太坑了我还以为中间你空了一拍
11:22 <Minos2012> : = =

好！去搞GD

tutuhaha wrote:

IRC液！

10:56 <tutuhaha> : 00:06:446 (1) - 这个finish去掉
10:56 <Minos2012> : 好啊 我真愁没人呢
10:56 <tutuhaha> : 00:09:446 (1) - 这个finish也去掉
10:56 <Minos2012> : OK
10:57 <tutuhaha> : 00:14:446 (1) - 这一段
10:58 <tutuhaha> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207691
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 用这个节奏
10:58 <Minos2012> : 我觉得开头4段 前两段用各一个Finish，后两段各两个Finish好一些吗？
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 太吵了
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 用这个节奏的原因一
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 我刚刚打的时候完全就是看不清楚
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 然后你那个slider又放在红线开头
10:58 <tutuhaha> : 基本上是读不出来什么时候点
10:59 <Minos2012> : 嘛。。我分了3种颜色嘛。。
10:59 <Minos2012> : 可能颜色太接近了
10:59 <tutuhaha> : 前面有个spinner，转完了后一般不会消失
10:59 <tutuhaha> : 所以看不清啊亲
10:59 <tutuhaha> : 00:15:446 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一段你可以稍微拉大点距离
10:59 <tutuhaha> : 和前面
11:00 <Minos2012> : 不会 = =
11:00 <tutuhaha> : 唔1.3的DS不错
11:00 <Minos2012> : 是哪里拉大呢
11:01 <tutuhaha> : 唔你按照我给你的节奏排好了么？
11:01 <Minos2012> : 在摆
11:01 <tutuhaha> : 你先排，我好复制黏贴............
11:02 <Minos2012> : 感觉节奏不是很合呀
11:02 <tutuhaha> : 00:16:071 (X) - 把这个circle去掉
11:03 <tutuhaha> : 就合了-A-
11:03 <Minos2012> : 我试试
11:04 <Minos2012> : 主要是这个不合
11:04 <Minos2012> : 00:14:821 (4,1) -
11:04 <tutuhaha> : 这个先放一下
11:04 <tutuhaha> : 等会我给你贴代码上去
11:04 <Minos2012> : 嗯好吧
11:04 <Minos2012> : 那个Slider是故意放在那的 感觉舒服一些
11:05 <tutuhaha> : 看不见啊
11:05 <Minos2012> : 被转盘遮住了么？
11:05 <tutuhaha> : 恩
11:05 <Minos2012> : 那我换种摆法？
11:05 <tutuhaha> : 我打的时候完全看不见
11:06 <Minos2012> : 恩 知道了，之后换个位置放
11:07 <tutuhaha> : 00:56:321 (X) - 这边加个circle
11:07 <tutuhaha> : 原来你的1和2距离太近了
11:07 <tutuhaha> : 而你前面放的又那么大
11:08 <tutuhaha> : 让人有种后面的是1/4节奏的感觉
11:08 <tutuhaha> : 可惜...是1/2....
11:08 <Minos2012> : 前面是跳
11:08 <Minos2012> : 后面不知道怎么过渡
11:08 <tutuhaha> : 恩没让你改跳
11:08 <tutuhaha> : 在这里加个circle就全部解决
11:09 <Minos2012> : 那后面的排版要改了= =
11:09 <tutuhaha> : 不会吧
11:09 <tutuhaha> : 教你个投机的方法
11:09 <Minos2012> : 差不多 看起来还行
11:09 <tutuhaha> : 吧ds关了
11:09 <tutuhaha> : 然后手动
11:10 <Minos2012> : 。。。
11:10 <tutuhaha> : 00:56:321 (X) - x88 y252
11:10 <tutuhaha> : 这个距离就差不多
11:10 <Minos2012> : 那会被人喷00:56:321 (2) -
11:10 <Minos2012> : 恩
11:10 <Minos2012> : 我放好了
11:10 <Minos2012> : 节奏也不错
11:11 <tutuhaha> : 01:08:446 (1) - 把你放在这个slider上的音轨给我去掉
11:11 <tutuhaha> : 太刺耳了
11:11 <tutuhaha> : 01:09:196 (2) - 这个也一样
11:11 <Minos2012> : 音轨？
11:11 <Minos2012> : tick?
11:12 <tutuhaha> : 唔怎么说
11:12 <tutuhaha> : 当你要在slider的前头或尾巴上面加音效的时候
11:12 <Minos2012> : 嗯
11:12 <tutuhaha> : 都是双击两下然后它的前头或者后头的note会显示为黑色的
11:13 <tutuhaha> : 但是嘞
11:13 <tutuhaha> : 有时候有的人一手抖
11:13 <Minos2012> : 理解了
11:13 <Minos2012> : 全选了
11:13 <tutuhaha> : - -b聪明
11:13 <Minos2012> : = =
11:14 <tutuhaha> : 01:17:821 (X) - 这里加个circle
11:14 <tutuhaha> : 前面的节奏都很紧到这里变松了感觉怪怪的
11:15 <Minos2012> : 还是不加了 加了后面还得加的
11:15 <tutuhaha> : 01:30:196 (8) - 要不要考虑放到X436 y136
11:15 <tutuhaha> : 和前面的5重合
11:15 <Minos2012> : 其实 我是所有的都摆完以后才加的连打
11:15 <tutuhaha> : 然后slider1还在7和8的中间
11:16 <tutuhaha> : 你现在这个距离太坑了一不小心就看成1/4
11:16 <tutuhaha> : 嘛随便啦~~~
11:16 <Minos2012> : 嘛。。确实有点坑
11:17 <tutuhaha> : 01:32:446 (1,2,3,4) - 这个我告诉你个另外的摆法吧吧
11:17 <Minos2012> : 坐等你喷最后的跳。。。
11:17 <Minos2012> : 恩
11:17 <tutuhaha> : 纯粹私心因为我打的时候这个距离实在跳不过去Orz
11:17 <Minos2012> : 我是之前看到一个图也是这么摆的
11:17 <tutuhaha> : 你把2和4换个位置
11:17 <tutuhaha> : 这样的摆发反正我不怎么喜欢
11:17 <tutuhaha> : 噗打错
11:18 <tutuhaha> : 吧2和3换个位置
11:18 <Minos2012> : 2和4换？
11:18 <Minos2012> : = =
11:18 <tutuhaha> : 停
11:18 <tutuhaha> : 恩我没打错
11:18 <tutuhaha> : 是2和4换
11:18 <tutuhaha> : 2和4换个位置就好了
11:19 <tutuhaha> : 直接拖上面的note
11:19 <tutuhaha> : 这样摆比你现在的要有创意而且又好打╮(￣▽￣")╭
11:19 <Minos2012> : 那这个怎么办。。
11:19 <Minos2012> : 01:34:446 (1) -
11:19 <tutuhaha> : 这个放那里别管
11:19 <Minos2012> : 嘛 其实跳的距离都差不多
11:19 <tutuhaha> : 别动它
11:20 <tutuhaha> : 看起来差不多
11:20 <tutuhaha> : 可是我打起来的时候觉得舒服多了-A-...
11:20 <Minos2012> : 恩 我还是改一下吧
11:20 <tutuhaha> : 01:34:446 (1,2) - 这俩间距改一下
11:20 <tutuhaha> : 太坑了我还以为中间你空了一拍
11:22 <Minos2012> : = =

好！去搞GD
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搞完了

ikari_kyon wrote:

can't read if someone has gave you the timing yet, anyway

[D]avideTheBest[ITA] wrote:

[Normal]

01:18:571 (1) - make like this http://puu.sh/bLNG
01:17:946 (4) - make like this http://puu.sh/bLOZ

[Hard]

01:24:446 (1,2,3,4) - Make like this pls! http://puu.sh/bLRe it's graphically better
01:26:446 (1) - remove NC
01:27:446 (3) - NC
01:30:196 (8) - NC
01:30:446 (1) - remove NC

I hope i helped you.

ikari_kyon wrote:

can't read if someone has gave you the timing yet, anyway

BPM: 120,000
Offset: 435 (-11 on current)

the other 2 timelines are not needed

Kei wrote:

Hi. Here's my mod, as you requested.


[tutuhaha’s Normal]

00:02:446 (3) – NC.
00:06:446 (4) – NC.
00:10:446 (3) – NC.
00:11:946 (4) – NC.
00:12:946 (1) – Remove NC.
00:14:446 (4) – NC.
00:53:946 (x) – Add a note.
00:56:196 (7) – NC here and remove NC of the next slider.


[Hard]

00:00:446 (1,1,1,1) – Unnecesary New Combos. Remove NC of 00:01:446 (1), 00:02:446 (1), 00:03:446 (1).
00:05:446 (1) – Remove NC.
00:07:446 (1) – Remove NC.
00:14:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) – This notes placement doesn’t look good in my opinion. It’s a bit hard to read because the notes are being overlapped by themselves and placed very close each other .
00:15:571 (2) – Remove NC.
00:36:071 (2) – This is a really stupid suggestion but I’ll write it anyway. Move this note a bit up to make the combo look more like this: http://puu.sh/bN2C.
00:49:946 (5) – Here should be a slider instead of a circle. Try this: http://puu.sh/bN3g. it fits more to the vocals in my opinion.
00:59:946 (1) – This spinner doesn’t sound good here. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/bN40.
01:09:946 (3) – Here should be a slider instead of a circle. Try this: http://puu.sh/bN4k.
01:22:696 (5) – NC here and remove NC of 01:22:946 (1).
01:25:446 (3) – Replace this slider with a copy of the previous slider 01:24:446 (1) flipped horizontally and reversed. It would look like this: http://puu.sh/bN6G.
01:35:446 (1) – I’m not sure if this NC is necessary.

__________________

That's all.
Good luck!

ikari_kyon wrote:

can't read if someone has gave you the timing yet, anyway

Yeah.. that's why I hate when people mod in other languages. If you don't know how to speak that language (chinese in this case) you can't know what's going on with the beatmap.

No_Gu wrote:

EDIT：easy done
有时间新开一楼给你mod.先这样。射颗星

Armin wrote:

[Gu's Easy]

00:43:435 (4) - Little spacing issue. What if you fix it by using the distance snap?
01:15:435 (3) - What does follow the repeat of this slider? If I were you I'd make it 1/4 shorter (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/208456), in order to make easier the pattern too (you can stack the next (1) blue on it)
01:32:435 (1) - Please use a soft section at the end of the spinner and not a normal one

[tutuhaha's Normal]

01:18:560 (1,1) - Ouch, one of the hardest part of the map. The recovery time it's just short, considering that this is a normal (and that previously there is a slider distant only 1/4 bpm from the spinner). Please consider to remove (1) and to make something like this: http://puu.sh/bQci
01:32:435 (1) - please silence this spinner, like in the previous difficulty

[Hard]

00:05:435 (1,1) - Stack these better, please
01:16:435 (1) - Unexpected slider's shape, really xD

Armin wrote:

[Gu's Easy]

00:43:435 (4) - Little spacing issue. What if you fix it by using the distance snap? I think only use 0.5 between 1/2 notes doesn't matter
01:15:435 (3) - What does follow the repeat of this slider? If I were you I'd make it 1/4 shorter (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/208456), in order to make easier the pattern too (you can stack the next (1) blue on it) just for pattern

01:32:435 (1) - Please use a soft section at the end of the spinner and not a normal one K

No_Gu wrote:

Armin wrote:

[Gu's Easy]

00:43:435 (4) - Little spacing issue. What if you fix it by using the distance snap? I think only use 0.5 between 1/2 notes doesn't matter
01:15:435 (3) - What does follow the repeat of this slider? If I were you I'd make it 1/4 shorter (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/208456), in order to make easier the pattern too (you can stack the next (1) blue on it) just for pattern

01:32:435 (1) - Please use a soft section at the end of the spinner and not a normal one K

fix some inheriting timing sections.Upload

To Minos2012:1个难度估计mod的东西不会太多0 0，总传的话这贴会页很多，往后等多一些我再来改。

Banana wrote:

在#modreq看见的


Gu‘s
00:36:435 (1) - 开头可以调整一下和前一个combo的(2)重合
01:16:435 (1) - 弧度小一点，现在和马上出来的(3)靠很近
01:32:685 (1) - 如果推迟半拍开始转盘就可以让转的时候是一个音色了

tutuhaha’s
00:46:435 (3) - 个人感觉不要重复，加个半拍滑条
01:04:935 (2) - 半拍滑条？后半拍的地方是有个音的
01:07:185 (6),01:09:185 (2) - 开头去掉whistle
01:32:685 (1) - 如果推迟半拍开始转盘就可以让转的时候是一个音色了

your
00:00:435 (1,1,1,1) - 这个谱子总共才不到两分钟，不需要这样省note，之后的四分拍串又有overmap的嫌疑0 0，开头的finish去掉
00:12:435 (1) - 推迟半拍结束
00:21:685 - 这种空用圈填上打起来爽还送分0 0
00:23:185,00:23:685 - 同上，比加四分拍要好，后面不说了..
00:28:935 (4) - whistle放结尾
00:32:435 - 加note
00:46:685 (1) - 转盘在结尾的地方（00:47:435）开始正好跟着音乐
00:54:935 (2) - 两倍跳太多了太狠了- -三个跳一下意思一下就可以了嘛
00:56:435 (2) - 去掉clap 00:58:435的也是，clap用来确定节奏，一小节一个就可以了，一般在三白线*（就是这一小节留下clap的那个地方）下，我的泡就是clap太多被戳了现在还没补上- - 后面的clap看见不对的要自重
01:15:185 (2) - 这个先不要跳
01:16:435 (1) - 间距和半拍的一样- -最好弄个1.3*

完毕，中文歌祝好运

-Bakari- wrote:

Hard
00:00:435 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - so many new combo circles ><
00:51:685 (3) - i think it should be longer

Nice song <3
Good Luck

nold_1702 wrote:

Hello!

[Hard]
CZ+1
Um... I just want to keep the large size in order to reduce the difficulies

00:05:435 (1) - Stack it probably.(Close the gird snapping and then use distance snapping 0.0x)
00:06:435 (1) - ^
00:07:435 (1) - ^
01:13:185 (4) - Stack it probably.(Close the gird snapping and then use distance snapping 0.0x)
Yeah,thanks

00:38:935 (2) - Add clap at the end.
I want to keep there no clap for the song = =

00:46:685 (1) - It's not fit to put a spinner here.Try to map this part?[Suggestion]
01:16:435 (1) - This slider 's shape is weird.There's no reason to let players to hold that hold part.[Suggestion]
Um...I will consider doing that

01:35:435 (1) - Del NC
I just want to make the slider easy to read, if it not neccsarry I will remove it.

That's all.I will shoot a star to this map if I hv enough kd.
Go!

Thanks for your mod and star

Dark_Ai wrote:

hey~

[Hard]
00:00:685 (-) - I think it better if you add two notes here. like http://puu.sh/bWJN
00:01:685 (-) - ^
00:02:685 (-) - ^
00:03:685 (-) - ^
Yeah, I used to have note here. But I delete them for having no good pattern for them
So I will keep the single note until I find a nice pattern to add these notes.If you have some advice about the pattern, please tell me about that, thx.


00:32:435 (-) - add a note (?)
00:40:435 (-) - ^
Um...It's quite hard to find a way to add a note here. Because I want to make the map read easily.

a pretty short mod =) but the map looks really nice ;D
Thank you

Good luck~ ♥

Thank you for your mod

1. Timing: The timing seems off, The beat doesn't fit the drum sound exactly. I would prefer this offset : 456 instead of yours one. Please check my mod before you check the timing.
2. Kiai: Would you consistent the kiai timing in every difficulty? I know two diff of this mapset are guest difficulty, but it would be better if you do that, so let you decide it.
3. Other stuff are fine.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. In my opinion, AR 4 is too much for a easy diff, I would prefer AR-1 /AR-2.
2. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 00:42:435 (3,4) - (Bad gameplay) 1/2 click in easy diff is really awkward and confused for newbie, in usual,they can't follow the beat very well and you put most of the 1/1 rhythm in this diff, so they don't have enough time to adapt the rhythm so it will make them confuse.Just avoid this if possible.
   2. 01:15:435 (3,1) - ^Same.
3. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:24:935 (3) - I would suggest to add a new combo here because the lyric is starting here again, so just add a new combo here to fit the music.
   2. 00:31:435 (1,1) - Why spamming new combo here? It really unnecessary. If I were you, I would remove a new combo at 00:31:435 (1) - and add a new combo on 00:32:435 (1) - .Then it looks better.
   3. 00:36:435 (1,2) - Sorry but I can't understand why you want to put the rhythm like this.It really stands out for me because the reverse arrow of the slider doesn't fit the music that much especially the reverse of (2)-, it sounds a little bit awkward. I think some simple 1/1 or 2/1 is good enough here.
   4. 01:15:435 (3) - The 3/4 sounds D: to me, the main reason is nothing support the 3/4 rhythm(no drum sound, no vocal ), so I would suggest to remove this 3/4 and the 3/4 is replaced by 1/1.
4. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:07:435 (5) - The normal hitsound on this is still too "hard", It doesn't mean it sounds bad, just adjust the volume to 10~15 %, then you can hear it much better!
   2. 00:44:435 (1) - I would use a whistle instead of finish at the beginning of the slider because you don't add any finish in this part, so I just feel weird here.
   3. 00:47:435 (2) - Change the volume to 40% at the end of the slider? It fits pretty good with music.
   4. 01:28:435 (3) - ^ Same, but this time you can either add a whistle instead or just remove the finish,both are okay.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. OD +1 to consistent the overall difficulty setting?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:40:435 (1) - I heard some weird stuff here :<. If you listen careful to the music, you can heard the most strongest point of this part is 00:40:935 - ,so I can't found any reason that you want to miss this part. Probably just shorten the slider to 00:40:935 - and then add a note at 00:41:185 - .
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:00:435 ~ 00:07:435 (x) - I would remove the finish in this range because this is a calm part because this part is really calm, soft finish is too loud of this part. Remove them and replaced by whistle is the best way.
   2. 00:15:435 (4) - Use a normal hitosund instead of whistle to fit the music.
   3. 00:46:435 (3) - ^ at the end of the slider.
   4. 01:01:435 (3) - Hey, I guess you forgot to add a clap here, just add on it to consistent you hitclap pattern.
   Overall looks pretty good~

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 00:10:435 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - (issue) I feel kinda overmap here, I don't know why you chose the 5-plet here, it sounds bad here.So please double check here.
   2. 00:14:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^Same.
   3. 00:46:685 (1) - (Bad gameplay) I would say this spinner will cause a bad gameplay, because here shouldn't be a spinner, you can't hear any extend(vocal) here and the spinner is too short,althoiugh that's rankable,but it is weird for a low BPM song.
   4. 01:34:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - (issue) I feel kinda overmap here, I don't know why you want to cram a stream, it sounds bad here.So please double check here.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:00:435 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...Why you want to spam a lot of new combo here? It's unnecessary for sure. Please remove them and just add some new combo in suitable place.
   2. 00:24:435 (x) - Add a note here? It is really empty if you compare to overall, also add a note here isn't a bad choice, if you want to add it, I would suggest to add it on the (1)-
   3. 00:29:935 (1) - (Design)Would you make this slider more beautiful? It was a little bit odd as now, so how about this:
      
      example

      
      Since this slider is easy to make so I won't provide a code for you xD
   4. 00:35:935 (1,2,3,4,5) - (design)The stream doesn't in smooth curve, would you make it much better? or even make them to a straight line?
   5. 00:40:435 (x) - Same as previous ,add a note here, also you don't need to follow the vocal everywhere.Adding some notes on drum sound is also a good choice.
   6. 00:53:685 (3) - (design)I think you can make this slider much better, sth like this.Let you decide to use or not ._<
      
      example

      

      284,312,53685,2,0,B|351:330|414:273|400:200,1,170,0|0

   7. 00:59:435 (3,4,5,6) - ....4-plet..Just want to say, it is really strange. It doesn't fit the music unless you add a note at 00:59:935 - and move the spinner to 01:00:060 - and stop stop that at 01:00:935 - .
   8. 01:16:435 (1) - I guess it mostly rankable so I just so some nazi here / would you rise 1 grid of the second red dot? To make symmetry to the triangle of the red dot
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:47:435 (1) - Would you change to normal hitsound at the end of the slider? Don't forget to remove the finish :>
   2. 00:55:935 (6,1) - Add a whisle on (6)- and then remove that on (1)-?It may sounds better.

LKs wrote:

tutuhaha's Normal
不改名成22haha's吗 这个diff名不短 (扯LKS大哥你干啥不直接说改成2ha's normal呢T_,T.......【摔】

LKs wrote:

tutuhaha's Normal
不改名成22haha's吗 这个diff名不短 (扯

Minos2012 wrote:

I will fix them later. Just have some exams these days
BTW，笨笨haha,您又传错文件了呀 = =