00:48 K a b i -: hey ryan, can i ask you to test my map? it's been modded quite a bit :x
00:48 Cryolien: which one? 
00:48 Cryolien: yell?
00:48 K a b i -: sunshine
00:49 *K a b i - is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1509005 DJ Genki vs. Camellia feat. moimoi - Sunshine]
00:49 Cryolien: ok
00:49 Cryolien: dl first haha
00:50 K a b i -: thx :3
00:57 K a b i -: o-o
00:57 K a b i -: i saw a part whr i forgot to remove a certain LN
00:57 K a b i -: my bad
00:58 Cryolien: i cannot hit sv properly with hidden lol
00:58 Cryolien: but first impression is not bad, i like
00:58 K a b i -: oh the lane cover xd
00:58 K a b i -: just need some memorising then can liao
00:58 K a b i -: xD
00:59 Cryolien: hit and release LN with SV is hard af
00:59 K a b i -: can one la, not very hard de haha
00:59 K a b i -: memorise a bit then can full acc there
01:00 Cryolien: ya with memorization then can
01:00 Cryolien: now is first time hear the song also lol
01:00 K a b i -: wa not bad liao lo
01:00 K a b i -: can hit those SVs + 1st time
01:00 Cryolien: now i try no hidden
01:01 K a b i -: okayy
01:06 K a b i -: nice score owo)b
01:06 Cryolien: thank
01:06 Cryolien: nice map
01:06 K a b i -: love ur accuracy
01:07 Cryolien: i just have 2 small suggestion
01:08 K a b i -: yea go ahead
01:11 Cryolien: 00:14:096 (14096|0) - this LN higher pitch than 00:14:449 (14449|1) -
01:12 Cryolien: so maybe 00:14:096 (14096|0) - should be LN at 3 instead of 1
01:12 Cryolien: unless it's following something else, but anyway that's suggestion no.1
01:13 K a b i -: oh yea it's true, pitch higher
01:13 K a b i -: i'll change the position
01:15 Cryolien: ok now no.2
01:17 Cryolien: imo, 03:19:390 -  the SV value is quite high, hard for ppl playing for the first time to catch this LN 03:20:096 (200096|2) - 
01:17 K a b i -: that's the part i was talking about
01:17 Cryolien: oh
01:17 Cryolien: lol
01:17 K a b i -: i forgot to remove that LN
01:17 K a b i -: not intended
01:17 K a b i -: haha
01:18 Cryolien: ok now no.3 which i just found also 
01:19 K a b i -: okay
01:19 Cryolien: 03:21:508 (201508|1,201508|3,202037|2,202037|0) -  what sound do these notes represent?
01:20 K a b i -: it's the same with the one at 01:03:155 (63155|1,63684|2,201508|1,201508|3,202037|0,202037|2) -
01:20 K a b i -: but true, i just added it on a whim, because i think it feels kinda nice(?)
01:20 K a b i -: it doesn't represent any sound
01:21 Cryolien: so like grace notes la
01:21 Cryolien: ok another suggestion which i just found hahaha
01:22 K a b i -: not sure if it's right to call it grace note LOL
01:22 K a b i -: because i think grace notes are these
01:22 K a b i -: 00:24:331 (24331|2,24375|3) -
01:22 K a b i -: the same thing in piano
01:23 K a b i -: lai lai if can fix more even better xd
01:23 Cryolien: kk
01:23 Cryolien: 03:26:361 (206361|1) - make this into LN?
01:24 Cryolien: play at 25% speed can hear it's long enough
01:24 K a b i -: eh wtf i didn't even notice the note there like that
01:24 K a b i -: wa thanks ya xd
01:25 Cryolien: ok i'm finding more as i go along
01:25 K a b i -: gg
01:25 Cryolien: like at 03:28:037 - i'm sure you can fit in 1 note here
01:26 K a b i -: oh yea
01:26 K a b i -: added
01:26 Cryolien: 03:30:861 -  same here
01:27 Cryolien: and here 03:32:978 - 
01:27 K a b i -: ok add jor
01:28 Cryolien: 03:45:331 - do you want to follow piano here or ignore? this 1 i think up to you
01:28 K a b i -: some ppl say after this part de SV quite fun haha
01:28 K a b i -: that one ah, i think cant add, the Sv there quite fast
01:29 Cryolien: oh i didn't see green line there lol ok
01:29 Cryolien: yea ignore that 1
01:29 K a b i -: owo)b
01:30 K a b i -: oh i found a missing note at 04:07:302 ..
01:31 K a b i -: * 04:07:302
01:31 Cryolien: that was my next one haha
01:31 K a b i -: dunno why sometimes here and there missing some notes one X_X
01:32 Cryolien: 04:13:655 (253655|2,253655|0,253655|1) - wah here 3 notes? y so many
01:34 K a b i -: was planning to put 3 notes like this de 04:10:920 (250920|3,250920|1,250920|2,251625|0,251625|1,252331|3,252331|0,252331|1,253037|0,253037|3,253037|1,253655|1,253655|2,253655|0) -
01:35 K a b i -: if you think it's not okay at 04:13:655 (253655|1,253655|2,253655|0) -  i'll remove 1 note from there
01:36 K a b i -: oh wait i think i stated it wrongly
01:36 K a b i -: and yea the 3 notes there is a mistake
01:36 K a b i -: removed one :x
01:37 Cryolien: if you wanted the 3 notes, it should have been at 04:13:390 - 
01:38 K a b i -: will it be too hard if i start putting 3 notes on every 1/1 there
01:41 Cryolien: now that i think about it
01:41 Cryolien: 04:13:655 - this one should only have 1 note
01:41 Cryolien: sound not strong enough to even have 2, considering there's no kick also, just synth
01:42 K a b i -: 04:13:567 (253567|3,253567|2,253655|1,253655|2) - i can hear a quick succession of 2 synths here
01:42 K a b i -: thats why i put a small jackhammer there
01:42 K a b i -: o.o
01:42 Cryolien: i see
01:43 Cryolien: now it's 2 notes only there right?
01:43 K a b i -: ya
01:43 Cryolien: should be ok
01:43 K a b i -: but i'm thinking of changing it to LNs smhg
01:43 K a b i -: smh
01:43 K a b i -: like this
01:43 K a b i -: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9998957
01:45 Cryolien: go ahead
01:45 K a b i -: oh okay
01:47 Cryolien: ok last
01:47 K a b i -: okayy
01:48 Cryolien: last 2*
01:48 Cryolien: 04:45:155 (285155|0,285508|1) - pitch again
01:48 K a b i -: xD
01:48 Cryolien: 04:46:567 (286567|1,286920|0) - pitch again
01:50 K a b i -: okay le
01:50 K a b i -: was that all?
01:51 Cryolien: i reun through 1 last time
01:52 Cryolien: ok last 1 confirm
01:52 K a b i -: okay
01:52 Cryolien: but it's not that noticeable
01:53 Cryolien: 01:25:787 (85787|1) - this one actually has no sound
01:53 Cryolien: oh no wait
01:53 Cryolien: not that one, it's this one 01:26:140 (86140|1) - 
01:54 K a b i -: aiya i think it's negligible one la
01:55 K a b i -: if suddenly remove 1 note i think it feels weird
01:55 K a b i -: haha
01:56 Cryolien: actually seems like there's more of it, but ok, can ignore
01:58 Cryolien: but idk, i see and hear from 01:26:140 (86140|1) - until 01:27:772 - it sounds more like 1/4 instead of 1/8
01:59 Cryolien: eh wtf copy wrong
01:59 K a b i -: haha
02:00 Cryolien: from 01:27:155 -  to 01:27:772 - 
02:00 Cryolien: that 1 sounds more like 1/4
02:06 K a b i -: i still prefer to put it that way
02:06 K a b i -: for me it still has the 1/8 sound
02:06 K a b i -: my headphone damn loud one so i probably can hear a lot more clearer xd
02:07 Cryolien: alright then that was difficult for me to confirm
02:07 Cryolien: but i got 1 last last last thing
02:07 Cryolien: ><
02:07 K a b i -: okay lai  hahaha
02:07 Cryolien: dw, very simple 
02:07 Cryolien: 01:33:331 - missing note?
02:08 K a b i -: ah yes missing note
02:08 K a b i -: ..
02:08 Cryolien: 01:39:684 - also
02:08 Cryolien: 01:45:331 - also
02:08 K a b i -: ok i confirm these are the last liao
02:08 K a b i -: hahaha
02:09 Cryolien: ya confirm last dy
02:09 K a b i -: ew so many missing notes