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Loneight
hitsounds reqs~
I only use three hitsounds ... sorry
the song is hard to find sounds for me ;w;
hope I am helpful (crying
http://puu.sh/33w5r.rar
Topic Starter
ryuu
^ this guy is just gorgeous ;w;

p.s. sorry, if u saw that;_;
/me baka [2]
rockleejkooo
irc mod
16:14 rockleejkooo: 00:16:678 (2,3) - вот это выделить бы как-нибудь. всмысле, музыка на заднем фоне есть. надо как-то хс поставить
16:15 ryuu: там же есть цокалка на конце
16:15 ryuu: (2)
16:16 rockleejkooo: висл на начало тогда
16:16 rockleejkooo: финиш*
16:16 ryuu: угу
16:17 rockleejkooo: 00:18:678 (1) - и на середину финиш классно было бы
16:17 ryuu: окей
16:20 rockleejkooo: 00:34:678 (5) - думаю, было бы лучше, если б укоротить до красного тика и (6) поставить на красный тоже. по музыке
16:21 ryuu: да не. сложно будет
16:21 ryuu: у меня нет нот на красных
16:21 ryuu: тиках
16:22 rockleejkooo: окей.
16:22 rockleejkooo: 00:41:078 (5,1) - вроде приятней звучит, если перенести финиш с конца 5 на начало 1
16:23 ryuu: угу
16:25 rockleejkooo: 00:58:678 (2) - вроде как логику предыдущих хс убивает. думаю, на конец вместо начала было бы лучше
16:27 ryuu: может вообще убрать оттуда финиши лол
16:29 ryuu: 00:56:678 (1) - попробуй вот сюда добавить финиш
16:29 ryuu: 00:57:478 -
16:30 rockleejkooo: норм
16:31 rockleejkooo: тогда попробуй убрать с 5, поставить на 3-4 и на начало 6
16:31 rockleejkooo: с нормалом все
16:31 ryuu: окей. сделаю
16:35 rockleejkooo: 00:05:478 (4) - не хочешь для вступления сделать и сюда финиш?
16:35 ryuu: окей. можно
16:36 rockleejkooo: 00:32:278 (2) - и сюда на конец. суховато как-то
16:36 ryuu: угу
16:38 rockleejkooo: 00:53:478 (5) - как насчет перекинуть пятерку куда-нибудь сюда http://puu.sh/3bLHr.jpg ? чтоб треугольничек образовывало с 1 и 2. а то уж как-то совсем рандомно
16:39 ryuu: окей
16:39 ryuu: а вообще там линия .3.
16:39 rockleejkooo: окей оставь
16:40 ryuu: поздно
16:40 rockleejkooo: 01:15:878 (2) - финиш на начало няшненько будет
16:42 ryuu: угу
16:45 rockleejkooo: 01:33:878 (6) - красивее вроде, если средний тик на 116 344 передвинуть
16:46 ryuu: окай
16:46 rockleejkooo: все. остальное няшное
16:46 ryuu: нян
Topic Starter
ryuu
спасибо, роклиша ♥
_MLX3
SPOILER
22:17 -DuckLING: Just finished the Normal difficulty
22:18 -DuckLING: I enjoyed it. Nice circlular motion throughout the song
22:18 -DuckLING: But...
22:18 -DuckLING: It shoudln't be Normal.
22:18 -DuckLING: Drop it down to Easy.
22:18 -DuckLING: Feel free to play around with the slider times a bit more, too.
22:18 -DuckLING: There are obvious places, and not so obvious places that would make it work out that much better.
22:19 -DuckLING: But, if you don't want to make an Easy difficulty, I'd suggest you downsize the circles a little bit.
22:19 -DuckLING: You're making it too easy to use mods on. I'd be able to HR, DT, HD, FL that no problem =)
22:20 -DuckLING: I'll play Hard, now.
22:22 ryuu: hhhhhmmmm. i'll think about it. and make the sliders more diverse
22:22 -DuckLING: I'm in love with Hard.
22:22 -DuckLING: Nice slider design
22:22 -DuckLING: I reckon, though
22:22 -DuckLING: During the middle, where you have a circle slider in the top right
22:23 ryuu: aaaawww. thank u ~
22:23 -DuckLING: You could probably take out the slider that comes after it in the bottom left (I think)
22:23 -DuckLING: and replace it with a single and then another circle slider
22:23 -DuckLING: That would make for better flow than what you did there.
22:23 -DuckLING: That's what I think, at least ^-^
22:23 -DuckLING: Other than that, I enjoyed the quick jumps
22:23 -DuckLING: They're possible (even for my level of play)
22:24 -DuckLING: and they're not too demanding on accuracy.
22:24 -DuckLING: Let me know when you make updates
22:24 ryuu: ;_________;
22:24 -DuckLING: Oh
22:24 -DuckLING: Now that I remember
22:24 -DuckLING: The long spinner
22:24 -DuckLING: Shorten it ^-^
22:26 -DuckLING: Also, I'm not sure about how maps are being mapped for 2013 (because I heard there was a different style compared to last year's)
22:26 -DuckLING: but have you thought about using single-single-slider comboes?
22:26 -DuckLING: I'll go into Edit mode and tell you the times
22:27 ryuu: about slider. which?
22:27 ryuu: spinner*
22:27 -DuckLING: 01:13
22:27 -DuckLING: Wait
22:27 -DuckLING: 01:10
22:28 -DuckLING: Nope.
22:28 -DuckLING: Nevermind hahaha
22:28 ryuu: loool
22:28 -DuckLING: Those spinners are fine.
22:28 -DuckLING: My brain must've remembered the two of them as one
22:28 -DuckLING: So it thought it was longer than usual
22:28 -DuckLING: But there's two hahaha
22:28 -DuckLING: Sorry~
22:28 ryuu: no problem :3
22:29 -DuckLING: Starting at 30 seconds
22:29 -DuckLING: where the lyrics come in
22:29 -DuckLING: DId you think of giving the player a little bit of a rest with the sliders?
22:31 ryuu: i think they will not get tired :o diff so simple
22:32 -DuckLING: Well, that's where I think you could try some single-single-slider comboes
22:32 -DuckLING: So ta-ta-taaaa
22:32 ryuu: and..dacky. i don't quite understand you about the circular slider. you can take a screenshot?
22:33 -DuckLING: I'll give you a time
22:33 -DuckLING: 01:14:278
22:34 -DuckLING: So just before the Spinners
22:34 -DuckLING: Did you find it?
22:35 ryuu: yes. i knew where it is. i don't understand what u want to do with it.
22:35 -DuckLING: So, after the circle slider, try taking away the slider that comes after
22:35 -DuckLING: and replace it
22:35 -DuckLING: with an offbeat single and another circle.
22:36 -DuckLING: So it should be like: Taaaa(circle) - ta(single) - taaaa(circle2)
22:36 -DuckLING: and then the spinner comes in.
22:37 -DuckLING: I'll take a screenshot.
22:39 -DuckLING: http://i42.tinypic.com/n5oety.jpg
22:39 -DuckLING: Here you go.
22:40 ryuu: ou. okay. i do this o.o
22:40 -DuckLING: Do you like the idea?
22:41 ryuu: ugu
22:41 -DuckLING: Really?!
22:41 -DuckLING: I mean
22:41 -DuckLING: Of course you do ^-^
22:41 -DuckLING: It was my idea
22:41 ryuu: lol :3
22:41 -DuckLING: Ok ryuu~
22:41 -DuckLING: Good luck with the map!

Wishing you the best, ryuu!
Topic Starter
ryuu
thank u, ducky :3
K i A i
here comes mooooodding~~

how about using clap sound to slidertick?

[nomral[
cs+1
00:03:878 (1) - how about make this slider flatly?
00:41:078 (5) - add clap sound to mid point
00:53:878 (4) - add whistle sound
00:55:878 (2) - how about adding clap sound?
01:09:478 (2) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/3dgpg.png
01:31:878 (1) - add clap sound to last point
01:40:278 (2) - ^
02:00:678 (1) - how about change this slider's form? it looks strange a bit
02:05:878 (4) - add whistle to start point, and add clap to mid point
02:12:678 (3) - how about adding clap sound to start point?

[hrad[
how about cs+1?
00:16:478 (5) - how about using this note for covering 00:16:878 (1)?
00:29:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it looks like stream.. this compose will make confuse.. how about changing compose?
00:33:278 (3) - decrease distance plz
01:14:678 (1) - how about changing this slider's form like 01:15:878 (3)? (use ctrl+g)
02:06:278 (2) - add clap sound to start point
02:13:078 (4) - how about adding clap sound?


beautiful map~!
good luck :)
Topic Starter
ryuu

K i A i wrote:

here comes mooooodding~~

how about using clap sound to slidertick? i'll try

[nomral[
cs+1 but there is a maximum o.o
00:03:878 (1) - how about make this slider flatly? ugu
00:41:078 (5) - add clap sound to mid point right o.o
00:53:878 (4) - add whistle sound ugu
00:55:878 (2) - how about adding clap sound? ugu
01:09:478 (2) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/3dgpg.png ugu
01:31:878 (1) - add clap sound to last point ugu
01:40:278 (2) - ^ ugu
02:00:678 (1) - how about change this slider's form? it looks strange a bit noo ;_; it's cute big circle
02:05:878 (4) - add whistle to start point, and add clap to mid point whistle - no, because sounds rough clap - yes
02:12:678 (3) - how about adding clap sound to start point? ugu

[hrad[
how about cs+1? no :о map so simple
00:16:478 (5) - how about using this note for covering 00:16:878 (1)? okay
00:29:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it looks like stream.. this compose will make confuse.. how about changing compose? i don't think so o.o i want that cursor almost not move in this place
00:33:278 (3) - decrease distance plz done
01:14:678 (1) - how about changing this slider's form like 01:15:878 (3)? (use ctrl+g) lol noo ;_; it's cute little big circle's brother
02:06:278 (2) - add clap sound to start point done
02:13:078 (4) - how about adding clap sound? and done


beautiful map~! aaawww ~~
good luck :)
thank u, kiai :33
and thanks for star :о
_Erra_
Normal
С ритмом все хорошо,но как-то слишком медленно,пусть может в kiai'e немного будет по быстрее идти слайдеры?
Просто пересмотри,но говорю,просто слииииииишком медленно
Hard
00:16:878 (1) - 00:18:278 (8) - измени,ибо мне три раза потребовалось чтобы прочитать это :D
00:23:278 (1) - 00:24:678 (8) - ^ или просто поменяй немного местами.
00:31:078 (1) - можно замедлить его
00:49:078 (1) - 00:49:878 (5) - вот это читаемое)
Поработай немного с быстротой слайдером,где-то быстрее,где-то медленнее,думаю будет намного лучше с:
K i A i
i add slidertick sound with clap :3
can u cheсk it?
(redl 1st)
and check slidertick sound with whistle please ;_;
i think i missed it somewhere
ok, here we go~
[normal]
- slidertick whistle
add 11478, 15478, 17878, 28278, 85878, 89078, 92278, 96278, 101878, 108278, 130678

- slidertick clap
30278, 113478


[hard]
- slidertick whistle
44278

- slidertick clap
46278, 94278, 100678, 105478, 113478

;)
Topic Starter
ryuu

_Erra_ wrote:

Normal
С ритмом все хорошо,но как-то слишком медленно,пусть может в kiai'e немного будет по быстрее идти слайдеры? они и так увеличивают скорость в киайе же. поэтому спейсинг так вырос.
Просто пересмотри,но говорю,просто слииииииишком медленно
Hard
00:16:878 (1) - 00:18:278 (8) - измени,ибо мне три раза потребовалось чтобы прочитать это :D мой любимый джамповый паттерн во всей карте.
00:23:278 (1) - 00:24:678 (8) - ^ или просто поменяй немного местами. и этот тоже
00:31:078 (1) - можно замедлить его замедлила
00:49:078 (1) - 00:49:878 (5) - вот это читаемое) ugu
Поработай немного с быстротой слайдером,где-то быстрее,где-то медленнее,думаю будет намного лучше с:
спасибо :3
10crystalmask01
Ahh, what a relaxing song (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
However, there are two timing points set at the same time: 01:49:238 on your Hard mode.

Apart from that, I'd give it a thumbs up!
Hope this helps~! :)
Topic Starter
ryuu

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ahh, what a relaxing song (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ uguuuuuu :3
However, there are two timing points set at the same time: 01:49:238 on your Hard mode. what? o.o
jonathanlfj
modding upon request~
very nice song...is it actually sakuya's theme? why do i get deja vu of u.n. xD

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
hitsounds are amazing

[Normal]
AR+1 considering the note density in this diff
00:36:278 (1) - curve this to the other side to get a better flow
00:54:678 (1,2) - how bout a raise in volume for these two sliders to correspond with the vocals? (do this for the same section in hard also)
01:09:478 (2) - NC here instead of 01:07:878 (1) to indicate start of new music section
01:15:878 (1) - extend to 01:19:478 fits the music better imo
01:55:478 (4,5) - slider ends are snapped wrong; snap them to the white lines
02:00:678 (1) - this slider might raise some problems since newbies wont be able to tell which way the slider turns; separate the start and end a bit more: 02:02:678 (1) - unneeded NC

[Hard]
OD-1 fits better with the speed and difficulty of this map
00:05:078 (3,4) - was the manual stacking intentional? stack leniency would do the exact same thing so it isnt very necessary
00:16:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this combo plays a bit confusing under AR7, reposition 00:18:078 (7) out of stack makes it alot easier to read (since 00:16:878 (1,2,3) and 00:17:478 (4,5,6) would be 2 identical hit patterns without the extra overlap of 00:18:078 (7))
00:31:078 (1) - 1 grid right
00:59:878 (3) - NC here instead of 01:00:278 (1)
01:47:078 (3) - manually stack this to x:272 y:308, because stack leniency would shift 01:46:278 (2) to this coordinate in game play so manual stack will give you the proper overlap

This is great! Have a star and good luck in ranking~
Topic Starter
ryuu

jonathanlfj wrote:

modding upon request~
very nice song...is it actually sakuya's theme? why do i get deja vu of u.n. xD yes :о it's sakuya

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
hitsounds are amazing uguuuu ;wwww; it's all cool loneight made! (and i i added a bit of my own)

[Normal]
AR+1 considering the note density in this diff ugu
00:36:278 (1) - curve this to the other side to get a better flow ugu
00:54:678 (1,2) - how bout a raise in volume for these two sliders to correspond with the vocals? (do this for the same section in hard also) ugu
01:09:478 (2) - NC here instead of 01:07:878 (1) to indicate start of new music section ugu
01:15:878 (1) - extend to 01:19:478 fits the music better imo mm. i prefer my version
01:55:478 (4,5) - slider ends are snapped wrong; snap them to the white lines yes ._. overlooked
02:00:678 (1) - this slider might raise some problems since newbies wont be able to tell which way the slider turns; separate the start and end a bit more: okay
02:02:678 (1) - unneeded NC noo :о necessary. white - slow, crimson - fast

[Hard]
OD-1 fits better with the speed and difficulty of this map okay
00:05:078 (3,4) - was the manual stacking intentional? stack leniency would do the exact same thing so it isnt very necessary yes, was intentional :3 because it is one of the few moments that i have left in this map. i changed map which i did two years ago :о it's nostalgic ~
00:16:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this combo plays a bit confusing under AR7, reposition 00:18:078 (7) out of stack makes it alot easier to read (since 00:16:878 (1,2,3) and 00:17:478 (4,5,6) would be 2 identical hit patterns without the extra overlap of 00:18:078 (7)) noo ;_; i very love this pattern. please, don't force it to change ;_;
00:31:078 (1) - 1 grid right okay o.o
00:59:878 (3) - NC here instead of 01:00:278 (1) ugu
01:47:078 (3) - manually stack this to x:272 y:308, because stack leniency would shift 01:46:278 (2) to this coordinate in game play so manual stack will give you the proper overlap ugu

This is great! Have a star and good luck in ranking~ nyaaan :3
thank u, jonathan ;w;
Flower
did some irc mods

SPOILER
07:00 ryuu: hi. i'm sorry if i distract u. but ur signature says "Catch me in game". soooo. can u mod my map?
07:05 Flower: Hmm, can you show me the map please? let me hear it
07:05 *ryuu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257000 Syrufit & Tsubaki Ichimatsu - your love]
07:08 Flower: Let me deal with it later plz... I'm doing something else. Is that ok?
07:09 ryuu: of course :3
07:09 ryuu: thank u ~
07:21 Flower: k. Can we do an irc mod then? I don't want to post
07:23 ryuu: mm. okay. but i will be very slow ;_;
07:23 Flower: k.
07:24 *Flower is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/128379 Syrufit & Tsubaki Ichimatsu - your love [Hard]]
07:25 Flower: I don't think this to be a typical Hard cuz the crazy jumps. still playable though
07:25 ryuu: lol
07:25 Flower: I strongly suggest that you increase AR by 1, so that it reads better.
07:26 ryuu: okay :o
07:29 Flower: 00:05:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - these jumping patterns is quite misleading due to the inconsistent spacing.
07:29 Flower: Maybe like this
07:29 Flower: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/813076
07:31 Flower: 00:11:078 (5) - reduce one repeat?
07:32 ryuu: okay and okay
07:33 ryuu: than add note 00:11:678 - here
07:33 Flower: I think it's better if you keep that blank
07:35 ryuu: i may have got used to the old rhythm, but for me there is so empty ;___;
07:36 Flower: umm, so okay, I think adding a note there reads better
07:36 ryuu: :3
07:37 Flower: 00:16:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these plays well in Insane diff, but absolutely no in Hard. I recommend that you reduce spacing.
07:40 ryuu: i can only lift a bit 00:17:478 (4,5,6,7) - ;__;
07:41 Flower: If you think enough then ok
07:41 Flower: 00:18:678 (1,2,3) - move a bit closer
07:42 Flower: 00:28:278 (1,2,3) - jumping quite hard to read
07:42 ryuu: i place 00:19:078 (2) - on 400, 180. okay?
07:43 Flower: yeah it's okay. but I also suggest rotate 00:19:278 (3) - clockwise for a bit to fit the rhythm
07:43 Flower: the flow *
07:44 Flower: 00:34:678 (1,2,3) - keep consistent spacing
07:45 ryuu: 00:19:278 (3) - what u want flow? o.o
07:46 Flower: rotate clockwise for 10 degrees and move to 248,184 , which I think look better
07:49 ryuu: okay :o
07:52 Flower: How about the latter ones?
07:53 ryuu: i made this http://puu.sh/3fNUB.jpg
07:54 Flower: I suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/813099
07:55 Flower: 00:38:678 (6,1,2) - also, this jump is too fast. make 00:38:678 (6) - near the 1.
07:57 ryuu: ugu and ugu
07:57 Flower: 00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - also reduce spacing
07:59 ryuu: no. i very love these jumps ;__;
08:00 Flower: not taht much. like reduce spacing for by grid
08:00 Flower: 1 grid*
08:00 ryuu: okay .3.
08:00 Flower: 00:42:878 (6) - slightly add some curves (curve pointing down) to make better flow?
08:03 Flower: 00:47:478 (1,2,3,4) - crazy jumping.
08:05 ryuu: no aaaaaaaaand... i ctrl+g 00:48:078 (4) - ._.
08:06 Flower: 00:53:478 (5) - stack with previous 1. this jump is ugly.
08:06 ryuu: okay ;_;
08:06 Flower: 00:55:678 (4) - keep consistent spacing with previous notes
08:07 ryuu: okay
08:07 Flower: 01:04:278 (2) - maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/813115
08:08 ryuu: ugu
08:08 Flower: 01:14:678 (2) - this is unrankable. separate head and tail by a little
08:10 ryuu: yes. i changed form
08:10 Flower: 01:15:878 (4) - add some curve?
08:13 ryuu: i made this http://puu.sh/3fOKV.jpg \:D/
08:13 Flower: it looks better nw :3
08:13 Flower: 01:22:278 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the reducing volume. Maybe don't change the volume of 3 and 4?
08:16 ryuu: i think it's too loud
08:17 Flower: keep it if you like
08:18 Flower: ok, let's go to normal
08:18 ryuu: ugu
08:20 Flower: hmm, I understand that you increase SV in kiai, but it's better if you don't increase the spacing in a sudden
08:21 Flower: using 1.6x spacing during the kia looks better and is more friendly to new player.
08:21 Flower: and ther is no ther problems, I think. Good luck :3
08:23 ryuu: oh. thank u, hana-san :3
08:24 Flower: no problem :3 so I'm gonna post the chatlog, is that ok?
KokoroStudiox3
M4M :3from my queue



[Hard]
00:05:078 (3,4) - stacked
00:07:278 (5) - finish
01:46:278 (2) - Move to {x:276 y:316}. 01:47:078 (3) - Move to {x:280 y:332}. ?

[normal]
00:21:878 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:108 y:200}, move node #3 to {x:184 y:200}.


nice hitsound *.*
Topic Starter
ryuu

eLtigreXXx wrote:

M4M :3
from my queue

[Hard]
00:05:078 (3,4) - stacked no :о because it is one of the few moments that i have left in this map. i changed map which i did two years ago :о it's nostalgic ~
00:07:278 (5) - finish okay o.o
01:46:278 (2) - Move to {x:276 y:316}. 01:47:078 (3) - Move to {x:280 y:332}. ? ugu and moved a little to the right

[normal]
00:21:878 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:108 y:200}, move node #3 to {x:184 y:200}. done :3
thank u for mod ;w;
KokoroStudiox3
:3
Topic Starter
ryuu
and thank u for ur little star >w<

can u give me full art of ur ava? o.o
Roxtarr
IRC mod (few hitsound suggestions)
SPOILER
  • 2013-06-16 17:45 Roxtarr: привет!
    2013-06-16 17:45 Roxtarr: что-то хотела?
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: да. хотела. помодь карту ;___;
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: а я
    2013-06-16 17:46 Roxtarr: попросил у друга аккаунт
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: спою тебе
    2013-06-16 17:46 Roxtarr: на время
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: что-нибудь
    2013-06-16 17:46 Roxtarr: :D
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: могу спеть эту..свифт
    2013-06-16 17:46 Roxtarr: да я и так посмотрю
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: я дели пела
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: а ещё там
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: суруфит
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: и эта тянка
    2013-06-16 17:46 Roxtarr: да
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: что поёт тут
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262581 Syrufit & Poplica ft. Tsubaki Ichimatsu - Ten Desires]
    2013-06-16 17:46 Roxtarr: я видел
    2013-06-16 17:46 ryuu: вот ;___;
    2013-06-16 17:46 Roxtarr: вообще мило
    2013-06-16 17:46 Roxtarr: сейчас
    2013-06-16 17:47 Roxtarr: посмотрю
    2013-06-16 17:47 ryuu: меня уже тошнит от неё
    2013-06-16 17:47 ryuu: быстрее ранкнуть и забыть
    2013-06-16 17:47 ryuu: чем больше смотрю на неё, тем более хуёвей она мне кажется
    2013-06-16 17:47 Roxtarr: как я тебя понимаю
    2013-06-16 17:48 ryuu: правильно говорил зира
    2013-06-16 17:48 ryuu: что весь кайф в маппанье
    2013-06-16 17:48 ryuu: а потом она не нужна
    2013-06-16 17:48 ryuu: и песня уже не нравится
    2013-06-16 17:54 Roxtarr: 00:36:078 (1,2,3,4) -
    2013-06-16 17:56 Roxtarr: вот тут лучше дальше по музыке
    2013-06-16 17:56 Roxtarr: слишком резкий переход получается
    2013-06-16 17:56 Roxtarr: тобишь
    2013-06-16 17:56 Roxtarr: 00:36:478 (3) -
    2013-06-16 17:56 Roxtarr: тут не хватает объекта
    2013-06-16 17:56 Roxtarr: 00:54:478 (8) -
    2013-06-16 17:57 Roxtarr: вот тут бы тоже добавил
    2013-06-16 17:58 Roxtarr: 00:57:878 (2) - финиши убрать
    2013-06-16 17:58 Roxtarr: 00:59:878 (1) - сюда один сунуть
    2013-06-16 17:59 Roxtarr: 01:00:278 (2) - сюда на голову тоже
    2013-06-16 17:59 Roxtarr: 01:00:678 (3) - сюда на хвост
    2013-06-16 17:59 Roxtarr: 01:01:278 (4) - тут на голову
    2013-06-16 17:59 ryuu: 00:57:878 (2) - прямо оба? ;_;
    2013-06-16 17:59 Roxtarr: да
    2013-06-16 17:59 ryuu: окей ;_;
    2013-06-16 17:59 Roxtarr: просто там слайдер под войс
    2013-06-16 18:00 Roxtarr: и они странно звучат
    2013-06-16 18:00 ryuu: 01:00:278 (2) - а тут и так есть :о
    2013-06-16 18:00 Roxtarr: да?
    2013-06-16 18:00 Roxtarr: проглядел видимо
    2013-06-16 18:00 ryuu: да о.о
    2013-06-16 18:00 ryuu: давно
    2013-06-16 18:00 ryuu: лол
    2013-06-16 18:01 Roxtarr: просто я в куске обычно
    2013-06-16 18:01 Roxtarr: который у меня вызывает вопросы
    2013-06-16 18:01 Roxtarr: убираю все хс
    2013-06-16 18:01 Roxtarr: и ставлю как мне кажется лучше
    2013-06-16 18:01 ryuu: мм
    2013-06-16 18:01 Roxtarr: все кстати как предложение
    2013-06-16 18:01 Roxtarr: не забывай
    2013-06-16 18:01 Roxtarr: ну тоесть
    2013-06-16 18:01 Roxtarr: я прослушиваю
    2013-06-16 18:02 Roxtarr: если не нравится
    2013-06-16 18:02 Roxtarr: переделываю
    2013-06-16 18:02 Roxtarr: и уже предлагаю
    2013-06-16 18:02 ryuu: ох эти ваше отсутствие запятых. не сразу поняла, о чем ты
    2013-06-16 18:02 Roxtarr: извини
    2013-06-16 18:02 ryuu: ничего :3
    2013-06-16 18:03 Roxtarr: 01:04:278 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - вот тут по аналогии
    2013-06-16 18:03 Roxtarr: или даже
    2013-06-16 18:03 Roxtarr: нет
    2013-06-16 18:03 Roxtarr: лучше по аналогии
    2013-06-16 18:03 ryuu: хорошо
    2013-06-16 18:04 Roxtarr: 01:10:278 (5) - тут убрать пожалуй
    2013-06-16 18:04 ryuu: угу
    2013-06-16 18:05 Roxtarr: секунду
    2013-06-16 18:06 Roxtarr: 01:35:878 (3,4) -
    2013-06-16 18:06 Roxtarr: вот довольно спорный момент
    2013-06-16 18:06 Roxtarr: тоесть оно и подходит
    2013-06-16 18:06 Roxtarr: но это не очень ожидаемо
    2013-06-16 18:07 Roxtarr: 01:36:278 (4) - если поставить сюда тот серкл с красного тика, то будет легче выбить
    2013-06-16 18:07 Roxtarr: но окончательное решение естественно за тобой
    2013-06-16 18:08 Roxtarr: а так вроде все
    2013-06-16 18:08 Roxtarr: больше в глаза ничего не бросается
    2013-06-16 18:09 Roxtarr: диффа кстати милая
Topic Starter
ryuu
спасибо, няша :3
Megurine Luka
hi M4M as you requested
Sorry for late

[G]

Seems none

[N]

00:48:278 (2) - why not make it straight since 1 is straight.
01:37:078 (3) - try

01:56:278 (5) - make the red point in the middle? like

02:00:678 (1) - I suggest you separate the head and the tail. otherwise it might cause a little bit confusion for new players

[H]

00:09:078 (1) - make it straight
00:33:278 (2) - maybe

01:15:678 (3) - stack better
02:11:478 (1) - why not something like


=v= that's all
Topic Starter
ryuu

Megurine Luka wrote:

hi M4M as you requested
Sorry for late don't worry :3

[G]

Seems none

[N]

00:48:278 (2) - why not make it straight since 1 is straight. okay :о
01:37:078 (3) - try okay :о

01:56:278 (5) - make the red point in the middle? like i like my version :3

02:00:678 (1) - I suggest you separate the head and the tail. otherwise it might cause a little bit confusion for new players okay ;_;

[H]

00:09:078 (1) - make it straight okay :о
00:33:278 (2) - maybe ugu

01:15:678 (3) - stack betterugu
02:11:478 (1) - why not something like okay :о


=v= that's all
thank u, luka-san >w<
KokoroStudiox3
Topic Starter
ryuu
mmmmmm >:3
neonat
Sorry for the delay. Some suggestions for rhythm.

Hard

00:06:678 - add a note, like this:
00:42:878 (6) - slider end at 00:43:278 and add a note at 00:43:478
01:14:678 (2) - end at 01:15:078 and add beats at 01:15:278 and 01:15:478
01:20:278 (1) - start from 01:20:678 end at 01:21:478 and add a note at 01:20:278

Goodluck~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue~


Har

  1. 00:37:078 (6,7) - i think the last note looks weird, maybe make it an accelerated spacing http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824274
  2. 01:26:078 - add note, and add whistle? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824281
  3. 01:41:052 - how about this wwww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824284
  4. 01:44:278 (4) - here? better flow w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824285
  5. good map
Normal]

  1. 01:07:878 (7) - place it here w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824294
  2. 02:03:878 (1,2) - better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824296
gl~
Topic Starter
ryuu

neonat wrote:

Sorry for the delay. Some suggestions for rhythm.

Hard

00:06:678 - add a note, like this: ugu
00:42:878 (6) - slider end at 00:43:278 and add a note at 00:43:478 okay
01:14:678 (2) - end at 01:15:078 and add beats at 01:15:278 and 01:15:478 ugu
01:20:278 (1) - start from 01:20:678 end at 01:21:478 and add a note at 01:20:278 no :о this is my favourite slider ♥

Goodluck~ thank u :3
and thanks for mod :о

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue~


Har

  1. 00:37:078 (6,7) - i think the last note looks weird, maybe make it an accelerated spacing http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824274 okay
  2. 01:26:078 - add note, and add whistle? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824281 ugu
  3. 01:41:052 - how about this wwww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824284 no, i like my slider :о
  4. 01:44:278 (4) - here? better flow w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824285 ugu
  5. good map thank u ;w;
Normal]

  1. 01:07:878 (7) - place it here w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824294 okay
  2. 02:03:878 (1,2) - better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824296ugu
gl~
thank u :3
Natteke desu
речек
[Hard]
01:15:278 (3,4,5) - не очень круто играется, попробуй что-то в этом духе :
01:38:278 (1) - слишком много репитов, тоже не самый удобный для игры момент, подумай над ним
01:53:878 (7) - серкл бы сюда, например так :
А так вроде и не бросается ничего.
Topic Starter
ryuu

EvilElvisV2 wrote:

речек нян :3
[Hard]
01:15:278 (3,4,5) - не очень круто играется, попробуй что-то в этом духе : угу
01:38:278 (1) - слишком много репитов, тоже не самый удобный для игры момент, подумай над ним переделала немного.
01:53:878 (7) - серкл бы сюда, например так : поставила!
А так вроде и не бросается ничего.
спасибо, еешечка ;w;
моя карта без тебя была бы не очень.
DexFrild
Приветик :33

[Hard]

00:41:478 - Тут музыка играет а ноты нет. Поставь сюда серкл и будет ня!
Topic Starter
ryuu
поставила.
спасибо.
правда мило лол.
Leorda
Hi there, sorry for long delay

[General]
* Wasn't the artist should be Syrufit feat. Tsubaki Ichimatsu?


[Normal]
00:42:278 (1) - Add clap at tail slider? You probably forgot


[Hard]
* AR -1 or -2? Your current AR are makes me uncomfortable while testing this diff. Because since SV and AR isn't in same speed, player get confuse/uncomfortable while playing

00:11:078 (5) - Add clap at head slider? You probably forgot
00:37:478 (8) - New combo for slowdown slider, otherwise players get tricked that they thought this slider is in normal speed
01:38:278 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody?


Once you done, forum PM me
Topic Starter
ryuu

Leorda wrote:

Hi there, sorry for long delay no problem :3

[General]
* Wasn't the artist should be Syrufit feat. Tsubaki Ichimatsu? i don't know. 2 people were looking for any evidence, but didn't find anything. i took the name of the tag. if someone finds a real proof, i will change the name :о


[Normal]
00:42:278 (1) - Add clap at tail slider? You probably forgot yes


[Hard]
* AR -1 or -2? Your current AR are makes me uncomfortable while testing this diff. Because since SV and AR isn't in same speed, player get confuse/uncomfortable while playing i think ar8 ideally suited to this diff. because if i make it lower, then it will be difficult to read the jumps.


00:11:078 (5) - Add clap at head slider? You probably forgot ugu ._.
00:37:478 (8) - New combo for slowdown slider, otherwise players get tricked that they thought this slider is in normal speed but slider is in normal speed o.o
01:38:278 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? ugu


Once you done, forum PM me
thank u for mod :3
Leorda
I was PM her (ryuu) for changing titles....

Bubbled
Topic Starter
ryuu
thank u, leorda *w*
grumd
The title is not correct. Tsubaki is the vocalist, but the "artist" should be just Syrufit. Several proofs: first proof, the album page that doesn't show anything about Tsubaki and youtube music video page that explains the role of Tsubaki in this song and third proof, another album page, and another proof if you want.
Just add Tsubaki Ichimatsu in tags. "ft. Tsubaki Ichimatsu" doesn't belong to the title.
By the way, remove "your love" from tags since it already appears in title.

Normal:
02:00:678 (1) - тут хоть и стоит расстояние 1.6, но на самом деле из-за изменения в скорости слайдера этот красный сильно отдалился от предыдущего. подвинь его на 1,2-1,25 примерно, чтобы расстояние было как обычно: http://puu.sh/3yAPK.png

Hard:
по сравнению с первой половиной карты киаи кажется слишком лёгким, мало нот. я предложу несколько мест, где нужно можно добавить нотки:
01:28:078 - тут вокал
01:29:678 - ээ, я не ебу что тут, что-то вроде тех тикалок, что в начале были постоянно. и вообще по ритму бы подошло (закончить слайдер маленький тут)
01:33:878 (7) - тут вообще дофига нот по вокалу должно быть
01:36:278 - тут для инструментов. добавь в этом месте пару слайдеров как-то, а то много нот подряд
01:40:278 (4) - вот тут опять много вокала пропущено. киаи должен быть чуть сложнее или на таком же уровне, как всё остальное, такое пренебрежение нотками тут совсем некстати
01:53:078 (6) - 02:03:278 - опять вокала много
02:11:678 - начать слайдер лучше тут, оставив отдельную ноту на 02:11:478 -
ну и я бы добавил OD, а то мало как-то, одни SS будут, так даже скучно

вот это и всё, наверное.
Topic Starter
ryuu
так быстро ;_;
приду с работы через полчаса и всё посмотрю :о
спасибо, няша <3

эдит:

grumd wrote:

The title is not correct. Tsubaki is the vocalist, but the "artist" should be just Syrufit. Several proofs: first proof, the album page that doesn't show anything about Tsubaki and youtube music video page that explains the role of Tsubaki in this song and third proof, another album page, and another proof if you want. окай .______. дели будет рад, потому что он говорил про такое. но тогда мне песни до этого тоже так надо? хотя похуй.
Just add Tsubaki Ichimatsu in tags. "ft. Tsubaki Ichimatsu" doesn't belong to the title.
By the way, remove "your love" from tags since it already appears in title. угу

Normal:
02:00:678 (1) - тут хоть и стоит расстояние 1.6, но на самом деле из-за изменения в скорости слайдера этот красный сильно отдалился от предыдущего. подвинь его на 1,2-1,25 примерно, чтобы расстояние было как обычно: http://puu.sh/3yAPK.png подвинула

Hard:
по сравнению с первой половиной карты киаи кажется слишком лёгким, мало нот. я предложу несколько мест, где нужно можно добавить нотки:
01:28:078 - тут вокал сделала ноты
01:29:678 - ээ, я не ебу что тут, что-то вроде тех тикалок, что в начале были постоянно. и вообще по ритму бы подошло (закончить слайдер маленький тут) сделала слайдер, но те цокалки тут не подошли, как мне кажется :о тем более она такая одна.
01:33:878 (7) - тут вообще дофига нот по вокалу должно быть разреши мне оставить его ;_;
01:36:278 - тут для инструментов. добавь в этом месте пару слайдеров как-то, а то много нот подряд добавила
01:40:278 (4) - вот тут опять много вокала пропущено. киаи должен быть чуть сложнее или на таком же уровне, как всё остальное, такое пренебрежение нотками тут совсем некстати убрала этот милый слайдер ;_;
01:53:078 (6) - 02:03:278 - опять вокала много слайдер тот оставила, но пару ноток добавила на этом промежутке
02:11:678 - начать слайдер лучше тут, оставив отдельную ноту на 02:11:478 - сделала
ну и я бы добавил OD, а то мало как-то, одни SS будут, так даже скучно увеличила на 1

вот это и всё, наверное.
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