lol got through my leftover mods pretty quick.
[easy]
TOO MUCH KIAI, and kiai sucks during spinners, so try to avoid that.
00:00:555 (1) - I really like these sliders a lot. Can you make the middle a double curve? Right now it's flat, and I think it would be better without that.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/196369 obviously it may take a little more effort than that. Another minor thing I like to do is stick the red node exactly in the middle of the slider tick to give it that extra kick.
00:26:423 (1) - Personally when making spiral sliders I do this: Make them spiral
inwards (and you did that on the second one which is good, so it's not important) and make sure you can see the slider border and/or the background in between. Right now they're just a clump of junk. Here's my example:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/196371[normal]
tick rate 2 was too fast for easy, but I think it would fit here better.
00:28:848 (4) - might be too confusing for a normal? This particular distance snap was hard to read.
01:15:285 (1,1) - make these sliders similar?
01:16:543 - also consider adding the pickup note here both times
[hard]
lol SS first try.
00:28:578 (1,2,3) - I like what you did here, but you repeat this rhythm every single time. One thing I noticed you do is alternate patterns which is awesome. Can you make half of these sections [slider slider circle] instead of [circle short slider short slider]? Using the longer sliders puts the emphasis on the part you're actually trying to map (I think) and not the pickup (which is what the short sliders do).
00:43:668 (1) - this section again uses short sliders. I don't know what you're going to do in insane yet, but IMO this would be better with alternating [slider circle slider circle etc...].
01:03:788 (1) - not a fan of windmills. There's a lot of stacking involved in short places which hides things (like the fact that a note is a slider, or if it has a repeat).
01:09:537 (1) - depending on what you're going for here, I think a 6x repeat is kind of long (ie it has 8 points on it). The music goes up and down in 6 notes, so I think a 4x repeating slider (6 points) would fit better, though obviously be harder to read the first time.
01:26:782 (1) - I don't like the whistle spam here, it should probably only be on the red ticks or on the white ticks (choose one).
[insane]
00:17:081 (1,2,3) - fyi if you try the long slider trick with these, it's worse, so the short sliders are best here. One of the few times I prefer short sliders vs long sliders.
otherwise pretty good.
00:35:315 (2,3) - i really don't like these just because I always miss them
01:49:057 (1) - you could probably get away with jumpstreams in some sections like darri did it toccata and fugue.
[origin]
I was wondering how you were going to make this one approval with such a short song...
03:11:490 - this section switches to 6/8 time signature, which you recognized, but osu sucks at this stuff (slider ticks are all messed up) so I recommend you decrease the BPM to 120, use slider velocity x1.333333 and put it in 3/4 time. Alternatively increase to 240 and put it in 6/4, and SV 0.666666666667x which will make the tick rate much faster.
keep in mind that the kiai and hitsounds are in ALL the diffs, so remember do it in them all if you do it in one.
Hey ho double star
