finally done! think it's too hard = =
Download: Kitamura Eri - Shirushi (TV Size) (Kawayi Rika) [Ozzy].osuHITSOUND ADDED!
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Topic Starter
really pending ~ 
[Ozzy]
00:18:050 (1) - Delete
00:30:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - DS
00:43:033 (7) - nc(Newcombo)
00:48:846 (4) - ^
01:08:908 (10) - DS
01:11:158 (7) - nc
01:14:158 (8) - ^
nice song
00:18:050 (1) - Delete
00:30:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - DS
00:43:033 (7) - nc(Newcombo)
00:48:846 (4) - ^
01:08:908 (10) - DS
01:11:158 (7) - nc
01:14:158 (8) - ^
nice song
Here I go, modding this anyway.
~General~
00:17:368 (x) - Maybe start the slider 1/4 later and place a note here on all difficulties?
~Easy~
00:38:721 (2) - Center this note?
00:40:596 (4) - Center this too.
00:44:346 (1,2) - Move these 2 spaces to the right to center this.
01:06:096 (1) - Center this slider?
~Normal~
00:46:596 (2) - Stack this on (4)?
01:02:346 (4) - Move this note 2 spaces up and 1 right.
~Rika~
00:34:596 (1) - Move this slider up two spaces?
00:39:096 (6) - Move this slider down two?
Pretty Nice, Map.
~General~
00:17:368 (x) - Maybe start the slider 1/4 later and place a note here on all difficulties?
~Easy~
00:38:721 (2) - Center this note?
00:40:596 (4) - Center this too.
00:44:346 (1,2) - Move these 2 spaces to the right to center this.
01:06:096 (1) - Center this slider?
~Normal~
00:46:596 (2) - Stack this on (4)?
01:02:346 (4) - Move this note 2 spaces up and 1 right.
~Rika~
00:34:596 (1) - Move this slider up two spaces?
00:39:096 (6) - Move this slider down two?
Pretty Nice, Map.
Topic Starter
Thanks mod ~theMikeAG wrote:
Here I go, modding this anyway.
~Easy~
00:38:721 (2) - Center this note?<fixed
00:40:596 (4) - Center this too.<fixed
00:44:346 (1,2) - Move these 2 spaces to the right to center this.<fixed
01:06:096 (1) - Center this slider? <fixed
~Rika~
00:34:596 (1) - Move this slider up two spaces?
00:39:096 (6) - Move this slider down two?
Pretty Nice, Map.
update ~
hi~ Kawayi Rika
from my queue ~
here my mod ~
[General]
There was no problem
awesome map~ & Star ~☆
from my queue ~
here my mod ~
[General]
- Preview time point - Only ozzy diff is different. (56311) ⇒ Please unify all >< (maybe 56346 ? )
- 01:18:471~01:26:908 - Why is DS different during this period? plz use DS1.0x ><;
- 00:24:096 (1) - slider grid. x328,y144 ? http://puu.sh/a6Jg (plz follow after)
- 00:46:596 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - form suggestion. ↓
312,192,46596,2,0,B|296:139|203:105|157:135,2,180,12|8|8
it is my preference.... please ignore it.. sorry...
204,248,48096,5,8
161,134,48471,1,8
248,52,48846,1,0
344,124,49221,1,8
324,244,49596,6,0,B|336:297|270:372|217:367,2,180,4|8|8
204,248,51096,2,0,B|159:216|159:115|204:84,2,180,4|8|8
292,164,52596,1,8
380,248,52971,1,8
344,296,53158,2,0,B|334:350|242:392|195:365,1,180,8|0
- 01:02:346 (4) - grid x368,y180 ( plz follow after)
- 01:15:846 (3,4) - grid 3circle x256,y76 4circle x180,y168
- OD -1 (lower than Insane diff )
- 01:02:908 (1) - remove NC and 01:03:096 - add NC ?
- 01:03:658 (3,4) - tick move. 4circle 01:04:221. and 3circle 01:03:658~01:04:033
- 01:04:408 (1) - remove NC and 01:04:596 - add NC ?
- 01:15:658 (2,3) - In the same way 01:03:658 (3,4)
- 01:16:408 (1) - remove NC and 01:16:596 - add NC
- 00:10:095 (1) - remove NC and 00:11:232 - add NC
- 00:46:408 - add circle or 00:46:502 - add circle
- 00:55:596 (7) - add NC and 00:56:533 - remove NC (because DS is far)
- 00:17:141 (6) - 1grid up. x452,y224
your map is very clean (slider in particular)
There was no problem
awesome map~ & Star ~☆
Stop using low quality videos xD. http://puu.sh/aaPX
Edit: Removed the video from my uploads
Edit: Removed the video from my uploads
request from my queue
0 0一样的歌。。刚mod完王长喜的。。
[easy]
01:03:846 (2) - 1 grid right
[normal]
00:01:459 (2,3,4) - 要不就都压一起。要不就都分开
00:49:221 (4) - x移到244
00:53:158 (5) - 结尾clap
[vicho]
01:08:533 (3,4) - clap
[Rika]
00:17:368 加个note跟4对称。spinner往后推一格
00:30:283 (6) - 这样
00:41:346 (3) - x256 y184
00:45:846 (4,5,6) - 不喜欢这么排
01:17:533 (10) - NC
[Ozzy]
00:51:096 (1) - out
0 0一样的歌。。刚mod完王长喜的。。
[easy]
01:03:846 (2) - 1 grid right
[normal]
00:01:459 (2,3,4) - 要不就都压一起。要不就都分开
00:49:221 (4) - x移到244
00:53:158 (5) - 结尾clap
[vicho]
01:08:533 (3,4) - clap
[Rika]
00:17:368 加个note跟4对称。spinner往后推一格
00:30:283 (6) - 这样
320,64,30283,2,0,B|312:16|200:16|188:64,1,160,0|800:30:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 用0.5排密一点吧
00:41:346 (3) - x256 y184
00:45:846 (4,5,6) - 不喜欢这么排
01:17:533 (10) - NC
[Ozzy]
00:51:096 (1) - out
Taiko mod as requested
00:10:096 - d
00:15:550 - ^
00:17:368 - ^
00:19:186 - 音樂果下啪唔係係white tick 呢拍廢既 用spinner好過
00:24:946 - 音樂明明ddkkddkkd ._.
00:27:846 - 呢個空位好怪
00:36:846 - ddkkddk / dkdkddk
00:42:096 - K?
00:43:033 - kkdkd?
00:54:846 - ddkkk?
good luck~
00:10:096 - d
00:15:550 - ^
00:17:368 - ^
00:19:186 - 音樂果下啪唔係係white tick 呢拍廢既 用spinner好過
00:24:946 - 音樂明明ddkkddkkd ._.
00:27:846 - 呢個空位好怪
00:36:846 - ddkkddk / dkdkddk
00:42:096 - K?
00:43:033 - kkdkd?
00:54:846 - ddkkk?
good luck~
OK UPDATED.wmfchris wrote:
Taiko mod as requested
00:10:096 - d No. \.w./
00:15:550 - ^ No. \.w./
00:17:368 - ^ No. \.w./
00:19:186 - 音樂果下啪唔係係white tick 呢拍廢既 用spinner好過 OK deleted.
00:24:946 - 音樂明明ddkkddkkd ._. Fixed.
00:27:846 - 呢個空位好怪 Fixed.
00:36:846 - ddkkddk / dkdkddk Fixed.
00:42:096 - K? Fixed.
00:43:033 - kkdkd? No. \.w./
00:54:846 - ddkkk? Fixed.
good luck~
Download: Kitamura Eri - Shirushi (TV Size) (Kawayi Rika) [Climbb's Taiko Oni].osu
from my queue
[General]
preview time in Ozzy is differnet from other diffs , make it 56346 plz
Taiko diff need a new red timing section at 00:19:221 - , make sure the timing is all the same in all diffs
01:28:221 - I think spinner end at here is better
[Easy]
AR+1?
00:14:641 - add a finish here ? volume down a bit
00:24:846 (4) - start at 00:24:658 - is better , add clap at start and end
00:34:221 - add clap
00:46:221 - ^
00:59:721 - ^
01:01:408 (5) - this slider is vocal off , don't repeat a slider at blue beat line..
01:03:846 (2,3,4) - I suggest change this to a repeat sldier , or it is too hard for newbies imo
01:07:971 - clap
01:08:721 - ^
01:21:096 (1) - end at 01:21:658 - with finish ?
01:22:596 (2) - ^
01:27:096 (1) - this spinner is tooooo short for newbies..I suggest delete 01:26:721 (4) - and spinner start at 01:26:346 -
[Normal]
OD-1
00:14:641 - finish ? same as Easy
00:17:368 - move this timing section to 00:17:596 - , I don't think the slider end should be silenced
00:53:721 - clap
00:54:096 (1) - end at 00:55:971 - with clap , sound better
01:08:346 (6,7,8) - delete 7 , or make it into a repeat slider , or stack them , it is now too hard to play imo
01:27:096 (1) - spinner maybe too short 0.0
[Vicho]
OD-1
00:17:368 (1,1) - this is really bad , silence the spinner and add a note at heavy beat.. no one knows when to click the note when they first play.. I strongly suggest you delete the note and spinner end at 00:19:221 -
00:37:596 - you miss a finish here
00:59:627 (4) - move it to 01:00:002 - , and fix the pattern , sound better
01:03:658 (3,4) - I think slider first and circle later is better rhyme
nice diff here
[Rika]
00:17:368 (1,1) - same as Vicho diff
00:36:846 (1,2,3) - this jump is too huge.. I strongly suggest reduce the spacing here
00:44:908 (1,2) - move nc to 2 , much easier to read the pattern
00:46:408 - add a note? I think here shouldn't be empty
00:47:908 (1,2) - move nc to 2
01:03:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - jump too huge .. orz
01:21:658 (8,9) - slider first and circle later , better rhyme imo
[Ozzy]
HD+1?
00:13:732 - add note ?
00:14:641 - add finish , and volume down a bit here
00:24:846 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - the rhyme is strange.. I don't understand why you do this , I think change to streams is better
crazy diff here lol
that's all
good luck :3
[General]
preview time in Ozzy is differnet from other diffs , make it 56346 plz
Taiko diff need a new red timing section at 00:19:221 - , make sure the timing is all the same in all diffs
01:28:221 - I think spinner end at here is better
[Easy]
AR+1?
00:14:641 - add a finish here ? volume down a bit
00:24:846 (4) - start at 00:24:658 - is better , add clap at start and end
00:34:221 - add clap
00:46:221 - ^
00:59:721 - ^
01:01:408 (5) - this slider is vocal off , don't repeat a slider at blue beat line..
01:03:846 (2,3,4) - I suggest change this to a repeat sldier , or it is too hard for newbies imo
01:07:971 - clap
01:08:721 - ^
01:21:096 (1) - end at 01:21:658 - with finish ?
01:22:596 (2) - ^
01:27:096 (1) - this spinner is tooooo short for newbies..I suggest delete 01:26:721 (4) - and spinner start at 01:26:346 -
[Normal]
OD-1
00:14:641 - finish ? same as Easy
00:17:368 - move this timing section to 00:17:596 - , I don't think the slider end should be silenced
00:53:721 - clap
00:54:096 (1) - end at 00:55:971 - with clap , sound better
01:08:346 (6,7,8) - delete 7 , or make it into a repeat slider , or stack them , it is now too hard to play imo
01:27:096 (1) - spinner maybe too short 0.0
[Vicho]
OD-1
00:17:368 (1,1) - this is really bad , silence the spinner and add a note at heavy beat.. no one knows when to click the note when they first play.. I strongly suggest you delete the note and spinner end at 00:19:221 -
00:37:596 - you miss a finish here
00:59:627 (4) - move it to 01:00:002 - , and fix the pattern , sound better
01:03:658 (3,4) - I think slider first and circle later is better rhyme
nice diff here
[Rika]
00:17:368 (1,1) - same as Vicho diff
00:36:846 (1,2,3) - this jump is too huge.. I strongly suggest reduce the spacing here
00:44:908 (1,2) - move nc to 2 , much easier to read the pattern
00:46:408 - add a note? I think here shouldn't be empty
00:47:908 (1,2) - move nc to 2
01:03:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - jump too huge .. orz
01:21:658 (8,9) - slider first and circle later , better rhyme imo
[Ozzy]
HD+1?
00:13:732 - add note ?
00:14:641 - add finish , and volume down a bit here
00:24:846 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - the rhyme is strange.. I don't understand why you do this , I think change to streams is better
crazy diff here lol
that's all
good luck :3
[General]
Nothing to poke at.
[Easy]
A suggestion.
01:27:096 (1) - Extend it to the next white tick, instead of having it end at a red tick?
[Normal]
Another suggestion.
01:08:346 (6,7,8) - Change this into a return slider? Like this:
01:27:096 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy's spinner.
[Vicho]
01:27:096 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy's spinner.
[Rika]
Couple of issues.
00:44:908 (1,2) - Combos should be swapped, so it could be less confusing.
00:47:908 (1,2) - Should be spaced out.
01:27:096 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy's spinner.
[Ozzy]
hello there
00:39:096 (1) -
01:27:096 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy's spinner.
Overall, nice job.
Nothing to poke at.
[Easy]
A suggestion.
01:27:096 (1) - Extend it to the next white tick, instead of having it end at a red tick?
[Normal]
Another suggestion.
01:08:346 (6,7,8) - Change this into a return slider? Like this:
01:27:096 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy's spinner.
[Vicho]
01:27:096 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy's spinner.
[Rika]
Couple of issues.
00:44:908 (1,2) - Combos should be swapped, so it could be less confusing.
00:47:908 (1,2) - Should be spaced out.
01:27:096 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy's spinner.
[Ozzy]
hello there
00:39:096 (1) -
14:12 <Odaril> : 00:39:096 (1) - failed blanketso take it up with him
14:12 <Odaril> : THIS TIMING IS OFF
01:27:096 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy's spinner.
Overall, nice job.
The timing is off, indeed.
- offset 00075 -- BPM 66,000
- offset 14583 -- BPM 66,000
- offset 15975 -- BPM 66,000
- offset 19175 -- BPM 160,000
- offset 19570 -- BPM 160,000
[Easy]
00:11:005 (3) - New combo.
00:53:158 (4) - ^
00:55:408 (1) - Sounds too powerful imo.
01:27:096 (1) - This spinner is kinda short for an Easy difficulty.
[Rika]
01:17:158 (7) - New combo.
[Ozzy]
Audio Lead-In is different from the other difficulties. Please make sure to set the same on this difficulty, too.
00:16:914 (5,6) - Don't really like the spacing between these 2 notes.
00:56:064 (1) - Lower the volume of this spinner, much better to me.
Good job to all of you, guys.
00:11:005 (3) - New combo.
00:53:158 (4) - ^
00:55:408 (1) - Sounds too powerful imo.
01:27:096 (1) - This spinner is kinda short for an Easy difficulty.
[Rika]
01:17:158 (7) - New combo.
[Ozzy]
Audio Lead-In is different from the other difficulties. Please make sure to set the same on this difficulty, too.
00:16:914 (5,6) - Don't really like the spacing between these 2 notes.
00:56:064 (1) - Lower the volume of this spinner, much better to me.
Good job to all of you, guys.
天啊 你....你竟然擅自改了! 不要這樣 我會傷心的. 而且一定會吃掉你
Download: Kitamura Eri - Shirushi (TV Size) (Kawayi Rika) [Normal].rar
I think so toowcx19911123 wrote:
from my queue
01:28:221 - I think spinner end at here is better
Download: Kitamura Eri - Shirushi (TV Size) (Kawayi Rika) [Normal].rar
Topic Starter
kosiga wrote:
SPOILERhi~ Kawayi Rika
from my queue ~
here my mod ~
[Easy][Rika]
- 01:18:471~01:26:908 - Why is DS different during this period? plz use DS1.0x ><; <<fixed
- 00:10:095 (1) - remove NC and 00:11:232 - add NC
- 00:46:408 - add circle or 00:46:502 - add circle<<fixed
- 00:55:596 (7) - add NC and 00:56:533 - remove NC (because DS is far)
sorry, long & poor mod
There was no problem
awesome map~ & Star ~☆
thanks mod and star ~thanks nice video XD~blissfulyoshi wrote:
Stop using low quality videos xD. http://puu.sh/aaPX谢谢MOD ~No_Gu wrote:
SPOILERrequest from my queue
0 0一样的歌。。刚mod完王长喜的。。
[easy]
01:03:846 (2) - 1 grid right <<fixed
[Rika]
00:17:368 加个note跟4对称。spinner往后推一格
00:30:283 (6) - 这样 [attachment=0:74aa6]1.png[/attachment:74aa6]320,64,30283,2,0,B|312:16|200:16|188:64,1,160,0|8<<fixed
00:30:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 用0.5排密一点吧
00:41:346 (3) - x256 y184 <<fixed
00:45:846 (4,5,6) - 不喜欢这么排
01:17:533 (10) - NC
Yo modding this map because of ur request
General:
00:19:596 - get rid of that timing point because the timing point be4 that has the same bpm
Easy:
00:03:732(3) - *nazi* x:228 y:284 so it could be easier for beginners from there fix the spacing
00:17:596(1,1) - find some way to fix this because beginners will hav a tough time getting to that slider after the spinner is done
00:22:596(1,2) - replace these 2 for a slider
Normal:
00:01:914(4,1) - spacing unless u did this on purpose
00:49:221(4) - *nazi* 1 grid right(no distance snap) so that itd align to (1)
01:08:346(6) - NC
Vicho:
00:01:914(5) - NC
00:05:095(5) - ^
00:29:158(5) - ^
00:39:658(4) - ^
00:45:471(4) - ^
00:48:096(5) - ^
Rika:
00:05:095(5) - NC
00:33:096(5) - ^
00:36:846(1) - i suggest that u move it somewhere else because this circle is under the slider and it doesnt look nice IMO, but keep the same jump movement.
00:39:096(6) - NC
00:51:096(5) - ^
Ozzy:
No problems here
this is the best i can do. star and GL
General:
00:19:596 - get rid of that timing point because the timing point be4 that has the same bpm
Easy:
00:03:732(3) - *nazi* x:228 y:284 so it could be easier for beginners from there fix the spacing
00:17:596(1,1) - find some way to fix this because beginners will hav a tough time getting to that slider after the spinner is done
00:22:596(1,2) - replace these 2 for a slider
Normal:
00:01:914(4,1) - spacing unless u did this on purpose
00:49:221(4) - *nazi* 1 grid right(no distance snap) so that itd align to (1)
01:08:346(6) - NC
Vicho:
00:01:914(5) - NC
00:05:095(5) - ^
00:29:158(5) - ^
00:39:658(4) - ^
00:45:471(4) - ^
00:48:096(5) - ^
Rika:
00:05:095(5) - NC
00:33:096(5) - ^
00:36:846(1) - i suggest that u move it somewhere else because this circle is under the slider and it doesnt look nice IMO, but keep the same jump movement.
00:39:096(6) - NC
00:51:096(5) - ^
Ozzy:
No problems here
this is the best i can do. star and GL
Huh, don't. This point fixes the offset.Byakugan249 wrote:
General:
00:19:596 - get rid of that timing point because the timing point be4 that has the same bpm
Topic Starter
thanks wcx's mod and star ~wcx19911123 wrote:
SPOILERfrom my queue
[General]
01:28:221 - I think spinner end at here is better <fixed
[Easy]
AR+1?
00:14:641 - add a finish here ? volume down a bit
00:24:846 (4) - start at 00:24:658 - is better , add clap at start and end <fixed
00:34:221 - add clap<fixed
00:46:221 - ^<fixed
00:59:721 - ^<fixed
01:01:408 (5) - this slider is vocal off , don't repeat a slider at blue beat line..
01:03:846 (2,3,4) - I suggest change this to a repeat sldier , or it is too hard for newbies imo
01:07:971 - clap<fixed
01:08:721 - ^<fixed
01:21:096 (1) - end at 01:21:658 - with finish ?<fixed
01:22:596 (2) - ^<fixed
01:27:096 (1) - this spinner is tooooo short for newbies..I suggest delete 01:26:721 (4) - and spinner start at 01:26:346 -
[Rika]
00:17:368 (1,1) - same as Vicho diff <fixed
00:36:846 (1,2,3) - this jump is too huge.. I strongly suggest reduce the spacing here <change pattern
00:44:908 (1,2) - move nc to 2 , much easier to read the pattern<fixed
00:46:408 - add a note? I think here shouldn't be empty<fixed
00:47:908 (1,2) - move nc to 2<fixed
01:03:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - jump too huge .. orz
01:21:658 (8,9) - slider first and circle later , better rhyme imo
that's all
good luck :3
thanks Agnes's mod ~Agnes wrote:
SPOILER[General]
Nothing to poke at.
[Easy]
A suggestion.
01:27:096 (1) - Extend it to the next white tick, instead of having it end at a red tick?
[Rika]
Couple of issues.
00:44:908 (1,2) - Combos should be swapped, so it could be less confusing.<fixed
00:47:908 (1,2) - Should be spaced out.
01:27:096 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy's spinner.<fixed
Overall, nice job.
Thanks Odaril's good timing change it ~Odaril wrote:
SPOILERThe timing is off, indeed.
- offset 00075 -- BPM 66,000
- offset 14583 -- BPM 66,000
- offset 15975 -- BPM 66,000
- offset 19175 -- BPM 160,000
- offset 19570 -- BPM 160,000
Thanks ~ Andrea's mod ~osuplayer111 wrote:
SPOILER[Easy]
00:11:005 (3) - New combo.<<fixed
00:53:158 (4) - ^<<fixed
00:55:408 (1) - Sounds too powerful imo.
01:27:096 (1) - This spinner is kinda short for an Easy difficulty.<<fixed
[Rika]
01:17:158 (7) - New combo.<<fixed
Good job to all of you, guys.
Thanks mod and star ~ but no change ~Byakugan249 wrote:
SPOILERYo modding this map because of ur request
General:
00:19:596 - get rid of that timing point because the timing point be4 that has the same bpm
Easy:
00:03:732(3) - *nazi* x:228 y:284 so it could be easier for beginners from there fix the spacing
00:17:596(1,1) - find some way to fix this because beginners will hav a tough time getting to that slider after the spinner is done
00:22:596(1,2) - replace these 2 for a slider
Rika:
00:05:095(5) - NC
00:33:096(5) - ^
00:36:846(1) - i suggest that u move it somewhere else because this circle is under the slider and it doesnt look nice IMO, but keep the same jump movement.
00:39:096(6) - NC
00:51:096(5) - ^
this is the best i can do. star and GL
ohh thats why its there. i see it now. shouldve looked over again be4 saying this.Odaril wrote:
Huh, don't. This point fixes the offset.Byakugan249 wrote:
General:
00:19:596 - get rid of that timing point because the timing point be4 that has the same bpm
Topic Starter
Update ~
OKay let see another Kitamura Eri - Shirushi (TV Size)
[Geno]
The timing section were Wrong =[
The first time I help the other test the time
66.000 / 99
66.000 / 14599
66.000 / 15993
160.000 / 19195
160.000 / 19600
I dont know whether. It is the BPM's problem or the offset, but I test the new offset for you. Hope you change it
[Ozzy] Isnt that crazy LOL
01:01:382 (4-1st) - Finish?
01:13:382 (7-1St) - Finish?
Thats all ORZ that perfect ~~~~
[Rika]
00:15:975 (4) - Suggest to new combo. Coz the timing section was changed
[All]
Nice ^^
STAR and good luck
[Geno]
The timing section were Wrong =[
The first time I help the other test the time
66.000 / 99
66.000 / 14599
66.000 / 15993
160.000 / 19195
160.000 / 19600
I dont know whether. It is the BPM's problem or the offset, but I test the new offset for you. Hope you change it
[Ozzy] Isnt that crazy LOL
01:01:382 (4-1st) - Finish?
01:13:382 (7-1St) - Finish?
Thats all ORZ that perfect ~~~~
[Rika]
00:15:975 (4) - Suggest to new combo. Coz the timing section was changed
[All]
Nice ^^
STAR and good luck
Climbb's
the timing is different of this diff
00:19:175this red line is lacked
Vicho
00:12:802 (6) - hmm...the slider end.......
that's all~ don't kd this post since I check it on AIBat
the timing is different of this diff
00:19:175this red line is lacked
Vicho
00:12:802 (6) - hmm...the slider end.......
that's all~ don't kd this post since I check it on AIBat
star!
Topic Starter
update ~
As I promised, here is a mod:
I think you might want to try different combo colors just because song and video don't exactly give a dark blue and red vibe. I think maybe a snow blue and something else?
Easy:
Normal/Aesthetics
00:21:070 (2,2) - overlap already T_T (I don't like how most overlaps appear aestheetically , so if you are wondering the reason about why I complain overlaps, just assume I think it is aesthetically unappealing)
Combo:
00:03:711 (3) - new combo to make all the combos in the beginning be 4 white ticks long
Normal:
Normal/Aesthetics:
00:46:570 (4,2) - overlap
Combos:
I am really lost as to what your combos are following, esp following the first spinner
For example, if you were followin the lyrics after the first spinner
00:22:570 (3) - new combo here instead of at 00:24:070 (1)
00:28:570 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:22:570 (3)
Till the second spinner I guess this is fine
Still, there are plenty of other points which I was confused by so I advise you check your combos over.
Vicho:
Combos:
01:01:382 (1) and 01:13:382 (5) - change one of these 2 areas to have their combos consistent
Rika:
Normal/Aesthetics:
00:37:382 (4,2) - overlap (I would probably make 00:37:945 (2) a horizontal reflection of 00:36:632 (4))
00:51:632 (6,7) - overlap (it is the only one in this combo that actually overlaps the previous note)
01:04:195 (7,8) - after having the rest of the combo be entirely large jumps, these smaller jumps that were in the same combo felt weird imo
01:14:882 (1,2,3,4) - I would probably change the order of these 2 notes so 1,2 aren't covered by the 300s from 01:13:757 (6,7)
Combos:
00:02:802 (5) and 00:10:074 (1) - make the combos consistent between these 2
Almost all the other combos are by pattern, so I won't post anymore here
Ozzy:
Normal/Aesthetics: (Some of the jumps in this diff felt completely random, so I am going to point them out, but it is up to you to decide to change them)
00:11:893 (5) - It doesn't look that great when notes touch the hp bar since it just looks like an ugly overlap that won't fade away
00:30:632 (8,1) - What in the music is supposed to suggest a jump this large?
00:42:632 (5,6) - I would probably tone down this jump a bit just because this is probably one of the largest jumps int eh whole song yet it is not the most epic part of the song (it might be the hardest, it seems harder than the ending to me)
01:13:382 (7) - the weak curves on this slider make the slider not look that great, I would suggest using a different shape altogether (use a 3 for cubed if you want to use something similar)
01:14:882 (8,1) - another surprising jump (probably better if 1 and 2 switch positions)
01:16:570 (1) - touches hp bar T_T
Climbb's Taiko Oni:
Why are you missing the first 160BPM timing section?
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Not a bad mapset overall. If you really want a bubble, I guess I will probably want a full remod later because I was unsure of a few things in this post xD. I guess anything else I have to say will be told to you when I talk to you online.
I think you might want to try different combo colors just because song and video don't exactly give a dark blue and red vibe. I think maybe a snow blue and something else?
Easy:
Normal/Aesthetics
00:21:070 (2,2) - overlap already T_T (I don't like how most overlaps appear aestheetically , so if you are wondering the reason about why I complain overlaps, just assume I think it is aesthetically unappealing)
Combo:
00:03:711 (3) - new combo to make all the combos in the beginning be 4 white ticks long
Normal:
Normal/Aesthetics:
00:46:570 (4,2) - overlap
Combos:
I am really lost as to what your combos are following, esp following the first spinner
For example, if you were followin the lyrics after the first spinner
00:22:570 (3) - new combo here instead of at 00:24:070 (1)
00:28:570 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:22:570 (3)
Till the second spinner I guess this is fine
Still, there are plenty of other points which I was confused by so I advise you check your combos over.
Vicho:
Combos:
01:01:382 (1) and 01:13:382 (5) - change one of these 2 areas to have their combos consistent
Rika:
Normal/Aesthetics:
00:37:382 (4,2) - overlap (I would probably make 00:37:945 (2) a horizontal reflection of 00:36:632 (4))
00:51:632 (6,7) - overlap (it is the only one in this combo that actually overlaps the previous note)
01:04:195 (7,8) - after having the rest of the combo be entirely large jumps, these smaller jumps that were in the same combo felt weird imo
01:14:882 (1,2,3,4) - I would probably change the order of these 2 notes so 1,2 aren't covered by the 300s from 01:13:757 (6,7)
Combos:
00:02:802 (5) and 00:10:074 (1) - make the combos consistent between these 2
Almost all the other combos are by pattern, so I won't post anymore here
Ozzy:
Normal/Aesthetics: (Some of the jumps in this diff felt completely random, so I am going to point them out, but it is up to you to decide to change them)
00:11:893 (5) - It doesn't look that great when notes touch the hp bar since it just looks like an ugly overlap that won't fade away
00:30:632 (8,1) - What in the music is supposed to suggest a jump this large?
00:42:632 (5,6) - I would probably tone down this jump a bit just because this is probably one of the largest jumps int eh whole song yet it is not the most epic part of the song (it might be the hardest, it seems harder than the ending to me)
01:13:382 (7) - the weak curves on this slider make the slider not look that great, I would suggest using a different shape altogether (use a 3 for cubed if you want to use something similar)
01:14:882 (8,1) - another surprising jump (probably better if 1 and 2 switch positions)
01:16:570 (1) - touches hp bar T_T
Climbb's Taiko Oni:
Why are you missing the first 160BPM timing section?
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Not a bad mapset overall. If you really want a bubble, I guess I will probably want a full remod later because I was unsure of a few things in this post xD. I guess anything else I have to say will be told to you when I talk to you online.
Hey there, Climbb. I have a few things to suggest.
d = red, k = blue, D = red finisher, K = blue finisher.
[climbb's Taiko Oni]
Increase hit volume to 80 <--- that's a must do.
00:00:529 (3) - change to d
00:01:665 (7) - ^
00:02:347 (9) - ^
00:04:165 (13) - ^
00:05:529 (18) - ^
00:05:756 (19) - ^ (so much blue @.@)
01:08:976 is kiai supposed to turn off here?
01:12:070 (372) - change to d (sounds better imo)
That's all I could find~
Flow 4/5
Patterns 3/5
Creativity 3/5
Overall 4/5
Very nice map, Climbb. as always~
Good luck~ :3
d = red, k = blue, D = red finisher, K = blue finisher.
[climbb's Taiko Oni]
Increase hit volume to 80 <--- that's a must do.
00:00:529 (3) - change to d
00:01:665 (7) - ^
00:02:347 (9) - ^
00:04:165 (13) - ^
00:05:529 (18) - ^
00:05:756 (19) - ^ (so much blue @.@)
01:08:976 is kiai supposed to turn off here?
01:12:070 (372) - change to d (sounds better imo)
That's all I could find~
Flow 4/5
Patterns 3/5
Creativity 3/5
Overall 4/5
Very nice map, Climbb. as always~
Good luck~ :3
Topic Starter
update ~
star!Quick remod, and I'll check timing soon, (a little sleepy right now)
(Please no kds)
Easy: fine
Normal:
Normal/Aesthetics:
00:46:570 (4) and 00:48:445 (2) - sry, I meant overlap of these 2 notes last time, sorry for the confusion
01:13:382 (3) - this slider looks a little strange with it being the only slider with a red anchor point in the entire map
Vicho:
Normal/Aesthetics:
00:05:984 (3) - (Nazi) This note follows the 1,2 a little better if moved down and right a bit
Rika:
I still want 00:51:632 (6,7) and 01:04:195 (7,8) changed, but if you really insist I'll let you go on those 2
Ozzy: fine
Climbb's Taiko Oni: fine
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Remind me to do a timing check to make sure everything is fine, and I should be able to give a bubble afterward.
(Please no kds)
Easy: fine
Normal:
Normal/Aesthetics:
00:46:570 (4) and 00:48:445 (2) - sry, I meant overlap of these 2 notes last time, sorry for the confusion
01:13:382 (3) - this slider looks a little strange with it being the only slider with a red anchor point in the entire map
Vicho:
Normal/Aesthetics:
00:05:984 (3) - (Nazi) This note follows the 1,2 a little better if moved down and right a bit
Rika:
I still want 00:51:632 (6,7) and 01:04:195 (7,8) changed, but if you really insist I'll let you go on those 2
Ozzy: fine
Climbb's Taiko Oni: fine
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Remind me to do a timing check to make sure everything is fine, and I should be able to give a bubble afterward.
no change sryblissfulyoshi wrote:
Normal:
Normal/Aesthetics:
00:46:570 (4) and 00:48:445 (2) - sry, I meant overlap of these 2 notes last time, sorry for the confusion oh, that will ruin the spacing so no change
01:13:382 (3) - this slider looks a little strange with it being the only slider with a red anchor point in the entire map yea that's why i left it there for variety
Me and rika went to talk about timing and got:
66.00/91
160.00/19215
160.00/19598
I originally had timing section at 79994 because the bass at the end sounds late, but we later decided that the timing section didn't feel right, so we only used the 3 sections above. For the next person who checks this, make sure to check that the drums at the end fit for you. With that, here is my weak bubble.
66.00/91
160.00/19215
160.00/19598
I originally had timing section at 79994 because the bass at the end sounds late, but we later decided that the timing section didn't feel right, so we only used the 3 sections above. For the next person who checks this, make sure to check that the drums at the end fit for you. With that, here is my weak bubble.
Topic Starter
thanks bliss chan XD ~
[Rika]
01:17:160 (7) - You forgot to add a New combo here.
[Ozzy]
00:56:066 (1) - Silence this spinner or add a whistle in it, right now it doesn't follow anything.
Timing seems pretty good to me!
EDIT: Ranked~
01:17:160 (7) - You forgot to add a New combo here.
[Ozzy]
00:56:066 (1) - Silence this spinner or add a whistle in it, right now it doesn't follow anything.
Timing seems pretty good to me!
EDIT: Ranked~
Topic Starter
Thanks Andrea ~
Congratz ~
(o'д')ノ☆ﾟ*｡Congratu★lations｡*ﾟ☆ヽ('д'o)
吃吃吃~
Gratz! >w<
OMG so quick. Gratz on ANOTHER ranked map
You get your maps ranked so fast ;~;
Gz tho.
Gz tho.
Topic Starter
Thanks everyone ~
Orz..好快。。恭喜了