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James
i uploaded one like this but no one helped me :(
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happy30
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DawnII
[Normal]
00:19:79 (5) - Move this slider back 1/4 and extend it out 1/4.
00:53:82 (4) - Ends too close to (5).
01:02:50 (5) - Too far from (6).
01:03:26 (7) - Too far from (8).
01:08:44 (5) - Ends too far from (1).
01:09:81 (2) - Too close to (3).
01:10:88 (4) - Too far from (1).
01:46:14 (2) - Too close to (3).
02:00:36 (1) - Too far from (2).
02:00:98 (2) - Too close to (3).
02:11:39 (13) - Awkward, consider losing the repeat.
02:31:34 (3) - Too far from (4).

I'll look at Hard a bit later.
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happy30
Thank you, btw don't mod insane yet, the last part is too easy and dumb. I'll change that first
DawnII
[Hard]
00:12:53 (2) - Ends too far from (3).
00:13:14 (3) - Ends too close to (4).
00:13:76 (4) - Ends too far from (5).
00:14:53 (1) - Ends too close to (1).
00:19:48 (1) - Ends too far from (1).
00:34:78 (2) - Too far from (1).
00:56:71 (2) - Ends too far from (1).
00:58:69 (4) - Same as above.
01:00:06 (2) - Ends too far from (3).
01:12:40 (3) - Ends too far from (4).
01:32:38 (4) - Ends too far from (5).
01:36:71 (3) - Ends too far from (4).

I'll just add this in so you can think about it.
[Insane]
01:47:69 (6) - This can end a little further from (7), but doesn't have to IMO.
02:22:66 (7) - I would stretch this out 1/8 longer, to the white tick. Sounds a bit better to me, even if it doesn't hit on the vocals.
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happy30
Im not sure if I did everything correctly, but I've updated hard :o

Thanks. I'll update insane tomorrow
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happy30
Insane updated :D
DawnII
[Hard]
02:08:34 (8) - A bit too close to (7). Move it down a little bit.

[Insane]
01:47:69 (6) - This overlaps (7). You can leave it if you want, it's not that bad.

Other than that very good job.
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happy30
Thanks!
Both are fixed. :D
re-uploaded
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happy30
bump
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happy30
why has normal 4 stars? :o
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happy30
WTB BAT.

Not too expensive please..
mrtn
Pretty fun map although (no offence) I like James' version better (by a long shot)
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happy30
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happy30
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mrtn
why graveyard?
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happy30

mrtn wrote:

why graveyard?
Or else I'll keep bumping this map :( , and I have better maps which I want to upload
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happy30
... Ok I don't want to see my map killed :(

~ I hope for comments on my map and maybe for things I can change.
m980
Hi!

I think overall this map is good. So..

Bubble.
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happy30
Thanks for bubbling!
m980
Rebubbled since bubble disappeared fo' some reason.

Don't edit the opening post from the forums please.
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happy30
:oops:

Thanks for rebubbling, it won't happen again :o
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happy30
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happy30
It's Friday again. :D
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happy30
I made a new difficulty
I dunno If I should add it >.< you can download it here:

Download: Tamaki Nami - Brightdown (happy30) [NOTE MADNESS!!!].osu
Saturos
Insane:

02:13:82 (1,1) - You have the endpoint on the first overlapping with the start point on the second. This needs to be changed. I don't like the sound of it repeating on 1/8's, either. >>

Temporary bubble poppage.

Also, go ahead and include that new difficulty. It's rather hit circle heavy, but it's by no means unrankable.
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happy30

Saturos wrote:

Insane:

02:13:82 (1,1) - You have the endpoint on the first overlapping with the start point on the second. This needs to be changed. I don't like the sound of it repeating on 1/8's, either. >>

Temporary bubble poppage.

Also, go ahead and include that new difficulty. It's rather hit circle heavy, but it's by no means unrankable.
Ok, I removed the repeating 1/8's and I've added the difficulty.

Edit- changed the difficult names
2nd Edit - added new pic for Crazy
kingcobra52
Normal:

Lower stack leniency under song setup > advanced. This'll make your stacks look cleaner.

01:03:87 (10) - Put a break after this.
01:38:41 (9) - See above.
02:32:86 (6) - Again.

Hard,Insane,Crazy: No problems. :)
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happy30

kingcobra52 wrote:

Normal:

Lower stack leniency under song setup > advanced. This'll make your stacks look cleaner.

01:03:87 (10) - Put a break after this.
01:38:41 (9) - See above.
02:32:86 (6) - Again.

Hard,Insane,Crazy: No problems. :)
Thanks.
it's fixed now :)

Download: Motorhead vs. Noisia - Ace Of Spades vs. Groundhog (Mr Color) [DJFuta].osu
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happy30
pyrobug
Afraid I can't really offer helpful technical feedback, but I like this map. Really fun, good timing, interesting patterns. Consider it bumped.
kingcobra52
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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happy30
Thanks. I remade Normal :)
Tapdancingmetroid
Hard:
00:48:948 - Move this note (2) a tiny bit to the left
00:54:126 - move this note a bit farther away (6)
Crazy:
00:39:263 - Suddenly changing from stacks of 2 notes to single notes is incredibly confusing, especially considering how fast these notes are appearing. Try making that combo more intuitive.
01:57:895 - Same as above
Also on the crazy difficulty, the dark red notes are pretty difficult to see against the background. Please change that combo color to something a bit more visible.
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happy30
ty, It's fixed now.
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happy30
bump ...

Added a Speed x2 pic for Crazy
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happy30
It says "sorry this beatmap does not exist" when I host [crazy] on osu! multiplayer
I did some full submissions but it didnt help.

also, what is this file doing in my folder, and how did it come there? :o
It creates itself again when I delete it
*link to pic*
Mogsy
Before Mogsy mods this, he'd like to bring this to your attention (referring to myself in the third person? Okay):

When I got this off of osu, I only got Hard and Crazy. I had to get the .osus for Normal and Insane. Please fix this.
Dangaard
I edited the hitsounds of Crazy. :D

Download: Tamaki Nami - Brightdown (happy30) [CrazyEdit].osu
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happy30

Mogsworth wrote:

Before Mogsy mods this, he'd like to bring this to your attention (referring to myself in the third person? Okay):

When I got this off of osu, I only got Hard and Crazy. I had to get the .osus for Normal and Insane. Please fix this.
how...? omg this beatmap is cursed ><
It's fixed now :o

and Dangaard your hitsounds are awesome !! thnx.
Mogsy
Normal:
-02:15:96 (5) - I feel like this should be straight, but eh, unless it's slanted purposely (which would be weird considering how linear the rest of the phrase after it is), please straighten it out.
-02:20:83 (5) - New Combo mark goes here
-02:21:14 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark
-02:25:71 (5) - New Combo mark
-02:26:01 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark
-02:30:58 (5) - New Combo mark
-02:30:88 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark

Hard:
-00:14:53 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark (it's still part of the last phrase, musically)
-00:19:48 (1) - ^
-00:24:42 (1) - ^
-00:29:37 (1) - ^
-00:34:31 (1) - ^
-00:48:64 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:51:08 (1) - ^
-00:53:51 (1) - ^
-00:56:25 (1) - ^
-01:44:75 (1) - ^
-01:45:52 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:48:00 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:52:94 (1) - ^
-01:59:59 (1) - ^
-02:00:36 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:01:29 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:15:96 (7) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:16:41 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:18:39 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:18:85 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:20:83 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:21:29 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.

Nothing wrong with Hard structurally-speaking (that I saw), just fix these numbering things. It's really not as bad as it looks, it's just the same problem over and over again.

Crazy:
-Not too fond of the ending speed x2. Oh well, it's correct.

Starred.
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happy30
Fix'd
Mogsy
Hope you don't mind Mogsy being a nazi-mod, because that's exactly what he's doing.

Crazy:
-01:51:71 (5) - Line this up properly (perfect diagonal, fitting with the rest of the map)
-01:55:11 (5,6) - Put these in a perfect diagonal between 4 and 7, to fit, again, with the way the map appears to have been constructed.
-01:55:42 (7) - New Combo mark
-02:25:10 (6) - Line up the endpoint of this with 2 and the start with 5.
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happy30

Mogsworth wrote:

Hope you don't mind Mogsy being a nazi-mod, because that's exactly what he's doing.

Crazy:
-01:51:71 (5) - Line this up properly (perfect diagonal, fitting with the rest of the map) Fixed
-01:55:11 (5,6) - Put these in a perfect diagonal between 4 and 7, to fit, again, with the way the map appears to have been constructed. Fixed
-01:55:42 (7) - New Combo mark Fixed
-02:25:10 (6) - Line up the endpoint of this with 2 and the start with 5. Slider is too short :( Half-Fixed
Mogsy
It looks good enough now. Bubble.
foulcoon
Soooooo close....


And yet so far because I have to pop this bubblez. Re-enable stack leniency on Normal and everything will be perfect.
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happy30

foulcoon wrote:

Soooooo close....


And yet so far because I have to pop this bubblez. Re-enable stack leniency on Normal and everything will be perfect.
done. :D
foulcoon
One more thing to pick on..

Insane
02:10:02 (6) - This slider is unacceptable,the overlap is hardly visible.

Fix this issue and everything else seems good, but I'm still not positive on the timing...

Looks good, bubbled.

@nextBAT: please verify timing again before ranking
kingcobra52
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mrtn
Finally it's ranked. Congrats happy :). After all the bumping finally ranked ;).
Elyk_old
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