Breeze wrote:

General

1. [My Best Friend] diff. has turned off letterbox while other 2 diff. didn't, since you have made SB, I'll suggest you disable letterbox to all diff.

SB

1. 8.png - "强" looked different to other characters, I think that's because you used Chinese but not Japanese, in Japanese, it should be "強"
2. 4.png - ^, "颜" should be "顔"
3. 9.png - ^,"见" should be "見"
4. 13.png - You are missing a "響" character between "に" and "い"
5. 16.png - "远" should be "遠", and you're missing a character "離" between "く" and "れ"
6. 17.png - "闻" should be "聞"
7. 18.png - "叶" should be "葉"
8. 21.png - "无" should be "無"
9. 27.png - "远" should be "遠"
   I hope you've saved PSD file so that you could fix this easy ><
   The font is beautiful, may I aks for this font?
10. 03:49:268 - I feel the last heart effect in front of black2.png seems better
11. And you can end this SB earlier so that player no need to wait some time before score screen appear, well, skip would work here so it's not a big deal

Bless' Best Friend

1. 01:19:574 (2) - Consider adding a finish sound here

Beren's Best Friend

1. 00:09:472 (1,2) - Weird spacing :/
2. 02:59:982 (4) - Consider adding a finish sound here

Nice map and sweet SB
Call me back for a recheck when you have any reply, please

Breeze wrote:

Bubbled

Garven wrote:

[Bless' Best Friend]
00:44:370 (1,2) - I am wary of this stack since it's on an odd beat and is the easiest difficulty of the set.
01:08:553 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - <3 the motion of this
02:31:207 - All these really short breaks are kinda dumb. You can all the HP back on each of the new combo sliders anyway. Id' just remove them.
03:05:798 (4,5) - Down and right one grid level 4 to adjust for stacking
03:27:227 (4,1,2) - Going from a 5-repeat short slider to two 3-repeat ones is kinda disorienting - especially at the end of the song. Remember, this is the easiest of the set.

[Beren's Best Friend]
Tick rate 2 sounds much better
HP Drain, OD +1
01:23:247 (9,1,2,3,4) - I didn't really feel the need for jumps here
01:41:921 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:48:043 (1) - Maybe start this pattern closer to the center to aid in recovery? Kinda tough for this level of difficulty otherwise.
02:31:207 - Same comments from Bless' difficulty. I'd get rid of the short breaks.
03:25:696 (3) - This slider was kind of a surprise to see. I really don't recommend having so much of it (plus the repeat) covered by the previous slider.

[My Best Friend]
02:31:207 - Same comments from Bless' and Beren's difficulty. I'd get rid of the short breaks.
02:48:196 (1) - Strange having a finish on this

Good stuff~

Garven wrote:

Rebubbled~