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DJ Genki VS Camellia feat. moimoi - YELL! [OsuMania]

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Div
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 3 January 2018 at 11:51:04 PM

Artist: DJ Genki VS Camellia feat. moimoi
Title: YELL!
Tags: mayumi morinaga senya happy hardcore revolution of happy? #01 comic market コミックマーケット 91 cametek
BPM: 170
Filesize: 10001kb
Play Time: 05:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. SHOUT! - 4Key (4.8 stars, 3694 notes)
Download: DJ Genki VS Camellia feat. moimoi - YELL!
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yes ready for rank
rip REEEEEE
Chilly-
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Chilly-
Mod req from PMs
yes
00:30:346 - Double here?
00:31:052 - And is this double emphasizing the vocal? Cause if that's the case then you can keep it.
00:38:993 (38993|2,38993|3) - You sure this should be a double? I cant hear any strong sound on it, maybe that is just me though.
01:13:052 (73052|2) - Maybe you could move this to 4? Since all the other ones in this section doesnt have a note on the same column as the incoming LN.
01:24:875 (84875|1,84964|2) - This is just a suggestion but maybe you could make these 2 doubles and make a jumptrill here?
01:33:346 - LN here on column 4 and remove 01:33:346 (93346|2) - this one maybe? Cause i can hear the same exact sound as here 01:32:993 (92993|0) - .
01:49:758 (109758|2,109846|2) - 2 jacks right before an LN can get pretty uncomfortable and weird to play. would recommend moving it to column 4.
03:00:081 (180081|2,180081|3,180169|1,180169|0,180258|3,180258|2) - I think these should be singles instead.
03:54:875 (234875|1,235052|1,235228|1,235405|1,235581|1,235758|1,235934|1) - I'm aware that this map has alot of anchors, but this one way worse than the other ones.
Didnt find many problems tbh, hot map : )))
Topic Starter
Div

Chilly- wrote:

Mod req from PMs
yes
00:30:346 - Double here? yes
00:31:052 - And is this double emphasizing the vocal? Cause if that's the case then you can keep it. piano im pre sure, maybe im going deaf tho idk ?_?
00:38:993 (38993|2,38993|3) - You sure this should be a double? I cant hear any strong sound on it, maybe that is just me though. fixed
01:13:052 (73052|2) - Maybe you could move this to 4? Since all the other ones in this section doesnt have a note on the same column as the incoming LN.the ln was in the wrong place w rearranged some stuff around here
01:24:875 (84875|1,84964|2) - This is just a suggestion but maybe you could make these 2 doubles and make a jumptrill here? ye im dumb
01:33:346 - LN here on column 4 and remove 01:33:346 (93346|2) - this one maybe? Cause i can hear the same exact sound as here 01:32:993 (92993|0) - . added an ln for this ye but didn't remove the other one (i think this was changed in the update you didn't do so its diff columns smh)
01:49:758 (109758|2,109846|2) - 2 jacks right before an LN can get pretty uncomfortable and weird to play. would recommend moving it to column 4. this is intentional for pitch, it should be fine i think
03:00:081 (180081|2,180081|3,180169|1,180169|0,180258|3,180258|2) - I think these should be singles instead. this is weird why did i do this
03:54:875 (234875|1,235052|1,235228|1,235405|1,235581|1,235758|1,235934|1) - I'm aware that this map has alot of anchors, but this one way worse than the other ones. fuck
Didnt find many problems tbh, hot map : )))
RoroTheDeer
IRC mod yes very nice

autism mod
12:45 Insp1r3: apparently you're sending me a map
12:45 Insp1r3: :thinking:
12:45 Div: fuck
12:45 *Div is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1455095 DJ Genki VS Camellia feat. moimoi - YELL!]
12:45 Div: thanks xo
12:51 Insp1r3: i like
12:51 Div: hot
12:51 Insp1r3: but there's some things i want to point out
12:53 Insp1r3: 01:31:493 (91493|1,91493|2) - double in the middle of a vibro REEE
12:54 Div: hell ye
12:54 Div: ur lucky it doesn't jack >:)
12:54 Insp1r3: 01:49:758 (109758|2,109846|2,109934|2) - when most other mini jacks are two notes long, this isn't consistent
12:54 Insp1r3: 01:55:669 (115669|1,115846|1,116022|1,116199|1,116375|1,116552|1) - nice anchor LuL
12:55 Div: sound is 3 so jack is 3
12:55 Div: fuck another one
12:55 Insp1r3: 02:13:052 (133052|1,133052|2,133052|3) - this triple was mapped as a quad here - 02:07:405 (127405|3,127405|1,127405|0,127405|2) -
12:56 Insp1r3: 02:16:405 (136405|0,136405|1) - 02:16:714 (136714|0,136714|1) - pls no
12:57 Insp1r3: but it makes sense so you can choose to keep or remove them if you want so /shrug
12:57 Insp1r3: 02:17:552 (137552|0,137552|1,137640|3,137640|2) - i don't hear any sounds that justify doubles here tbh
12:58 Insp1r3: 02:41:287 (161287|0,161640|0,161993|0,162346|0,162699|0,163052|0,163405|0,163758|0) - spaced anchor but it's there either way
12:58 Insp1r3: 02:46:581 (166581|3,166934|3,167287|3,167640|3,167993|3,168346|3,168699|3,169052|3,169405|3,169758|3,170111|3) - and another one
12:59 Div: pre sure those ones are fine
12:59 Insp1r3: 03:03:875 (183875|2,183875|0,183875|1,183875|3) - i don't think this sound warrants a quad, i think a double should be fine
13:00 Div: ok yes autism
13:01 Insp1r3: 04:10:758 (250758|0,250846|1,250934|3,250934|2) - these have the same sounds, so maybe make it a mini jumptrill
13:03 Insp1r3: other than this
13:03 Insp1r3: very nice
13:03 Insp1r3: i post on forums :ok_hand:
Topic Starter
Div

Insp1r3 wrote:

IRC mod yes very nice

autism mod
12:45 Insp1r3: apparently you're sending me a map
12:45 Insp1r3: :thinking:
12:45 Div: fuck
12:45 *Div is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1455095 DJ Genki VS Camellia feat. moimoi - YELL!]
12:45 Div: thanks xo
12:51 Insp1r3: i like
12:51 Div: hot
12:51 Insp1r3: but there's some things i want to point out
12:53 Insp1r3: 01:31:493 (91493|1,91493|2) - double in the middle of a vibro REEE
12:54 Div: hell ye
12:54 Div: ur lucky it doesn't jack >:)
12:54 Insp1r3: 01:49:758 (109758|2,109846|2,109934|2) - when most other mini jacks are two notes long, this isn't consistent
12:54 Insp1r3: 01:55:669 (115669|1,115846|1,116022|1,116199|1,116375|1,116552|1) - nice anchor LuL
12:55 Div: sound is 3 so jack is 3
12:55 Div: fuck another one
12:55 Insp1r3: 02:13:052 (133052|1,133052|2,133052|3) - this triple was mapped as a quad here - 02:07:405 (127405|3,127405|1,127405|0,127405|2) -
12:56 Insp1r3: 02:16:405 (136405|0,136405|1) - 02:16:714 (136714|0,136714|1) - pls no
12:57 Insp1r3: but it makes sense so you can choose to keep or remove them if you want so /shrug
12:57 Insp1r3: 02:17:552 (137552|0,137552|1,137640|3,137640|2) - i don't hear any sounds that justify doubles here tbh
12:58 Insp1r3: 02:41:287 (161287|0,161640|0,161993|0,162346|0,162699|0,163052|0,163405|0,163758|0) - spaced anchor but it's there either way
12:58 Insp1r3: 02:46:581 (166581|3,166934|3,167287|3,167640|3,167993|3,168346|3,168699|3,169052|3,169405|3,169758|3,170111|3) - and another one
12:59 Div: pre sure those ones are fine
12:59 Insp1r3: 03:03:875 (183875|2,183875|0,183875|1,183875|3) - i don't think this sound warrants a quad, i think a double should be fine
13:00 Div: ok yes autism
13:01 Insp1r3: 04:10:758 (250758|0,250846|1,250934|3,250934|2) - these have the same sounds, so maybe make it a mini jumptrill
13:03 Insp1r3: other than this
13:03 Insp1r3: very nice
13:03 Insp1r3: i post on forums :ok_hand:
sex thank
MrAntagonizer
NM mod from my queue for a very (maybe) pretty boy.
|1|2|3|4|
bad diff name
First of all, get a better difficulty name. Fanfare sounds good to me.

01:31:405 (91405|3,91405|0,91493|1,91493|2) - Instead of chord trilling here, how about changing direction of the stream to emphasize this sound instead? Something a bit like this https://i.imgur.com/pKQAX8T.png
01:56:111 - Column 2 is getting wrecked in this second kiai please send a medic
02:07:317 (127317|2) - I assume this jacks because of the strong transition, but it may not fit
02:16:714 (136714|1,136714|0) - I see why you put a chord here but I don't think this sound actually happens here, so it might be best not to create a chord here and rather just continue the stairs. My ears may not work though.
02:21:875 - Put SVs here if you're going to shield reeeeeeeeee
02:28:140 - Since there's nothing else happening here, how about extending this LN to end on the same tick with its partner LN and moving them both to |1|2| and starting the stair from the right in |4|?
03:09:169 (189169|3,189346|2) - Just curious why you |4|3| trilled these
03:32:111 (212111|1,212287|1) - I understand why these are jacked 03:32:464 (212464|1,212464|0) - but why is this chord also in column 2
04:00:258 (240258|0) - Jacking this fits the sound here imo, unlike my third mod above
04:11:640 - You weren't satisfied with just column 2 but now column 3 is getting destroyed, you monster
04:32:243 (272243|3,272243|2) - Same as fourth mod
04:32:993 (272993|3,273081|0) - This LN is awkward imo , maybe replace it with a single?
04:32:993 (272993|3,273081|0,273169|1,273258|2,273434|0) - As a matter of fact this section feels like it's missing something
04:33:081 (273081|0,273169|1,273258|2) - This stair feels unnecessary since there is no sound on the white tick

Thanks for making streams that aren't bad

bye bye xo
Topic Starter
Div

MrAntagonizer wrote:

NM mod from my queue for a very (maybe) pretty boy.
|1|2|3|4|
bad diff name
First of all, get a better difficulty name. Fanfare sounds good to me. Fanfare doesn't really do much for me even after asking you about it but I'll keep it in mind incase I don't come up with anything better

01:31:405 (91405|3,91405|0,91493|1,91493|2) - Instead of chord trilling here, how about changing direction of the stream to emphasize this sound instead? Something a bit like this https://i.imgur.com/pKQAX8T.png there's no sounds for the (would be) yellow ticks to be mapped here
01:56:111 - Column 2 is getting wrecked in this second kiai please send a medic fuck, medic alerted
02:07:317 (127317|2) - I assume this jacks because of the strong transition, but it may not fit quad for the crash which should be fine considering the number of minijacks throughout the chart
02:16:714 (136714|1,136714|0) - I see why you put a chord here but I don't think this sound actually happens here, so it might be best not to create a chord here and rather just continue the stairs. My ears may not work though. I had this on the red tick to begin with but after comparing to the current ranked version turns out its on the yellow, which I agree sounds better
02:21:875 - Put SVs here if you're going to shield reeeeeeeeee these aren't shields they're ln jacks ?_?
02:28:140 - Since there's nothing else happening here, how about extending this LN to end on the same tick with its partner LN and moving them both to |1|2| and starting the stair from the right in |4|? the lns here are separate vocals with different pitch instead of the same vocal changing pitch which would be the reason to apply this so :<
03:09:169 (189169|3,189346|2) - Just curious why you |4|3| trilled these it's 1/2 snap so I wouldn't even call this trilled, plus it's consistent with 03:11:993 (191993|0,192169|1,192346|0) - so i'd say its fine
03:32:111 (212111|1,212287|1) - I understand why these are jacked 03:32:464 (212464|1,212464|0) - but why is this chord also in column 2 lack of a better option; I dont want 03:32:552 (212552|3) - to jack with the chord so this is as close as I can get while retaining some form of PR
04:00:258 (240258|0) - Jacking this fits the sound here imo, unlike my third mod above hot
04:11:640 - You weren't satisfied with just column 2 but now column 3 is getting destroyed, you monster fixing this gave me some kind of autism but i think its better atleast
04:32:243 (272243|3,272243|2) - Same as fourth mod same reply ^^
04:32:993 (272993|3,273081|0) - This LN is awkward imo , maybe replace it with a single? this should be okay although if someone else mentions it then I can change something
04:32:993 (272993|3,273081|0,273169|1,273258|2,273434|0) - As a matter of fact this section feels like it's missing something you're right there was a note missing at 04:33:346 -
04:33:081 (273081|0,273169|1,273258|2) - This stair feels unnecessary since there is no sound on the white tick this small section was actually just bad so I tweaked it a little it nicer now and makes more sense

Thanks for making streams that aren't bad

bye bye xo ox
Thanks for the mod pal
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