O hai, thanks for your request in the queue.
Now it's my task to mod your map. Keep in mind, that these are only suggestions.
There we go.First of all, I love this song somehow. It's so calm and tranquilizing. *sighs*
[General]I really needed to lol at the "Please SKIP" notification.
Anyway. I'd start mapping the song from 00:26:390 - on.[Storyboard]You should crop the
lngleadin.png as far as possible. I felt so free and did so.
So far so good, I also adjusted the SB-code in your storyboard to fix the now appearing size change. Just replace the already existing .osb
http://puu.sh/gb0R[morphina's easy]I'd rename this map to "morphina's normal". Since this isn't an Easy diff.I would also replace the whistle. Maybe you should find a custom hitsound for the normal-hitwhistle.wav
For this map, whistles are just too loud and were very annoying to me here.
00:48:936 (2) - some shape adjustments, maybe?
http://puu.sh/gb3Y416,128,48936,2,0,B|416:214|296:214|296:302,1,220,2|12
120,301,50390,2,0,B|119:214|239:214|239:127,1,220,2|12
00:51:845 (1,2,3,1) - maybe u should do this:
http://puu.sh/gb4y00:54:027 (1,2,3,4,1) - another readjustment.
http://puu.sh/gb5M195,78,54027,5,12
195,253,54754,2,0,B|139:273|91:233,1,110,2|0
8,206,55481,2,0,B|33:152|95:147,1,110,8|0
96,64,56208,2,0,B|142:24|198:44,1,110,2|0
261,107,56936,5,12
00:58:390 (3) -
http://puu.sh/gb81168,256,57663,1,2
343,256,58390,2,0,B|279:184|383:136|343:48,1,220,8|2
00:59:845 (1,2,3,4,1) - readjust/resnap some stuff to make it like this:
http://puu.sh/gb8Z 01:06:390 (1) - I'd unstack this one.
01:33:299 (1) - this overlay is ugly, maybe you find a better way?
01:34:027 (2) - another reshape?
272,224,94027,2,0,B|296:184|384:184|384:184|416:120,1,164.999995082617,0|2
01:36:208 (1) - ^
01:37:299 (2,3) - ugly overlay :<
02:27:118 (1,2,3) - please move the (3) and (4):
http://puu.sh/gbdO and then
http://puu.sh/gbe6[Hinova]At all, I don't like these edgy sliders. But this could be, because I think they are ugly in general.
But at all, most sliders are uneven and messy shaped. You should readjust the shapes to make them more even OR you should reshape many of them to create more variety.
When I mentioned, that the slider is strangely shaped, I don't really like to suggest a shape because I don't even know how it was intented to be.
00:51:118 (1,2,3,1,2) -
http://puu.sh/gbhe ?
01:14:390 (2,3) - this one looks messy - you should reshape the (2) or move the 3. I suggest the first option.
01:21:663 (4) - shape adjustment
336,120,81663,2,0,B|264:56|240:160|168:96,1,180
01:30:027 (3,4,5) -
http://puu.sh/gbpo ?
01:34:754 (1) - this slider is just not fitting with his shape in the general concept of such an edgy map.
01:39:845 (4,5) - remove (5) and add a return to (4)? plays way better.
01:40:572 (1,2,3,4) - do this maybe:
http://puu.sh/gbqy01:50:754 (1) - should be reshaped, too.
01:54:027 (1,2,3) -
http://puu.sh/gbqX ?
01:56:572 (4) - messy shape.
02:04:208 (2,3,4) - 02:04:208 (2,3,4) - ?
02:06:027 (2) - messy shape.
02:06:027 (2,3,4) - spacing.
02:10:027 (4) - messy shape.
02:12:572 (4) - ^
02:14:027 (1) - move the slider end point one grid up. (grid level 3)
02:16:936 (1) - messy shape.
02:21:299 (3) - ^
02:28:208 (4) - snap with shift-key to (3)
02:30:027 (2) - messy shaped. And move it a bit to the left.
At all, many patterns seem unadjusted and chaotic. Maybe you should try to move some of them to create a way more wonderful pattern (especially within the combos)
[Neon]This one is far better mapped. I like it. But some stuff was pretty disturbing. I try to point up most of them. Most of them are hitobject-timing stuff, some kick sliders were just not fitting to the music.
Also you should reduce spacing between objects with a 1/4 timing snap to each other. Some sliders need remastering to be perfect.
All in all, decent work. Keep it up.
01:04:208 (1,2,3) - u should use this timing.
01:08:936 (1,2,3) -
http://puu.sh/gbBI ?
01:20:572 (9) - messy shaped.
01:22:390 (5) - perfect the shape.
01:26:936 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing is wrong here. maybe do this?
http://puu.sh/gbCQ01:31:118 (1,2,3) - move them up a bit.
01:33:118 (2,3,4) - reduce distance spacing within the triplets (to x0.9 maybe?)
01:34:027 (1,2,3) - ^
01:38:936 (3) - perfect the shape.
01:44:027 (6) - move it down a bit?
01:49:481 (2,3,4) - this looks pretty messy. maybe you should move the 4 or think of anything better.
01:53:118 (3,4,5) -
http://puu.sh/gbEP ?
02:02:299 (2) - remove?
02:07:663 (3,4,5) - reduce spacing inbetween.
02:11:118 (1,2,3) -
http://puu.sh/gbFO ?
02:12:390 (6) - messy shaped.
02:24:118 (7,8) - reduce spacing.
02:27:118 (1,2,3,4,5) -
http://puu.sh/gbGp ?
02:30:390 (1,2,3) -
http://puu.sh/gbHk ? also hitsounds sound odd here, maybe you check this.
02:33:481 (2,3,4) - reduce spacing.
02:39:663 (10,2,3,4) - this pattern looks uneven to me.
[morphina's]Please name it "morphina's insane" or something. This name seems so incomplete to me ;___;All in all, the diff plays pretty strange. Some parts are overmapped. Let me point out stuff I've seen so far.
Same issue than in [Neon]. Reduce the spacing within 1/4 patterns.
I don't want to go too deep here because my playing skills are limited that I can't really decide on this map, if it's just me or if the pattern really plays strange.
00:51:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped.
01:03:481 (4,5) - inaccurate timing.
01:06:027 (2,3,4) - ugly overlay
01:09:663 (7) - move the 7 to the middle of 5 6 and 8
01:32:936 (3,1) - inaccurate timing.
http://puu.sh/gbOy01:35:208 - remove break.
01:36:208 (1) - end slider on white tick.
01:36:208 (1) - seems overmapped to me.
01:44:390 (8) - inaccurate timing.
01:47:845 (1) - end slider on white tick.
01:59:481 (1,2) - remaster this overlap.
02:01:299 (5,1) - unstack.
02:21:299 and ongoing - eww, this whistles. They are ugly on this song. ;__;
02:25:663 (1) - change slider direction to perfect the pattern.
02:31:663 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing!
That's all I like to mention. This map has potential. Just try to do your best to perfect every pattern and slider shape and I guess you'll get this to the next level.
Good luck!