ikari_kyon, thank you!
Some changes, expect finishes in Neon.
I think this varation sounds better ^ ^

updated

[General]
offset 48209 => 48214 I think..
Kiai time for each difficulty is different... keep them same

[Morphina]
01:18:390 (timing section) not needed, delete it
01:16:663 (3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217397 feels better for me
02:01:481 (1) - I don't think this is a good idea O.O
02:31:663 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - redo the pentagon shape = maye like this? :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217399

[Neon]
01:11:572 (timing section) not needed, delete it
01:19:754 (timing section) not needed, delete it
01:43:481 (timing section) not needed, delete it

[Hinova]

[Morphina's Easy]


Nice, Sorry I can't star I have no kudosu O.O//

Thank you!
Our offset seems better.
Some changes.

Kiai in my diffs the same now,
morphi`s diffs are guest diffs and have own kiai
updated

:3
wrote u some mod earlier~

Neon

I think this map is good as first map XD.

some suggestions to your placement:

for pattern like this: 01:00:572 (3,4), it's better to make them not touch each other like: or you can also do it like: if you want to keep the distance spacing. it looks much better while playing. there are a lot of them you can try to make some change (01:02:936 (2,3) ,01:07:845 (5,6,7,8),01:09:118 (2,3,4) and so on). just like to say do not rely too much on distance snap (in fact I use distance snap almost only for streams, most of time it's off)

01:16:208 (4) - place it in the same position as 01:14:754 (1) ?
02:30:390 - try rhythm like this: (02:32:208 (3) - this will be removed and you need to rethink the arrangement here)
02:35:299 (3) - 1/2 earlier and stack it with 02:34:936 (2) ?


morphina's

01:36:208 (1) - end it on white tick...blue tick here is weird to me...
01:36:754 (2) - lol this usage of this 3/4 repeat slider is totally wrong imo...where there is a drum should be a NOTE. just make them like
01:43:663 (1) - remove note
01:44:572 - this drum shouldn't be skipped. start the slider here and add a circle on 01:44:390
01:47:845 (1) - end it on white tick


Hinova

good distance snapped map though it's too boring to me...also the rhythm is too simple
but mod can't help cuz at the beginning this diff was designed to be like this...

01:48:936 (5) - new combo


morphina's easy

I think you use too much soft sample for the first and second last part...and the whistle in normal sample sounds really weird on them.I'd like to suggest simple hitsound in easy diff.

Sandpig, thank you!

just like to say do not rely too much on distance snap

In future, yes.

Some changes~
updated

Hi there ! Here is my Mod

General:

- Inconsistency in Tags:
*[Hinova] : morphina trance Future Memories
*[morphina's easy] : morphina trance
*[Neon] : morphina trance Future Memories
*[morphina's] : morphina trance Future Memories

The tags should be the same for every difficult

- As someone previously said the Kia Times should be the same for all he difficults fix it or fix it

[morphina's easy]

01:06:390 (1) - Add clap
Guess its fine

[Hinova]

00:48:209 (1) - Add finish
00:59:845 (2) - ^
01:44:027 (2) - Add whistle
02:09:663 (3) - Add finish
02:16:936 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider

[Neon]

00:48:208 (1) - Add finish
00:59:845 (4) - ^
01:11:481 (8) - ^
01:34:027 (6,7) - Should be like this http://puu.sh/fH3X so remove this 01:34:754 (8)
01:56:572 (4,5) - Add whistle
01:57:663 (6) - Add note whit whistle

[morphina's]

01:47:845 (1) - Make a 1/1 slider http://puu.sh/fH6j

Nice mapset ! Hope it was helpful

Good Luck! And Star!

[Te][Amo], thank you!
updated
Kiai the same now and some changes.

nekonomitsu, thank you for your time anyway. **

O hai, thanks for your request in the queue.
Now it's my task to mod your map. Keep in mind, that these are only suggestions.
There we go.

First of all, I love this song somehow. It's so calm and tranquilizing. *sighs*

[General]

I really needed to lol at the "Please SKIP" notification.
Anyway. I'd start mapping the song from 00:26:390 - on.

[Storyboard]

You should crop the lngleadin.png as far as possible. I felt so free and did so.

So far so good, I also adjusted the SB-code in your storyboard to fix the now appearing size change. Just replace the already existing .osb
http://puu.sh/gb0R

[morphina's easy]

I'd rename this map to "morphina's normal". Since this isn't an Easy diff.
I would also replace the whistle. Maybe you should find a custom hitsound for the normal-hitwhistle.wav
For this map, whistles are just too loud and were very annoying to me here.

00:48:936 (2) - some shape adjustments, maybe? http://puu.sh/gb3Y

416,128,48936,2,0,B|416:214|296:214|296:302,1,220,2|12
120,301,50390,2,0,B|119:214|239:214|239:127,1,220,2|12

00:51:845 (1,2,3,1) - maybe u should do this: http://puu.sh/gb4y
00:54:027 (1,2,3,4,1) - another readjustment. http://puu.sh/gb5M

195,78,54027,5,12
195,253,54754,2,0,B|139:273|91:233,1,110,2|0
8,206,55481,2,0,B|33:152|95:147,1,110,8|0
96,64,56208,2,0,B|142:24|198:44,1,110,2|0
261,107,56936,5,12

00:58:390 (3) - http://puu.sh/gb81

168,256,57663,1,2
343,256,58390,2,0,B|279:184|383:136|343:48,1,220,8|2

00:59:845 (1,2,3,4,1) - readjust/resnap some stuff to make it like this: http://puu.sh/gb8Z
01:06:390 (1) - I'd unstack this one.
01:33:299 (1) - this overlay is ugly, maybe you find a better way?
01:34:027 (2) - another reshape?

272,224,94027,2,0,B|296:184|384:184|384:184|416:120,1,164.999995082617,0|2

01:36:208 (1) - ^
01:37:299 (2,3) - ugly overlay :<
02:27:118 (1,2,3) - please move the (3) and (4): http://puu.sh/gbdO and then http://puu.sh/gbe6

[Hinova]

At all, I don't like these edgy sliders. But this could be, because I think they are ugly in general.
But at all, most sliders are uneven and messy shaped. You should readjust the shapes to make them more even OR you should reshape many of them to create more variety.
When I mentioned, that the slider is strangely shaped, I don't really like to suggest a shape because I don't even know how it was intented to be.

00:51:118 (1,2,3,1,2) - http://puu.sh/gbhe ?
01:14:390 (2,3) - this one looks messy - you should reshape the (2) or move the 3. I suggest the first option.
01:21:663 (4) - shape adjustment

336,120,81663,2,0,B|264:56|240:160|168:96,1,180

01:30:027 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/gbpo ?
01:34:754 (1) - this slider is just not fitting with his shape in the general concept of such an edgy map.
01:39:845 (4,5) - remove (5) and add a return to (4)? plays way better.
01:40:572 (1,2,3,4) - do this maybe: http://puu.sh/gbqy
01:50:754 (1) - should be reshaped, too.
01:54:027 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/gbqX ?
01:56:572 (4) - messy shape.
02:04:208 (2,3,4) - 02:04:208 (2,3,4) - ?
02:06:027 (2) - messy shape.
02:06:027 (2,3,4) - spacing.
02:10:027 (4) - messy shape.
02:12:572 (4) - ^
02:14:027 (1) - move the slider end point one grid up. (grid level 3)
02:16:936 (1) - messy shape.
02:21:299 (3) - ^
02:28:208 (4) - snap with shift-key to (3)
02:30:027 (2) - messy shaped. And move it a bit to the left.

At all, many patterns seem unadjusted and chaotic. Maybe you should try to move some of them to create a way more wonderful pattern (especially within the combos)

[Neon]

This one is far better mapped. I like it. But some stuff was pretty disturbing. I try to point up most of them. Most of them are hitobject-timing stuff, some kick sliders were just not fitting to the music.
Also you should reduce spacing between objects with a 1/4 timing snap to each other. Some sliders need remastering to be perfect.
All in all, decent work. Keep it up.

01:04:208 (1,2,3) - u should use this timing.
01:08:936 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/gbBI ?
01:20:572 (9) - messy shaped.
01:22:390 (5) - perfect the shape.
01:26:936 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing is wrong here. maybe do this? http://puu.sh/gbCQ
01:31:118 (1,2,3) - move them up a bit.
01:33:118 (2,3,4) - reduce distance spacing within the triplets (to x0.9 maybe?)
01:34:027 (1,2,3) - ^
01:38:936 (3) - perfect the shape.
01:44:027 (6) - move it down a bit?
01:49:481 (2,3,4) - this looks pretty messy. maybe you should move the 4 or think of anything better.
01:53:118 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/gbEP ?
02:02:299 (2) - remove?
02:07:663 (3,4,5) - reduce spacing inbetween.
02:11:118 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/gbFO ?
02:12:390 (6) - messy shaped.
02:24:118 (7,8) - reduce spacing.
02:27:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/gbGp ?
02:30:390 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/gbHk ? also hitsounds sound odd here, maybe you check this.
02:33:481 (2,3,4) - reduce spacing.
02:39:663 (10,2,3,4) - this pattern looks uneven to me.

[morphina's]

Please name it "morphina's insane" or something. This name seems so incomplete to me ;___;

All in all, the diff plays pretty strange. Some parts are overmapped. Let me point out stuff I've seen so far.
Same issue than in [Neon]. Reduce the spacing within 1/4 patterns.
I don't want to go too deep here because my playing skills are limited that I can't really decide on this map, if it's just me or if the pattern really plays strange.

00:51:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped.
01:03:481 (4,5) - inaccurate timing.
01:06:027 (2,3,4) - ugly overlay
01:09:663 (7) - move the 7 to the middle of 5 6 and 8
01:32:936 (3,1) - inaccurate timing. http://puu.sh/gbOy
01:35:208 - remove break.
01:36:208 (1) - end slider on white tick.
01:36:208 (1) - seems overmapped to me.
01:44:390 (8) - inaccurate timing.
01:47:845 (1) - end slider on white tick.
01:59:481 (1,2) - remaster this overlap.
02:01:299 (5,1) - unstack.
02:21:299 and ongoing - eww, this whistles. They are ugly on this song. ;__;
02:25:663 (1) - change slider direction to perfect the pattern.
02:31:663 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing!


That's all I like to mention. This map has potential. Just try to do your best to perfect every pattern and slider shape and I guess you'll get this to the next level.
Good luck!

Hi, requested from modding queue...

General

- Kiai time for 4 mapsets are not consistent - http://puu.sh/gfkQ

morphina's easy

00:50:390(3) - at the end of the slider, remove finish.
00:56:936(1) - remove finish
00:59:845(1) - ^
01:02:754(1) - ^
02:26:027 - remove circle?

Hinova

01:04:754 - add a circle here

morphina's insane

01:35:027 - remove break here...


In the end, I found that your insane have many overmapped notes, so please fix it....
Now, I shall take my leave....

Loctav, hillaryzx, thank you!

..updated Hinova (oh, i believe it is better now)
Other diffs we will update later.

after a long time..
updated

Hello~

morphina's diff

01:34:936 - ~ 01:36:027 - : boring~

01:55:118 (1) - : cancel new combo

02:01:481 (1) - : hard plz change

02:26:572 (1,2) - : I think it's so far

02:24:754 (2) - delete whistle

02:39:299 (2) - delete whistle

02:42:208 (2) - : delete whistle

Neon diff

01:10:572 (6) - : move x 160, y 128

01:41:118 (2) - : so close

02:02:390 (2,3,4) - : litte far ( Just I think )

02:05:118 (4,5,6) - ^

02:43:663 (1,2,3) - ^

thx~

hello~[lln]:) MOD></



morphina's easy
✩00:54:027(1)-1grid down
✩00:56:936(1)-1grid outer
✩00:59:845(1)-^
✩01:02:754(1)-1grid left
✩01:19:845(2)-^
✩01:37:663(3)-^
✩01:54:754(3)-1grid right
✩02:00:572(6)-1grid down
✩02:22:754(3)-^
✩02:26:390(5)-1grid left
✩02:28:208(2)-1grid down
✩02:35:845(1)-^



Hinova
✩00:49:663(4)-1grid down http://puu.sh/hDEI
✩00:56:572(6)-^
✩00:57:663(2)-1grid left
✩00:59:845(2)-1grid outer
✩01:04:936(5)-1grid down
✩01:06:027(1)-1grid outer
✩01:16:572(2)-1grid down
✩01:20:754(2)-^
✩01:22:936(6)-^
✩01:25:299(4)-^
✩01:31:118(5)-1grid outer
✩01:41:118(2)-^
✩01:49:299(2)-1grid down
✩01:50:390(4)-1grid right
✩01:55:499(1)-1grid down
✩02:00:572(5)-1grid outer
✩02:02:027(2)-^
✩02:03:118(2)-1grid down
✩02:04:754(2)-^
✩02:10:754(5)-^
✩02:11:845(2)-1grid outer
✩02:20:936(2)-1grid left
✩02:25:299(6)-2grid outer
✩02:27:481(3)-1grid right
✩02:30:754(3)-1grid down
✩02:35:481(2)-1grid right
✩02:36:936(4)-^
✩02:38:027(2)-1grid outer



I am sorry to be poor at Mod　TAT

Nice MAP~<3

O hai.

Download: ATB - My Everything ([lln]) [Loctav's Taiko].osu

Please remove storyboard on this Taiko diff and add this background template (only for this difficulty)

For this, you need to paste the content of the .osb file to each dedicated places in every single .osu file.
Just replace the whole [Events] part of each .osu with the content of the .osb.

After that, open the Taiko difficulty, switch to "Design" tab and click "Diff. specific" - after that, you can add the Taiko template.
Don't forget to delete the .osb then

After that, do a full submit.



Please inform me for incoming mods.
If you need further assistance, tell me. I'll help you.

Loctav, thank you! * *

Please inform me for incoming mods.

I understand, I will.
And so..

Added Taiko diff from Loctav.
full submitted
Some changes in osu diffs will be later.

hi, will try to give suggestion on arrangement etc
red:must fix

general: weird kiai time lol
difficulty spread was ..., why 2 same level insane?(almost same score also) especially one is from your guest who made a easy as well...

comment: awesome effort had been done for a first mapper

uncheck the letterbox during breaks in the storyboard option for all diffs.


easy
plz dont use so much spinner next time
00:54:754 (2,3,4) - these were somehow funny to me
01:32:572 (4) - make like how slider 3 was made after 2
make the spinner end at 2:46,027 thats where other diff. ends

hinova
00:56:209 (5,6,7) - get rid of these... too much for this diff
01:39:845 (4) - change the direction where the repeat goes, cause may lead player to think : is there 1 more repeat?
02:44:936 (1) - silence this spinner plz

Insane
00:56:208 (3,4) - grid those down a bit would look prettier
02:19:299 (3,4,5,1,2) - could make all these a antijump
delay the last spinner by 1 tick, add a note there...

neon
01:02:936 (2) - 01:58:208 (2) - third dot could grid right a bit to blanket the note better
01:58:936 (4) - same
do some jumps will make this diff even better

thats it , good luck on ranking

Add "Loctav" to the tags.

No kds for this, please.

L_P, thank you!
Some changes in my diffs.
Morphi`s diffs.. later.

Loctav, done.

>_<
I wish i could have more time for this.

Request from my modding queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[General]
The lead in is so long , lol ! But interesting?

[Morphina's Easy]
01:26:027,01:36:180,02:45:999's blue line have effect ?!

00:54:754 (2,3) -touch each other almost

[Hinova]
Most of the problems is slider shape not very nice

00:56:572 (6) - clap
01:00:936 (4) - not beautiful
01:10:027 (4) - ^
01:21:663 (4) - ^
02:14:754 (2) - ^
02:25:663 (1) - ^
02:43:118 (1) - not symmetry

[Morphina's Insane]
I think ... OD-1 will easier

00:57:481 (5,6) - touch each other almost
01:02:754 (1) - finish at start ?
02:07:663 (6) - cover completely

[Neon]
01:11:572,01:43:481's green line ?!

00:56:754 (6,4) - cover completely ?!
01:04:208 (1,2) - touch each other,you can let (1) curve


good song
and sorry to my poor English

Oh, updated
l1106188, thank you!

H i ~ *

[General]
nothing

[Morphina's easy]
You must change Slider Velocity. it's too fast .. !
Reduce the stack in easy diff
02:02:027 (2) - remove

[Hinova]
01:21:663 (4) - down 1grid (third dot)
01:51:845 (2,3,4) - it's normal diff ? too difficult in normal diff

[Morphina's insane]
OD : -1
00:49:299 (3) - don't stack. might be confusing at first
00:55:481 (1,2,3,4) - how about this one ?

02:00:936 (1,2,3,4,5) - use a regular distance
02:26:754 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

[Neon]
01:10:027 (5,6) - how about this one ?

241,77,70027,2,2,B|176:34|85:59,1,134.999995976687,0|8
184,128,70572,2,2,B|96:104|64:179,1,134.999995976687

02:35:845 (1) - down 1grid (third dot)

good luck ~ 'v'

Take this stars

updated some

morphina, thank you.

B2IN, thank you too. .)

Hello!

• Morphina's Easy
  Err.. Combo fixes most of all. Maybe first try applying all and then checking if you agree or not, rather than doing each separate..?
  01:31:845 - New combo
  01:33:299 - No new combo
  01:34:027 - New combo
  01:38:390 - New combo
  01:39:845 - No new combo
  01:41:299 - New combo
  01:42:027 - No new combo
  01:52:936 (4) - New combo
  01:54:027 (1) - No new combo
  02:02:754 (4) - Remove note
  
  Morphina's Insane
  01:31:845 - New combo
  01:32:208 - No new combo
  01:55:118 (5) - Maybe make a better shape here, more symmetrical one?
  02:31:663 (2) - Whistle here
  
  Hinova
  00:59:481 - No new combo
  00:59:845 - New combo
  01:50:754 (1) - Make more symmetrical by moving the middle square 1 grid to the right
  02:34:390 - New combo
  02:34:936 - No new combo
  
  Neon
  Sometimes you got those gaps between notes, which are quite big and another note could be placed there.
  00:52:936 - Add a note here? Snap it with the fallowing (4) if you do.
  00:58:936 (2) - Two grids up and 4 grids to the right
  00:59:481 (3) - 4 grids up and 10 to the right
  01:04:754 (2) - 2 girds to the left
  01:11:845 (1,2,3..) - If you look at this combo, it goes to the left but the previous combo was on the left side as well. So maybe its better if this combo goes to the right side, and the fallowing to the left? Just so you use the space well, ignore this if you feel like it.
  01:25:118 (7) - x:230 and y:191
  01:47:118 (2) - x:257
  02:16:845 - Rise the volume a bit more here, to about 75%
  02:29:481 (5) - x:32 and y:72
  02:40:572 - Add a note here.

updated
Jebok, thank you!

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
You've got one file in the SB directory. Consider just putting that in the main directory.
Kiai Time isn't consistent for Taiko.
How are Hinova and Neon related?

[Morphina's easy]
Is it of choice that easy isn't capitalized? Also, the username is morphina with a lower case m. Apply this to the insane as well.

[Hinova]
Consider HP4.

[Morphina's insane]
Consider tick rate 2. It's an Insane diff and there's enough dnb in the background to validate this suggestion.

[Neon]
Consider tick rate 2.

[Loctav's Taiko]
01:22:572 (1,2,3,1) - You're mapping vocals here. Listen to the drums, map those. Through out this slower part, you mapped vocals quite a bit when this is a dnb song, and it's only natural you map the rhythm. There's more, but I'm only not pointing it out because you're missing a whole lot. You should increase density. Definitely.

Good luck :3

those wrote:

[Loctav's Taiko]
01:22:572 (1,2,3,1) - You're mapping vocals here. Listen to the drums, map those. Through out this slower part, you mapped vocals quite a bit when this is a dnb song, and it's only natural you map the rhythm. There's more, but I'm only not pointing it out because you're missing a whole lot. You should increase density. Definitely.

Tried my best. Whatsoever, added alot of new hitobjects, adjusted various stuff, increased the called density.
Also I tried to avoid redundance, whatsoever. Here is the edited .osu

Download: ATB - My Everything ([lln]) [Loctav's Taiko].osu

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