1. Easy (1.28 stars, 90 notes)
2. Hard (4.87 stars, 238 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 446 notes)
4. Normal (3.18 stars, 138 notes)

K o h a k u wrote:

（＾ω^）lets dance with me

val0108 wrote:

[General]
Audio-in 1 fixed

[Insane]
00:58:036 (3,6,1,3) - 1.5倍速で置いてみる？提案
01:03:595 - ソフトサウンドにしてみては？ホイッスルをつけるのを忘れずに。fixed of all diffs
01:28:389 - この気合タイム必要？ 消した
01:41:925 - ^ ^
01:44:939 - ^
01:44:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - code:176,288,104189,5,2
256,88,104314,1,0
336,288,104439,1,2
144,160,104564,1,0
368,160,104689,2,0,B|256:224,1,127.499996200204,4|4 Thanks code! fixed

[Hard]
00:44:624 (1) - remove new combo Insaneも同じような付け方してるからちょっと保留で
00:45:330 (6) - new combo ^
00:49:918 (2) - 切り替えしが見えないかもしれないから矢印の向き右上にしてみよう。fixed

[normal]
00:31:213 (4) - もういっかい切り返す。 fixed
01:00:860 (1) - 00:58:036 (1,2,1,2) - ここと同じような配置で。 fixed
01:34:897 - add note done
01:39:580 - ^ ^

[Easy]
good.

Kanon wrote:

All diff
01:28:565 insert breaktime
01:42:067 ^

insane
01:23:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try put like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/174562 I think put jump here is good.

No kds plz . just little advice

rEdo wrote:

[Easy]
1:02:271 (2,3,1) - just a little suggestion, plays a lot more fluently: click! fixed
1:26:271 (1) - delete new combo fixed

[Normal]
nothing really, i just don't like how you use those new combos at notes like that.

[Hard]
1:00:684 (4) - start new combo here, instead of 1:00:860 (1). fixed

[Insane]
a lot of useless new combos, decide if you want to delete them or not: 0:05:801 (1), 0:31:213 (1), 0:36:860 (1), 0:42:507 (1), 0:50:271 (1), 0:51:683 (1).
0:43:918 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - both of those streams are completely too close to each other. also, DNC on 0:44:448 (1) perhaps? fixed
1:26:095 (4) - start new combo here, instead of 1:26:271 (1)?
1:27:507 (4) - start new combo here, instead of 1:27:683 (1)?
 
1:27:683 (1) - that slowdown is quite unexpected, just saying. :p
1:44:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - gaaaaaaaaw, muzukashii ;_; lol

~

Saten-san wrote:

Catchy song~♪

Insane
00:01:830 - add a note here? D:
00:03:948 - ^
00:04:654 - ^
00:15:418 - ^
00:18:948 - ^
00:21:771 - ^
00:58:477 - ^
01:44:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - haha this was surprising. add a warning of some kind? >< suspension

Hard
00:43:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is somewhat hard, don't you think? ok, changed
01:39:872 (1) - finish at the end? fixed
01:41:043 (3) - ^ fixed
01:44:689 (3) - finish fixed

even though I'm low of them at the moment, have a star :3

SPOILER

Faust wrote:

IRC stuff:

SPOILER

11:38 <Chocopikel> : hi Faust
11:38 <Faust> : Hello.
11:38 <Chocopikel> : Please mod of my pending maps
11:38 <Faust> : link.
11:38 *Chocopikel is listening to (Mutsuhiko Izumi - Russian Snowy Dance)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38872]
11:38 <Chocopikel> : Thanks!
11:38 <Faust> : Alright. np
11:42 <Faust> : http://puu.sh/8880 alternative BG
11:42 <Faust> : From Pixiv lol
11:43 <Chocopikel> : oh lol nice XD
11:47 <Faust> : lol
11:53 <Faust> : nice map
11:54 <Chocopikel> : Thanks
11:55 <Faust> : 00:48:507 (3,4,5,6,7) - on purpose?
11:55 <Faust> : looks bumpy
11:56 <Chocopikel> : I consider nothing especially
11:57 <Faust> : just curious
11:59 <Chocopikel> : hm... ok
11:59 <Faust> : http://puu.sh/88aO
12:00 <Faust> : ending quite hard
12:00 <Chocopikel> : yeah
12:02 <Chocopikel> : fixed and changed BG
12:03 <Faust> : full-submit?
12:06 <Chocopikel> : Aren't there any other mods?
12:07 <Faust> : old BG still shows lol
12:09 <Chocopikel> : ok, full submitted
12:11 <Faust> : OD maybe +1
12:12 <Chocopikel> : D:
12:12 <Chocopikel> : sorry, I keep it
12:12 <Faust> : np
12:18 <Faust> : Map seems alright. No problems
12:19 <Chocopikel> : Thank you very much
12:20 <Chocopikel> : Please post this chat, and give kudosu
12:20 <Faust> : Ah. okay.

-Gamu- wrote:

ok ok!

良い譜面です。　ちょこさんも神マッパーなのか～

SPOILER

13:27 <Chocopikel> : Mod頼んでいいでしょうか
13:28 <-Gamu-> : なんだってー　いいですよ
13:28 <Chocopikel> : よっしゃーきたー
13:28 <-Gamu-> : 譜面くださいださいさいい
13:28 *Chocopikel is listening to (Mutsuhiko Izumi - Russian Snowy Dance)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38872]
13:29 <-Gamu-> : どうやってＭＯｄしましょうか　フォーラムに書きこむか　ここで言うか
13:29 <Chocopikel> : どちらでも構いません太郎！
13:30 <-Gamu-> : んじゃ、ここにかきます
13:30 <Chocopikel> : おｋです
13:30 <-Gamu-> : ＭＯＤとか下手ですけど　何か見つけたらいいます
13:31 <-Gamu-> : Ｅａｓｙからでいいですかね
13:32 <Chocopikel> : おｋです
13:32 <-Gamu-> : まず　lead-inは1500でいいかと　　
13:32 <-Gamu-> : ちょっと早く
13:33 <-Gamu-> : かんじる
13:34 <Chocopikel> : fixed
13:35 <-Gamu-> : 00:48:154 (3) - x:264 y:224に移動して
13:35 <-Gamu-> : 横にまっすぐしたほうがいいかもしれない
13:35 <-Gamu-> : http://puu.sh/88gY
13:36 <-Gamu-> : 01:03:330 (3) - 1 grid 左に
13:37 <-Gamu-> : 01:06:506 (1) - x:336 y:136に移動　（01:03:683 (1)のスライダーの始点に重なる
13:39 <-Gamu-> : Easyはこれぐらいですかね
13:39 <Chocopikel> : all fixed~
13:39 <-Gamu-> : Normalです
13:40 <-Gamu-> : AR5がいいかもしれない　（最近はNormalの５が多いから）
13:40 <Chocopikel> : それちょっと保留で
13:40 <-Gamu-> : ならＨＰを＋１はどうですかね
13:41 <-Gamu-> : HP4
13:41 <Chocopikel> : difficultyはとりあえず全難易度BATかMATに言われない限り保留でお願いします
13:41 <-Gamu-> : あ、わかりました
13:42 <-Gamu-> : さっきのlead-inも1500で
13:42 <Chocopikel> : はい
13:45 <-Gamu-> : 特にない　ちょっと難しい気がするけど　大丈夫だと思います
13:45 <Chocopikel> : わかりました
13:46 <-Gamu-> : Ｈａｒｄです
13:46 <-Gamu-> : これもLead-in 1500ですね
13:49 <-Gamu-> : 00:26:801 (4) - x:280 y:120 に移動（個人的に）
13:50 <-Gamu-> : 00:29:095 (6) - 横にまっすぐじゃないくて縦にまっすぐにしてみる
13:50 <-Gamu-> : http://puu.sh/88lb
13:51 <-Gamu-> : 00:31:213 (5) - x:224 y:24　に移動
13:57 <-Gamu-> : 01:27:683 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+J
13:58 <-Gamu-> : 個人的に
13:58 <Chocopikel> : お、これいいかも
13:59 <-Gamu-> : これくらいです
13:59 <-Gamu-> : Insaneいきます　これはあんま指摘とかしないです
13:59 <Chocopikel> : わかりました
14:00 <-Gamu-> : 00:08:624 (8) - nc add?
14:00 <-Gamu-> : 00:02:977 (7) - ^
14:01 <-Gamu-> : 00:14:271 (6) - ^
14:01 <-Gamu-> : 00:25:565 (6) - ^
14:03 <-Gamu-> : 00:59:801 (2) - 00:58:566 (5)これに終点をうまく重ねる？
14:04 <-Gamu-> : 01:36:360 (7) - nc add
14:04 <-Gamu-> : これくらいです
14:05 <Chocopikel> : わかりましたー modありです

Breeze wrote:

General

1. There are no tags, consider adding some? "ripples" of source was deleted and it added to tag

Timing

1. I've got a timing
   BPM/Offset
   170/1565 (+8)
   205/90905
   240/104217
   If you feel this one is better, then use this one. And resnap notes, move timing section blahblah I agree,changed

(Mod blow is based on the timing I given out)

Insane

1. HP drain rate -1 or add break to 01:28:564 - 01:30:329 and 01:42:139 - 01:44:041, or in these 2 period of time, it lost too many HP lol done (HP -1)
2. 00:02:976 (7) - New combo here as you do to 00:05:800 (1) fixed
3. 01:16:741 (11) - The path of this slider is hidden by previous notes, when you get 300 while playing, it's kinda hard to tell this is a sldier changed

yay, nice map
call me back for a recheck when you have any reply, please

Nymph wrote:

seems I am pretty late ^^; then star and good luck~

Breeze wrote:

OK, bubbled!
This map is super fun, and last part is super hard /w\

James2250 wrote:

Seeing as the HP was reduced and there are lots of notes around them, the breaks near the end shouldn't cause too much trouble

All looks good
Ranked~

Blue Dragon wrote:

great map \o/

K o h a k u wrote:

glaz!

-Sekai- wrote:

gretz \o

Noob Man wrote:

This music is awesome, and so is your map. <3
Gratz. <3

xsrsbsns wrote:

Great map & grats!

Faust wrote:

Congratulations !

ShinseinaTenshi wrote:

Congratulations!
Nice map. :3

hoLysoup wrote:

sry didn't get around to mod this it got ranked too quickly
Congrats!! :3

AngelHoney wrote:

ome~ ww

Apricot wrote:

Rank早杉ワタロ

Breeze wrote:

おＲＡＮＫでおめいでとう

osuplayer111 wrote:

One of the best maps that I played in a really long time.

Congratulations!

Keep up the good work~

yongtw123 wrote:

Wow when I finally have time to check and this is ranked~

Congrats!