20:16 <narakucrimson> : ok let's do this
20:16 <narakucrimson> : open easy!
20:17 <Katsuri> : Oh well, I just half mapped Insane, saw it? =o
20:17 <Katsuri> : half remapped*.
20:17 <narakucrimson> : not yet!
20:18 <narakucrimson> : I'm gonna get nazi about a fewthings but it's nothing really important
20:18 <Katsuri> : Ok!
20:18 <narakucrimson> : first off
20:18 <narakucrimson> : I added RJ to tags in one of my maps
20:19 <narakucrimson> : oh never mind
20:19 <Katsuri> : RJ is not something you can search at search beatmaps feature.
20:19 <narakucrimson> : it's not relevant, actially
20:19 <narakucrimson> : you can in game
20:19 <narakucrimson> : but it's already on the diff's name so it would appear anyway
20:19 <Katsuri> : Yes.
20:20 <narakucrimson> : but again, you are wrong, it's something you can search,
20:20 <narakucrimson> : all right: 00:02:957 (4) -
20:20 <Katsuri> :
http://puu.sh/ra2e20:20 <narakucrimson> : move this one grid left so that they are aligned!
20:21 <narakucrimson> : katsuri, if you are defying my concepts, at least don't do it in a stupid way
20:21 <narakucrimson> : I said "in game", not "in the online page"
20:22 <Katsuri> : Oh sorry.
20:22 <narakucrimson> : oh sorry
20:22 <narakucrimson> : 00:02:957 (4) -
20:22 <narakucrimson> : I meant one grid right
20:22 <narakucrimson> : and this one as well 00:07:605 (2) -
20:22 <narakucrimson> : I told you I'd nazi stuff, if you don't mind
20:22 <Katsuri> : You are right, moved one grid right.
20:22 <Katsuri> : Ok, it's fine.
20:23 <Katsuri> : Moved both of them
20:23 <narakucrimson> : mm
20:23 <narakucrimson> : 00:24:929 (2) -
20:23 <narakucrimson> : I'm assuming he wanted to make this one symmetrical?
20:23 <narakucrimson> : I don't know, maybe not
20:24 <narakucrimson> : oh and 00:29:577 (4) - can you move the middle slider point two grids down? I detect unsymmetry pretty easily, and these aren't exactly
20:24 <narakucrimson> : symmetrical xD
20:25 <narakucrimson> : you may as well move 00:30:845 (1) - one grid down after doing that
20:25 <Katsuri> : aaaa
20:25 <Katsuri> :
http://puu.sh/ra5n20:25 <narakucrimson> : well, do it as you please!
20:26 <Katsuri> : :c
20:26 <Katsuri> : I need help :c
20:27 <narakucrimson> : you'll probably kill me but: 00:39:718 (4,5,1) - one grid down, then 00:40:563 (1) - one grid left, so that the circles are aligned
20:27 <narakucrimson> : yeah but I guess you can get that slider right by yourself
20:27 <Katsuri> : done
20:28 <narakucrimson> : everything? ok let's continue
20:28 <narakucrimson> : 00:52:394 (3) -
20:28 <narakucrimson> : I don't really feel that this slider goes well with the music
20:28 <narakucrimson> : there's a clear stop right there
20:28 <narakucrimson> : I'd rather just have a circle and a little silence for the voice
20:28 <narakucrimson> : what do you think?
20:28 <Katsuri> : I think a silence would be a lot better, really.
20:29 <narakucrimson> : then go for it
20:29 <Katsuri> : FIxed.
20:29 <narakucrimson> : all right
20:29 <narakucrimson> : 00:57:464 (1) - you might want to move this one grid left to avoid a liiiitle overlap
20:30 <Katsuri> : Hm
20:30 <narakucrimson> : hmm
20:30 <narakucrimson> : you get another overlap
20:30 <narakucrimson> : wat
20:30 <Katsuri> : This pattern has giving me problems.
20:30 <narakucrimson> : wait*
20:30 <narakucrimson> : wait do't move it
20:31 <narakucrimson> : try curving 00:56:619 (3) - a little
20:31 <Katsuri> : I need to choose what overlap I should keep or remap pattern
20:31 <narakucrimson> :
http://puu.sh/ra8v20:31 <Katsuri> : Lol, perfect.
20:31 <Katsuri> : I'm feeling more like:
http://puu.sh/ra8N20:31 <narakucrimson> : all right!
20:31 <narakucrimson> : then
20:31 <narakucrimson> : 01:04:225 (1) -
20:32 <narakucrimson> : can you remove the clap at the end? it sounds pretty weird
20:32 <narakucrimson> : and the whistle at the end of this: 01:16:478 (2) -
20:32 <narakucrimson> : just to follow the same patterns, you know :p
20:33 <narakucrimson> : also... is this break dragged? 01:21:408
20:33 <narakucrimson> : 01:21:408 -
20:33 <narakucrimson> : and why?
20:34 <narakucrimson> : in case you wanna drag it I would suggest aiming for 01:21:549 -
20:34 <Katsuri> : Well, not really noticable, but fixed.
20:34 <Katsuri> : By the way, fixed evertyhing.
20:34 <narakucrimson> : ok!
20:35 <narakucrimson> : a little suggestion here: how about a finish at the start of this: 01:38:028 (1) - ?
20:35 <narakucrimson> : it need a little more of power in my opinion
20:35 <Katsuri> : I use finishes at the start of great sliders, then added here.
20:36 <narakucrimson> : also can you get the DS between these a little lower?
20:36 <narakucrimson> : 01:40:563 (2,3) -
20:36 <narakucrimson> :
http://puu.sh/rabK20:37 <Katsuri> : Fixed.
20:37 <narakucrimson> : 02:06:338 (2) - symmetry nazi strikes again xD
20:38 <narakucrimson> : 02:14:365 (3) - since this is a copy&paste of the last kiai, try to fix it in a similar way (the mini overlap)
20:38 <Katsuri> : Ok haha
20:38 <narakucrimson> : 02:21:971 (1) - same thing about the clap
20:39 <Katsuri> : Fixed.
20:39 <narakucrimson> : 02:29:154 (1) - wouldn't a clap sound better at the start of this?
20:39 <Katsuri> : Indeed.
20:40 <narakucrimson> : umm 02:30:845 (3,5) - the whistles there might be a little off, claps are just enough, I think
20:40 <Katsuri> : Fixed.
20:40 <narakucrimson> : wowow
20:40 <narakucrimson> : I'm getting a wrong offset at this part
20:40 <Katsuri> : I'm not sure, but I think Kennez is going to bubble it.
20:40 <narakucrimson> : o.o
20:41 <narakucrimson> : let me finish my mod
20:41 <narakucrimson> : then he does his ok?
20:41 <Katsuri> : Ohohoh
20:41 <Katsuri> : Dance, Dance.
20:42 <Katsuri> : Hm, the offset looks okay for me.
20:42 <narakucrimson> : this is werid
20:42 <narakucrimson> : weird
20:43 <Katsuri> : I don't know.
20:43 <Katsuri> : What's weird?
20:43 <narakucrimson> : that I'm getting it late
20:44 <narakucrimson> : ok let's assume that my computer and my ears are working bad for some reason, and let kenezz check it
20:45 <narakucrimson> : but it should be ok since the offset is 0
20:45 <narakucrimson> : 02:57:464 (1) - is this new combo reeeeally needed?
20:46 <Katsuri> : Lol no.
20:46 <Katsuri> : Didn't notice it.
20:46 <narakucrimson> : hehe
20:46 <narakucrimson> : 03:42:253 (1) - the claaap
20:46 <Katsuri> : lalala copypaste
20:46 <narakucrimson> : 03:49:014 (3) - well you can probably guess this one
20:47 <Katsuri> : hehe fixed
20:47 <narakucrimson> : this is just a crazy idea but how about a finish on the last spinner? would sound more epic imo
20:48 <Katsuri> : Yeah, the last piano note looks like a finish, then I will add a finish to that.
20:48 <narakucrimson> : all right
20:49 <narakucrimson> : that's all for normal
20:49 <narakucrimson> : you might want to add some finish like that in the other diffs too
20:49 <Katsuri> : Ok
20:49 <Katsuri> : done
20:50 <narakucrimson> : yo be honest, RJ's diff misses a looot of claps (the ones that are actually hitnormals of the normal set)
20:51 <narakucrimson> : it sounds really weird after having heard Normal and how it is hitsounded
20:51 <narakucrimson> : have you talked about this with him
20:51 <narakucrimson> : ?
20:51 <Katsuri> : Maybe he thinks a bit diferent, don't know.
20:51 <narakucrimson> : is he ok with the hitsounds?
20:51 <Katsuri> : Yes I did, and he changed.
20:51 <Katsuri> : He said it's fine now.
20:52 <Katsuri> :
http://puu.sh/rak220:52 <Katsuri> : asdsadadad
20:52 <narakucrimson> : it's just... I can't bring myself to say this is ok
20:52 <narakucrimson> : like he misses finishes too
20:52 <narakucrimson> : 00:54:084 (2) - for example
20:52 <narakucrimson> : that moment needs emphasis
20:53 <Katsuri> : Yes, but I don't know if I should change something for him.
20:55 <narakucrimson> : I guess it's too much
20:55 <narakucrimson> : I don't wanna hold you anymore, but I think you should have a talk with him
20:55 <narakucrimson> : save this log
20:55 <narakucrimson> : I'll post it in the thread anyway
20:55 <narakucrimson> : and show it to him
20:56 <Katsuri> : ok
20:57 <narakucrimson> : also I'm leaving this here for the log: 02:45:633 (1) - that's a big jump, boy :O
20:58 <narakucrimson> : the mapping is ok overall, though some 1/6ths get tricky to hit properly, but that's how the song is
20:59 <narakucrimson> : ok insane
20:59 <narakucrimson> : 00:13:802 (1) - the snare doesn't really sound at this time, so you should remove the clap from here
21:00 <Katsuri> : I think that's ok to break the rhythm a bit, don't know.
21:01 <narakucrimson> : mmm
21:02 <narakucrimson> : honestly, I don't think it works well
21:02 <narakucrimson> : 00:54:084 (2) - also finish here please!
21:02 <narakucrimson> : this actually feels really weird
21:02 <narakucrimson> : 00:57:323 (1,2,3,4) -
21:03 <narakucrimson> : I'm pretty convinced that the piano is the most significant sound in that part, so the way in which these sliders follow the music is a little
21:03 <narakucrimson> : missleading
21:03 <narakucrimson> : dunno, you should tell larto
21:03 <Katsuri> : Added finish
21:03 <narakucrimson> : oh wait
21:03 <narakucrimson> : it's your part xD
21:04 <narakucrimson> : this: 01:02:394 - has to get some note! you should shorten that slider over there and add another one, I think
21:05 <narakucrimson> : check larto's next part, I think it sticks better to the rythm
21:05 <narakucrimson> : also
21:05 <narakucrimson> : 01:17:324 (12) - can you remove the whistle?
21:05 <narakucrimson> : and here: 01:17:605 (1) -
21:06 <narakucrimson> : you might want to drag the break start here: 01:21:549 - as in Normal
21:06 <narakucrimson> : hmm 01:28:591 (3,4) - sounds like the whistle should go in (4) to me, idk
21:06 <narakucrimson> : also 01:34:647 (11) - NC?
21:07 <Katsuri> : asdasda
21:07 <Katsuri> : Fixed all
21:07 <Katsuri> : aaaand
21:08 <narakucrimson> : am I going too fast? :O
21:08 <Katsuri> : Not really, that's because a fix costed me much time.
21:08 <Katsuri> : :c
21:08 <narakucrimson> : oh oh
21:08 <narakucrimson> : hehe
21:08 <Katsuri> : Well
21:08 <Katsuri> : Done, fixed all xD
21:09 <narakucrimson> : ok
21:09 <narakucrimson> : 02:10:140 (6) -
21:09 <narakucrimson> : clap?
21:09 <narakucrimson> : 02:11:831 (2) - finish?
21:09 <Katsuri> : done
21:10 <narakucrimson> : just an advice
21:10 <narakucrimson> : try to make your hitsounds and larto's merge better
21:11 <narakucrimson> : the sections are clearly different now
21:11 <narakucrimson> : the map should be more like
21:11 <Katsuri> : Hm, ok, I will work on it.
21:11 <narakucrimson> : well you got the idea xD
21:11 <Katsuri> : Yes xD
21:11 <narakucrimson> : 02:38:873 (1) - finish
21:12 <Katsuri> : Done
21:12 <narakucrimson> : 03:17:746 - I'd drag the break's end to this point, seems more logical
21:13 <narakucrimson> : and the part after that is your best so far
21:13 <Katsuri> : I didn't knew that I could drag the break end o-o
21:13 <narakucrimson> : try sticking to those hitsounds
21:13 <Katsuri> : =o
21:13 <narakucrimson> : 03:46:902 (3) - finish again!
21:14 <Katsuri> : done
21:14 <narakucrimson> : and thebig finish at 04:00:140 (1) -
21:14 <Katsuri> : Done!
21:14 <narakucrimson> : well it needs some more work, but you'll get it right soon
21:14 <Katsuri> : Ok!