00:01:717 (2,3,4) - make this circle sequance straight (it's a bit crooked)
00:02:606 (2,3,4) - ^
00:04:606 (3,4,5,6,7) - spacing between these objects is too big, make it smaller please
00:06:828 (1,2,3,4) - put these objects in a straight line
00:07:494 (4) - this slider shouldn't be further spaced then previous circles
00:09:939 (10) - move this circle (for example to: x:240 y:115)
00:11:050 (3) - I don't like shape of this slider
00:27:494 (4) - ctrl+g and move this slider (x:495 y:64 - looks good)
00:28:606 (6,7,8,9,10) - make this jump sequence in right down corner
00:36:161 (5,6,7,8) - too large spacing!!!
00:43:939 (1,2,3) - make same spacing between these objects
00:57:939 (2) - make the slider shape in this way, that sliderend will show directon of the next circle! (use followpoint as a help)
01:07:939 (7,8,9,10,11) - go for similar spacing at every jump - not like this: 01:07:939 (7,8) spacing is too huge and 01:08:606 (10,11) spacing is too small
01:11:272 (6,7) - really uncomfortable flow. End of 01:11:272 (6) should target beggining of the next one 01:11:717 (7) !
01:22:383 (9,10,11) - a bit smaller spacing please
ctrl + a - you can see that you mainly used only top of the screen :p
Try to make more pleasant patterns and be careful with spacing! c:

Lower AR to 6
00:01:494 (1) - Spinner recovery time should be at least 1 beat
00:03:272 (1,2,3) - The distance between all of these should be equal(ish)
00:04:606 (1,2,3) - ^
00:06:828 (1) - Don't make it a full full circle. Leave a bit of a gap between the head and the slider. Also Ctrl + G it
00:10:828 (2) - Copy (1) and paste it, remove the NC, Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J, add reverse, lock it parallel to (1)
00:13:272 (6) - Don't make this full full
00:15:717 (1) - When using a skin without slider tails you can't really tell which direction it goes
00:29:717 (1) - Replace with a triple
00:43:939 (1) - ^
01:02:828 (10) - NC? somewhere around there
01:03:939 - Remove kiai time here
01:03:939 (12,13,14) - The three sliders should all point up, maybe increase the slider velocity a bit
01:05:494 - Start kiai time here
01:08:383 (7,1) - No need for a huge jump
01:12:606 (1) - Ugly slider
01:29:050 (5,6) - Another unneeded huge jump
01:31:717 (5) - Replace with a 1/2 slider

The flow of the whole map is off, not sure have to fix it.

23:36 Rin Sa: Hello?
23:36 N0thingSpecial: hi
23:37 Rin Sa: Can I ask for NM?
23:37 N0thingSpecial: um
23:38 N0thingSpecial: did you come from my mod queue?
23:38 Rin Sa: yeah
23:38 N0thingSpecial: sure then but I will update my queue later that it's closed
23:38 N0thingSpecial: link map
23:38 *Rin Sa is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442885 Mieno Hitomi - Hitotsu no Hato de (TV size)]
23:40 *N0thingSpecial is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442885 Mieno Hitomi - Hitotsu no Hato de (TV size) [Draco]]
23:41 N0thingSpecial: hmmmmmmmmmmmm
23:42 N0thingSpecial: I'm not quite sure how to mod this
23:43 N0thingSpecial: your map looks very Chinese, which I'm not very good at lol
23:44 N0thingSpecial: are you here?
23:44 Rin Sa: right
23:44 N0thingSpecial: the start is fine
23:44 N0thingSpecial: 00:15:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is very random compared to your jumps at the beginning
23:46 N0thingSpecial: have a clear structure
23:46 N0thingSpecial: 00:05:050 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - like this
23:47 N0thingSpecial: 00:35:272 (3,4) - this is too angled
23:48 Rin Sa: do you mean the slider shape?
23:48 N0thingSpecial: ^ without other sliders to compliment it, it feels too angled
23:48 N0thingSpecial: not the shape
23:48 Rin Sa: or the arrangement?
23:48 N0thingSpecial: the arrangement
23:48 N0thingSpecial: make it a but more verticle
23:48 N0thingSpecial: like 7-10 degree from the verticle axis
23:49 N0thingSpecial: vertical*
23:50 N0thingSpecial: 00:37:050 (1,3) - avoid very tiny overlaps like this, it feels cluttered
23:50 N0thingSpecial: 00:48:606 (1,2) - avoid overlaps like this unless your intro already have similar overlapping sliders
23:50 N0thingSpecial: ^ it's unpredictable and uncomfortable
23:51 N0thingSpecial: 00:49:494 (3,4,6,7,9) - space them out a bit more cause it feels cluttered
23:52 N0thingSpecial: 00:57:494 - add some filler rhythm, cause you never really focused on red tick timing so it's best to put a note here to transition better to red tick timing
23:53 N0thingSpecial: 01:12:161 (8,2) - same cluttered feeling, space them out
23:55 N0thingSpecial: wouldn't it be better to replace 01:17:717 (1,2) - with a one slider, and 01:18:161 (3) - replace with two notes
23:55 N0thingSpecial: so you can match the vocals
23:56 N0thingSpecial: 01:29:272 (9,11) - I think this is unrankable
23:56 N0thingSpecial: the note is hiding the reverse slider
23:56 N0thingSpecial: like I said I don't really know how to mod this map
23:57 *N0thingSpecial is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1445643 Mieno Hitomi - Hitotsu no Hato de (TV size) [Hard]]
23:57 N0thingSpecial: this is just wrong in my opinion
23:57 N0thingSpecial: you need to remap this cause:
23:58 N0thingSpecial: 1. spacing is inconsistent
23:58 N0thingSpecial: you will probably use distance snap 70% of the time
23:59 N0thingSpecial: if you're not using distance snap you probably at least need to make them look equally spaced unless you want emphasis
23:59 N0thingSpecial: 00:10:828 (2,3) - avoid flow like these in Hard
00:00 N0thingSpecial: 00:29:717 (7,8,9) - this is just too spaced for a new player to handle