wmfchris wrote:

Let's go.

[Insane]
excess timeline (no effect with it): 31262 hmm... changed pattern
00:01:368 (5) - the song does contain quite a lot of 1/4 beats...then this position would be misleading to players. Better to place this near (264,248).Fixed
00:13:833 (1) - add whistle here? I think your pointing out is 00:13:622 , Fixed
00:22:495 (2) - this is covered by slider (5) and may cause difficulty in reading this... try sth about this: Fixed and changed pattern

SPOILER

00:23:129 (4) - remove clap Fixed
01:00:946 (1,2) - this one should be in 1.5x spacing as well same for (4,5). btw I don't think this is suitable for the jkump orz　ok! Fixed

the feeling is like many finishing on the red tick, though there's also something similar in the music it still feel odd to me orz.
hmm...I lessen the number of objects which put on the red tick...
[Hard]
nice : O

[Normal]
01:05:593 (4) - down 1 grid Fixed

most problem comes from the insane diff, keep going on : D

1. 00:05:171 (1,2,3,4) - NCの付け方：00:01:791 (6,1,2,3)かどちらかに統一 （00:01:791 (6,1,2,3)私ならこっちですがお好みで）
2. 00:19:643 (2) - note削除? (ギター？が00:19:748 - ここから始まるので00:19:537 (1) - で溜めを作ってみてもいいかもしれません。)
3. 00:19:960 (5) - clapに変更しても良い音出ると思います。
4. 00:29:255 (6,7,8) - 連打を入れるならvocalに合わせて、7を移動して00:29:572の方が良いかも。(提案)　
5. 00:31:262 - 不要な緑線 ?
6. 00:33:270 (1) - remove NC and 00:33:692 (3) - add NC ?
7. 00:43:199 (1) - remove NC and 00:43:833 (3) - add NC and 00:44:467 (1) - remove NC
8. 00:49:115 (1) - スライダー頭にfinish
9. 00:49:537 (2) - finish削除（↑とお好みで）
10. 01:02:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:05:171 (1,2,3,4)と同じようなリズムなので同様にした方がいいかな？

SPOILER

256,112,66650,5,0
332,167,66861,1,0
303,256,67073,1,0
208,256,67284,1,0
179,167,67495,1,0
179,167,67706,1,0

[Te][Amo] wrote:

biwako's Hard

00:42:143 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider ok~

1. Normal has a different preview point time than biwako's Hard and Insane.

1. 00:27:988 (1)-A finish on the beginning doesn't sound right here. Consider removing it.

1. Perhaps this difficulty would play better if you increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. (:

1. 00:22:495 (2)-It's probably not a good idea to leave this slider be overlapped by the previous slider track. ): Consider moving this somewhere else.
2. 00:33:692 (1)-I was expecting a jump here but there isn't. ): Come on!

Roddie wrote:

Hey.

General

1. Normal has a different preview point time than biwako's Hard and Insane.　My very baka mistake T_T Fixed

Normal

1. 00:27:988 (1)-A finish on the beginning doesn't sound right here. Consider removing it. Fixed

Insane Both changed pattern

1. 00:22:495 (2)-It's probably not a good idea to leave this slider be overlapped by the previous slider track. ): Consider moving this somewhere else.
2. 00:33:692 (1)-I was expecting a jump here but there isn't. ): Come on!

Alright, that's about it.

There really wasn't any major error's here to be honest. So, here's a star for leaving an impression on me.

Good luck to you!

Roddie wrote:

biwako's Hard

1. Perhaps this difficulty would play better if you increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. (:

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi there mod req
Lovely song <3

Normal
00:15:312 (2) - Ctrl + R
00:50:593 (1,2) - Make slider
00:56:720 (3) - Spacing

Insane
00:00:840 - Add note
00:11:509 (3) - (nazi) Try to stack directly under 00:10:241 (1)
00:27:143 (7) - Add finish (or some other hitsound)
00:40:875 (1) - Place here instead: http://puu.sh/lvT9

Great map! Good luck ^^

arien666 wrote:

Nothing to blame on here :3



meow :3

Garven wrote:

Hey

[General]
Tick rate 2 sounds great for this song

[Normal]
00:31:791 - Maybe add a circle here and start the spinner at 00:32:002 - ?
00:50:593 (1) - Add finish on start, clap on end
00:58:199 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo

[Insane]
00:19:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm not seeing the reason for this stream according to what's in the music
Same goes with a lot of the 1/4 rhythms used during the kiai.
Otherwise, this is fine.

Fuuko wrote:

I've been into this music for a while, so I've downloaded the map for some months now. Was happy when it was bubbled. :<

Anyways, can I make your hitsounds even sexier?

General:

Add more tags. You only have two, and one of those are from the guest mapper.

Normal:

00:49:537 (4) - Extend this 1/2 beat.
00:54:185 - Add a note here~ The empty space makes me a sad panda.
01:03:692 (4) - Push this 1/2 forward, deleting the next (1), and blend it together in a sexy way. Or something like this<3this.
01:04:748 (2) - If ^, new combo this.
01:06:016 (1) - If ^, remove new combo.

Also, those 7 consecutive notes at the end is kinda sadface-ish. Mix in some sliders to make it smoother.

Insane:

00:39:608 (1,2,3) - These three notes breaks the awesome flow you were setting up until this part. Should just keep going on the 1/2 patterns with some sliders.

れいんちゃん wrote:

頑張れ～

Fuuko wrote:

General:

Add more tags. You only have two, and one of those are from the guest mapper.

Normal:

00:49:537 (4) - Extend this 1/2 beat.
00:54:185 - Add a note here~ The empty space makes me a sad panda.
01:03:692 (4) - Push this 1/2 forward, deleting the next (1), and blend it together in a sexy way. Or something like this<3this. No change
01:04:748 (2) - If ^, new combo this. ^
01:06:016 (1) - If ^, remove new combo. ^

Also, those 7 consecutive notes at the end is kinda sadface-ish. Mix in some sliders to make it smoother.

Insane:

00:39:608 (1,2,3) - These three notes breaks the awesome flow you were setting up until this part. Should just keep going on the 1/2 patterns with some sliders. I changed pattern on this part

Here are the hitsounds changes I made. Didn't made any changes to biwako's diff because it's a guest diff, so I wouldn't touch it.

http://puu.sh/rEh8 I don't like hitsounds pattern about Insane diff. I won't change it. Thanks


More importantly: GET THIS RANKED GODAMNIT.

Garven wrote:

Hm..

[General]
Try offset: 89 and see what you think. hmm...I think offset:101 is correct. I asked my friends about testplay, they said so. I won't change it.

[Normal]
No tick rate 2 then? Fixed~
00:59:044 (3,4) - Spacing is a tad close. Just move the tail a couple grids right and it should be fine. Fixed~