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Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sa

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yassu-
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yassu-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年10月12日 at 15:08:48

Artist:
Title: Happy Material (TV size)
Source: UQ HOLDER! ～魔法先生ネギま！2～
Tags: mahou sensei Negima 2 opening 近衛刀太 Konoe Touta 時坂九郎丸 Tokisaka Kuroumaru 桜雨キリヱ Sakurame Kirie 夏凛 Karin 結城 忍 Yuuki Shinobu 雪広みぞれ Yukihiro Mizore
BPM: 163
Filesize: 2435kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.21 stars, 197 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.7 stars, 94 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.8 stars, 337 notes)
  4. Oni (3.85 stars, 462 notes)
Download: Happy Material (TV size)
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懐かしすぎて死んだ

BGと音源差し替えました。
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Last edited by yassu- , edited 34 times in total.
EdamaMe411
512 posts
Joined April 2014
EdamaMe411
IRC
15:10 yassu-: こんにちは^^
15:10 EdamaMe411: ji~
15:10 EdamaMe411: hi~7
15:10 EdamaMe411: hi~
15:11 EdamaMe411: とりあえず落ち着こう僕
15:11 yassu-: w
15:11 *yassu- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1437810 Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari - Happy Material (TV size)]
15:11 EdamaMe411: おお
15:11 yassu-: 色々変えました
15:12 EdamaMe411: 再DLかましました
15:12 EdamaMe411: だいぶSRさｓがりましたね
15:12 yassu-: futuuとkantanすこしガバガバかも；；
15:12 EdamaMe411: おｋっす
15:13 EdamaMe411: 鬼だけ触ってみるか~
15:13 EdamaMe411: とりあえず
15:14 EdamaMe411: ええ、、めちゃくちゃよくなってる
15:14 EdamaMe411: 何があったんですか
15:15 yassu-: ありですｗ
15:15 EdamaMe411: 密度のバランスが向上しましたね。。。
15:15 EdamaMe411: 00:16:189 (56,57,58,59,60) - ここが裕津音のなり方が気になりました。
15:15 EdamaMe411: 唯一
15:17 EdamaMe411: 00:16:925 (62) - 00:16:557 (60) - の二つの音はついにさせたいので、最後kの誤植配置を考え直してみてはどうでしょう
15:17 EdamaMe411: 五色
15:17 EdamaMe411: じぶんならｄｋｄｄｋかなあ、、
15:18 EdamaMe411: あ、次につかっわれてるか
15:18 EdamaMe411: dkkdkかな
15:19 yassu-: おｋです
15:19 yassu-: ｄｋｋｄｋ
15:20 EdamaMe411: いや、すごくよくなってて正直あんまり言えません
15:20 EdamaMe411: Muzu以下しか見ないかもですね=
15:20 yassu-: いろんな人に意見求めてよかったｗ
15:21 EdamaMe411: 00:52:446 (247,248,249) - ここってどこの音撮ってます？
15:22 EdamaMe411: 一番下のバスドラムみたいなの？
15:23 yassu-: バスドラムとか00:52:446 (247,248,249,250) - 下がっていく音を色々考慮した結果ですかね、
15:23 EdamaMe411: もしそうなら、00:53:366 - から1/4でddk,んで、00:53:919 (251) - をDのほうがしっくり
15:23 EdamaMe411: きました　
15:26 EdamaMe411: 撮ってる音も明確にわかるし、曲調の変化の区切りとしてのDもうまく機能してると思うんだけど、、
15:28 yassu-: 00:53:919 ~ ここからドラム主体でわけているので、
15:31 yassu-: 00:53:366 - ここでドラムをとるのは避けたいとおもっています._.
15:33 EdamaMe411: それなら大音符の意味の役割はちょっと変わってきゃいません？バスドラム拾ってるのでDになってるわけですし
15:34 EdamaMe411: おにでの1/1が長いのは単調だととらえられやすいかなって思たんですが、まあ、いいですかねｗ
15:37 yassu-: まあここについては他の人の意見がでたら、また考えますｗ
15:37 EdamaMe411: おｋです
15:37 EdamaMe411: そのくらいですかね
15:38 *EdamaMe411 is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1438044 Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari - Happy Material (TV size) [Muzukashii]] <Taiko>
15:42 EdamaMe411: 00:14:900 (26) - ここだけ表拍から16分が始まってるのが気になります
15:42 EdamaMe411: 他は1/2から始まってるので検討してみては
15:44 yassu-: 00:14:348 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - d k ddd k d k にしました
15:44 EdamaMe411: おｋ
15:44 EdamaMe411: 若干全体的に16分が多く感じたので、サビ以外の密度をすこーしだけ減らすといいかなって思いました
15:46 yassu-: へらします


頑張ってください！！良い譜面ですよ！ ;)
kvgyubh
58 posts
Joined April 2016
kvgyubh
oni

00:57:232 (4) - ここは00:57:968 (8) - がbig_Kであるようにbig_Kにする方が僕は好きです。

01:08:459 (63) - まずここを普通のdにして、01:08:827 (66) - ここの前にkdを置いてkddとするのはどうでしょう？

とても短いですがこんなところです、ヌーブすぎワロエナイ。ランクド頑張って下さい :) :) :) :) :) :)
uone
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2022 / Elite Mapper
172 posts
Joined December 2014
uone
たのしかったです

IRC
23:45 yassu-: こんばんは～
23:46 uone: こんばんは！
23:46 yassu-: test play okです？
23:47 uone: okdesu!
23:47 *yassu- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1437810 Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari - Happy Material (TV size)]
23:48 yassu-: 今回は低難易度
23:48 uone: DTいいですか？
23:48 yassu-: 最初はnoneで、、
23:48 uone: おけです
23:48 yassu-: できれば
23:51 uone: ノリノリ
23:53 yassu-: oniはかなり意見をもとめたので、そんなに問題ないとおもいたい。。。
23:54 uone: 偶数って意識して抑えてる感じですか?
23:55 yassu-: 本当に必要なところにしかつかってないつもりです
23:56 uone: なるほど
23:56 uone: まだ一回しかやってませんが、
23:56 uone: 00:37:906 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183) - 
23:56 uone: 00:40:851 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198) - 
23:57 uone: ここが妙に抜けてる感じが指摘になりました
23:57 uone: して　気になりました
23:57 uone: 1/4なくて1/2で8連打になってるところがなんか
23:57 uone: 気になりました
23:58 uone: 叩いた感じで
00:00 uone: a-
00:00 uone: DTだったら気になりませんでした
00:00 yassu-: うーん、、
00:00 uone: (ごめんなさい)
00:00 yassu-: 密度上げたくないかなぁ、、
00:02 uone: この曲俺だったらd___k__kd_d_k_d_ばっかりになっちゃうし、
00:02 uone: 矢っスーさんのこの譜面はいろいろ叩けていい譜面だと思いますよ
00:03 yassu-: ありです！
00:05 uone: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9299068
00:05 yassu-: 一応少しだけ1/4入れました。
00:06 yassu-: うますぎる
00:06 uone: なんか申し訳ない
00:09 yassu-: このチャット履歴をコピペしてフォーラムに貼ってもおｋですよ。
00:10 yassu-: 譜面に変更が加わったのでkds貰えます
00:10 uone: まじですか
00:10 uone: わかりました

ありがとうございました！ ranked頑張ってください！
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

kvgyubh wrote:

oni

00:57:232 (4) - ここは00:57:968 (8) - がbig_Kであるようにbig_Kにする方が僕は好きです。音が異なります

01:08:459 (63) - まずここを普通のdにして、01:08:827 (66) - ここの前にkdを置いてkddとするのはどうでしょう？　このあたりの配色をちょっとかえた。

とても短いですがこんなところです、ヌーブすぎワロエナイ。ランクド頑張って下さい :) :) :) :) :) :)
ありでした～
Xay
358 posts
Joined July 2011
Xay
Hey yassu-, here's your mod as requested.


[General]

BG: OK
Offset: OK
MP3: OK


[Kantan]

00:16:925 (1,2,3,4) - remove these notes and try d on 00:16:925 (1) - , 00:17:661 (2) - and 00:18:581 (3) - ; feels better to play in my opinion

00:53:182 (22) - d or k here


[Futsuu]

00:13:980 (16) - k?

00:19:870 (32) - k? (same sound as above)

01:04:041 (10,11) - remove these notes and try k at 01:03:857 (10) - and d at 01:04:225 (11) -



[Muzukashii]

00:18:213 (43,44) - d at 00:18:397 (44) - , 00:18:581 (45) - and 00:18:765 (46) - but I am not sure if this is too hard for muzu

01:02:109 - add d here

01:13:888 - add d here as well if you have applied the d at 01:02:109 -



[Oni]

I think this is fun and should not be changed.



I hope this helps :)
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

Xay wrote:

Hey yassu-, here's your mod as requested. hi~


[General]

BG: OK
Offset: OK
MP3: OK


[Kantan]

00:16:925 (1,2,3,4) - remove these notes and try d on 00:16:925 (1) - , 00:17:661 (2) - and 00:18:581 (3) - ; feels better to play in my opinion changed ddd d

00:53:182 (22) - d or k here ok


[Futsuu]

00:13:980 (16) - k? no changed

00:19:870 (32) - k? (same sound as above) no changed

01:04:041 (10,11) - remove these notes and try k at 01:03:857 (10) - and d at 01:04:225 (11) - vocal follow



[Muzukashii]

00:18:213 (43,44) - d at 00:18:397 (44) - , 00:18:581 (45) - and 00:18:765 (46) - but I am not sure if this is too hard for muzu changed pattern

01:02:109 - add d here no changed

01:13:888 - add d here as well if you have applied the d at 01:02:109 - ^



[Oni]

I think this is fun and should not be changed.
\(´◉◞౪◟◉)/


I hope this helps :)
thank you for modding :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
DukeDukeDura
122 posts
Joined August 2014
DukeDukeDura
hi,

Oni
01:18:029 (120) - k -> d
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

DukeDukeDura wrote:

hi,

Oni
01:18:029 (120) - k -> d ok w
Cinnamon_54
256 posts
Joined May 2015
Cinnamon_54
via in-game
hi~
sorry for short mod cuz the song is short ;w;
[General]
Disable countdown
Disable Widescreen Support

[Kantan]
00:48:029 (16) - finisher,sound effect is heavier than the previous part
00:52:446 (21,22,23) - finisher,drum pitch is high
01:13:428 - delete for consistency with 01:01:281 -

[Futsuu]
00:57:232 (119) - finisher for heavier sound
00:57:968 - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:08:459 - add note here for fitting vocal sound
00:21:526 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - why dont you add all the finishers,they sounds similar.

[Oni]
Overall:I don't suggest putting 1/4 with continuous 5 notes in this diff imo


Gl for rank~
Shoot shoot shoot!
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

Consified wrote:

via in-game
hi~
sorry for short mod cuz the song is short ;w;
[General]
Disable countdown
Disable Widescreen Support ok

[Kantan]
00:48:029 (16) - finisher,sound effect is heavier than the previous part fixed
00:52:446 (21,22,23) - finisher,drum pitch is high 00:53:919 - added finish
01:13:428 - delete for consistency with 01:01:281 - cymbal follow

[Futsuu]
00:57:232 (119) - finisher for heavier sound　cymbal follow
00:57:968 - ^ added finish

[Muzukashii]
00:08:459 - add note here for fitting vocal sound hmmm...keep
00:21:526 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - why dont you add all the finishers,they sounds similar. 00:22:630 (17,18) - These sounds are different

[Oni]
Overall:I don't suggest putting 1/4 with continuous 5 notes in this diff imo i think that no probrem


Gl for rank~
Shoot shoot shoot!
thank you for mod and ster :) :) :) :)
KamizonoShinobu
722 posts
Joined October 2011
KamizonoShinobu
Mini mod thru in game request

mod
  • 14:44 Chocola_2287: 00:41:771 (200) - d? sounds odd with 3 1/2 k
    14:45 Chocola_2287: 00:57:232 (4) - finisher to be consistent with 00:57:968 (8) -
    14:45 Chocola_2287: 00:59:808 (12,13) - dd? express that 00:59:808 (12,13,14,15) - has a upward pitch
    14:46 Chocola_2287: 01:03:305 (30) - d, 01:03:121 (29,30) - is downward pitch
    14:46 Chocola_2287: ^ like as you did in 01:06:066 (49,50) -
    14:47 Chocola_2287: 01:20:790 (138) - move to 01:20:974 - .01:20:606 (137) - vocal last until here
    14:49 Chocola_2287: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9320374 I would recommend this pattern here to accompany vocal and the guitar sound]
    14:49 Chocola_2287: 00:34:041
    14:49 Chocola_2287: 158 is a finisher
    14:51 Chocola_2287: 00:48:029 (238) - I wish you mapped with the instrument here. When you follow vocal here, the density is so low that it is kind of weird to play
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

Chocola_2287 wrote:

Mini mod thru in game request

mod
  • 14:44 Chocola_2287: 00:41:771 (200) - d? sounds odd with 3 1/2 drum follow
    14:45 Chocola_2287: 00:57:232 (4) - finisher to be consistent with 00:57:968 (8) - 00:57:232 - 00:57:968 - tease sounds are different
    14:45 Chocola_2287: 00:59:808 (12,13) - dd? express that 00:59:808 (12,13,14,15) - has a upward pitch 00:58:520 (2,3,4) - 00:59:072 (6,7,8) - 00:59:624 (10,11,12) - pattern
    14:46 Chocola_2287: 01:03:305 (30) - d, 01:03:121 (29,30) - is downward pitch 01:05:882 (48,49,50,51) - change vocal pattern
    14:46 Chocola_2287: ^ like as you did in 01:06:066 (49,50) - ^
    14:47 Chocola_2287: 01:20:790 (138) - move to 01:20:974 - .01:20:606 (137) - vocal last until here 01:20:790 - drum follow
    14:49 Chocola_2287: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9320374 I would recommend this pattern here to accompany vocal and the guitar sound
    14:49 Chocola_2287: 00:34:041 00:30:912 (139,140,141) - swap pattern
    14:49 Chocola_2287: 158 is a finisher nice!!
    14:51 Chocola_2287: 00:48:029 (238) - I wish you mapped with the instrument here. When you follow vocal here, the density is so low that it is kind of weird to play i want to vocal follow
thanks :D :D :D :D
Smallwu
572 posts
Joined April 2013
Smallwu
Hiya, mod via forum-PM.
[Oni]
  1. 00:22:630 (98) - How about K? Twin (Finisher) looks and sounds better imo.
  2. 00:35:698 (165) - Change to don, it's lower than (163) and (164).
  3. 00:35:882 (166) - Change to kat? I can't determine it. It sounds like (163)(164), but in short time I suddenly feel that they're different. :3
  4. 01:11:035 (77,78,79) - dkk feels better. (77) has low-pitched drum, so use d on it is necessary I think.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:630 (17) - How about K? Twin (Finisher) looks and sounds better imo.
=====
Good Luck!!
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

Smallwu wrote:

Hiya, mod via forum-PM.
[Oni]
  1. 00:22:630 (98) - How about K? Twin (Finisher) looks and sounds better imo. 00:22:630 (98,99) - these sounds are different
  2. 00:35:698 (165) - Change to don, it's lower than (163) and (164). fixed
  3. 00:35:882 (166) - Change to kat? I can't determine it. It sounds like (163)(164), but in short time I suddenly feel that they're different. :3 00:47:661 (235,236,237,238) - swap pattern
  4. 01:11:035 (77,78,79) - dkk feels better. (77) has low-pitched drum, so use d on it is necessary I think. Pattern preferred
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:630 (17) - How about K? Twin (Finisher) looks and sounds better imo. same oni
=====
Good Luck!!
thank you for modding :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
m421
102 posts
Joined June 2014
m421
M4M.

[Oni]
サビとか全体的に、ボーカルに合わせて配色を変えまくるより、4小節単位である程度コピペした方がいいかなって思ったり。

00:10:667 (20) - d?
00:26:127 (114) - d > 後の配置に合わせる。
00:27:232 (119,120) - k_d > ^ パターン付けのために小節線に重なる音はなるべく同じ方が良い。
00:41:587 (199) - d > すぐ後ろの k_k_d を目立たせられる。
00:44:900 (216,217) - k_d > ^

00:49:133 - k > 裏で鳴ってる 1/1 の音を目立たせたい。
01:11:035 (77) - d?
01:22:814 (148) - d?

[Muzukashii]
Oniと同じようなたぐいの提案しか無いので割愛します。

[Futsuu]
歌詞じゃなくてもっとドラムに合わせたほうが叩きやすいリズムになるような？

00:07:354 (3) - 強く音が鳴っているわけでもないので消していいと思います。
00:55:759 - d > 繰り返しじゃなくて、ノーツを足して盛り上げたい。

[Kantan]
01:08:827 - k___k > ここらへんサビなのにノーツが少なくて寂しい。
01:20:054 - d > ^
01:21:158 - k > ^


rankedがんばってください。
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

maziari1105 wrote:

M4M.

[Oni]
サビとか全体的に、ボーカルに合わせて配色を変えまくるより、4小節単位である程度コピペした方がいいかなって思ったり。

00:10:667 (20) - d? k -> kk -> kkkの方が見栄えが良いので
00:26:127 (114) - d > 後の配置に合わせる。ok
00:27:232 (119,120) - k_d > ^ パターン付けのために小節線に重なる音はなるべく同じ方が良い。^
00:41:587 (199) - d > すぐ後ろの k_k_d を目立たせられる。こっちの音取りの都合で配色変えた
00:44:900 (216,217) - k_d > ^ ok

00:49:133 - k > 裏で鳴ってる 1/1 の音を目立たせたい。^
01:11:035 (77) - d? 同じく
01:22:814 (148) - d?　^

[Muzukashii]
Oniと同じようなたぐいの提案しか無いので割愛します。多分修正できたとおもいます。

[Futsuu]
歌詞じゃなくてもっとドラムに合わせたほうが叩きやすいリズムになるような？考え中

00:07:354 (3) - 強く音が鳴っているわけでもないので消していいと思います。spreadのため
00:55:759 - d > 繰り返しじゃなくて、ノーツを足して盛り上げたい。ok

[Kantan]
01:08:827 - k___k > ここらへんサビなのにノーツが少なくて寂しい。
01:20:054 - d > ^
01:21:158 - k > ^
休憩目的と00:06:802 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern

rankedがんばってください。
modありでした。
Felt7z
25 posts
Joined March 2016
Felt7z
hi
リクありです
mod
[Oni]
  1. 00:37:446 (174) - Delete or move to 00:37:078 ? 個人的に1/4→1/1って配置だとそこでリズムが途切れて次に繋がらない印象を受けるのでできれば1/2にしてほしいなと。
  2. 00:43:336 (209) - Delete or move to 00:42:968 ? ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:17:661 (37,38,39,40) - Change to kkk_d. ここまでkで合わせていたメロディが1/4に殺されている気がするのでドラムには合わせずに 00:18:029 (40) を1/2で独立させたほうが曲に乗りやすいかと思いました。
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:04:041 (10) - Delete? サビの他の箇所と合わせてリズムを簡略化していいと思います。
[Kantan]
good
低難度のmod慣れてないしややこしい提案避けたつもりですがどうでしょうか :?
GL!
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

Felt7z wrote:

hi
リクありです
mod
[Oni]
  1. 00:37:446 (174) - Delete or move to 00:37:078 ? 個人的に1/4→1/1って配置だとそこでリズムが途切れて次に繋がらない印象を受けるのでできれば1/2にしてほしいなと。変化もあるけど、消すと次のddk(1/4)被るのでkeepしたいところ。
  2. 00:43:336 (209) - Delete or move to 00:42:968 ? ^　keep
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:17:661 (37,38,39,40) - Change to kkk_d. ここまでkで合わせていたメロディが1/4に殺されている気がするのでドラムには合わせずに 00:18:029 (40) を1/2で独立させたほうが曲に乗りやすいかと思いました。delete した
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:04:041 (10) - Delete? サビの他の箇所と合わせてリズムを簡略化していいと思います。vocalの変化をとっています
[Kantan]
good
低難度のmod慣れてないしややこしい提案避けたつもりですがどうでしょうか :?
GL!
mod ありでした！ :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Devli
75 posts
Joined April 2016
Devli
ひさしぶりにmodするからガバガバだけど許してね
Muzukashii
01:18:581 - をk に変更　シンバルドラムがなってるのと、この辺りのパターンを対照してみるともう少しパターンの変化を加えたいと思った(変えたい箇所は4つ目のurlの画像)
http://f.xup.cc/xup3ixkeczt.jpg
http://f.xup.cc/xup3ixuexbb.jpg
http://f.xup.cc/xup3iyadvec.jpg
http://f.xup.cc/xup3iycgwxo.jpg
oni
00:41:403 (198,199) - and 00:41:955 (201,202) - ctrl+G and 00:41:863 - add k
00:42:692 (204,205) - ctrl+G and 00:42:692 - delete d - 抽象的ですが違和感があり、ない音をとっている気がしたので
00:52:446 (251,252) - Kに変更 00:53:182 (253,254) - ここの音階との変化を強めてみました
00:56:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - very good
無理矢理絞ったからは？って思うとこあると思う
ランクドがんばれｗ
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

Devli wrote:

ひさしぶりにmodするからガバガバだけど許してね
Muzukashii
01:18:581 - をk に変更　シンバルドラムがなってるのと、この辺りのパターンを対照してみるともう少しパターンの変化を加えたいと思った(変えたい箇所は4つ目のurlの画像) ddk パターンをはmuzuではNGだけど、変化をについては考えてみます。
http://f.xup.cc/xup3ixkeczt.jpg
http://f.xup.cc/xup3ixuexbb.jpg
http://f.xup.cc/xup3iyadvec.jpg
http://f.xup.cc/xup3iycgwxo.jpg
oni
00:41:403 (198,199) - and 00:41:955 (201,202) - ctrl+G and 00:41:863 - add k　00:42:139 - ここをkにしたいので
00:42:692 (204,205) - ctrl+G and 00:42:692 - delete d - 抽象的ですが違和感があり、ない音をとっている気がしたので　00:30:912 (139,140,141) - pattern
00:52:446 (251,252) - Kに変更 00:53:182 (253,254) - ここの音階との変化を強めてみました 00:51:710 (250,251) - ここと被るのでkeepですかね、、
00:56:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - very good　あり！
無理矢理絞ったからは？って思うとこあると思う
ランクドがんばれｗ
modあり！！
duski
192 posts
Joined May 2015
duski
muzu
00:11:771 (9,10) - k
00:14:900 (26,27,28,29) - reverse colours
00:16:189 (32) - d
00:16:373 (33) - move to 00:16:557 (33) - and change to k
00:20:790 (10,11) - d
01:26:955 (2,1,2) - d

oni
00:00:913 (1,1) - maybe these could be changed to d
00:41:403 (198,199,200,201,202) - k k d k d
00:43:336 (209) - maybe remove

good luck for rank :D
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

duski wrote:

muzu
00:11:771 (9,10) - k kkd(1/4) is too hard for muzukashii
00:14:900 (26,27,28,29) - reverse colours no fixed
00:16:189 (32) - d 00:16:189 (32) - 00:16:925 (35,36,37) - there are same sounds
00:16:373 (33) - move to 00:16:557 (33) - and change to k drum follow
00:20:790 (10,11) - d kkd is too hard
01:26:955 (2,1,2) - d 00:20:606 (8,9,10) - pattern

oni
00:00:913 (1,1) - maybe these could be changed to d 00:00:912 - 00:06:802 - there sounds are different
00:41:403 (198,199,200,201,202) - k k d k d vocal follow
00:43:336 (209) - maybe remove fixed

good luck for rank :D
thank you for modding :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Roger
194 posts
Joined April 2012
Roger
IRC mod. Fast rank ganbatte kudasai! ><

Log
12.54 yassu-: o/~~~
12.55 ][ -GH- ][: sumimasen ;w;
12.57 yassu-: naniga?
12.59 yassu-: test play dekimasuka? ^^
13.00 ][ -GH- ][: ranked janai nara dekimasu yo
13.00 *yassu- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1437810 Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari - Happy Material (TV size)]
13.00 yassu-: arigatou !
13.00 ][ -GH- ][: aa fast ranked youtei no yatsu desu ne?
13.02 yassu-: yokattara mod mo yatte kuretara totemo tasukaru ><
13.04 ][ -GH- ][: gomen omatase
13.04 *][ -GH- ][ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1438709 Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari - Happy Material (TV size)]
13.04 yassu-: ok
13.04 ][ -GH- ][: dekiru ka dou ka yatte mimasu
13.08 yassu-: ss
13.09 ][ -GH- ][: tanoshikatta
13.09 yassu-: yokatta ^^
13.09 ][ -GH- ][: ikutsuka no tokoro ni awanai pattern ga aru ki ga shimasu ne
13.09 ][ -GH- ][: muzu mo testplay?
13.10 yassu-: onegaishimasu ^^
13.20 ][ -GH- ][: oni diff wa juubun ii desu.. yoku kiitara pattern ni au to omoimasu
13.21 yassu-: wa-i \o/
13.22 ][ -GH- ][: etto
13.23 ][ -GH- ][: 00:13:980 - D? saigo mitai ni
13.24 ][ -GH- ][: sore to mo saigo no hou wa d ni suru hou ga ii to omou
13.25 yassu-: fixed
13.26 ][ -GH- ][: 01:18:029 - k?
13.27 yassu-: 01:06:250 - pattern
13.29 ][ -GH- ][: 01:15:820 (108,109) - reverse?
13.29 ][ -GH- ][: pattern desuka.. ok
13.33 ][ -GH- ][: 00:26:127 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120) to 00:32:017 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - betsu pattern ni suru hou ga ii to omoimasu ka?
13.34 ][ -GH- ][: 00:26:127 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - dkd dkkd | 00:32:017 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - dk ddkkd
13.35 yassu-: u-n
13.35 ][ -GH- ][: onaji demo ii desukedo w
13.35 ][ -GH- ][: oni wa sore kurai to omoimasu
13.37 yassu-: atode kangaemasu~~~ ><
13.38 ][ -GH- ][: mod wa hitotsu dake deshita ne.. nokori wa tabun dake
13.40 yassu-: kono chat wo forum ni hatte kuretara kds agemasu ^^
13.41 ][ -GH- ][: muzu wa ii desuka?
13.43 yassu-: yokerebe daijyoubu desu ^^
13.44 yassu-: a, 00:27:232 - koko d ni shimashita
13.44 ][ -GH- ][: aa sore mo ii desune
13.45 ][ -GH- ][: muzu
13.45 ][ -GH- ][: 00:45:452 (103,104,105,106,107,108) - kddkkd?
13.47 ][ -GH- ][: 00:57:232 (136) - K?
13.47 yassu-: drum follow 00:33:673 (56,57,58,59,60,61) - 00:45:452 (103,104,105,106,107,108) -
13.47 ][ -GH- ][: ^ok
13.48 yassu-: 00:57:968 - koko to oto ga tigaimasu
13.48 ][ -GH- ][: tashikani sukoshi chigaimasu ne
13.49 ][ -GH- ][: 00:48:765 (118) - d?
13.50 yassu-: fixed
13.50 ][ -GH- ][: 01:12:508 (56,57,58) - kkk?
13.51 ][ -GH- ][: ^ koko to onaji oto 01:26:863 (1,2,1)
13.54 yassu-: onazi dakedo, vocal nimo awasetai kara keep kana
13.55 ][ -GH- ][: 00:38:643 (78,79) - delete?
13.56 ][ -GH- ][: 00:44:532 - or add?
13.58 yassu-: 00:44:532 - koko ha break desu
13.59 yassu-: 00:38:643 (78,79) - oto ga arunode keep
14.01 ][ -GH- ][: 00:38:643 -00:26:863 - onaji ni suru? consistency no tame
14.03 yassu-: 00:39:011 - added d
14.04 ][ -GH- ][: futsuu 00:48:765 - d
14.04 yassu-: fixed
14.06 ][ -GH- ][: "00:38:643 -00:26:863 - onaji ni suru? consistency no tame" onaji ni shinai ndesuka?
14.08 yassu-: onaji ni sinai desu
14.08 ][ -GH- ][: ok
14.08 ][ -GH- ][: kantan no note ga sukunai to omoimasen?
14.10 yassu-: spread kara kangaete daijyoubu dato omoimasu
14.10 ][ -GH- ][: kantan wa daijoubu to omoimasu ne
14.11 yassu-: update shimasuka?
14.12 ][ -GH- ][: hai
14.12 ][ -GH- ][: douzo douzo
14.13 yassu-: ok

STAR +1
EdamaMe411
512 posts
Joined April 2014
EdamaMe411
こんばんは、何度もすれ違って申し訳ない。
お約束通りmodします。no kds
Futsuu
・00:03:857 - add k . kanntanではまあありだと思うんですけど、個人的にはMuzuに合わせて入れてもいいかなと思います。
・00:16:373 (23) - 1/2 right. メインメロディに合わせるので、右に動かしたほうが妥当だと感じました。

Muzu
・00:16:373 (33) - 普通と同じです。


行っても直すところはあまり見受けられなかったですけどね^^;
頑張って~

( *´艸｀)☆~
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

EdamaMe411 wrote:

こんばんは、何度もすれ違って申し訳ない。
お約束通りmodします。no kds
Futsuu
・00:03:857 - add k . kanntanではまあありだと思うんですけど、個人的にはMuzuに合わせて入れてもいいかなと思います。いちおうspreedを滑らかにするため(とても細かいですが、、、)
・00:16:373 (23) - 1/2 right. メインメロディに合わせるので、右に動かしたほうが妥当だと感じました。ok

Muzu
・00:16:373 (33) - 普通と同じです。muzuからdrumの音を取っているのでkeep


行っても直すところはあまり見受けられなかったですけどね^^;
頑張って~

( *´艸｀)☆~
mod,starありです！
D o t
250 posts
Joined May 2016
D o t
遅かったので2 starsおまけ
[Kantan]
01:07:906 - 01:09:195 - add a note? 急に空いてたので変に感じます。
01:19:501 - 01:21:158 - ^

[Futsuu]
ピッチに対して変に感じるところ
01:03:489 (9) - change to k?
01:04:225 (11) - change to d?
01:15:268 (39) - change to k?

[Oni]
00:14:992 - add a note? ここだけ空いてるのちょっと気になってたので
00:57:232 (4) - add finish? 00:57:968 (8) - と同じ
01:12:784 (88,89) - ctrl+g, 01:12:968 (90) - change to d? ピッチが下がってるので。90だけ変更でもおｋ

いい譜面でした、ランクド頑張ってください :)
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

D o t wrote:

遅かったので2 starsおまけ
[Kantan]
01:07:906 - 01:09:195 - add a note? 急に空いてたので変に感じます。fixed
01:19:501 - 01:21:158 - ^ ^

[Futsuu]
ピッチに対して変に感じるところ
01:03:489 (9) - change to k? no fixed
01:04:225 (11) - change to d? ^
01:15:268 (39) - change to k? ^
patternもかんがえています

[Oni]
00:14:992 - add a note? ここだけ空いてるのちょっと気になってたので　no fixed
00:57:232 (4) - add finish? 00:57:968 (8) - と同じ 00:57:968 - こことは音がちがいます。
01:12:784 (88,89) - ctrl+g, 01:12:968 (90) - change to d? ピッチが下がってるので。90だけ変更でもおｋ　たたきやすさもかねてkeep

いい譜面でした、ランクド頑張ってください :)
modありです！！
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,009 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic
Here is the M4M as requested. Sorry for the delay ><

IRC mod with yassu-, Nov 19, 2017
00:25 yassu-: hi :3/
00:25 Nardoxyribonucleic: hi :3/
00:29 yassu-: when mod happy material ? ._.
00:29 Nardoxyribonucleic: Do you have time for IRC mod? I was really really busy last week
00:32 yassu-: from now??
00:32 Nardoxyribonucleic: Yes
00:32 yassu-: ok
00:33 *yassu- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1437810 Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari - Happy Material (TV size)]
00:33 *Nardoxyribonucleic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1438709 Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari - Happy Material (TV size) [Kantan]]
00:34 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:10:299 (4) - delete and add k at 00:09:011 - to make the pattern simple and have a better spread with Futsuu ?
00:35 yassu-: fixed
00:39 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:26:679 (2) - move to 00:25:207 - and add k at 00:24:839 - ?
00:39 Nardoxyribonucleic: The spread with Futsuu seems to be not good right now...
00:43 yassu-: hmmm
00:43 Nardoxyribonucleic: [https://puu.sh/yoGDz.png You may rearrange like this] (cursor at 00:27:416 - )
00:44 Nardoxyribonucleic: Hmm, let me think of one more arrangement
00:45 yassu-: fixed...!
01:00 Nardoxyribonucleic: From 00:30:360 - to 00:34:593 - https://puu.sh/yoH9W.png (cursor at 00:32:569 - )
01:04 yassu-: fixed
01:08 yassu-: kdkd(1/1) is too hard…?
01:11 Nardoxyribonucleic: Not very hard, but we may try something else...
01:13 yassu-: ok
01:16 Nardoxyribonucleic: You may try to move 00:29:992 (6) - to 00:29:624 -
01:17 Nardoxyribonucleic: if you think 1/1 kdkd is too long here
01:19 yassu-: that's better for me
01:23 Nardoxyribonucleic: From 00:36:250 - to 00:48:029 - https://puu.sh/yoHQR.png (cursor at 00:41:403 - )
01:26 yassu-: fixed. but 00:46:373 - 00:34:593 - this sounds is strong.
01:27 Nardoxyribonucleic: maybe 00:46:373 (18) - add finish?
01:31 yassu-: i think that kkd is enough.
01:31 Nardoxyribonucleic: ok
01:32 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:57:968 - add k to spread better with Futsuu?
01:35 yassu-: i changed 00:56:863 (31,32,33) - d dK
01:36 yassu-: d dk
01:36 Nardoxyribonucleic: It's also fine
01:39 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:20:054 - add d ? same as ^
01:40 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:27:416 - ^
01:41 yassu-: fixed
01:42 yassu-: 01:27:416 - 00:21:158 - pattern
01:43 Nardoxyribonucleic: Yes, you may fix both
01:44 yassu-: fixed
01:44 Nardoxyribonucleic: so Kantan notes 99->107
01:44 Nardoxyribonucleic: https://puu.sh/yoIyK.png
01:46 *Nardoxyribonucleic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1438487 Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari - Happy Material (TV size) [Futsuu]]
01:48 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:44:900 (96,97,98,99,100) - maybe try dk kd k ? This could fit the pitch changes better
01:50 yassu-: fixed
01:51 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:07:906 (21,22,23) - similar to ^ , consider k dk here?
01:55 yassu-: i changed 01:07:170 (19,20,21,22,23) - k d k dk
01:55 Nardoxyribonucleic: ok
01:55 *Nardoxyribonucleic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1438044 Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari - Happy Material (TV size) [Muzukashii]]
01:59 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:11:771 (9) - delete and move 00:11:863 (10) - to 00:12:047 - ? The gap with Futsuu is too big
02:02 yassu-: fixed
02:03 yassu-: 01:23:919 - fixed
02:03 Nardoxyribonucleic: yes
02:10 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:45:820 (106,107) - you may swap these notes to d k to fit the vocal there
02:12 yassu-: 00:33:673 (56,57,58,59,60,61) - 00:45:452 (104,105,106,107,108,109) - fit to cymbals
02:14 Nardoxyribonucleic: then 00:45:452 (104,105,106,107,108,109) - kdkdkk ?
02:15 Nardoxyribonucleic: the last cymbal is missing
02:17 yassu-: and 00:46:373 (109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - fit to sounds
02:18 Nardoxyribonucleic: ......
02:19 Nardoxyribonucleic: structurally it would be better to group 00:46:741 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - together like 00:34:962 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) -
02:20 Nardoxyribonucleic: Not forcing you to change but more consistent
02:21 yassu-: 00:46:373 - changed...
02:24 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:05:330 (26,27,28,29) - dk kd like you did in Futsuu?
02:27 yassu-: i want to follow drum sounds from muzukashii
02:27 Nardoxyribonucleic: Hmm okay
02:30 *Nardoxyribonucleic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1437810 Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari - Happy Material (TV size) [Oni]]
02:39 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:08:459 (63) - maybe try K for the high pitch ?
02:42 yassu-: hmmm
02:46 Nardoxyribonucleic: 01:18:949 (127) - you also put K for similar vocal
02:46 Nardoxyribonucleic: By doing so the big don at 01:10:115 (73,76,80) - could be emphasized
02:47 yassu-: i changed 01:08:090 (61,62,63) - kdK
02:47 Nardoxyribonucleic: Good
02:50 Nardoxyribonucleic: 00:07:906 (7) - delete and change 00:08:090 (8) - to k ?
02:54 yassu-: fixed
02:55 Nardoxyribonucleic: I think that's all for now
02:58 yassu-: update?
02:58 Nardoxyribonucleic: Sure. I will recheck tomorrow :3
02:59 yassu-: thanks ><
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,009 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic
A quick recheck about the metadata. (no kd)



Artist: 高倉有加、広瀬ゆうき、茅野愛衣、小倉唯、原田彩楓、鬼頭明里
Romanised Artist: Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari
Title: ハッピー☆マテリアル
Romanised Title: Happy*Material

It would be too long to include the character names in artist so it seems okay to keep the current format.
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

A quick recheck about the metadata. (no kd)



Artist: 高倉有加、広瀬ゆうき、茅野愛衣、小倉唯、原田彩楓、鬼頭明里
Romanised Artist: Takakura Yuka, Hirose Yuuki, Kayano Ai, Ogura Yui, Harada Sayaka, Kito Akari
Title: Happy*Material
Romanised Title: ハッピー☆マテリアル

It would be too long to include the character names in artist so it seems okay to keep the current format.
fixed
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,009 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic
The set looks fine now with a uniform spread. Lower difficulties have adequate rest moments and pattern choices are good in general.

Bubbled~
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

The set looks fine now with a uniform spread. Lower difficulties have adequate rest moments and pattern choices are good in general.

Bubbled~
thanks~~~
Volta
1,622 posts
Joined March 2014
Volta
[Kantan]
00:00:912 - maybe add finisher? it's K in all other diffs.
00:06:788 - , 00:08:274 - same as ^

[Futsuu]
00:47:661 - consider to add d to highlight the vocal and smoother transition between Kantan and Muzukashii
00:57:232 - maybe give finisher? feels like this have same strength with 00:57:968 -
00:58:336 (1) - how about stop the spinner at 00:59:440 - , and then
>> add k at 00:59:808 -, 00:59:992 - , 01:00:176 - , 01:00:360 -
>> 01:00:728 - and remove this note. i think this way can emphasis the instrument better and create smoother spread with Muzukashii

[Muzukashii]
00:57:232 - same as futsuu
00:22:814 (18,19,20) - maybe remove finishers, to only emphasis 00:23:735 - ? in lower diffs it's only the end that have finisher, and actually feels weird if half normal notes, half big notes
01:12:139 - consider to remove for consistency with 01:23:919 - and smoother spread with Futsuu

[Oni]
00:22:814 (98,99,100) - same as Muzukashii
00:53:919 - give finisher like other diffs?
00:57:232 - same as Futsuu
01:11:771 (81,82) - remove finishers for consistency with Muzukashii


You may call me back after that~
yassu-
430 posts
Joined September 2015
Topic Starter
yassu-

Volta wrote:

[Kantan]
00:00:912 - maybe add finisher? it's K in all other diffs. fixed
00:06:788 - , 00:08:274 - same as ^ I want to emphasize 00:09:747 (4,5) - more

[Futsuu]
00:47:661 - consider to add d to highlight the vocal and smoother transition between Kantan and Muzukashii fixed
00:57:232 - maybe give finisher? feels like this have same strength with 00:57:968 - 　00:57:968 - is stronger than 00:57:232 -
00:58:336 (1) - how about stop the spinner at 00:59:440 - , and then i think it is not fit to vocal. i stoped spinner 00:59:808 -
>> add k at 00:59:808 -, 00:59:992 - , 01:00:176 - , 01:00:360 -no fixed i think it is too difficult. and futuu is vocal mapping.
>> 01:00:728 - and remove this note. i think this way can emphasis the instrument better and create smoother spread with Muzukashii

[Muzukashii]
00:57:232 - same as futsuu same
00:22:814 (18,19,20) - maybe remove finishers, to only emphasis 00:23:735 - ? in lower diffs it's only the end that have finisher, and actually feels weird if half normal notes, half big notes fixed for spread with oni. but 00:22:630 - and 00:22:814 - are difficult.
01:12:139 - consider to remove for consistency with 01:23:919 - and smoother spread with Futsuu fixed

[Oni]
00:22:814 (98,99,100) - same as Muzukashii 00:22:630 - and 00:22:814 - are difficult.
00:53:919 - give finisher like other diffs? same 00:52:446 (249,250,251,252) - i want to emphasize
00:57:232 - same as Futsuu same
01:11:771 (81,82) - remove finishers for consistency with Muzukashii hmmm... keep. i hear cymbals


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