banvi wrote:

[All diffs]

• 01:28:210 (1) 1st kiai time ending here
  01:21:817 (2) 2nd kiai time ending here

[Japan #1]

• At reast HP +1 , OD +1 please
  00:02:145 (4) remove whistle on the silder end
  00:13:456 (3) add clap
  00:14:440 (1) ^
  00:14:932 (2) remove clap on the silder start
  00:15:915 (3) add clap on the middle and add finish on the silder end
  00:17:391 (4) add clap
  00:31:653 (1,2) ^
  00:40:505 (1) add finish on the finish
  00:55:259 (1,1) delete the spinner and add notes/silders? T_T
  because too short between the spinner and the silder for the easiest diff... or put the center 00:57:227 (1).
  01:22:309 (2) add clap
  01:22:800 (3) remove clap
  01:28:210 (1) remove whistle? sounds weird for me :<

[Japan #61]

• AR -1? AR8 is a bit fast for me :<
  00:33:374 (1) remove new combo
  00:47:882 (3) remove finish on the silder start
  00:54:522 (2) remove clap on the silder start and add clap on the silder end
  00:55:014 (3) remove clap
  00:55:259 (4) add clap on the silder start and remove clap on the silder end
  01:13:948 (3) hmm , looking ugly. you can adjust cleaner.
  01:20:833 (5) add clap
  01:21:325 (6) remove finish and add clap
  01:21:817 (1) add finish on the silder start
  01:22:800 (3) add clap on the silder end
  01:28:210 (1) remove whistle? sounds weird for me :<

almost hitsounds mod because I think you can improve more
mapset is almost fine to me.
I like this song! Good Luck!

• 00:00:178 (1) - I think it's better to use soft hitsound for the slider-slide, to get a quieter slider-slide sound
  00:04:235 (3) - Move few grids left? Will flow better imo
  00:09:030 (5) - Shorten this slider by 1/4 and add a note where the slider originally ends?
  00:19:604 (5) - Change into a repeating 1/4 slider?
  00:27:718 (1,2) - Copy-paste (2) to (1) perhaps? (2)'s curve is better... It will result like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/174975
  00:34:850 (4) - Clap in the end instead of whistle? Also delete (5)'s clap if you did this suggestion
  00:40:505 (1) - Slightly placed below (2). Is it intentional?
  00:45:178 (4) - ...The clap here sounds out of place imo...
  01:00:669 (1) - 3x-repeat slider orz... I think this rhythm plays much better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/174980
  01:17:882 (2) - Finish at slider start?
  01:18:743 (4,7) - Add whistle on (4) and (7)'s start? Also remove the whistle on (3)

• 00:01:161 (3) - Add finish at slider start?
  00:18:866 (4) - Curve this facing right like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175372 will be more flowy imo
  00:21:325 (2) - Add clap? (it's weird having an inconsistent clap hitsound here)
  00:32:637 (6) - I can hear a loud cymbal sound on the background, maybe add finish on slider start here (soft-hitfinish also works well imo)
  00:49:358 (3) - Add whistle on repeat?
  00:51:325 (1) - Add whistle on repeat?
  01:06:079 (1) - Finish on slider start?
  01:10:997 (3,4) - The spacing change here... I don't think it's intentional orz
  01:21:817 (1) - Finish on slider start?
  01:27:718 (1) - Set the last inherit section on the spinner's end?

• 00:12:473 (1,2,3,4) - Try to shape the curve like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175375 ?
  00:21:817 (2) - Overly curved imo >< This one better imo : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175378
  00:25:259 (2,3,4,5,...) - Rather than (clapwhistle - clapwhistle - clapwhistle - whistle - whistle - whistle - whistle - ...) hitsound usage, I think it's better to keep them consistent in this pattern : (clapwhistle - whistle - clapwhistle - etc)
  00:40:505 (1) - Move the finish to the slider's start?
  00:48:374 (1,2,3) - One grid left so (1) is in the center?
  00:53:292 (1,1,2,3,4) - Again, the clapwhistle - whistle - clapwhistle - whistle suggestion
  01:17:391 (6) - Add finish on slider end?
  01:21:325 (6) - Clap here, instead of finish?

Niva wrote:

Mod request via In-game PM ~

Hya HeatKai :3
I only have about 10 mins to mod tonight orz. I'll just mod 1 diff for now, and I'll edit post tomorrow along with the mod for the other diffs.

[General]
-> Don't capitalize "Mekadon" in tags perhaps? (not really a big issue though)
-> Offset 192 sounds much better to me (:

[Japan #61]

• 00:00:178 (1) - I think it's better to use soft hitsound for the slider-slide, to get a quieter slider-slide sound
  00:04:235 (3) - Move few grids left? Will flow better imo
  00:09:030 (5) - Shorten this slider by 1/4 and add a note where the slider originally ends?
  00:19:604 (5) - Change into a repeating 1/4 slider?
  00:27:718 (1,2) - Copy-paste (2) to (1) perhaps? (2)'s curve is better... It will result like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/174975
  00:34:850 (4) - Clap in the end instead of whistle? Also delete (5)'s clap if you did this suggestion
  00:40:505 (1) - Slightly placed below (2). Is it intentional?
  00:45:178 (4) - ...The clap here sounds out of place imo...
  01:00:669 (1) - 3x-repeat slider orz... I think this rhythm plays much better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/174980
  01:17:882 (2) - Finish at slider start?
  01:18:743 (4,7) - Add whistle on (4) and (7)'s start? Also remove the whistle on (3)

[Japan #1]

• 00:12:473 (1,2,3,4) - Try to shape the curve like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175375 ?
  00:21:817 (2) - Overly curved imo >< This one better imo : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175378
  00:25:259 (2,3,4,5,...) - Rather than (clapwhistle - clapwhistle - clapwhistle - whistle - whistle - whistle - whistle - ...) hitsound usage, I think it's better to keep them consistent in this pattern : (clapwhistle - whistle - clapwhistle - etc)
  00:40:505 (1) - Move the finish to the slider's start?
  00:48:374 (1,2,3) - One grid left so (1) is in the center?
  00:53:292 (1,1,2,3,4) - Again, the clapwhistle - whistle - clapwhistle - whistle suggestion
  01:17:391 (6) - Add finish on slider end?
  01:21:325 (6) - Clap here, instead of finish?

Mostly suggestion ^^
Good luck HeatKai (: (:

foulcoon wrote:

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[General]
- The mp3 kind of cuts out awkwardly, maybe find a better version of it?
- The video is kind of huge in file size? I think this can be compressed.
- This may just be my opinion but in each difficulty there seems to be awkward use of new combos. This is mostly regarding the easier two difficulties. I'm not going to be critical and mention a bunch of suggestions here, however it may benefit you to review your new combo use.

[Japan #1]
00:00:178 (1,2) - I would probably remove these 2 hitcircles and start on the next combo, the downbeat. It seems more suitable for beginners this way.

Otherwise, it looks good to me!

[Japan #44]
Looks fine to me.

[Japan #61]
00:21:571 (4,1,2,3) - but I don't like slider overlaps :S

00:44:440 (2,3,4) - heres a place I expected a jump but there isn't one >.>
00:58:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jump just seems awkward to me

---- I didn't look at taiko ----

Anyways, nice job on the map.


EDIT: on a side note - I hadn't checked timing because I can't actually play the map right now, but the offset seems early to me.

mekadon wrote:

heatkai edit la beatmap information tu....
Asal diff aku not done lak? Gigit kang.

Haseo wrote:

Isn't there a ranked Houki Gumo already?

Also, nice work.

sherrie__fay wrote:

[#1]
fine.

[#44]

00:21:325 (2) - +clap
00:39:030 (5) - ^
01:02:145 (1) - remove the whistle of slider body
01:05:587 (6) - +clap
01:22:800 (3) - remove clap
01:23:292 (4) - add clap at slider's end

[#61]

00:23:784 (1,2,3) - reverse selection
00:44:440 (2,3,4) - here distance snap please or it may be hard to read
00:58:948 (2) - remove clap
00:59:440 (4) - ^
00:59:194 (3) - +clap
00:59:686 (5) - ^
01:09:276 (5) - remove the clap of slider start
01:12:718 - +note
01:15:669 (3) - add clap at slider's end

lovely map. i like this anime.

sherrie__fay wrote:

and my message is too short..
eh..dont need KDS. just little work.
a set of hits.
i hope if you like it :3

Combo1 : 103,184,233
Combo2 : 252,213,131
Combo3 : 179,231,107

lovhin456 wrote:

hello ~

general;
- slidertick 2 for all diffs ?
- try these colors ?

Combo1 : 103,184,233
Combo2 : 252,213,131
Combo3 : 179,231,107

skin;
- fine

japan #1;
- 00:10:014 >> start the new combo here instead
- 00:24:276 >> add finish also start the new combo here instead
- 00:24:768 >> change to soft finish
- 00:25:751 >> new combo
- 00:31:653 >> add clap
- in some parts you tend to put a lot of notes in a row, not that bad but still

japan #44;
- 01:25:751 >> add finish
- i'm not sure about that break ...
- ah, the normal set claps feel, i think the custom soft ones fit a lot more

japan #61;
- 01:00:669 >> make the curve smoother
- 01:13:948 >> ^
- you have some streams not following the music :/

* star

1. Everything is fine. Great!

1. Well, i didn't aggre you are using normal finish sound for just increasing epic part like reff in the song. I think it doesn't fit with soft finish sound and sounds too loud.
2. 00:58:702 - Adding circle with clap hitsound into this time will greatly improve the flow imo.
3. Other than thing i mention above seems fine imo.

1. At the first look i thought his diff is made by you HeatKai. Well, changing the BG or adding mekadon identity to the tittle name will help clear this misunderstanding.
2. 00:01:161 (3) - There should be a finish sound on the startpoint since there's a 'bang' sound from the drum in the back.
3. 00:02:145 (1) - Since the first combo is too long i suggest you add new combo here.
4. 00:05:096 (1) - Well, make it curve? since your previous slider doesn't consist of linear slider like this.
5. 00:54:276 (1) - I think the rythim is more better if you reduce this spinner to 00:56:735 then add 1/1 slider in 00:57:227 to 00:57:718
6. 01:02:145 (1) - The whistle sound here sounds awkward since there's no whistle sound before and after this note. You should remove it.
7. 01:06:079 (1) - Same reason as 00:01:161 (3), you should add finish sound at the startpoint of the slider.
8. 01:11:981 (1) - The sounds is more better if you remove finish sound from this spinner.
9. 01:17:882 (3) - Remove finish sounds at the startpoint here as well. Doesn't consistence with the rythim before.
10. 01:21:325 (4) - The finish sound should be on 01:21:817 (1) - startpoint. Not here.
11. 01:29:686 - change sound in this timing point to soft is better imo.

1. The AR is too fast and doesn't fit the song at all. Reduce it by 1. Also The HP drain too. Reduce it by 1 too.
2. 00:15:423 (5) - Remove whistle sound from the endpoint is better imo. It will the hitsound more consistent.
3. 00:23:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sudden jump. It's too suprising. I'm not recomendding it for hard difficulty. Even me miss at the first try. You can reduce the distance of the jump to reduce it's difficulty.
4. 00:31:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above.
5. 00:33:374 (1) - Whistle here is awkward. Better to remove it.
6. 00:35:833 (2,3,4,5,6) - The stream doesn't work imo.
7. 00:44:809 (3) - Why this circle is on the blue tick? It doesn't fit the vocal nor the song. And the polarity is bad if you suddenly change it to blue tick. Move it to 00:44:932
8. 01:17:882 (2) - remove finish sound from the startpoint. It's not consistent. Your previous rythym in this rythim doesn't consist any finish sound here.
9. 01:18:620 (3,4,5,6) - The stream here is not work too imo.

Miya wrote:

no kudosu for me even you follow my suggestion? --a

Breeze wrote:

Bubbled

mekadon wrote:

cepat lak bubble D:

hoLysoup wrote:

congrats~

banvi wrote:

congrats~

12BARRY21 wrote:

Congratz!!~~~~

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

congratz \ /

Sander-Don wrote:

nice

KuraiPettan wrote:

\:D/

x3Jerry wrote:

Congrats!

RhaiizoN wrote:

=w= b

Kaona wrote:

Congrats Heat~!! <33