phoon wrote:

Hi ~ grasscarp

From yuineee & phoon's modding queue


He forgot the request of I am sorry Mod　TT
I will Mod, although it was late...

It is a proposal altogether :3

General
How about adding one combo color?


Easy
Fine!

Normal
Fine!

Hard
>>00:18:422 (4) - How about using arrangement as shown in >>00:17:484(1, 2)?
>>00:38:734 (x) - add note

Insane
>>00:25:609 (5) - It is a proposal

SPOILER

>>00:48:734 (5) - a few is arranged downward
>>01:12:641 (1) - remove clap
>>01:15:766 (1) - remove NC
>>01:22:016 (9) - add NC
>>02:21:391 (10) - ^
>>02:23:891 (7) - ^
>>02:28:891 (10) - ^
>>02:33:891 (10) - ^
>>02:38:891 (9) - ^

marshall_racer wrote:

Artist is "Sakine Meiko"
For Artist/Title change stuff, check this -> viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443&start=0

btw, I love both, mapset and song <3

tennen baka yuyuko wrote:

nice song!

inaba-tan wrote:

ｐｌｚ更新～

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod here:

[General]
- The solo BG size is currently 1079*768, plz resize it to 4:3, i.e. 1024*768
- tag inaba tan inaba-tan in ALL diff

[inaba's Taiko]
- you must follow other diff's inherited time section (red line), that is 00:02:641, Remove all other red lines
00:22:328 - try k k here to fit the vocal
00:34:828 - I feel an accent here to try to add a finish here
00:52:797 - try K k d?
01:21:859 - ddd?
01:52:486 - Unsnapped circle
02:21:859 - start kkkk here
02:35:764 - Unsnapped circle
02:36:389 - Unsnapped circle

nice diff in overall, if you can use more 1/2 instead of 1/4 to emphasize the melody that would be perfect : D

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod here:

[General]
- The solo BG size is currently 1079*768, plz resize it to 4:3, i.e. 1024*768
- tag inaba tan inaba-tan in ALL diff

[inaba's Taiko]
- you must follow other diff's inherited time section (red line), that is 00:02:641, Remove all other red lines
00:22:328 - try k k here to fit the vocal
00:34:828 - I feel an accent here to try to add a finish here
00:52:797 - try K k d?
01:21:859 - ddd?
01:52:486 - Unsnapped circle
02:21:859 - start kkkk here
02:35:764 - Unsnapped circle
02:36:389 - Unsnapped circle

nice diff in overall, if you can use more 1/2 instead of 1/4 to emphasize the melody that would be perfect : D

23:37 <Roddie> : Hi
23:37 <Roddie> : i have a couple of questions to ask
23:37 <grasscarp> : hi roddie
23:37 <Roddie> : about this map you have
23:37  *Roddie is editing (Meiko - E? Aa, Sou.)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38550]
23:38 <grasscarp> : 0.0
23:38 <Roddie> : you do know that there is a 2nd timing section on the taiko diff right?
23:38 <Roddie> : and you don't have a 2nd timing section on the rest of the diffs...
23:38 <grasscarp> : ....eh, in fact i dont know about this.
23:39 <grasscarp> : Taiko diff is made by other person,maybe i could tell him.
23:39 <grasscarp> : ..or i could change it by myself.
23:39 <Roddie> : well, you can only use another timing section if there is a bpm change of the song or if one part of the song has a beat off and a timing section is 
23:39 <Roddie> : needed
23:40 <grasscarp> : So i should make the red line of taiko be same as solo diffs?
23:40 <Roddie> : NO!
23:41 <grasscarp> : :o
23:41 <Roddie> : i deleted the 2nd red line
23:41 <Roddie> : and the tempo is fine
23:41 <Roddie> : it's following along the beat
23:41 <Roddie> : so one red line is okay :P
23:41 <grasscarp> : = =ok,i see
23:42 <Roddie> : tell the guy who made the taiko about the timing
23:42 <Roddie> : and tell him a 2nd timing section is not needed
23:42 <grasscarp> : OK,I know how to deal with this....
23:42 <Roddie> : good :)

1. 00:42:250-It's odd seeing the kiai time starting off here. Please remove it.
2. 01:32:250-^
3. 02:21:312-^

1. There are a couple of issues with the background:
   
   
   1. I get the song is originally sung by Miku Hatsune but hearing that the song is sung by Meiko, a background of Miku Hatsune is not needed for this song.
   2. The background is suggestive. I don't think your map would get ranked because of the background. ):

SPOILER

• 02:25:141 (3)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.

1. 02:24:672-Perhaps it's best to put a new combo here?
2. 02:29:828-^
3. 02:42:641 (7)-Hm... How about removing this note and replace with a 1/2 slider? Starting from 02:42:641 and end it on 02:42:719.

1. 02:37:953 (1)-A Big Kat is not needed in my opinion. Remove the finish.

1. 01:27:328 (3)-Stack this properly on the end point of the previous slider.
2. 02:03:641 (1)-How about using the distance snap, space this out and have it align with the end point of the previous slider. Some thing like this. In my opinion, it's the best way to go!
3. 02:42:641 (5)-^Pretty much the same thing.

1. How about making the circle size a bit larger? xD
2. 01:31:234 (5, 1)-Stack these properly on the end point of the previous slider.
3. 02:16:859 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11)-I don't think 1/4 streams would be fitting on this part of the song. ): Consider remapping something else.

1. The offset is different from each difficulty,you should fix this.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:22:641 (1) - Some design thing here.Probably just make the second point of the slider to the middle of slider?I think that is more beautiful like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
   2. 00:34:828 (x) - This place is quite strong,so I think you shouldn't skip a note here.You should emphasize it instead.
   3. 00:36:703 (4) - I feel really strange about the rhythm here because there is nothing to support the this.I mean there are no drum sound/vocal etc.
   4. 00:52:016 (6) - Same as 00:22:641.
   5. 01:02:641 (1) - ^
   6. 02:41:391 (6) - I think you need to add a new combo here to fit your combo pattern.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:28:734 (2) - Please remove the whistle from "whole" slider,just add it on the first and the end of the slider.Just want to point out that would make a noisy sound if you just add it to whole slider.
   2. 01:38:266 (2) - I think you should remove the whistle and turn the volume to 5% here to fit the music.
   3. 02:05:453 (3) - Same as 00:28:734.
   4. 02:07:953 (1) - ^
   5. 02:12:953 (1) - ^ (Please check this carefully,I won't point this out again)

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR -1 for consistent with OD.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:21:234 (3) - I don't think that it is suitable to put a long slider becuase I can saw you mostly put 1/1 and 1/2 in this part.So i recommend to change it to 1/1 or 1/2.
   2. 01:31:547 (4) - Why the spacing is different between (1.2)- and(3)?At least I can't find a reason that you need to do.
   3. 02:21:391 (1) - A spinner didn't fit the music here because the vocal is still singing.I assume that spinner is for the music of protraction.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:51:078 (2) - I think you are missing a clap sound at the beginning of the slider to fit your hitclap pattern.
   2. 02:32:641 (2) - Probably change this to normal hitsound with 50% volume to fit the music much perfect.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 02:12:641 (2) - (bad gameplay) Be honest, this speed change can casues a really bad gameplay because the vocal didn't 'speed' up yet.So it will cause a miss if the player is careless and remember this is a Hard diff.It shouldn't be like that.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:12:641 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing here,please fix that because this kind of spacing may make confused to player.
   2. 00:13:734 (1) - And then add a new combo here to fit the others combo lenght.
   3. 00:19:984 (7) - ^Same.
   4. 00:32:641 (1,2,3) - I have seen this pattern more than 1 time in this diff.I think you should change a new pattern to give more feeling to player.
   5. 01:31:547 (1,2,3,4) - May I ask why do you put a stacking here?In this place it's obvious can may some interesting pattern.Quite weird about that.
   6. 01:38:266 (3) - Would you tell me why you put a 1/6 here?It's quite meaningless.Although it is slient,it shouldn't be like this.
   7. 02:02:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - Something like 01:31:547 -
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:34:828 (5) - Remove the whistle from the beginning of the slider and then add a clap on it.Btw,please remove the clap at the end of the slider.
   2. 01:39:828 (5) - Add a clap here to fit your hitclap pattern.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. According to the BPM and your arrangement of this.It obviously didn't need ar9.Please trun down to AR8 at least.
   2. HP and OD -1 at least for consistency.
2. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 02:30:609 (5) - (bad gameplay) Be honest,this note is coverd by 02:29:672 (2) - and 02:29:828 (1) - 's comboburst.It's really hard to read it and it maybe make confused to player.
      
      something here.

      
3. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:28:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I can't understand that why you need to put a tons of jump here.It's really strange because you can't hear any up pitch.
   2. 00:43:891 (6,7,8,9) - Triplate sounds weird for me.I think some simple 1/2 is good enough here,it doesn't need to put any stream.They can't fit the music very well.
   3. 01:21:703 (8) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because the jump pattern is starting from here.
   4. 01:29:516 (4) - A design thing here.I would make this slider like this,I think that's much beautiful.
      
      Suggestion

      

      416,208,89516,2,0,B|469:200|489:108|448:66,1,160,2|8

   5. 01:38:266 (7) - Would you tell me why you put a 1/6 here?It's quite meaningless.Although it is slient,it shouldn't be like this
   6. 02:26:234 (7) - New combo here please,the reason same as above.
   7. 02:36:391 (8) - Add a new combo here due to the jump pattern is started.

1. Please change taiko to Taiko please.
2. The hitsound is too soft now.Please change to soft - 100%.
3. 00:41:547 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I prefer kkddkdk here.It fits the music much better.
4. 01:00:609 (2,3,1) - Change these notes to big notes? Because I can heard the accent point here.
5. 01:22:016 (3) - Change this to kat?
6. 02:21:391 (1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1) - No please!This stream is much difficult than overall!This stream is oni9* stream.However you only put oni8* stream in other places.Please change it.

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request:
Sorry for long delay.

[General]

1. The offset is different from each difficulty,you should fix this.

[Easy]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:22:641 (1) - Some design thing here.Probably just make the second point of the slider to the middle of slider?I think that is more beautiful like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
   2. 00:34:828 (x) - This place is quite strong,so I think you shouldn't skip a note here.You should emphasize it instead.
   3. 00:36:703 (4) - I feel really strange about the rhythm here because there is nothing to support the this.I mean there are no drum sound/vocal etc.
   4. 00:52:016 (6) - Same as 00:22:641.
   5. 01:02:641 (1) - ^
   6. 02:41:391 (6) - I think you need to add a new combo here to fit your combo pattern.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:28:734 (2) - Please remove the whistle from "whole" slider,just add it on the first and the end of the slider.Just want to point out that would make a noisy sound if you just add it to whole slider.
   2. 01:38:266 (2) - I think you should remove the whistle and turn the volume to 5% here to fit the music.
   3. 02:05:453 (3) - Same as 00:28:734.
   4. 02:07:953 (1) - ^
   5. 02:12:953 (1) - ^ (Please check this carefully,I won't point this out again)

[Normal]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR -1 for consistent with OD.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:21:234 (3) - I don't think that it is suitable to put a long slider becuase I can saw you mostly put 1/1 and 1/2 in this part.So i recommend to change it to 1/1 or 1/2.
   2. 01:31:547 (4) - Why the spacing is different between (1.2)- and(3)?At least I can't find a reason that you need to do.
   3. 02:21:391 (1) - A spinner didn't fit the music here because the vocal is still singing.I assume that spinner is for the music of protraction.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:51:078 (2) - I think you are missing a clap sound at the beginning of the slider to fit your hitclap pattern.
   2. 02:32:641 (2) - Probably change this to normal hitsound with 50% volume to fit the music much perfect.

[Hard]

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 02:12:641 (2) - (bad gameplay) Be honest, this speed change can casues a really bad gameplay because the vocal didn't 'speed' up yet.So it will cause a miss if the player is careless and remember this is a Hard diff.It shouldn't be like that.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:12:641 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing here,please fix that because this kind of spacing may make confused to player.
   2. 00:13:734 (1) - And then add a new combo here to fit the others combo lenght.
   3. 00:19:984 (7) - ^Same.
   4. 00:32:641 (1,2,3) - I have seen this pattern more than 1 time in this diff.I think you should change a new pattern to give more feeling to player.
   5. 01:31:547 (1,2,3,4) - May I ask why do you put a stacking here?In this place it's obvious can may some interesting pattern.Quite weird about that.
   6. 01:38:266 (3) - Would you tell me why you put a 1/6 here?It's quite meaningless.Although it is slient,it shouldn't be like this.
   7. 02:02:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - Something like 01:31:547 -
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:34:828 (5) - Remove the whistle from the beginning of the slider and then add a clap on it.Btw,please remove the clap at the end of the slider.
   2. 01:39:828 (5) - Add a clap here to fit your hitclap pattern.

[Insane]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. According to the BPM and your arrangement of this.It obviously didn't need ar9.Please trun down to AR8 at least.
   2. HP and OD -1 at least for consistency.
2. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 02:30:609 (5) - (bad gameplay) Be honest,this note is coverd by 02:29:672 (2) - and 02:29:828 (1) - 's comboburst.It's really hard to read it and it maybe make confused to player.
      
      something here.

      
3. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:28:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I can't understand that why you need to put a tons of jump here.It's really strange because you can't hear any up pitch.
   2. 00:43:891 (6,7,8,9) - Triplate sounds weird for me.I think some simple 1/2 is good enough here,it doesn't need to put any stream.They can't fit the music very well.
   3. 01:21:703 (8) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because the jump pattern is starting from here.
   4. 01:29:516 (4) - A design thing here.I would make this slider like this,I think that's much beautiful.
      
      Suggestion

      

      416,208,89516,2,0,B|469:200|489:108|448:66,1,160,2|8

   5. 01:38:266 (7) - Would you tell me why you put a 1/6 here?It's quite meaningless.Although it is slient,it shouldn't be like this
   6. 02:26:234 (7) - New combo here please,the reason same as above.
   7. 02:36:391 (8) - Add a new combo here due to the jump pattern is started.

[inaba's taiko]

1. Please change taiko to Taiko please.
2. The hitsound is too soft now.Please change to soft - 100%.
3. 00:41:547 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I prefer kkddkdk here.It fits the music much better.
4. 01:00:609 (2,3,1) - Change these notes to big notes? Because I can heard the accent point here.
5. 01:22:016 (3) - Change this to kat?
6. 02:21:391 (1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1) - No please!This stream is much difficult than overall!This stream is oni9* stream.However you only put oni8* stream in other places.Please change it.

That's it!Good luck.

Roddie wrote:

Hey.

Timing

Here's a chatlog about it.

Chatlog

23:37 <Roddie> : Hi
23:37 <Roddie> : i have a couple of questions to ask
23:37 <grasscarp> : hi roddie
23:37 <Roddie> : about this map you have
23:37  *Roddie is editing (Meiko - E? Aa, Sou.)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38550]
23:38 <grasscarp> : 0.0
23:38 <Roddie> : you do know that there is a 2nd timing section on the taiko diff right?
23:38 <Roddie> : and you don't have a 2nd timing section on the rest of the diffs...
23:38 <grasscarp> : ....eh, in fact i dont know about this.
23:39 <grasscarp> : Taiko diff is made by other person,maybe i could tell him.
23:39 <grasscarp> : ..or i could change it by myself.
23:39 <Roddie> : well, you can only use another timing section if there is a bpm change of the song or if one part of the song has a beat off and a timing section is 
23:39 <Roddie> : needed
23:40 <grasscarp> : So i should make the red line of taiko be same as solo diffs?
23:40 <Roddie> : NO!
23:41 <grasscarp> : :o
23:41 <Roddie> : i deleted the 2nd red line
23:41 <Roddie> : and the tempo is fine
23:41 <Roddie> : it's following along the beat
23:41 <Roddie> : so one red line is okay :P
23:41 <grasscarp> : = =ok,i see
23:42 <Roddie> : tell the guy who made the taiko about the timing
23:42 <Roddie> : and tell him a 2nd timing section is not needed
23:42 <grasscarp> : OK,I know how to deal with this....
23:42 <Roddie> : good :)

Timing Points (Easy, Normal, Hard, and Insane)

1. 00:42:250-It's odd seeing the kiai time starting off here. Please remove it.
2. 01:32:250-^
3. 02:21:312-^

General

1. There are a couple of issues with the background:
   
   
   1. I get the song is originally sung by Miku Hatsune but hearing that the song is sung by Meiko, a background of Miku Hatsune is not needed for this song.
   2. The background is suggestive. I don't think your map would get ranked because of the background. ):

Don't worry, man. I have a couple of backgrounds that would replace the current one.

SPOILER

Oh, and if you select one of them that I showed you, you don't forget to have that background turned into a Taiko background.

Easy

• 02:25:141 (3)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.

Normal

1. 02:24:672-Perhaps it's best to put a new combo here?
2. 02:29:828-^
3. 02:42:641 (7)-Hm... How about removing this note and replace with a 1/2 slider? Starting from 02:42:641 and end it on 02:42:719.

inaba's Taiko

1. 02:37:953 (1)-A Big Kat is not needed in my opinion. Remove the finish.

Hard

1. 01:27:328 (3)-Stack this properly on the end point of the previous slider.
2. 02:03:641 (1)-How about using the distance snap, space this out and have it align with the end point of the previous slider. Some thing like this. In my opinion, it's the best way to go!
3. 02:42:641 (5)-^Pretty much the same thing.

Insane

1. How about making the circle size a bit larger? xD
2. 01:31:234 (5, 1)-Stack these properly on the end point of the previous slider.
3. 02:16:859 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11)-I don't think 1/4 streams would be fitting on this part of the song. ): Consider remapping something else.

And that's about it. Here's a star for you, man.

Good luck to you!