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Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size)

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rickyboi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, April 04, 2012 at 3:52:29 AM

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size)
Source: Mirai Nikki
Tags: Saten-san akareh inaba-tan yuno gasai yukiteru amano yandere god 1st 2nd deus ex machina future diary opening
BPM: 230
Filesize: 12114kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akareh's Normal (4.22 stars, 130 notes)
  2. Deus Ex (5 stars, 420 notes)
  3. Easy (2.36 stars, 101 notes)
  4. Hard (4.93 stars, 203 notes)
  5. inaba's Taiko (4.83 stars, 581 notes)
  6. Saten (5 stars, 423 notes)
Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size)
Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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inaba's Taiko - Done (download inaba's Taiko inner HERE) by inaba-tan
Easy - Done
Akareh's Normal - Done by Akareh
Hard - Done
Saten - Done by Saten-san
Deus Ex - Done


Just wanna thank all the people from /a/ and all the modders for supporting this map, You guys know who you are.
Also thank you to Saten-san, Akareh and inaba-tan for providing their own difficulties in this map set.


Special thanks to Suzully for helping and keeping up with me until the end.


SPOILER
Updated December 6, 2011:
~New BG for taiko
~New Custom Hitclap. Got this from one of NatsumeRin's maps.

Updated December 22, 2011:
~Added Saten's Insane
~New custom hitsounds

Updated December 29, 2011:
~Replaced mp3

Updated January 22, 2012:
~renamed "Saten's Insane" to "Saten"

Updated January 24, 2012:
~Renamed inaba's "taiko" to "Taiko"

Updated Febuary 4, 2012:
~Credits to Mafiamaster for letting me use his mp3 and timings.
~Renamed "TV size" to "TV Size"
~Renamed mp3 to "Mirai Nikki OP - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size)"
~Renamed Background image to "BG"

Updated Feb 6, 2012:
~Replaced silenced slider tick with a new unsilenced one.
Mez_old
sugoi map bro
Rethosphix
another map that is too fast for me ;_;
imRitaka
Requested mod.

[Deus Ex]
This reminds me of one of those 'Another' or 'Extra' difficulties. I like it.

Resnap everything. [Timing > Resnap All Notes]
Set a preview point. I recommend doing it at 00:42:958.

It's a great difficulty. Well done.
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Ritaka wrote:

Requested mod.

[Deus Ex]
This reminds me of one of those 'Another' or 'Extra' difficulties. I like it.

Resnap everything. [Timing > Resnap All Notes]
Set a preview point. I recommend doing it at 00:42:958.

It's a great difficulty. Well done.
Thanks bro resnapped everything.

Set preview point at 00:42:958 ;)
Akareh
Hi! :)

Well this is a small general modding, and almost everything are suggestions, so feel free to ignore it if you want.

-General-

Delete .osb from the file folder if you're not going to make an SB.
Have you thought about using kiai time? it would fit well between 0:51:818 and 1:09:035

-Deus Ex-

No problems, love the map.

-Hard-

So far so good, good job :D

Also I've made a Normal Diff, use it if you want

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
rickyboi
Accepted! Thanks for suggestions.

Hmm I seem to have forgotten to use kiai time but will do it now.

Updated some spacing on Normal.


Akareh wrote:

Hi! :)

Well this is a small general modding, and almost everything are suggestions, so feel free to ignore it if you want.

-General-

Delete .osb from the file folder if you're not going to make an SB.
Have you thought about using kiai time? it would fit well between 0:51:818 and 1:09:035
Done.
Rori
Great map

Until you upped the AR.
Topic Starter
rickyboi

wakarimasenlol wrote:

Great map

Until you upped the AR.
LOL I was trolling. back to 9 AR though.
Waryas
>not ar10
sage
ztrot
bonk I've talked with you about your map and you still need to adjust somethings might want to wait till you get +8 before asking a BAT member
Topic Starter
rickyboi

ztrot wrote:

might want to wait till you get +8 before asking a BAT member
Ok ;_;
Akareh
Ztrot said that my diff was hard for a normal, so I've fixed it.

Maybe now It's too easy, dunno.

Edit: Fixed spacings

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal +].osu
threenash
I approve of this.
amelda
야--기분조타..
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
-General-
-Beats are timed and placed nicely.
-try using whistles for some sliders.
[Easy]
-Clap sound abuse? maybe you could use less claps?
it feels just a little bit boring, even for an easy. perhaps you could increase the spacing just a bit?
- increase DR to 4
- 00:35:122 (1,2) you might as well change this into a slider
- 00:36:166 (1,2) ^same as above
- 00:38:252 (7,1) ^same
- 01:01:470 - 01:02:774 (3,4,5) ^same
- 01:03:296 - 01:04:339(6,7,8) ^same
- 01:16:339 (1) maybe you could end this spinner at 01:17:644 because the circle at that point is a bit difficult to hit after the spinner
- 01:25:992 - 01:26:774 add a slider here?
[Akareh's Normal+]
feels almost as easy as Easy diff. try making it a wee bit harder:
-- increase DR to 4 or 5.
-- increase OD to 4.
-- decrease circle size.
[Hard]
- 01:25:860 - 01:26:773 try placing a spinner here. if the map ends at 01:25:730 it feels a bit hanging
[Deus Ex]
way too hard. it's either you :
- decrease slider velocity from around 1.70 to 2.00 and readjust sliders from there; or
- decrease DR and OD to 7
- 01:25:860 - 01:26:773 try placing a spinner here. if the map ends at 01:25:730 it feels a bit hanging
Akareh

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

[Akareh's Normal+]
feels almost as easy as Easy diff. try making it a wee bit harder:
-- increase DR to 4 or 5.
-- increase OD to 4.
-- decrease circle size.
Fixed, also changed some things that seemed off to me.

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal+].osu
Ryafuka
hi~ ></
from my modding queue :)

SPOILER
my mod is all suggestions :)


[General]
・start of KIAI TIME at 00:52:339 at better.(this suggestion for "Hard" and "Deus Ex")
・change source to "Mirai Nikki" ("opening" is needless)
・delete "mirai nikki" from Tags.
・please unify "Slider Tick Rate" (this suggestion for "Deus Ex")
・Why is only "Deus Ex" BPM230? all diff's BPM of this song should be unified by 230.



[Deus Ex]
wow..BPM230,SV2.5,AR9...crazy xD
00:09:687 (7) - add new combo
00:12:035 (9) - ^
00:13:992 (9) - ^
00:24:166 (7) - ^
00:27:296 (6) - ^
00:31:600 (7) - ^
00:43:731 (5) - ^
00:51:817 - change hitsound Vol to "70%" better
00:55:861 (8) - add new combo
00:56:513 (1) - remove new combo


[Hard]
00:19:208 (7) - add new combo
00:23:382 (9) - ^
00:50:252 (6) - ^
00:55:991 (12) - ^
01:00:165 (12) - ^
01:04:339 (5) - it may get confused.


[Akareh's Normal+]
hmm..on the whole, spacing may be too large for "normal".


[Easy]
00:06:426 (1,1) - spacing after spinner is too large.
00:25:209 (1,1) - ^
00:28:339 (1,1) - ^
00:32:513 (1,1) - ^
00:51:817 - needless greenline.delete this.
00:52:079 - ^
01:16:339 (1) - change end to 01:17:383 better.
01:25:992 - why only this diff have redline here?
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

[Easy]
-Clap sound abuse? maybe you could use less claps?
I'm following the snare drum of the song, snare = clap


Ryafuka wrote:

・please unify "Slider Tick Rate" (this suggestion for "Deus Ex")
I'll think about this. :roll:

Ryafuka wrote:

・Why is only "Deus Ex" BPM230? all diff's BPM of this song should be unified by 230.
Well, the star difficulty tends to boost if I use 230 on the other difficulties like Easy and Normal. I'll try working on this.

Ryafuka wrote:

[Easy]
00:06:426 (1,1) - spacing after spinner is too large.
00:25:209 (1,1) - ^
00:28:339 (1,1) - ^
00:32:513 (1,1) - ^
I don't really understand this, mind clearing it up for me?

Ryafuka wrote:

01:25:992 - why only this diff have redline here?
Sorry about that, it should be an inherited point with a soft hitclap.

Updated! Thanks for the mod ;)
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ rickyboi ~ :)

My some tips ~ from queue ~

[General]

Title : Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size)
Your Mp3 is 320kbps,this is unrankable, change 192 or 128 kbps plz.
Delete OSB file.and full upload.
Stack Leniency 6.


[Deus Ex]

AR9 it's not good idea,but plays fun.
looks good, but I think this diff it's overmapped.


[Hard]

OD+1
00:28:339 (6) - add NC.
00:45:034 (10) - ^
00:53:643 (4) - ^
00:55:991 (1,2,3) - change 1 slider will be better.
01:08:773 (1) - Remove NC.


[Akareh's Normal+]

HP-1
00:24:165 (7) - add NC.
00:57:818 (4) - ^


[Easy]

HP-1
00:10:861 (5) - add NC.
00:15:035 (5) - ^
00:54:426 (6) - ^
00:58:600 (6) - ^
00:59:383 (8,1) - not perfect overlap.
01:16:339 (1,1) - this is not good idea,Spinner after increase the distance,
Novice can puzzle.
01:19:731 (5) - add NC.
01:23:905 (5) - ^


nice song and map ~

good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ rickyboi ~ :)

My some tips ~ from queue ~

[General]

Title : Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size)
Your Mp3 is 320kbps,this is unrankable, change 192 or 128 kbps plz.
Delete OSB file.and full upload.
Stack Leniency 6.


[Deus Ex]
AR9 it's not good idea,but plays fun.
looks good, but I think this diff it's overmapped.
I think 9 AR is fine. Since this is a fast map, AR8 with 2.50 slider velocity is harder feels very awkward IMO.
About being overmapped, this is pretty much intended to be harder than the usual insane difficulty. :lol:

Will update mp3 in the near future.

Hard and Easy Updated! Thanks for the mod! ;)
Akareh

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Akareh's Normal+]

HP-1
00:24:165 (7) - add NC.
00:57:818 (4) - ^
Fixed

Ryafuka wrote:

[Akareh's Normal+]
hmm..on the whole, spacing may be too large for "normal".
And that's why it's called Normal+, plus I think it's fine.

Thanks to both.

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal+].osu
Osu Tatakae Ouendan

rickyboi wrote:

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

[Easy]
-Clap sound abuse? maybe you could use less claps?
I'm following the snare drum of the song, snare = clap
yes but to me it sounds a bit to repetitive and boring.up to you to keep them or not, but you might as well use a few more whistles and finishes
Laurier
hi :)
from my mod queue

General
Since the bit rate of mp3 is 320, it is 192 or less.
delete osb and full upload

easy
Slider Tick Rate 1
HP2or3?
KIAI 00:52:338~01:09:034
00:19:209 (5) - new combo
00:23:383 (5) - ^
00:40:861 (4) - ^
00:49:209 (4) - ^
01:06:948 (6) - ^
01:16:339 (1,1) - An interval is too narrow.
01:19:731 (5) - new combo
01:23:905 (5) - ^

Normal
I think that Normal must fix spacing.

hard
00:26:643(2) - delete?
00:56:513 (1) - remove newcombo
00:57:817 (5) - add newcombo
01:09:556 (2) - 1grid up?
01:25:860 (1) - the spinner end 01:26:643

Deus EX
00:23:383 (2) - add clap
00:30:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Sense of incongruity is felt for the place of clap.


nice map GL :)
Akareh
rockleejkooo
awesome map :3
aston_old
[General]
- Replace mp3 file with 192 kbps bitrate or lower, then full upload; If you can't find one, I converted one here : http://puu.sh/8sap .


*not fixing sounds


[Easy]
- 00:06:426 (1) - this spinner's sound does not match song; it should end at 00:08:512.
- 00:24:948 (4) - doesn't match song
- 00:25:209 (1) - too short of a spinner for an easy, imo
- 00:27:296 (2) - don't do slider speed changes on an easy, you should stick with 1 slider speed; this is greatly frowned upon; i'm not gonna mention ALL the times this was used, so i'll just bold this : NO SLIDER SPEED CHANGES
- 01:01:470 (3,4) - don't match song

Afternote : most of your patterns are boring and boxy, there's little creativity and could've been made better

[Hard]
- The patterns used in this difficulty are of INSANE difficulty, consider toning down; overmapped as an easy. (Mostly referring to the 2 circle 1 slider 1 circle combos and the 1 circle 1 slider 2 circle combos and anything to that style)
- 00:19:991 (4) - make like this http://puu.sh/8sco; Copy + Paste for the next slider as well.
- I don't see how you can improve other than remap.

[Deus Ex]
- Remap
*Reason being is this is 230 bpm with 2.5 SV; highly difficult and looks like you were just making it as hard as possible. I highly doubt this will be rankable at all.
Furthermore, your allocation of difficulties is off. Hard is at Insane difficulty, Deus Ex is at probably unrankable.

Please, tl;dr version : Remap.

Edit : Oh? there's a normal diff at a different BPM, please keep the same. I still stand with remap though =n=
Topic Starter
rickyboi
SPOILER

aston wrote:

[General]
- Replace mp3 file with 192 kbps bitrate or lower, then full upload; If you can't find one, I converted one here : http://puu.sh/8sap .


*not fixing sounds


[Easy]
- 00:06:426 (1) - this spinner's sound does not match song; it should end at 00:08:512.
- 00:24:948 (4) - doesn't match song
- 00:25:209 (1) - too short of a spinner for an easy, imo
- 00:27:296 (2) - don't do slider speed changes on an easy, you should stick with 1 slider speed; this is greatly frowned upon; i'm not gonna mention ALL the times this was used, so i'll just bold this : NO SLIDER SPEED CHANGES
- 01:01:470 (3,4) - don't match song

Afternote : most of your patterns are boring and boxy, there's little creativity and could've been made better

[Hard]
- The patterns used in this difficulty are of INSANE difficulty, consider toning down; overmapped as an easy. (Mostly referring to the 2 circle 1 slider 1 circle combos and the 1 circle 1 slider 2 circle combos and anything to that style)
- 00:19:991 (4) - make like this http://puu.sh/8sco; Copy + Paste for the next slider as well.
- I don't see how you can improve other than remap.

[Deus Ex]
- Remap
*Reason being is this is 230 bpm with 2.5 SV; highly difficult and looks like you were just making it as hard as possible. I highly doubt this will be rankable at all.
Furthermore, your allocation of difficulties is off. Hard is at Insane difficulty, Deus Ex is at probably unrankable.

Please, tl;dr version : Remap.

Edit : Oh? there's a normal diff at a different BPM, please keep the same. I still stand with remap though =n=
Thanks for modding and the mp3, I'll fix it later.

About Deus Ex.. I probably won't let it get ranked since it's "too hard". It might go to the approved section though.

It's nice because you really did some serious modding and criticism which rarely appears on this thread.
Hanyuu-chan
Use offset 175, it fits much better.
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Hanyuu-chan wrote:

Use offset 175, it fits much better.
Thanks.
Saten
I'm using that BG on my yettobesubmitted beatmap ><
Your's a bit darker though

Deus Ex is not overmapped imo :3
You should use custom hitsounds on this mapset. Normal claps doesn't really fit imo :P
Denebola_old
nice map

I like the hit sounds
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Denebola wrote:

nice map

I like the hit sounds
Thanks! :)
kudosu awarded for irc mod.

@Saten-san
Added new hitsounds, it's not yet final though :oops:
inaba-tan
Could I map a taiko diff?
inaba-tan
Topic Starter
rickyboi

inaba-tan wrote:

finish~
Updated! ;)
Akareh
Sorry, i felt lazy these days >.<

Anyways, I have updated my guest and changed bpm back to 230, I tried to lower the star rating by lowering slider velocity but it didn't make much of a change...

There you go ;D

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal+].osu
inaba-tan
BG~

Topic Starter
rickyboi
Updated. please redownload the map to see changes.
Saten
yo o/

Please add these hitsounds~
soft-hitclap.wav
soft-hitwhistle.wav
soft-sliderslide.wav

Don't forget to add the guest mappers' name to the tags


I'm so sexy

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Saten].osu
inaba-tan
lovhin456
hello ~ here's my mod

general;
- try these colors ?
Combo1 : 120,152,177
Combo2 : 223,37,32
Combo3 : 87,69,124
Combo4 : 183,85,136

easy;
- 00:08:779 >> may be too close after a spinner
- 00:12:431 (4,1) >> spacing
- 00:24:170 (1,2,3,4) >> now, this may be hard for players; maybe try to mix (1,2) into a slider and do the same for (3,4)
- 00:42:953 >> remove whistle
- 00:45:040 >> remove whistle and new combo also spacing ?
- 00:47:127 >>> spacing
- 00:49:214 >> remove new combo
- 00:57:823 (4,5) >> spacing
- 00:59:910 >> i think is better if you remove a repeat to (1) then move (2) to 01:00:692 and end it at 01:01:736 and finally add a note at 01:02:257
- 01:09:301 >> weird, anti-climatic break :/

akareh's normal+;
- why not use the custom sounds ?
- 00:11:649 >> remove clap
- 00:12:692 (1,2,3) >> don't overuse claps
- 00:13:736 (3,1) >> spacing
- 00:16:866 >> finish
- 00:19:997 (7,1) >> spacing
- 01:04:866 >> kinda repetitive, try something else
- 01:19:605 (1,2) >> kinda hard, but is this the reason to put a + in the diff's name; you could easily change these to something better it is kinda boring (and hard) to play afterall
- 01:21:692 (4,5,6) >> spacing
- 01:23:779 (1,2) >> these could be better, something more fun
- 01:26:323 >> snap (2) here

hard;
- 00:29:388 >> remove new combo
- 00:33:365 >> ^
- 01:15:301 >> ^
- 01:21:562 >> add a note
- 01:22:605 >> ^
- 01:26:649 >> lower the volume for this spinner

deus ex;
- 01:25:866 (1,2,3) >> lower the volume for these notes

saten;
- 00:05:910 >> lower the volume for this spinner
- 01:06:692 >> the hitburst covers the next slider's reverse arrow
- 01:26:649 >> lower the volume

* good luck
Saten

lovhin456 wrote:

saten;
- 00:05:910 >> lower the volume for this spinner
- 01:06:692 >> the hitburst covers the next slider's reverse arrow will let this stay for now, I did this because of symmetry, but I might change it later
- 01:26:649 >> lower the volume
Thanks~~♪

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Saten].osu
Topic Starter
rickyboi

lovhin456 wrote:

hello ~ here's my mod
general;
- try these colors ?
Combo1 : 120,152,177
Combo2 : 223,37,32
Combo3 : 87,69,124
Combo4 : 183,85,136
I'm going to use that color on combo 1, others are fine.

Thanks for the mod! ;)
Guzzzzm4n
Hey!

[Easy]
Slider Tick Rate : 2
(00:25:214) : Too short for an easy!

[Akareh's Normal+]
Slider Tick Rate : 2
(00:26:257) : Add finish
(00:30:953) : This spin, finish here (00:30:692)

[Hard]
Slider Tick Rate : 2

Good luck (:
Akareh
doubleposted because of my connection, sorry.
Akareh
Fixing my diff

darck360

[Akareh's Normal+]
Slider Tick Rate : 2 done
(00:26:257) : Add finish ok
(00:30:953) : This spin, finish here (00:30:692) No, I think it's good as it is.

Lovhin456

akareh's normal+;
- why not use the custom sounds ? I had forgotten to change it, fixed
- 00:11:649 >> remove clap ok
- 00:12:692 (1,2,3) >> don't overuse claps fixed
- 00:13:736 (3,1) >> spacing space'd
- 00:16:866 >> finish ok
- 00:19:997 (7,1) >> spacing done
- 01:04:866 >> kinda repetitive, try something else Well, now it's funnier, I guess...
- 01:19:605 (1,2) >> kinda hard, but is this the reason to put a + in the diff's name; you could easily change these to something better it is kinda boring (and hard) to play afterall Well, I think now this is more interesting
- 01:21:692 (4,5,6) >> spacing this was close due to stream, but ok, done
- 01:23:779 (1,2) >> these could be better, something more fun it's funnier now
- 01:26:323 >> snap (2) here 'kay

Thanks a lot for the modding.

P.S: My connection sucks and the message got doubleposted, sorry >.<

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Akareh wrote:

P.S: My connection sucks and the message got doubleposted, sorry >.<
Please edit your last post to blank space or something lol.

I think you uploaded your map before you saved. I haven't seen the changes.

@darck360
-Easy
Slider Tickrate: 2
Yes

Hard
Slider Tickrate: 2
I'll think about it.

Anyway updated!
Akareh

rickyboi wrote:

Please edit your last post to blank space or something lol.

I think you uploaded your map before you saved. I haven't seen the changes.
Oh, lol. Try now.

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Akareh wrote:

rickyboi wrote:

Please edit your last post to blank space or something lol.

I think you uploaded your map before you saved. I haven't seen the changes.
Oh, lol. Try now.
Errr.. I think it got worse..

~Bpm is 115 instead of 230.
~Clap overuse is still there.
~Haven't used the custom hitsounds. (I suggest you use Normal Custom 1)
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