1. Easy (1,41 stars, 31 notes)
2. Hard (2,57 stars, 68 notes)
3. Insane (3,08 stars, 80 notes)
4. sleepy's Normal (1,78 stars, 42 notes)

superuser1337 wrote:

insane diff
00:02:342 (1,2,3,4) -
00:25:382 (1,2,3,4) -
:thinking:
maybe change it to a slider instead?
same with the hard diff

tailsdk wrote:

Mod from my queue

General

Offset and BPM: the offset seams to be wrong its a couple milliseconds early adjusted
Hitsounds: Not done done on NM
AiMod: Not much
Timing points: no need for the last 3 since there is no sound for the end of a Long Note removed them
OD and HP: Increase the HP and OD by a lot. I would say for NM increase OD and HP to 8 and for EZ lower the OD to 7 and it should be fine okay

NM

00:08:107 - here i would say add the LN for the rest of the vocals here since you already started on them something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9961582
insteadt of making these the doubles 00:10:027 - 00:10:987 - 00:11:947 - i would like to see this sound 00:09:547 - 00:10:507 - 00:11:467 - be a double since the sound is louder and more impacting
00:15:787 (15787|0) - extend this one to 00:16:747 -
i can understand this LN 00:17:947 (17947|3) - but this one 00:17:707 (17707|2) - should just be a single note
00:24:187 (24187|1,24187|0,24427|3,24427|2,24667|0,24667|1,24907|2,24907|3) - i dont get why these are doubles edit them to follow the sound in the background somewhat like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9961617
00:29:587 - make this a double to make it stand out
applied everything

Overall:
There seams to be a lot of inconsistencies in this map that you need to work out

tailsdk wrote:

Mod from my queue

EZ

00:19:627 - since this is the easy difficulty i would move these around to make the most comfortable pattern here is an example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9961656
00:27:067 - add a note here
00:29:587 - and add a note here too

zhu wrote:

Short song, well made. Nothing much to point out from my prespective.

Easy

Combo colors are not set. Make sure this is intended. set colors

Normal

Combo colors are not set. Make sure this is intended. set colors
00:26:830 (4,1) - fix blanket fixed

Hard

Combo colors are not set. Make sure this is intended. set colors
00:05:470 (4) - use 1/2 slider instead since sound 00:05:470 - here goes till 00:05:710 sure

Insane

Combo colors are not set. Make sure this is intended. set colors
00:03:310 (6,7) - flow here feels pretty weird since these 2 sounds are kinda different why not ctrl+h 00:03:790 (7) okay

GL on ranking!

Xoul wrote:

Hey from my modding queue.

Not most of the stuff I'll point out are optional to change unless specified.

Easy:
A few little small things in the sense here. ( OPTIONAL CHANGES THOUGH )
00:10:990 (3,1) - I'd personally flow the two sliders so that (3)s end is in line with (1)s Head. I would like to avoid overlaps on easy
00:08:110 (1,2) - ^ Kind of feels a little messy. adjusted

Normal:
Spinner should technically start on the white tick. (Same for the easy as well but spinners are frankly hard for newer players. adjusted

Hard:
00:05:470 (4) - I wouldn't start this slider on the red tick cause the white ticks have more emphasis when it comes to sound. So I'd replace it like so ( https://puu.sh/z9fOj/20261f6fd3.png ). But I kind of hear your attempt on the piano. Its just short of a sound that a note can do it better personally.
alright, fixed
00:20:350 (4) - ^ Same here. Even though you are emphasizing a vocal y

Insane:
00:05:470 (5) - Same thing as the Hard. y

GL on ranking. Not really a lot for me to point out.

Tomadoi wrote:

hey m4m

[General]
• Disable Widescreen Support okay




[Insane]

• Lower OD to 6 and HP to 5 OD6 seems a bit low, I checked ranked maps around this bpm and they use OD7. lowered HP to 5 tho


00:05:710 (6) - hitsound issue oh yeah

00:08:110 (2) - hard sounds, new combo color and you might reset the NC's on 00:07:510 (1,1) - since there's no real reason to NC them^^ okay, (2) got an NC. I like to use NC on 3/4 rhythm, so it's friendlier to sightread.

00:09:550 (6,7) - plays really ugly, try something like this https://puu.sh/zcaFb/979655105c.PNG thats on purpose, to emphasize the instrument

00:15:790 (1,2) - could fix blanket adjusted a bit

00:24:910 (6) - curve this slider a bit for the flowww okay

00:29:950 (1) - try moving this circle behind 00:28:750 (6) - it's placed on a wide angle on purpose, to emphasize the 3/4 rhythm

00:23:470 - It's quite weird that the kiai begins here... shouldn't it begin here? 00:19:630 - changed


[Hard]

• Go for CS3.5 and OD5 changed CS. keeping OD6 tho, same reason as above.

00:02:350 (1,2,3,4) - this is in my opinion too hard to read for a Hard, try this https://puu.sh/zcaXB/c26d91cce8.PNG alright

00:05:710 (5) - hitsound issue oh

00:07:150 (1,1) - there's again this NC thing, i'd remove those but it's up to you hehe same thing, keeping it :p

00:15:070 (2) - that's like a no-go, please move it out so you can see it yeah, changed that part completely

00:20:590 (4) - hitsound issue fixed

00:19:630 - kiai begins here yup

00:25:390 (1,2,3,4) - replace with sliders like before, really hard to read yup


[Normal]

• I don't know if you have a fetish for CS4 but it's definitely too high for a normal and for that kind of song (Maybe cs3) lol okay


00:11:950 (1) - for new players, this will be hard to read when the slider goes in a different direction I have done that every time there is a 3/2 rhythm coming. I think it's fine.

00:13:870 - that sound should be clickable yeah

00:18:910 (2,3) - like in the hard difficulty, you could replace those with a slider I think this one is fine, map is too easy already for a normal.

00:17:710 (1) - ctrl+h will fix this explained above

00:21:550 (1,2,3,4) - it's like really weird that you changed out of a sudden the rhythm here, but you can try this rhythm here https://puu.sh/zcbbI/6a9e21837f.PNG this one feels wrong to me

00:19:630 - oh yeah kiai begins here yup

00:26:830 (4,1) - you could slightly improve the blanket here, but it's no problem if you don't actually looks okay to me

00:30:670 (1) - was it intended that the spinner begins so late? seems weird one of the mods above pointed out that it should start on the white tick. I don't think it matters too much, but changed anyways.


[Easy]

• Check AIMod

00:09:070 (2) - you can simply copy paste this slider 00:08:110 (1) - and rotate it a bit and it will look fancy okay did something

00:13:870 (1) - probably don't NC this since it's pretty unnessecary for just 1 slider alright

00:15:790 (1) - curve this slider like this https://puu.sh/zcbi4/3dd236dc5d.PNG okay

00:19:630 (1) - same thing with the unnessecary NC on just 1 slider yup

00:19:630 - oh yea kiai again :^) yup

00:29:230 (1) - same thing with the unnessecary NC on just 1 slider yup

00:30:670 (1) - like on the normal difficulty, i'm still asking myself why he spinner begins so late here same as above


Good luck

idke wrote:

mod

easy
looks pretty solid cant say much

normal
00:03:310 (3) - maybe make this a 1/2 and note on the downbeat? seems pretty weird to have a strong beat end on a sliderend especially when its slightly stronger than the red tick right

00:05:470 (2) - this feels way too empty, having a 3/2 gap before a note
00:13:150 (2) - same here
00:18:910 (2) - ^
like a good fix is to do what you did here 00:21:550 (1,2,3,4) - since it feels much better imo, follows more rhythms and keeps the two notes on the lyrics fixed all of these

00:29:230 (1) - im not sure but i think its more appropriate to put a reverse arrow on the blue tick here oh good idea

hard
00:10:030 (1,2,3,4) - pattern seems pretty messy, maybe make it a square? alright
00:15:790 (1) - this should probably end on the white tick to keep consistency with 00:13:870 (1) -, but then again theres that bass so idk lol im unsure, changed anyways

hard 2
00:12:910 (4,5) - overspaced compared to 00:11:710 (4,1) - as there is actually emphasis on one, so maybe space the 4,1 more or the 1,2 and 4,5 less nerfed 1,2 and 4,5
00:28:990 (7,1) - super overspaced as the 1/2s are actually spaced more than the 3/4s in the end reduced spacing, made the 3/4 flow different

Ayui wrote:

"mod" :thinking:

easy

00:24:430 (2) - ezt én nem így helyezném el https://puu.sh/zB9Na/d77c29440c.png vagy https://puu.sh/zB9ND/775282925c.png jobban nézne ki imo
minden más jó megváltoztattam

normálra megpróbálok majd egy gd-t szal azt nem "modolom"

hard

00:07:150 (1,2,3) - nc-ket mint az insaneben vagy 3/4es sliderrel maybe? Mir aztmondta nem kell mert distance snapelt a map
00:16:750 (2,3) - ugyanaz a dolog mint az easyben megváltoztattam
00:29:230 (1,2,3) - ha az első ilyet megváltoztatod akkor ezt se felejtsd el -w-

insane

00:09:070 (4,5,6,7) - imo a zene egy ilyen "flowos ívet" suggestál szóval én úgy raknám ezeket azt a fajta flowot ide tartogattam 00:15:310
, és így jobb imo hogy más-más fajta jumpokat használok a zene más részeihez
00:11:230 (4) - kicsit awkward így félig overlapolva a (2)-es sliderrel, látom hogy a noteok szabályos 4szöget alkotnak but still nekem tetszik,
láttam már más mapokba elég sokszor
00:21:070 (6) - egy kicsit bal-felfele igazítani, és stackelni a sliderheadet 00:22:990 (6) - vel (?) kicsit igazítottam, de stackelni nem tudom anélkül hogy a szerkezetet el nem rontanám
00:24:670 (4) - félig overlapolt megint, imo kicsit awkward megváltoztattam, nem akartam túl nagy jumpot de végülis nem rossz így
00:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - szerintem itt "1-2-3-4 1-2-3-4" ritmus van szóval én fehéren kezdeném a slidert (lehet akár note-note-slider-note-note-slider is) ritmus teljesen jó itt imo, a szaxofont követi

gl on rank

zeborg wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue. I just couldn't find much to point at. Maybe this will help.

Easy
00:15:790 (1) - Blanket can be improved okay

Normal
00:22:270 (5) - NC? NC is consistently on every second measure

Hard
00:27:790 (3,4) - I find it better to put (3) on the tail of (4), just a suggestion tho agreed, mapper decided to remap tho