gmtn. vs. kozato (fw. LUZE) & gmtn. (witch's slave) - squart

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whosthebox

-Anhedonia- wrote:

firetruck blue 1/6 stream learn to monocolor 1/6 :^)
mod req from my queue :000000000
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doing mod in english in case somebody wants to check
General
  1. I doubt "extended version" should really be in tags...
  2. Add "GOTHIC D HARDWALTZ" and "Hard Renaissance" as genres as designated by gmtn. for disperagioia. Also note that BOFU2017's release could include disperagioia which would make necessary to add "BOFU 2017 -LEGENDA EST A MYTH-" to tags, no worries for now though. EDIT: https://twitter.com/gumtune/status/919537872067215361 . Please add BOFU 2017 -LEGENDA EST A MYTH- to tags. yes to all
  3. OD probably should be at 6.5 since there's barely any 1/6 patterns to avoid notelocks in. seems reasonable, applied.
  4. (Suggestion) using normal AR/CS makes it easier to mod @_@ no
  5. (not sure about this) Literally the only place in the internet where squartatrice vs disperagioia is a thing is here in osu, disperagioia released in bofu2017 and 2018 isn't released yet, so probably the creator of the ranked standard version is who made the .mp3 but I could'nt find him/her/whatevs mentioning that he/she/asd did it, so unless you actually find where does the .mp3 come from, use "Lama Poluna" on tags to quote the creator of the .mp3. also applied
  6. The red line at 04:43:877 - has incorrect offset. it should be around 283.885 . (Yeah if you took the timing from ranked mapset then we should go DQ that again.) fixed

Unreal Oni
  1. 00:14:131 (33,35) - Do a CTRL+G on these two, because 00:13:964 (32,33) - and 00:14:298 (34,35) - are the same notes on piano and 00:14:631 (36,37) - reflects the change of pitch that you can't really do on a 2 notes drum also sounds nice, applied.
  2. 00:19:298 (55,56,57) - These three notes are the same ~ you're right, changed them to k k k
  3. 00:27:298 (99) - change to k, because 00:26:964 (97,98) - these are the same notes and 00:27:298 (99,100) - are the same notes, so you do the
    pitch change at 00:27:298 (99) - instead of 00:27:464 (100) - just like the song implies, also do the same on similar parts fixed all.
  4. 00:54:298 (270,271,272,273,274,275,276) - (Suggestion) dd(d or k)kkdK. First, I believe 00:54:298 (270) - should be d as the pitch already goes down a bit on this note, 00:54:464 (272) - this note is to your taste and 00:54:631 (274) - is similar to 273, so it should be a k. changed to ddkkkdK
  5. 00:59:464 (315,316,317,318) - The piano in this part suggests a kkdkd pattern so you probably should work around it (or at least just add a note in 00:59:548 - ) hmmmm, i'm not convinced with a kkdkd there, but i like how a d goes 00:59:548 - there, added it
  6. 01:08:798 (395) - change this note to K because at the following stream there's so much parts which has the same sound (cymbal + bass) and you mapped all these as k on the stream. Also because 01:10:798 (418) - xd applied, but also changed 01:08:631 - that to d, to differentiate each other
  7. 01:11:131 (419) - ^. It's still the same sound the cymbal is, but the main melody loses intensity here, i was following that. You already have the finisher to emphasize the cymbals, not changing this
  8. 01:14:464 (436) - change to K to keep consistency with 01:14:131 (433,438) - . And no this isn't looming shadows. applied the looming shadow finisher
  9. 01:18:464 - ~ 01:26:798 - A ver papá que paso con el mariconeo con los finishers aca? LOOMING SHADOWS INTENSIFIES :^) added a finisher 01:18:798 - here, changed 01:18:964 (462,463,464) - this to ddK, added a finisher 01:19:631 - here and added some finishers in that part too.
  10. 01:31:214 (571,572,573) - kkk? why do i even ask it of course it should be kkk xddd pitch on the synths goes up on these three notes.wasn't following the synths, but i did add a k 01:31:298 - here, i missed it
  11. 01:44:964 (715) - It may affect the pattern heavily but this note should be a d as all the other loud bass drum+cymbals you mapped as d on the section you are right tho, and with some modifications (changed it to dkkkddkkddk) it goes pretty good
  12. 01:51:131 (785) - change to k because the pitch goes lower at 01:51:214 - , not here applied
  13. 01:52:381 (800) - also change to k because the pitch goes up here also applied
  14. 02:00:798 - ~ 02:01:464 - this part is the real break of the stream (check 2nd mods down↓), maybe we can take this as a suggestion because obviously you will reject this for e-peen, but use 1/2 k k d k k(...rest of the stream) idk wtf you mean with e-peen :^) but this change makes a lot of sense, added the 1/2 break
  15. 02:04:131 (929,930,931,932) - and 02:04:464 (933,934,935,936) - are the same, and no, abekobe doesnt work well here you are right. Starting from 02:04:131 - here, changed it to kkddkkdd and modified some small stuff in that stream so it doesn't get too repetitive with the kkdd
  16. 02:05:214 - wtf this is reversed XDDDD. Add note here because the stream doesn't end here and the reversing part starts at 02:05:464 - so if you wanted to separate both, this wasn't the best idea. i moved the note 02:05:048 - here to 02:05:214 - here, so it follows better the 1/4 beats.
    I don't want to make that whole part a single stream because i want to differentiate both the pitch and intensity between those two parts, that's why you have those two separated.

  17. 02:06:464 (956) - (suggestion) this note isnt really much higher pitched than the last so maybe you could use d instead here i prefer to keep it as a k
  18. 02:14:964 - I'd prefer if you followed the piano (??) here and you did k k d k by deleting 02:15:048 (1032) - and changing 02:15:131 (1033) - to k sounds nice, applied
  19. 02:47:881 (1370) - change this note to d. While you also do two k to stick to a single high pitched note on the piano on 02:47:631 (1367,1368) - , this make a much better pattern flow and of course it sticks better to the song yeah, i struggled with this for a while, better change it.
  20. 02:53:298 (1412,1413,1414) - change to kdk or something because 1414 is the same sound as other places where you mapped k instead and this is really the only offender on the section (as 02:52:131 (1402) - does a good pattern as follow up) makes sense and sounds nice, i changed the triplet 02:50:631 - here to kdk too, as it's the same sound, and also applied the changes to the same part at the second kiai
  21. 02:56:464 (1441,1442,1443,1444,1445,1446,1447,1448,1449,1450,1451,1452,1453) - The day has come. None of us saw this coming, ever. -Anhedonia- himself asking to extend a monocolor 1/6 blue stream because it lasts until 02:57:298 -... But actually I feel this should be a kdkdkdkdkdkdkdk(...) so there is hope. (? thought about making it kdkdkdkdk(...) for a SHORT time, but didn't like it, kkkkk(...) it is, and it will stay. About the missing two notes here 04:26:187 - and 04:26:242 - here, i left them "unmapped" because mapping them makes the stream have an even number of notes, making it really weird (to say the least) to play for most players, not gonna add more notes there, don't worry :^)
  22. 03:02:548 (1503) - change to k because 03:02:464 (1502) - really goes high on pitch so to emphasize that difference its much better 🅱ETeR :^) applied it
  23. 04:25:464 (504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516) - world's end act II wat
  24. 04:26:464 (518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535,536,537,538) - I don't see the necessity to stick to the long synths here, do something that emphasizes the piano sounds at 04:27:131 (526,530,534) - , instead, like doing k on these and d on the empty spaces etc. i like emphasizing the synths in this part since they are pretty strong here, not gonna change this
THANKS M8RINO, DIDN'T EXPECT THIS TO BE THIS GOOD TBH :^)
Axer
toma mi kds, rankea esto o te violo
-Kazu-

Axer wrote:

toma mi kds, rankea esto o te violo
No le ofrezcas weas, que la deja graveyarded a posta >:I
Axer

-Anhedonia- wrote:

Axer wrote:

toma mi kds, rankea esto o te violo
No le ofrezcas weas, que la deja graveyarded a posta >:I
Nop, me lo prometío y si no la rankea lo voy a joder hasta en la tumba
Lost The Lights

Axer wrote:

Nop, me lo prometío y si no la rankea lo voy a joder hasta en la tumba
En unos 2 años te lo rankea, como furioso melodia :^)
ASPIRIN

hello there



[Unreal Oni]
Sorry for being late, i had some irl things
  1. 00:19:964 (59,60,61) - i think this is kkd cuz 00:20:131 (61) - lower then other notes
  2. 00:20:631 (62) - change to d for emphasize next note
  3. 00:43:298 (198) - chenge to k cuz it higher then previous notes
  4. 00:56:964 (293,294,295) - i think this is ddk cuz 00:57:131 (295) - higher then other notes
  5. 00:58:964 (311,312,313) - ^ Edit: and all same moments
  6. 00:59:464 (315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322) - i think this is kdddkkd k
  7. 01:00:631 (326,327) - CTRL+G cuz 01:00:509 - is higher then 01:00:631 -
  8. 01:16:631 (446) - i think this is k, cuz this note is higher then next notes
  9. 01:17:298 (452) - d cuz it lower then previous
  10. 01:19:298 (465,466) - I think this is kd cuz first note is higher then second, but between this notes you mapped 01:19:131 (464,467) - this sounds like k, co i think you should to emphasize it as dd
  11. 01:20:631 (473) - same as 01:16:631 (446) -

    About your long steams - it looks good, sounds great (and maybe playing nice, i just can't play it) but i'm instrumental music mapper, i cant map electro music cuz it so repetitive and boring sometimes. So, this is reason why i afraid to give you wrong advices about your long streams. But.. I'll try

  12. 01:27:464 (525) - its sounds like k, maybe you need to emphasize this sound?
  13. 01:27:798 (529) - if follow this pattern and previous point - this is d
  14. 01:29:464 (549) - follow previous pattern - this is k
  15. 01:29:798 (553) - emphasize this note as d cuz it lower then other notes
  16. 01:31:464 (573) - follow this pattern as k
  17. 01:31:798 (577) - emphasize this note as d cuz it lower then other notes
  18. 01:33:298 (595,596,597,598,599,600) - why 1/2 here? this section is sounds similar like previous long stream
  19. 01:35:798 (618) - emphasize this note as d cuz it lower then other notes
  20. 01:37:798 (642) - ^
  21. 01:37:464 (638) - emphasize this note as k cuz it higher then other notes
  22. 01:46:964 (735,736,737,738) - CTRL+G cuz in this section you mapped all string sounds like kk, but only here it is dd
  23. 01:48:298 (751,752,753,754) - ^

    02:05:131 (935,936,937,938,939,940,941,942,943,944,945,946,947,948,949,950,951) - Wow! Reverse playing of already reversed melody is sounds really interesting!

  24. 02:06:964 (953,954) - CTRL+G cuz note with same color after finisher is not comfortable and at last second note is higher then first note
  25. 02:28:464 (1158) - maybe move start if KIAI here? And i think you need to change it to finisher
  26. 02:51:464 (1391) - i think here is d, cuz this note is lover then previous
  27. 02:57:131 (1447,1448) - Between this notes last stream sound is continue, i think you need to map it
  28. 02:57:298 (1448) - i think this is k cuz next note is lower
  29. 03:25:464 (4) - i think this is k cuz it higher then previous note
  30. 03:34:798 - Why you skipped note here? I think here is d
    EDIT: But do it after mod, cuz i'll continue mod without this change cuz combo numbers can be broken
  31. 03:46:798 (136) - try to change it for finisher
  32. 04:25:464 (504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516) - i hear it like kdkdkdkdk and etc.
  33. 04:26:131 (516,518) - Between this notes last stream sound is continue, i think you need to map it
  34. from 04:29:463 (554) - to 04:35:296 (590) - i hear background violin part, maybe you need to map it? I mean sounds like between 04:32:463 (573,574) - 04:32:463 (573,574,575) - and etc.
  35. 04:43:211 (1) - I think you need change it for finisher to emphasize this strange sound and i think this sound is not snapped it music, his actual start at 04:43:205

    if be honest 04:43:211 (1,2,3,4) - all this section is with wrong timing, change curent BPM point to 04:43:205 - and delete 04:43:885 - BPM point.
    EDIT: But do it after mod, cuz i'll continue mod without this change cuz timings can be broken

  36. 05:23:551 (403,404,405,406,407,408) - change it for kdkd k D cuz i hear this moment like it and i think last note is sounds like finisher
  37. 05:27:884 - and add spinner here to map this long bass sound if you want.


Good luck in ranking!
Topic Starter
whosthebox

ASPIRIN wrote:

hello there

H E L L O! sorry for taking so long to answer to the mod, i was a bit too much busy!

[Unreal Oni]
Sorry for being late, i had some irl things
  1. 00:19:964 (59,60,61) - i think this is kkd cuz 00:20:131 (61) - lower then other notes maybe it is, but it's pitch is way higher than the others, i wanted to emphazise that.
  2. 00:20:631 (62) - change to d for emphasize next note yea boi, i like this
  3. 00:43:298 (198) - chenge to k cuz it higher then previous notes you are right
  4. 00:56:964 (293,294,295) - i think this is ddk cuz 00:57:131 (295) - higher then other notes you are right with this, but i was following the main melody to hitsound this stream, since the intensity is going down, i mapped it like that, also, i didn't want to add another ddk since you have other one a few notes behind, (the one starting at 00:56:298 - ) and the melody there is pretty different compared to 00:56:964 - this.
  5. 00:58:964 (311,312,313) - ^ Edit: and all same moments same as before
  6. 00:59:464 (315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322) - i think this is kdddkkd k i like how the stream follows the main melody right now, but i do like how 01:00:131 - this sounds as k, changed that one.
  7. 01:00:631 (326,327) - CTRL+G cuz 01:00:509 - is higher then 01:00:631 - yea boi, applied.
  8. 01:16:631 (446) - i think this is k, cuz this note is higher then next notes good one, applied.
  9. 01:17:298 (452) - d cuz it lower then previous changed these 01:16:964 (450,451,452) - three notes to K D D
  10. 01:19:298 (465,466) - I think this is kd cuz first note is higher then second, but between this notes you mapped 01:19:131 (464,467) - this sounds like k, co i think you should to emphasize it as dd i didn't quite get what you wanted to say with the "01:19:131 (464,467) -" part, but i'm pretty sure 01:19:381 (466) - this note is a k, not changing it.
  11. 01:20:631 (473) - same as 01:16:631 (446) - yea boi, also changed 01:20:548 (474) - this one to a d so it plays better

    About your long steams - it looks good, sounds great (and maybe playing nice, i just can't play it) but i'm instrumental music mapper, i cant map electro music cuz it so repetitive and boring sometimes. So, this is reason why i afraid to give you wrong advices about your long streams. But.. I'll try about this part, excepting what i specified at 01:46:964 - and 01:48:298 - , i was following the main melody to hitsound this too, i know i could follow instrumental, but i prefer to follow the main melody here.

  12. 01:27:464 (525) - its sounds like k, maybe you need to emphasize this sound?
  13. 01:27:798 (529) - if follow this pattern and previous point - this is d
  14. 01:29:464 (549) - follow previous pattern - this is k
  15. 01:29:798 (553) - emphasize this note as d cuz it lower then other notes
  16. 01:31:464 (573) - follow this pattern as k
  17. 01:31:798 (577) - emphasize this note as d cuz it lower then other notes
  18. 01:33:298 (595,596,597,598,599,600) - why 1/2 here? this section is sounds similar like previous long stream about this one, this was a stream before, but i changed it before from a mod suggestion, and i liked it.
  19. 01:35:798 (618) - emphasize this note as d cuz it lower then other notes
  20. 01:37:798 (642) - ^
  21. 01:37:464 (638) - emphasize this note as k cuz it higher then other notes
  22. 01:46:964 (735,736,737,738) - CTRL+G cuz in this section you mapped all string sounds like kk, but only here it is dd you are right here,
    but i think i got something better: https://imgur.com/CLuYRal
  23. 01:48:298 (751,752,753,754) - ^ i think this plays better now, considering the changes from above.

    02:05:131 (935,936,937,938,939,940,941,942,943,944,945,946,947,948,949,950,951) - Wow! Reverse playing of already reversed melody is sounds really interesting! yeeeee :^)

  24. 02:06:964 (953,954) - CTRL+G cuz note with same color after finisher is not comfortable and at last second note is higher then first note that's true, applied.
  25. 02:28:464 (1158) - maybe move start if KIAI here? And i think you need to change it to finisher yea, kiai should start here, changed it,
    but i won't add the finisher there, it's a tricky stream already, i don't want to make it more complicated.
  26. 02:51:464 (1391) - i think here is d, cuz this note is lover then previous i can't hear any pitch differente worth the hitsound changem also,
    i like how it plays right now, i prefer to keep this how it is right now.
  27. 02:57:131 (1447,1448) - Between this notes last stream sound is continue, i think you need to map it i'm 100% aware of this, and this is not mapped on purpose, because doing so makes that 1/6 to have an even ammount of notes, and streams with even ammount of notes play kinda weird, let's not even talk about making it a long 1/6 stream.
  28. 02:57:298 (1448) - i think this is k cuz next note is lower d plays better imo, i can hear that difference, but it's way to small to change it, i prefer to keep the d.
  29. 03:25:464 (4) - i think this is k cuz it higher then previous note yeee, applied.
  30. 03:34:798 - Why you skipped note here? I think here is d i want to emphazise the break in the main melody there, i didn't map this on purpose too.
    EDIT: But do it after mod, cuz i'll continue mod without this change cuz combo numbers can be broken
  31. 03:46:798 (136) - try to change it for finisher yes, this can be added and should've been added before
  32. 04:25:464 (504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516) - i hear it like kdkdkdkdk and etc. it could be kdkdkdk, yeah, but i want to make a difference with the first 1/6 in the first kiai, since this one has a higher pitch than the first one.
  33. 04:26:131 (516,518) - Between this notes last stream sound is continue, i think you need to map it same as first 1/6 stream
  34. from 04:29:463 (554) - to 04:35:296 (590) - i hear background violin part, maybe you need to map it? I mean sounds like between 04:32:463 (573,574) - 04:32:463 (573,574,575) - and etc. hmmmm, i don't find it relevant enough to override the main melody.
  35. 04:43:211 (1) - I think you need change it for finisher to emphasize this strange sound and i think this sound is not snapped it music, his actual start at 04:43:205 added the finisher there, but i'm not moving that note, that would be pretty troublesome

    if be honest 04:43:211 (1,2,3,4) - all this section is with wrong timing, change curent BPM point to 04:43:205 - and delete 04:43:885 - BPM point.
    EDIT: But do it after mod, cuz i'll continue mod without this change cuz timings can be broken the bpm point at 04:43:885 should be at 04:43:879 - (fixed this already btw), not at 04:43:885 - or at 04:43:205 - either, it's just the note at 04:43:212 - that could be a bit earlier, not gonna change that point to 04:43:205 - .

  36. 05:23:551 (403,404,405,406,407,408) - change it for kdkd k D cuz i hear this moment like it and i think last note is sounds like finisher i sounds better as how it is right now for me, and with the finisher thing, i don't want to add it, already mentioned the finisher stuff in 1/4+1/6 mixed streams
  37. 05:27:884 - and add spinner here to map this long bass sound if you want. hmmmm, i got really tempted to do this, buuuut i prefer to leave it like this


Good luck in ranking! THANKS A LOT MAN! SORRY AGAIN FOR BEING LATE!
Tyistiana
Hi, sorry for make you waiting. I'm busy with IRL stuff. ;w;

Sorry (again) that I can't modded this map. I get confused while I'm modding your map since I have modded my friend map which it have very different mapping style. ;w;

These is the thing I've notice. Maybe ignore all of it.
  1. HP on this map is too high for marathon map imo. Maybe down to 5.5 or 5 to make it easier to pass.
  2. The last kiai might be end on 05:07:879 since the music after this part look like an outro more than kiai.
  3. We might add a spinner on the end to emphasize the flow.
  4. The stream part on 01:45:963 until 01:53:462 might not fit to the stream as well since this is clam. We might follow the main melody instead.
    But the stream on 01:56:129 is nice! :3
  5. The spinner on 03:20:463 might move to 03:20:797 - (and add a note on 03:20:463) since the flow is starting from 03:20:797


Already a nice map! Good luck! :D
Topic Starter
whosthebox

Tyistiana wrote:

Hi, sorry for make you waiting. I'm busy with IRL stuff. ;w;

Sorry (again) that I can't modded this map. I get confused while I'm modding your map since I have modded my friend map which it have very different mapping style. ;w;

These is the thing I've notice. Maybe ignore all of it.
  1. HP on this map is too high for marathon map imo. Maybe down to 5.5 or 5 to make it easier to pass. sounds reasonable, set it to 5.5
  2. The last kiai might be end on 05:07:879 since the music after this part look like an outro more than kiai. i don't think the same. idk when did i change this or why, but this had a different kiai placing: from 04:43:879 - here to 04:59:879 - here and then it starts again 05:07:879 - here and ends 05:26:878 - here.
  3. We might add a spinner on the end to emphasize the flow. the spinner should be mapped at the sound that starts 05:26:878 - here, that meaning i should remove the following notes to replace them with the mentioned spinner. I don't want to do that, i like both the k 05:26:878 - here and the four notes starting from 05:27:212 - here, this isn't bad mapped, a spinner there seems pretty boring to me tbh and i won't add it 05:27:712 - here or 05:27:878 - here since the sound doesn't start in any of those two places.
  4. The stream part on 01:45:963 until 01:53:462 might not fit to the stream as well since this is clam. We might follow the main melody instead.
    But the stream on 01:56:129 is nice! :3 i don't know what you mean with clam, but that stream follows the clearly audible piano there,
    the hitsounds also follow pretty well the main melody, and to some degree, they follow the piano too. I don't want to ignore the piano since it's pretty clear.
  5. The spinner on 03:20:463 might move to 03:20:797 - (and add a note on 03:20:463) since the flow is starting from 03:20:797 yes, you are right, moved the spinner to 03:20:630 - and added a D 03:20:463 - here


Already a nice map! Good luck! :Dty m8!
THANKS A LOT M8!
Midnaait
Ahi tenes algunos kds :^)
gaston_2199
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Unreal Oni
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  1. 00:01:798 (3) - Cambialo a kat porque si lo comparás con 00:04:464 (7) - el tono es más alto. Además haria un bueno descenso en los patrones de kdkk a dddk (si lo aplicás hacelo también en 00:12:464 (28) - por consistencia)
  2. 00:17:464 (49) - Esto debería ser don tendiendo en cuando si querés hacer consistencia con 00:06:798 (9) - , pero el patrón es raro de jugar para mi, por lo que podrías intercambiar 00:17:131 (47,48) - para que quede dkdkdddk
  3. 00:22:297 (69,70) - Ctrl + G, enfatizaría mejor el tono alto del piano
  4. 00:29:297 (111) - Cambialo a don, el tono es muy similar a 00:45:297 (210) - (lo mismo acá 00:37:297 (159) - )
  5. 00:42:297 (192,193) - Intercambialos si querés mantener la consistencia del piano como en 00:22:964 - (si lo mantenés por variación it's fine)
  6. 00:53:297 (261) - Cambialo a kat, por el tono alto
  7. 01:08:631 (395) - Teniendo en cuenta 01:00:631 (326) -, no tendría que ser kat?
  8. 01:09:797 - Con éste podría seguir mejor el piano
  9. 01:18:797 - Se ven fantásticos esos finishers, pero ese lugar en particar son algo dificiles de tocar. Lo que te sugiero es que borres estas 2 notas 01:19:047 (462,467) - y que cambies por éste patrón
  10. 01:21:464 (481,482) - Estas notas están de sobra para mi, además que acá 01:21:631 (483) - se escucha un cymbal, así que podrías quitar esas 2 notas y agregar finisher ahí
  11. 01:21:797 (484) - El tono de esto es algo bajo que iría mejor con un don
  12. 01:34:381 (603) - Cambialo a don para que se pueda hacer énfasis al cymbal en 01:34:464 (604) -
  13. 01:41:213 (680) - Borralo para que pueda enfatizar el cymbal de 01:41:130 (679) -
  14. 01:45:463 (721) - Agregar finisher? Para marcar el cambio de sección antes del stream
  15. 01:45:629 (722,723) - Se siente bastante raro estas 2 notas en 1/2, creo que deberías juntarlos con el stream para que sea más agradable de jugar
  16. 02:30:214 (1177,1178) - No deberían estar intercambiadas? Para seguir mejor el piano digo (lo mismo va para 02:40:880 (1291,1292) -)
  17. 02:52:463 (1401) - Finisher? Para que haga consistencia con 02:49:797 (1379) -
  18. 03:46:795 (136) - Mmm, sacar finisher? Porque en el comienzo del primer kiai (02:28:463 (1159) -) no lo agregaste
  19. 04:21:461 (469) - Agregar finisher? lo mismo que 02:52:463 (1401) -
Muy bueno el mapa, en serio. Tendrías que preguntarle a un BN si te lo checkea porque para mi ya está listo.
Tomá mis estrellas :^)
Good luck!
Topic Starter
whosthebox

gaston_2199 wrote:

From irc
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Unreal Oni
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  1. 00:01:798 (3) - Cambialo a kat porque si lo comparás con 00:04:464 (7) - el tono es más alto. Además haria un bueno descenso en los patrones de kdkk a dddk (si lo aplicás hacelo también en 00:12:464 (28) - por consistencia) el pitch mas alto de esa parte esta 00:01:964 - aca, y la diferencia entre esa nota y 00:01:798 - la que esta aca es mucha,
    no quiero que las dos sean k teniendo en cuenta que hay esa diferencia, me gusta el build up que le hacen ademas. Lo mismo para la otra
  2. 00:17:464 (49) - Esto debería ser don tendiendo en cuando si querés hacer consistencia con 00:06:798 (9) - , pero el patrón es raro de jugar para mi, por lo que podrías intercambiar 00:17:131 (47,48) - para que quede dkdkdddk 00:17:298 (48,49) - le mande CTRL+G a esas dos, suena mejor asi
  3. 00:22:297 (69,70) - Ctrl + G, enfatizaría mejor el tono alto del piano si me gusta, se lo mando todo
  4. 00:29:297 (111) - Cambialo a don, el tono es muy similar a 00:45:297 (210) - (lo mismo acá 00:37:297 (159) - ) yes
  5. 00:42:297 (192,193) - Intercambialos si querés mantener la consistencia del piano como en 00:22:964 - (si lo mantenés por variación it's fine) na, me gusta mas el kdkdk, ademas un par de notas mas adelante sale el ddd, se lo cambio
  6. 00:53:297 (261) - Cambialo a kat, por el tono alto yea boi
  7. 01:08:631 (395) - Teniendo en cuenta 01:00:631 (326) -, no tendría que ser kat? mira vos, no me di cuenta, le mando CTRL+G 01:08:631 (395,396) - a esas dos para la consistencia tambien
  8. 01:09:797 - Con éste podría seguir mejor el piano me gusta, me gusta
  9. 01:18:797 - Se ven fantásticos esos finishers, pero ese lugar en particar son algo dificiles de tocar. Lo que te sugiero es que borres estas 2 notas 01:19:047 (462,467) - y que cambies por éste patrón me gusta todo, excepto lo de cambiar la nota 01:18:964 - esa por un d, la dejo como k a esa, todo lo demas, cambiado
  10. 01:21:464 (481,482) - Estas notas están de sobra para mi, además que acá 01:21:631 (483) - se escucha un cymbal, así que podrías quitar esas 2 notas y agregar finisher ahí tanto 01:21:464 - aca como 01:21:547 - aca se escucha un sonido, el triplet no esta mal, pero me gusta bastante la idea de poner el finisher ahi tbh, el triplet esta un poco forzado teniendo en cuenta el volumen de las dos notas anteriores al cymbal, saque 01:21:797 - esta nota tambien, asi va mejor la parte esa, ademas de que ahi practicamente no hay ruido
  11. 01:21:797 (484) - El tono de esto es algo bajo que iría mejor con un don previously removed :^)
  12. 01:34:381 (603) - Cambialo a don para que se pueda hacer énfasis al cymbal en 01:34:464 (604) - yes
  13. 01:41:213 (680) - Borralo para que pueda enfatizar el cymbal de 01:41:130 (679) - me gusta
  14. 01:45:463 (721) - Agregar finisher? Para marcar el cambio de sección antes del stream no me parece worth de mandarle un finisher a ese ruido tbh, ya esta marcado el cambio de seccion con el SV change y el volumen mas bajo
  15. 01:45:629 (722,723) - Se siente bastante raro estas 2 notas en 1/2, creo que deberías juntarlos con el stream para que sea más agradable de jugar mejor borro la nota que esta 01:45:629 - aca, tenes un pequeño break para el cambio de seccion, y se juega mejor
  16. 02:30:214 (1177,1178) - No deberían estar intercambiadas? Para seguir mejor el piano digo (lo mismo va para 02:40:880 (1291,1292) -) no estaba siguiendo el piano para hitsoundear eso, prefiero dejarlo asi EDIT: NEVERMIND, TENES RAZON, ME CONFUNDI
  17. 02:52:463 (1401) - Finisher? Para que haga consistencia con 02:49:797 (1379) - hmm, no me desagrada como queda, le mando nomas
  18. 03:46:795 (136) - Mmm, sacar finisher? Porque en el comienzo del primer kiai (02:28:463 (1159) -) no lo agregaste yea, consistenciabois
  19. 04:21:461 (469) - Agregar finisher? lo mismo que 02:52:463 (1401) - 👌
Muy bueno el mapa, en serio. Tendrías que preguntarle a un BN si te lo checkea porque para mi ya está listo. EA, TY
Tomá mis estrellas :^) EA TY ✖2
Good luck!
EA TY ✖3 GRACIAS POR EL MOD, VERY GOOD ONE!
Nifty
oooh v1 AGAIN alrighgt
◾ 01:38:797 - monos in a long stream like this ain't too good, keep them all down to at most 4 notes.
◽ 04:25:461 - don't see why this isn't kdkdkdkdkdkdkdk like the one before.
◾ 04:27:295 - put some d's in this mono
◽ 04:43:879 - these timing lines need to be the same volume cause rc

nice map, streams are good and pattern are pretty straightforward.
Topic Starter
whosthebox

Nifty wrote:

oooh v1 AGAIN alrighgt oooh V1 MASTER RACE AGAIN
◾ 01:38:797 - monos in a long stream like this ain't too good, keep them all down to at most 4 notes. changed it a bit
◽ 04:25:461 - don't see why this isn't kdkdkdkdkdkdkdk like the one before. it has a higher pitch than the first one, i want to emphasize that difference, and this one sounds more like (kkkk...) than (kdkdk...) tbh.
◾ 04:27:295 - put some d's in this mono 04:27:295 (529,530,531,532,533,534) - these notes are hitsounded acording to the synth, it's pretty loud and predominant here, i prefer to keep it like that.
◽ 04:43:879 - these timing lines need to be the same volume cause rc oh, didn't notice that, ty

nice map, streams are good and pattern are pretty straightforward. yeeee, ty
TY AGAIN M8RINO
Rhytoly
wuuu my map no pepe ver. go to ranked!!!
00:22:798 - 00:53:631 - cut them. make break on the long 1/2 and make it not boring such as 00:26:964 - and cut other point too.
01:26:797 - 01:33:297 - you should cut them to make more break .this point isn't kiai and has sound stop such as 01:28:547 - 01:30:547 - 01:32:547 -
01:36:547 - 01:38:547 -
01:38:714 - you should cut here^ the stream here and go to format
01:45:963 - 01:53:462 - ......I know whice sould is you following but it's really calm it's should change to 1/2 only or use your way
02:21:546 - cut it
02:28:464 - 02:48:297 - nice idea to follow merody and piano but still feel weird
02:56:463 - oh hell
04:25:461 - hell yeah I want you get green vote not red as my map > >
04:29:463 - 04:42:629 - yeah,same as 00:22:798 - 00:53:631
04:42:795 - spinner? how about 1/6 note like my map? use kkkd or dddd
05:07:879 - 05:07:879 - it's have no kiai
all kiai :!: - it's really bad bro The density is high at some point and the stream does not start at some point.
need more suggestion and mod
good luck than ,I mod it cause I'm just like this song :P
Topic Starter
whosthebox

Cocoaaa wrote:

wuuu my map no pepe ver. go to ranked!!! actually, mine is older, yours is my map pp version :^)
00:22:798 - 00:53:631 - cut them. make break on the long 1/2 and make it not boring such as 00:26:964 - and cut other point too. no,
the beats are there and they are clearly audible, i won't ignore them. Also, it's a hard diff, it's perfectly fine to have very few breaks.

01:26:797 - 01:33:297 - you should cut them to make more break .this point isn't kiai and has sound stop such as 01:28:547 - 01:30:547 - 01:32:547 -
01:36:547 - 01:38:547 - i won't cut that stream, it's actually pretty easy to hit, and the breaks there are a mood killer, since that part of the song is pretty intense, and even if the breaks somewhat make sense, i prefer to keep the stream full, because of that intensity. Also, the biggest break is 01:38:881 - here. I'm only removing that note.
01:38:714 - you should cut here^ the stream here and go to format already mentioned that above, the break is 01:38:881 - here, not 01:38:714 - there.
01:45:963 - 01:53:462 - ......I know whice sould is you following but it's really calm it's should change to 1/2 only or use your way I prefer to keep the piano mapping. I already reduced both slider velocity and the hitsound volume there to make a difference.
02:21:546 - cut it no, there is a beat there. Try setting the playback rate to 50% and pay attention.
02:28:464 - 02:48:297 - nice idea to follow merody and piano but still feel weird it plays pretty nice, not changing this.
02:56:463 - oh hell the 1/6 is there.
04:25:461 - hell yeah I want you get green vote not red as my map > > same here.
04:29:463 - 04:42:629 - yeah,same as 00:22:798 - 00:53:631 same as i said there too.
04:42:795 - spinner? how about 1/6 note like my map? use kkkd or dddd there is no 1/6 there, not even close to that, that is a held sound,
meaning a spinner or a slider makes a lot more sense there.

05:07:879 - 05:07:879 - it's have no kiai i think it does, not changing this.
all kiai :!: - it's really bad bro The density is high at some point and the stream does not start at some point.
need more suggestion and mod the kiais emphasize pretty well the intense parts of the song, they're fine how they are right now. I don't think this needs much more mods, and if it needs more mods, i won't accept that comment coming from you, you had your map DQ'ed twice and modded A LOT in order to get it ranked, and this mod was not good at all. I appreciate your effort and intentions, but please, don't say this needs more mods.
good luck than ,I mod it cause I'm just like this song :Pthanks.
Rhytoly
I just want to see overall but up to you if you think this map is ok
edit : my map got disqualified 2 time cause metadata only not map
_WWWWWW_WWWWWW_
The epic fight of Beatrice vs. Gloria

(Explicame qué es ese circle size (?))



00:06:798 - no queda bien dddk, acá el piano hace [do fa sol do], como son dos cuartas superpuestas quedaría mejor [ddkk] para mostrar ese contraste de tono, o [dkdk] para marcar la repetición del intervalo

00:17:298 (48,49) - ctrl+g , por tono y consistencia

00:22:298 (69,70) - ctrl+g por tono


Este pianito está medio monónoto, a ver qué podemos hacer...
00:27:797 - cambiá a d, así es consistente con como empezaste el fraseo la primera vez
00:30:797 - lo mismo que arriba
00:38:797 - mismo
00:46:797 - mismo



00:28:964 - cambiar a k quedaría mejor imo*
00:29:631 - lo mismo que arriba
00:36:964 - mismo*
00:37:631 - mismo
00:44:964 - mismo*
00:45:631 - mismo
00:50:964 - mismo*
00:51:631 - mismo
(las que te marqué con asterisco, si las obviás y ponés las otras queda un pattern [dddkkk] lindo también.

01:06:464 - esto me suena más para [kkdkk] o [ddkkk]

01:18:381 - esta nota debería estar acá 01:18:714 - concordando con el sonido de las cuerdas ... Si no capaz que borrarlo queda más coherente...

01:33:714 - agregá una nota acá por el sonido de las cuerdas

01:42:047 - en serio querés sacrificar el sonido del kick acá? fijate si no encontrás una manera de rescatarlo sin sacarle intensidad a las otras big notes

02:57:130 - rellená los 1/6 hasta el don de 02:57:297 - sigue sonando el trino
04:26:128 - lo mismo acá^



03:00:213 - 03:00:380 - borrar esas dos notas resaltaría la tensión antes del stream

03:55:795 - borrar esta nota para darle más enfasis al cambio en la percusión quedaría bueno en esta parte


05:23:712 - esto también podría ser 1/6 ya que estamos... onda (dkkdkkd) o (dkkddkk)

05:25:795 - acá es muy fuerte el sonido de la percusión como para ignorarlo, agregá d

05:27:212 - no vas a seguir el 1/4 del clavecín acá? algo como [ddkdk k] o [dkddk k]


AGUANTE MODV1
voy a ganar dos kudos no te la puedo :o
Topic Starter
whosthebox

ARGENTINE DREAM wrote:

The epic fight of Beatrice vs. Gloria

(Explicame qué es ese circle size (?))

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00:06:798 - no queda bien dddk, acá el piano hace [do fa sol do], como son dos cuartas superpuestas quedaría mejor [ddkk] para mostrar ese contraste de tono, o [dkdk] para marcar la repetición del intervalo hmmm, es y no es, usted me entiende :^) le mando kddk, aunque estoy siguiendo la melodia mas que el piano, esto tambien la sigue bien dentro de todo

00:17:298 (48,49) - ctrl+g , por tono y consistencia entiendo lo que decis y de hecho seria lo correcto SI estuviera priorizando el piano, estoy dandole mas importancia los altibajos de la melodia en esa parte. Anda acostumbrandote a ver melody hitsounding, vocal hitsounding, y cosas asi de rancias en mis mapas:^)

00:22:298 (69,70) - ctrl+g por tono you are right


Este pianito está medio monónoto, a ver qué podemos hacer...
00:27:797 - cambiá a d, así es consistente con como empezaste el fraseo la primera vez no me convence, aparte, 00:22:798 - hasta ahi venia siguiendo la melodia, prefiero dejarlo como esta.
00:30:797 - lo mismo que arriba lo mismo que arriba
00:38:797 - mismo :^)
00:46:797 - mismo :^)



00:28:964 - cambiar a k quedaría mejor imo* me gusta, applied
00:29:631 - lo mismo que arriba este no
00:36:964 - mismo* este si
00:37:631 - mismo denied
00:44:964 - mismo* yes
00:45:631 - mismo no
00:50:964 - mismo* yes
00:51:631 - mismo no
(las que te marqué con asterisco, si las obviás y ponés las otras queda un pattern [dddkkk] lindo también.

01:06:464 - esto me suena más para [kkdkk] o [ddkkk] kkddk me convence mas

01:18:381 - esta nota debería estar acá 01:18:714 - concordando con el sonido de las cuerdas ... Si no capaz que borrarlo queda más coherente... indeed, applied

01:33:714 - agregá una nota acá por el sonido de las cuerdas ya habia notas ahi previamente, las saque en un mod anterior, prefiero dejarlo como esta para no entrar en conflicto con otros mods.

01:42:047 - en serio querés sacrificar el sonido del kick acá? fijate si no encontrás una manera de rescatarlo sin sacarle intensidad a las otras big notes lo dude bastante a eso, pero me fije antes y ya sacrifique un par de bigs para meter triplets, lo meto por consistencia.

02:57:130 - rellená los 1/6 hasta el don de 02:57:297 - sigue sonando el trino already discussed this, se que el sonido sigue hasta ahi, pero el stream quedaria con una cantidad de notas par, y eso seria bastante rancio de jugar, prefiero dejarlo asi.
04:26:128 - lo mismo acá^ lo mismo que arriba



03:00:213 - 03:00:380 - borrar esas dos notas resaltaría la tensión antes del stream no me gusta, tal vez consideraria borrar 02:59:963 - esa nota, pero seria ignorar un sonido muy clarito, y la otra no me convence para nada, prefiero dejarlo como esta.

03:55:795 - borrar esta nota para darle más enfasis al cambio en la percusión quedaría bueno en esta parte me gusta la idea, pero estoy siguiendo la melodia ahi, quiero que este esa nota ahi.


05:23:712 - esto también podría ser 1/6 ya que estamos... onda (dkkdkkd) o (dkkddkk) podria serlo si lo overmapeo, si, pero la cantidad de sonidos en 1/6 ahi son 4, que son justamente los que estan mapeados, mas no hay.

05:25:795 - acá es muy fuerte el sonido de la percusión como para ignorarlo, agregá d debia tener bastante hambre como para comerme esa nota :^) agregada

05:27:212 - no vas a seguir el 1/4 del clavecín acá? algo como [ddkdk k] o [dkddk k] nah, es muy forzado


AGUANTE MODV1
AGUANTE EL MODV1 VIEJA NO ME IMPORTA NADA

voy a ganar dos kudos no te la puedo :o
Gracias very mucho! Buen mod!
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