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Jun feat. Schanita - TRUE LOVE

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Aeven
69 posts
Joined April 2010
Aeven
2番！
良譜面！(๑╹ω╹๑)

提案としては（気にしなくてもいいかもしれない）
00:02:712　New Combo　置く。
Circle Sizeを1段階小さくして、Overall Difficulty を少し下げる。

完成期待してるよ（｀・ω・´）
KayeSara
KayeSara
完成期待してるよ（｀・ω・´）
Acyfd
49 posts
Joined June 2011
Acyfd
ｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝｼﾏﾊﾟﾝ
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
Shoot a star!
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
mod ja nai
hitsound mod
[General]
素晴らしい

[Insane]
hitsoundを もっと 入れて

00:00:797 (1) - 00:01:435 (2) - あたまに whistle
00:02:232 (4) - 00:02:871 (8) - whistle
00:03:669 (2) - 00:04:307 (4) - あたまに whistle
00:05:105 (4) - 尻尾に　finish
00:05:903 (1) - 00:06:541 (2) - 尻尾に　whistle
00:07:339 (4,1,3) - whistle
00:08:137 (4,5) - 中央と尻尾に　whistle
00:09:573 (1) - whistle
00:11:967 (5) - 尻尾に whistle
00:12:286 (1,3) - whistle
00:12:765 (4) - 尻尾に 00:13:243 (5) - あたまに whistle
00:13:562 (1) - 00:13:882 (3) - whistle
00:14:201 (5) - 尻尾に 00:14:520 (6) - あたまに whistle
00:14:839 (1) - 00:15:158 (3) - whistle
00:15:477 (5) - 尻尾に 00:15:797 (6) - ...以下略 whistle
00:16:275 (3,4,5) - 00:16:594 (7) - 00:16:754 (9) - 00:16:914 (11) - whistle
00:17:392 (1) - 00:18:031 (3) - slider真ん中 whistle
00:17:871 (2,4) - 00:19:945 (1) - 00:19:147 (4) - 00:19:467 (2) - 00:19:786 (4) - whistle
00:19:945 (1) - finish
00:22:499 (1) - 尻尾に 00:22:818 (2,2) - whistle
00:25:371 (2) - 頭に 00:25:690 (3) - 中に whistle
00:26:328 (1,2,3) - 00:27:285 (8) - 00:27:445 (9) - 00:27:765 (2) - 00:29:201 (3) - 00:30:477 (3) -
00:30:637 (4) - 00:31:116 (7) - 00:31:275 (1) - 00:31:754 (5) - 00:33:190 (2) - 全～～～部　whistle
00:31:594 (4) - 00:37:659 (6) - finish
00:32:711 (1) - 00:33:350 (3) - 尻尾に whistle
00:33:828 (1,2,3) - 00:34:307 (5) - 00:34:786 (2,4) - 00:35:265 (1,2,3) - 00:35:903 (1,2,3) -
00:37:020 (1) - 00:37:339 (3) - 00:38:456 (5,6,7) - 00:39:892 (2) - whistle

00:43:882 (3) - 00:44:360 (6) - 00:45:158 (9,10) - 00:46:275 (2,4) - 00:47:551 (10,11,12,13) - 00:48:988 (2,4) - 00:50:584 (1,2,3) - 00:51:062 (1) - 00:51:701 (6) -
00:52:658 (3) - 00:53:136 (3,4,5) - 00:53:616 (2) - 00:53:935 (1,3) - 00:54:573 (6) - 00:56:967 (2) - 00:57:924 (7,8,9) - 00:58:882 (2,4,6) - 01:00:477 (3) -
01:01:116 (8) - 01:01:435 (3,4) - 01:01:914 (6) - whistle

00:57:286 (4) - 頭に 00:56:648 (1) - 01:31:754 (1) - 01:32:392 (3) - 頭に whistle
00:44:520 (7) - 00:55:052 (2) - 00:55:690 (4) - 00:58:403 (1) - 00:59:041 (3) - 00:59:679 (5) - 01:26:488 (1,2) - 01:27:924 (5) - 尻尾に whistle

01:14:520 (2) - 01:15:158 (3) - 01:15:477 (2) - 01:15:956 (2) - 01:16:275 (4) - 01:16:594 (7) - 01:17:233 (4) - 01:17:552 (6) - 01:18:509 (2) - 01:18:828 (4,6) - 01:19:148 (7) -
01:20:105 (2) - 01:21:062 (5,7) - 01:22:180 (3) - 01:22:339 (4,5) - 01:23:297 (2) - 01:23:775 (1) - 01:24:573 (1,3) - 01:25:531 (6) - 01:25:850 (8,10) - 01:26:169 (11) -
01:28:562 (9) - 01:28:882 (11) - 01:29:679 (1) - 01:29:679 (1,4,7) - 01:31:275 (9) - 01:33:031 (5) - 01:33:350 (1) - whistle


00:10:371 (3) - 01:02:233 (2) - 01:02:871 (4) - 01:14:201 (1) - 01:33:509 (2) - 01:34:148 (2) - finish
00:11:009 (1) - 00:12:286 (1) - 00:13:562 (1) - 00:14:839 (1) - 00:14:839 (1) - 00:15:158 (3) - clap
00:11:488 (4) - 00:12:765 (4) - 真ん中に clap
00:14:201 (5) - 00:15:477 (5) - 頭に clap
01:03:350 (1) - 01:34:626 (1) - 無音に してみて
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
.x.

Download: Jun feat. Schanita - TRUE LOVE (Cilvery) [Insane].osu
L i a
L i a
어서 이곳을 빠져 나갑시다
L i a
L i a
제가 추천하는 힛사는 1개만 넣는거에요
즉 추천대로 바꾼다면 이미 있던 힛사는 해제
hit soundは 一つだけに すでに あるものは　解除して

00:08:137 (4) - 리턴 하나 줄이고
sliderかえし ひとつ けして

00:08:775 (5) - 이 슬라이더를 00:08:616 - 여기까지 땡겨요　위에처럼 바꾸셨으면 배치도 바꾸시고
00:08:775 (5) -これを　00:08:616 - ここに 連れて来て はいちまで かえて

00:09:733 (2) - 전체 피니쉬　- ぜんぶ finish
00:15:158 (3,4) - 피니쉬 - finish
00:15:477 (5) - 슬라이더 뒤 피니쉬 - slider 後ろに finish
00:15:797 (6) - 슬라이더 앞 피니쉬 - slider 前え finish
00:18:669 (1) - 피니쉬 - finish
00:20:265 (1,1,1) - 뉴콤보해제 - newcombo　かいじょ
00:27:605 (1) - 피니쉬 - finish
00:52:818 (4) - ^ - 同じく
00:58:243 (10) - ^ - 同じく
01:00:797 (5) - ^
01:01:435 (3) - ^
01:14:201 (1,2) - ^
01:16:754 (1) - ^
01:18:031 (3) - ^
01:21:861 (1) - ^
01:22:339 (4) - 슬라이더 뒤 피니쉬 - slider 後ろに finish
01:23:137 (1) - 피니쉬 - finish
01:23:775 (1) - ^ 同じく
01:31:754 (1) - 슬라이더 뒤 피니쉬 - slider 後ろに finish
01:32:392 (3) - ^ 同じく
01:33:350 (1) - 피니쉬 - finish
01:33:828 (1) - ^

by chata '-^
Last edited by L i a , edited 2 times in total.
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

L i a wrote:

제가 추천하는 힛사는 1개만 넣는거에요
즉 추천대로 바꾼다면 이미 있던 힛사는 해제
hit soundは 一つだけに すでに あるものは　解除して

00:08:137 (4) - 리턴 하나 줄이고
sliderかえし ひとつ けして

00:08:775 (5) - 이 슬라이더를 00:08:616 - 여기까지 땡겨요　위에처럼 바꾸셨으면 배치도 바꾸시고
00:08:775 (5) -これを　00:08:616 - ここに 連れて来て はいちまで かえて

00:09:733 (2) - 전체 피니쉬　- ぜんぶ finish
00:15:158 (3,4) - 피니쉬 - finish
00:15:477 (5) - 슬라이더 뒤 피니쉬 - slider 後ろに finish
00:15:797 (6) - 슬라이더 앞 피니쉬 - slider 前え finish
00:18:669 (1) - 피니쉬 - finish
00:20:265 (1,1,1) - 뉴콤보해제 - newcombo　かいじょ
00:27:605 (1) - 피니쉬 - finish
00:52:818 (4) - ^ - 同じく
00:58:243 (10) - ^ - 同じく
01:00:797 (5) - ^
01:01:435 (3) - ^
01:14:201 (1,2) - ^
01:16:754 (1) - ^
01:18:031 (3) - ^
01:21:861 (1) - ^
01:22:339 (4) - 슬라이더 뒤 피니쉬 - slider 後ろに finish
01:23:137 (1) - 피니쉬 - finish
01:23:775 (1) - ^ 同じく
01:31:754 (1) - 슬라이더 뒤 피니쉬 - slider 後ろに finish
01:32:392 (3) - ^ 同じく
01:33:350 (1) - 피니쉬 - finish
01:33:828 (1) - ^

by chata '-^
감사합니다!
Last edited by Cilvery , edited 1 time in total.
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery
offset809
Aeven
69 posts
Joined April 2010
Aeven
star~
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery
thanks!!!!
rrtyui
Former osu! Champion: 2014
744 posts
Joined May 2010
rrtyui
yes
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

rrtyui wrote:

yes
16:27 <rrtyui> : 00:36:316 (2,1) -
16:27 <rrtyui> : これやっぱ不自然なんで
16:27 <rrtyui> : 00:36:316 (2) - これすらいだーにするといいとおもう
yes

modありがとう！
S MoMo
59 posts
Joined May 2011
S MoMo
初心者ながらmod失礼します。
個人的な意見ですので気に入らない場合は聞き流していただいて構いませんので！
00:18:443 (2) - 1grid左
00:19:082 (2) - ^
00:19:560 (1) - ^
00:19:880 (1) - ^
この配置により左右対称的な位置になったり・・・ならなかったり・・・？
00:23:709 (3) - 1grid上
00:55:305 (4) - nc
00:58:656 (3) - ^
00:59:294 (5) - ^
00:59:294 (5) - ^
01:00:411 (5) - ^
01:01:050 (3) - ^
01:24:667 (6) - ^
01:25:465 (9) - ^
01:27:220 (4) - ^
01:30:571 (4) - ^
01:32:646 (5) - ^
01:32:965 (1) - rnc

初心者ながら失礼しました。
良い曲ですので他diffも作ってぜひランクドがんばってください！ :)
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

S MoMo wrote:

初心者ながらmod失礼します。
個人的な意見ですので気に入らない場合は聞き流していただいて構いませんので！
00:18:443 (2) - 1grid左
00:19:082 (2) - ^
00:19:560 (1) - ^
00:19:880 (1) - ^
この配置により左右対称的な位置になったり・・・ならなかったり・・・？
00:23:709 (3) - 1grid上
00:55:305 (4) - nc
00:58:656 (3) - ^
00:59:294 (5) - ^
00:59:294 (5) - ^
01:00:411 (5) - ^
01:01:050 (3) - ^
01:24:667 (6) - ^
01:25:465 (9) - ^
01:27:220 (4) - ^
01:30:571 (4) - ^
01:32:646 (5) - ^
01:32:965 (1) - rnc

初心者ながら失礼しました。
良い曲ですので他diffも作ってぜひランクドがんばってください！ :)
suzua(￣^￣ )ゞ

modありがとう！
Nanaya_cock
Nanaya_cock
nya nya nya nya nya
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Cilvery ~ :)

Random mod for this ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove Enable countdown pls.
  2. Don't forgot Remove OSB file and full submit.

[Cilvery]


  1. 00:10:624 - Unsnaped KIAI time line.
  2. 00:19:560 - ^
  3. 01:02:965 - ^
  4. 01:24:188 - ^ and this KIAI time should start to here 01:24:029.
  5. 01:34:241 - ^
  6. 00:51:475 (1) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better.
  7. 01:09:872 - Add finish,don't mute this note.
  8. 01:34:241 (1) - ^
  9. 01:23:709 (1) - Remove too short new combo.

That's all ~ nice map ~ finish your mapset pls ~ 실베리 화이팅 ><

Good luck ~
Chocopikel
319 posts
Joined June 2010
Chocopikel
とりあえず完成

Download: Jun feat. Schanita - TRUE LOVE (Cilvery) [Chocopikel].osu

Download: Jun feat. Schanita - TRUE LOVE (Cilvery) [mks2yu].osu
Last edited by Chocopikel , edited 1 time in total.
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery
ちくおおおおおお

ゆうちゃあああん

ありがとう！！
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
saymun
Everything i write down is optional =3=

[Cilvery]
00:01:509 (?) - Add circle
00:15:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Whistle only on 1,3,11,13
00:44:594 (8,9) - I think it flows better if you swap these (Ctrl+R)
00:51:455 (7) - I think this beat sounds better
SPOILER

[Chocopikel]
01:24:806 (3) - Why finish?
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

saymun wrote:

Everything i write down is optional =3=

[Cilvery]
00:01:509 (?) - Add circle　Fixed
00:15:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Whistle only on 1,3,11,13　Fixed
00:44:594 (8,9) - I think it flows better if you swap these (Ctrl+R)　Fixed
00:51:455 (7) - I think this beat sounds better
SPOILER
　Fixed
(´･ω･ `)
[Chocopikel]
01:24:806 (3) - Why finish?
thanks mod!!

saymun >3<~♥
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