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////add Tags: OP VN yzrin
OP and VN are common acronyms for opening and visual novel
op is unnecessary as it will get caught in search at the stage of entering opening.
Even if you look at other rank, you can not enter because there is no description of VN.
adding yzrin will make it easier to find your map, considering you have ranked GD's
Because there is a tag of yuzu__rinrin in ranked, I think that it is all right.I guess metadata is fine, all I could find on the official page was ecchi stuff ww
wwwwwwBG size is only 1280x720, which is rather low (and unrankable? I don't know). I have resized them to 1920x1080 for you, which is generally better (and rankable).
Click meIf you change the BG, add a warning in the description to redowload the map with the next update.
oh Thanks ><[Kantan]
00:20:867 (29) - finish, like in the other difficulties?
umm... ok01:01:963 (86) - kat? vocal pitch is relatively high compared to 01:01:141 (85) - and 01:02:785 (87) -, some contrast wouldn't hurt
ok!01:17:580 (110) - don? provides contrast to 01:18:402 (111) - in vocal pitch
change 01:16:552 - don, thanks suggestion ></[Futsuu]
00:13:059 (29) - don? catches the guitar / melody more accurately
ok01:30:525 (214,215) - ctrl+g, to avoid repetition and follow vocals better
I will change it.[Muzukashii]
00:00:936 - suggestion: to show progression across the spread, you can add a note here and at similar spots. (00:01:758 - 00:04:224 - 00:05:046 - namely). the same suggestion applies to the end too
Let's add it. I was not afraid to become difficult but I did not add it.01:16:758 (274) - move to 01:16:963 - ? it's not clear what you are following with this note, moving it would at least follow the trumpet
ok! good :301:30:217 (326,327) - this sounds out of place, consider doing something different as the doublet isn't following anything. if anything, vocals are on the red tick
I deleted Notes and changed it to ddk like Futsuu.01:30:525 (328,329) - ctrl+g, same as futsuu
:3[Oni]
00:23:847 (114) - I'd suggest don, I feel like dkkkd takes away the impact on the trumpet
ok!00:36:176 - why are you skipping this trumpet note while you mapped them 00:34:326 (171,172,173,174) - here as a 4-plet?
I focused on vocal.
Ignoring the trumpet because it has the effect of increasing the variation.00:43:676 (225) - move this note to 00:43:778 - to follow the vocals, or add a note on mentioned timestamp. current pattern sounds weird to me
ok,
changed
d-kkd-k- → -kd-d-k
01:09:361 (350) - don? I understand why you mapped 01:02:580 (308,309,310,311,312,313,314) - as ddkdkkd, as the pitch is relatively high, but the same pattern on 01:09:155 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354) - doesn't sound nice, since the pitch is constantly low and a kat note contradicts that.
Alternative pattern: dkddkkd. idk how it suits your style, but it maintains a smooth flow and emphasizes vocals in an improvised way well
change ddddkkd.01:30:525 (469,470) - ctrl+g, same as with the other diffs