1. Obsession - 4Key (3,51 stars, 2381 notes)

Insp1r3 wrote:

Patchwork Memories

Out of my love for both the map and the song

1|2|3|4

00:20:436 (20436|3,20436|0,20436|1) - Should be a single

00:27:156 (27156|0,27396|0,27636|0,27876|0,28116|0,28356|0,28596|0) - Anchor

00:30:516 (30516|0,30756|0,30996|0,31236|0,31476|0) - ^

00:50:796 (50796|2,50796|1,50916|0,50916|3,51036|2,51036|0) - I would make these singles, I don't think there's an intense enough sound to justify doubles

01:05:436 (65436|3,65436|1) - I understand that this double is emphasising the reverse high hat but I would make one of them a mini LN to really emphasise it

01:21:396 (81396|2,81396|1,81396|0,81396|3) - Flip this

01:36:390 - 01:44:390 - I would have one of the notes in the triples in this section be an LN to emphasise the guitar(?) instead of just triples. This section is quite boring otherwise.

02:00:390 (120390|1,120390|0,120557|1,120557|0,120724|1,120724|0,120890|1,120890|0,121057|1,121057|0) - Move this stack to 2|3

02:03:057 (123057|1,123057|0,123224|1,123224|0,123390|1,123390|0,123557|1,123557|0,123724|1,123724|0) - Move this stack to 3|4

02:04:390 (124390|0,124390|1) - Move to 3|4

02:27:057 (147057|0,147057|3,147057|2,147057|1) - Make this a triple

02:32:390 (152390|0) - Move to 2

02:39:057 (159057|1,159057|0) - Make this a triple

02:44:390 (164390|2,164390|1) - ^

02:47:057 (167057|0,167057|1) - ^

03:12:162 (192162|1,192162|3,192162|2,192162|0) - These quads are quite obtrusive, I would consider making these triples in this dubstep section to make it more balanced

03:39:162 - 03:39:590 - I would map this sound

03:41:733 (221733|1) - Move to 3

03:43:447 (223447|0,223447|1,223447|3) - Make this a double

03:46:769 (226769|1) - Move to 3

04:20:123 - Make this part a quad like you did with 04:19:669 (259669|1,259669|0,259669|3,259669|2)

04:27:623 (267623|1,267623|0) - Move to 2|3

04:29:214 (269214|3,269214|2) - ^

04:29:896 (269896|0,269896|2,269896|3) - Make this a double

04:38:305 (278305|0) - Move to 2 or 3

04:38:987 (278987|0,278987|3,278987|2) - Make this a double

04:58:532 (298532|0,298760|0,298987|0,299214|0,299442|0,299669|0,299896|0,300123|0,300351|0) - Anchor

05:00:123 (300123|1,300351|1,300578|1,300805|1,301032|1,301260|1) - ^

05:05:805 (305805|3,305805|2,305919|2,305919|3,306032|3,306032|2,306146|2,306146|3,306260|2,306260|3) - Move this stack to 2|3

05:11:146 (311146|3) - Move to 3

05:17:851 (317851|0,317964|0) - ^

05:18:078 (318078|2) - Move to 1

I really want this to get ranked. Hope this mod helps!

TrippinBeats wrote:

I have never modded before, so this will be a mess.

Patchwork Memories

00:16:536 (16536|2) - Note is not actually played in song.
00:16:476 (16476|1) - Mabye make this a long note
00:35:196 (35196|0) - Mabye move this up to the double to make it 3 notes on the crash like previously in the song
00:39:876 (39876|0) - Move this to lane 4 to keep consistent?
00:43:716 (43716|0) - Same with this one. lane 2 mabye? You could move the tripple above to avoid tripple jack.
01:00:756 (60756|2,60756|3) - Why only 2 here?
01:01:596 (61596|3) - Wierd to have 3 before the beat, move this one up?
01:06:516 (66516|0) - Another note here? move the 2 notes below to accomodate
01:09:876 (69876|2,69876|1) - tripple
01:22:356 (82356|0,82356|2,82356|3,82356|1,82516|3,82516|1,82676|0,82676|2,82836|1,82836|2,82836|3,82996|0,82996|2,83156|3,83156|1) - This part already mapped really good. Would be really cool if they were short long notes. I think it works! Your choice!

01:35:057 (95057|1,95057|2,95057|0) - Mabye only 2 here, same sound as previous
01:58:057 (118057|3) - Make it end a bit before the hit (1/8 for example). The sound ends, and it feels cooler
02:24:390 (144390|2,146390|3) - Really want a double here. End slider a bit early
02:39:390 (159390|2) - You missed a note before this one!
02:55:876 (175876|3,177590|2) - Would like a double here as well!
02:57:912 (177912|3,177912|2) - move this to the right, and make the note above a double, trust me xD
02:58:233 (178233|0) - This one double in lane 2 and 3
02:58:447 (178447|3,179090|2) - You know it, double! (your choice of course) but it's a really hard hit for 2 notes.
03:09:054 (189054|0,189054|1,189269|1,189269|0) - Think it would be cool if these were above the other two. Makes it more fun to play.
03:09:054 (189054|0,189054|1,189269|1,189269|0) - Wierd jacks above these notes, the guitar has jacks on the two notes that I highlighted, not the ones above. If you follow the voice these: 03:12:162 (192162|0,192162|2,192162|3,192269|2) - are also correct, but not the ones above. This jack "problem" repeats a few times.
03:15:804 (195804|1) - Ln here?
03:15:697 (195697|3) - This note does not exist in the song
03:18:590 (198590|1) - remove, no sound playing.
03:19:233 (199233|1,199340|1) - Why jack?
03:19:126 (199126|3) - not played
03:21:162 (201162|1,201162|2) - Would be cool if these were jacks following her voice
03:22:126 (202126|0) - not played
03:22:662 (202662|3) - ln?
03:22:554 (202554|0) - not played. By placing notes directly behind a strong drum hit, it makes it less impactful. I'm a rookie mapper, but sometimes less is more xD Welp it's you choice.
03:24:162 (204162|0) - Missing notes between the ln notes. There is an high hat playing.
04:04:896 (244896|3,245123|0,245351|1,245351|2,245464|2,245464|1,245578|3,245692|0,245692|2,245919|3,245919|1,246032|1,246032|2) - Beautiful!
04:08:078 (248078|1) - Maybe let it end in the middle, so you have to repress key? Sound is temporarily gone in the middle. Feels wierd to hold an ln note through the DUM... DUM... DUM... part
04:11:487 (251487|0,251487|3) - Would like these and the 2 that follow to be a bit longer, like you do for the last one.
04:14:896 (254896|1) - Lane 4, pls!
04:13:760 (253760|2,253987|1,254214|2,254442|1) - These are kind of inverted if you listen to the music! No need to change if you dont want to
04:15:578 (255578|0,255805|2,256032|0) - These as well.
04:17:396 (257396|2,257623|0,257851|2) - You are doing this on purpose... AREN'T YOU!?
04:18:760 (258760|0,258760|2) - Would like these to be longer as well
04:28:078 (268078|3,268078|0,268078|2) - Why 3 here?
04:31:714 (271714|3,271752|2,271790|1,271828|0,271866|3,271904|2,271942|1,271979|0,272017|3,272055|2,272093|0,272131|1,272169|2,272207|3,272245|0,272282|1,272320|2,272358|3,272396|0,272434|1,272472|3,272510|2,272548|0,272585|1,272623|3,272661|2,272699|1,272737|0,272775|3,272813|2,272851|1,272888|0,272926|3,272964|2,273002|1,273040|0,273078|3,273116|2,273154|0,273192|1,273229|3,273267|2,273305|0,273343|1,273381|2,273419|3,273457|0,273495|1,273532|3,273532|2) - PERFEKT
04:35:351 (275351|3,275351|1,275464|2,275578|0,275692|1,275805|2,275805|3,275805|0,275919|1,276032|3,276146|2,276260|0,276260|1,276373|3,276487|0,276601|1,276714|3,276714|2,276714|0,276828|1,276942|3,277055|2,277169|0,277169|3,277169|1,277282|2,277396|1,277510|3,277623|1,277623|0,277623|2,277737|3,277851|0,277964|1) - This stream is awesome. Mabye look att the hits in the middle, seems to be randomly 2 and sometimes 3 on every other hit. On purpose?
04:41:714 (281714|3,281714|1) - Like here for example
04:58:532 (298532|2) - Why no note above?
05:04:782 (304782|2) - Sounds like a bambam sound. Double here?
05:08:419 (308419|2) - I don't like jacks lol. Why this one?
05:14:214 (314214|1) - Move this to 3, and make the ln note end 1/4 before, like the one below!
05:14:669 (314669|3,314896|2,315123|1) - Why are the notes going the wrong way
05:18:532 (318532|1,318760|2) -
05:28:078 (328078|3,328078|1) - Don't make them hit at the same time, and spred it out, so that the 3 lanes come in with even spacing. Makes it feel more like it's building up! Also dont release voice ln note the same time.

Pew! That was not as bad as I though it would be! Awesome song m8, and the map is genious as well. FOLLOW THE MELODY DAMMIT. No but seriously, love your map!

Div wrote:

hello yes u asked me to mod

Patchwork Memories

i lied i can't be fucKED

have a star w

Nakano Yuko wrote:

Hello Chilly, I have finally arrived to mod this now when you've come quite a way. Generally, a chill map with a nice combination between comfortable patterns mostly in form of streams, and technical patterns like the LN's and jacks. Fun despite it's low star rating and certainly a challenge to FC! Anyway, I'm not here to give compliments so let's begin the mod.

mod

Nakano Yuko's 4K Modding
Column 1|2|3|4

General
Look good- OD and HP feel good, I'm not an expert in exactly what decimal should be used, but it feels appropriate. You could consider adding some more tags for more exposure. Also, I feel like you need to give a shoutout to the ranked mapset by linking it in beatmap description, as you took the timing and background from it. Also, if you kept some of my SV I feel like that should also be written.

Timing
Looks good. Offset is ranked so obviously not going to be any problem, SV seems fine as well, however I give some small suggestions during the noting mod, I know SV is timing but I'll keep it there.


Noting
00:05:076 (5076|0,5076|3) - Could potentially be a triple due to the sound being quite strong and containing a cymbal. Sure, fixed it.

00:11:796 (11796|3,11796|0,11796|1,11916|1,12036|2,12036|0,12036|3,12156|2) - I understand the pattern you're going for, and it's definitely smooth. However, it's somewhat strange to use this considering the sound is exactly the same strength all 4 hits, yet you alternate between triple and single (with a jack ofc). I'm not sure how this will hold up if you're going for rank. If it was an easier diff in a set with more difficult maps in same key mode, it would be acceptable for sure, but since this is the only difficulty I'm not entirely sure about this. Having said this, it's obviously fine playing wise so nothing you have to change. I'll think about it.

00:12:756 (12756|1,12756|0,13236|2,13236|3,13716|3,13716|1,14196|1,14196|0,14676|0,14676|2) - In these LN patterns, I find it somewhat odd that you have a double (1 LN one single) for both the kick and the snare. I would advice making the snares triples by releasing one of the LN earlier like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9257463
This way you stay consistent with your layering structure. Fixed it, never thought about that xD

00:15:156 (15156|3,15156|1) - This should be a triple so add note to 1. Fixed

00:15:876 (15876|3,15876|0,15876|2,16116|1,16116|2,16116|3) - Considering the rarity of this clap, and how it's exactly the same, it may be more effective if you rearrange the patterns so that these triples are in the exact same column, it could potentially be more effective. If you want to keep the roll after like it is it would create a accidental triple-quad jack which would only be a problem then so it's only small thing that could maybe be arranged if patterns were changed. Fixed

00:16:596 (16596|3,16596|2,17076|2,17076|1,17076|0,17556|0,17556|2,18036|1,18036|0,18036|3,18516|3,18516|1) - Same thing with adding the triples. Could as an example look like this, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9257488. Fixed

00:19:956 (19956|0,19956|3,19956|2,19956|1,20436|3,20436|1) - A minor sightreadable sv could be nice here. On the last quad, the big hit, you could make it go 1.3x, then at 00:20:196 - make it go 0.7x, and then finally make it 1x again at 00:20:436 (20436|1) - this place.
If you want the sv to be smoother make it 4 steps, 1.15x --> 1.3x --> 0.85x --> 0.7x --> 1x
PM me if you need help
You don't need to do the sv exactly like this, but I'd like some type of sv to emphasize the big hit by making it go slightly faster right on it then a bit slower after. Applied it, thanks!

00:26:436 (26436|2,26676|2,26916|2,27156|2,27396|2,27636|2,27876|2) - 7 note anchor in column 3. Rearrange the streams to relieve the right index finger and even the stream. Didnt notice the 7 note anchor there, fixed it.

00:35:556 (35556|0) - I highly recommend having this note on the right hand (and rearranging the following notes) due to the minijack in column 1 right before it. Fixed.

Regarding the other smaller anchors in this jumpstream, honestly they don't really matter. Your distribution of notes in the various columns from 00:20:436 - to 00:34:836 - is:
C = Column
C1 C2 C3 C4
40 45 42 41
which is very even and the fingers get a fair amount of work, so once again it doesn't matter, this jumpstream section is well mapped other than the 7 note anchor i linked earlier.

00:35:796 (35796|3,35796|1,36036|1,36276|2,36276|0,36276|3) - Here you have one jack, and the next triple is on new columns, however:
00:37:716 (37716|2,37716|3,37956|2,38196|0,38196|3,38196|2) - Here you don't, and you have two jacks. This is unconsistent and needs to be the same. Looking on the next times this pattern reoccur, I'm guessing the first one would be the one you want to change into a double jack. I think i will let them stay as triple jacks, but thanks for pointing out the double!
00:36:516 (36516|2,36996|2,37236|2,37476|2,37716|2,37956|2,38196|2) - Also, here's a 8 note anchor counting the release of the LN, which should be accounted for. Fixed it.

Another jack unconsistency is this:
00:36:276 (36276|2,36516|2) - here the LN is a jack from the previous triple, 00:38:196 (38196|3,38196|2,38196|0,38436|1) - here it's not
I'm not going to point out the other instances where these exact things differ, but go back to this section and make it more consistent, is my tip. Yeah, didnt really think much about that, thanks for pointing it out!

00:40:116 (40116|1,40356|1,40836|1,41076|1,41316|1,41556|1,41796|1,42036|1) - 9 note anchor counting the release of the LN. Fixed it.

00:46:836 (46836|1,47076|1,47316|1,47556|1,47796|1,48036|1,48516|1,48756|1,48996|1) - 10 note anchor counting the release of the LN How did i not notice that >.>, fixed it.

00:49:716 (49716|2,50196|2) - These two should be one different columns considering the change in pitch in the melody. Fixed.

00:50:676 (50676|0,50676|1,50796|2,50916|1,51036|0,51156|2,51156|1) - I would prefer a jack pattern here tbh, where you do one jack on the left hand, then one on the right hand, so not all 4 jacks in one hand because you know... really hard...Yeah true, fixed it :S

00:51:636 (51636|3,51636|2) - Are you sure this sound in this section before the drop is really a worth a double? Not just this particular instance, but every double in the section, so up until 00:56:916 (56916|3,56916|1,56916|0) - this. I mean I guess it's fine but I honestly find this section overmapped. Made the doubles into singles as you told me to, never really thought about this part of the map in particular.

00:56:916 (56916|0,56916|1,56916|3,57076|2,57076|0,57236|3,57236|1,57396|3,57396|2,57396|1,57556|2,57556|0,57716|1,57716|3,57876|3,57876|2,57876|0,58036|0,58036|1,58196|1,58196|2,58356|0,58356|3,58356|2,58516|3,58516|1,58676|1,58676|0,58836|3,58836|0,58836|2) - These jacks could be improved by making sure each jack is on alternating hands. For example:
00:56:916 (56916|1,56916|0,57076|0,57236|1,57396|1) - These two, the first jacks, are on the same hand. 00:57:236 (57236|3,57396|3,57396|2,57556|2) - Then these two are on the same hand. The pattern will have better flow if each jack is on alternating hands as often as possible. Fixed it, looks and plays alot better, thanks for pointing it out!

01:04:836 (64836|0,64836|1) - A bit pointless to have this as a double if 01:05:316 (65316|0) - this is gonna be a single. I mean obviously it's to prevent a full jumptrill and to emphasize the syncopated hi-hat, but I mean what was the point of the first one then...Sorry mang, didnt notice, i'll try fixing it.

01:05:436 (65436|1,65796|1,66036|1,66276|1,66516|1) - 6 note anchor counting the release of the LN. Fixed.
01:06:036 (66036|3,66276|3,66756|3,66996|3,67236|3,67476|3) - 7 note anchor counting the release of the LN. Fixed.

01:19:476 (79476|3,79636|3,79796|3) - Triple jack, this is not to be found on the earlier sets of this pattern but that had 13 and 24 doubles instead. Would advice removing triplejack. Fixed, didnt notice the triple jack, sorry.

01:20:316 (80316|3,80436|2,80436|3,80556|2) - Both these jacks are on the same hand, that's not good, and it's unnecessary, make sure they are on separate hands. Oh yeah, I had them on seperate hands before, but i thought having jack and ln on the same hand would feel uncomfortable to play, fixed it though.
01:20:676 (80676|3) - I mean even this is on the right hand as well haha Ye, fixed it.

01:22:676 (82676|2,82836|2,82996|2) - oh welp another triple jack. Ah ye, didnt notice this one either, fixed it.
01:28:916 (88916|0,89076|0,89196|0) - This one is acceptable due to the new and sudden sound, the triple jack adds more intensity so you should keep this imo as it is justified.

01:33:724 (93724|2,93724|0) - Fairly strange to have this large sound with loud cymbal as only a double, you could release one or both LN 1/4 earlier, or not have the second LN and only use one LN to represent the fade-in of the synth. Fixed so one of them ends 1/4 earlier like you told me to.

01:58:057 (118057|3) - This LN ends only 1/8 before the next quad. This is the only time this happens in this section as every other jack (including after LN) is separated by 1/4 space, consider shortening this LN. Fixed.

02:05:724 (125724|2) - A small slowjam here wouldn't hurt, somewhere between 0.8x and 0.9x. It would fit the calm of the music and better represent the distinction of it's parallels. Applied a 0.9x slowjam.

02:24:390 (144390|2) - End this LN 1/4 earlier so that 02:26:390 (146390|3) - this can be a double, alternatively you could perhaps end all LN early and then place a quad or triple to represent that loud snare, I mean, 02:31:724 (151724|2,151724|1,151724|3,151724|0,152057|1,152057|2,152057|0,152057|3,152224|3,152224|2,152224|0,152224|1) - you do it here, so why not? Fixed it.

02:32:390 (152390|1) - Another slowjam here would be pleasant. Applied a 0.9x slowjam like on the last one.

02:38:724 (158724|1,158890|0,159057|0,159057|1) - Not entirely sure what I think of this. Oh, didnt notice, ty for pointing it out.

02:58:233 (178233|1,178233|2) - This does not need to be a double. Ye, changed it to a single.

03:00:590 (180590|2) - Slow but long jackhammers like this is a nightmare to a lot of mania players, and since the map is only 4*, it's focus definitely partly on medium-level players, I do not recommend having this here and instead having them change column each time. Yeah, i've thought about that part a bit, fixed it now.

03:11:840 (191840|1) - Kind of unnecessary note imo. Techically not a ghost note due to the vocal, but I mean it's borderline dumped. Removing this would be beneficial as it would better emphasize 03:11:947 (191947|0,192054|1,192162|0) - this trill and better showcase the rhythm of the song and the player would feel it more. Fixed it.

03:12:162 (192162|3,192162|2,192162|0,192269|2,192376|1,192376|0,192483|0) - Really don't understand this jack placement. Jacks would fit better for example here:
03:11:304 (191304|3,191412|2,191519|1,191626|0) - Fixed

03:12:697 (192697|3) - This note is here because? I mean yes the vocal melody is does go up and down but come on this has to be considered overboard. Yeah, I removed it.

03:15:269 (195269|2) - Once again, I just simply think this note is disruptive to the rhythm and damages the feel of the map and is unneeded. Fixed.

03:19:019 (199019|0,199019|2,199019|3,199126|3,199233|0,199233|1,199340|1) - Once again, not sure about jacks right here, I mean, 03:18:162 (198162|1,198269|2,198376|3,198483|0) - here both the instrumental and the vocal has hits on all these so jacks would fit better here I'll think about it, will probably fix later.

03:19:233 (199233|1,199340|1,199554|1,199769|1) - only IF you keep the previous jacks, this is harsh and the upper two notes should be fixed tbh. Fixed.

03:21:376 (201376|3,201483|3,201590|3) - Not sure about the triple jack, consider making the double in 1 and 2 instead. Fixed.

03:21:697 (201697|0,201804|1,201912|2,202019|3) - I just feel like mapping the small hi hats is a bit overmapping and you need to focus on the more important sounds, which is 03:21:804 (201804|1) - here Yeah, hard to hear the small hi-hats aswell, so I'll fix it.

03:22:126 (202126|0) - I mean same as before, I won't mention it again since I've stated it multiple times, you get it. Fixed it.

03:26:090 (206090|2,206090|3,206197|3,206304|2) - only IF you keep the jacks like this, the LN on same hand as the jack is unnecessary. 03:29:304 (209304|3,209304|2,209412|2,209519|3) - and here Fixed.

03:29:626 (209626|0,209733|2,209733|1,209840|0,209947|2) - overmapping? Oh yeah that part. I was mostly trying to follow the quiet hi-hats, but I'll fix it cause it looks strange and plays weird.

03:49:019 (229019|0,229126|1,229233|2,229340|3) - Everytime you hear the vocals go like this, fast, that's where you need jacks to me, that would be effective. Yeah, fixed double jacks there.

03:53:733 (233733|2,233840|2) - Why same column as the previous LN? Otherwise cool jack placement! That's where you should have em', on the vocal<3

03:56:947 (236947|1,237054|1,237162|3,237269|3,237376|0,237483|0) - ok aye i take it back you already know about the vocal thing, but yeah this is could, do it on the earlier section too maybe (but not exactly like this ofc) :thinking:

04:00:590 (240590|1,240697|1,240804|1) - Once again I'm not so sure about having these on the same column as the previous LN. Fixed.

04:08:078 (248078|1,248078|0) - How is this a double but the next is a triple? I hear 0 difference other than pitch. Atm im pretty confused on what you're trying to point out, so im going to look at this later and double check.
04:11:487 (251487|3,251487|0,251487|2,251487|1) - And now they're quads? Where is the consistency? ^

04:16:032 (256032|0,256260|0,256260|1,256487|1) - Look here, both the jack leading to the next chord and the first jack on that chord is on the same hand, make it different hands. Fixed.

04:31:714 (271714|3,271752|2,271790|1,271828|0,271866|3,271904|2,271942|1,271979|0,272017|3,272055|2,272093|0,272131|1,272169|2,272207|3,272245|0,272282|1,272320|2,272358|3,272396|0,272434|1,272472|3,272510|2,272548|0,272585|1,272623|3,272661|2,272699|1,272737|0,272775|3,272813|2,272851|1,272888|0,272926|3,272964|2,273002|1,273040|0,273078|3,273116|2,273154|0,273192|1,273229|3,273267|2,273305|0,273343|1,273381|2,273419|3,273457|0,273495|1,273532|2,273532|3) - I mean... This is just not accurate, pp map? Dump? I mean yes, when these rolls are jumptrilled the rhythm DOES match the rhythm of the song, BUT THEY SHOULD NOT BE ROLLS. the music goes in 1/8's here. That means there should be one set of notes every 1/8, but you placed a note every 1/16. Make it 1/8 jumptrills. Made 1/8 rolls instead since 1/8 jumptrills would be def more overmapped than it was before.

04:33:532 (273532|3,273532|2,273873|2,273873|3,274214|2,274214|0,274555|2,274555|1,274896|3,274896|1,274896|0,274896|2) - Why do all these chords share a common note (column 3)? I don't see a reason for it. Fixed.

04:50:919 (290919|1,291146|1,291373|1,291601|1,291828|1,292169|1,292396|1,292623|1,292851|1,293078|1) - I know you said 6 anchor or more, but this is almost worse. Two 5 note anchors on same finger twice in a row with just one note break in between (or two depending on how you look at it). I've tried fixing the anchors for a long time, and always when i try fixing them, more of them appears. But I'll try fixing it

04:53:078 (293078|3,293305|3,293532|3,293760|3,293987|3,294214|3) - 6 note anchor. Fixed.

04:53:419 (293419|1,293646|1,293873|1,294101|1,294328|1,294555|1) - 6 note anchor CHILLY STOP IT WITH THE ANCHORS Fixed aswell.

04:59:896 (299896|1,300123|1,300351|1,300578|1,300805|1,301032|1,301260|1) - 7 note anchor Fixed.

05:05:578 (305578|1) - Would recommend moving this note so it's not in the same column as the upcoming jackhammer.Fixed.
05:07:396 (307396|1) - and this Fixed.
05:09:214 (309214|2) - and this Fixed.
However the BPM is so slow that it doesn't really matter, it has good flow either way.

05:11:070 (311070|1) - Not sure if this note should be here. I can't really hear well enough with these ear buds but COULD be a ghost note, not sure. Yeah, same here. Cant really hear if its a ghost note or not. I'll remove it if it is but I will keep it for now.

05:14:214 (314214|0,314214|1,314214|3) - In this section, you map kicks as triples. This goes against the map's layering structure as kicks have always been doubles in your map. Fixed.

05:26:260 (326260|2,328078|1,328078|3) - You could perhaps gradually increase the sv so that the release is at 1.1-1.2x sv or smth to represent the fade-in ending, which isn't even at the 1(rhythm, not column) which makes it unexpected, slightly faster sv would be effectve. I'll add it later, thx for helping with the sv's! ( :

Alright that's it! If you found the mod useful don't forget to give kudosu, but feel free to reject if you don't agree with my suggestions. Once again, cool map,
good job you're already a nice mapper mang. Good luck with this map, ganbatte~~

Div wrote:

fuck i gave in (very professional IRC mod)

2017-10-16 09:14 Chilly-: can u try the
2017-10-16 09:14 Chilly-: svs
2017-10-16 09:15 Div: nO
2017-10-16 09:15 Chilly-: 01:33:724 -
2017-10-16 09:15 Chilly-: they start here
2017-10-16 09:15 Chilly-: yES
2017-10-16 09:15 Chilly-: T BH
2017-10-16 09:15 Div: can i just look at them
2017-10-16 09:15 Div: and not play them
2017-10-16 09:15 Chilly-: yes
2017-10-16 09:15 Div: link memememeeeeeemememe
2017-10-16 09:16 Chilly-: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1417338 TeddyLoid - ME!ME!ME! feat. daoko]
2017-10-16 09:16 Chilly-: :; )J)E(
2017-10-16 09:19 Chilly-: yes
2017-10-16 09:19 Div: they're ok
2017-10-16 09:19 Div: but
2017-10-16 09:19 Div: u know the sound that ur sving
2017-10-16 09:19 Div: in the kiai
2017-10-16 09:19 Div: ?
2017-10-16 09:20 Chilly-: ah ye
2017-10-16 09:20 Chilly-: that one
2017-10-16 09:20 Div: 01:14:196 -
2017-10-16 09:20 Div: 01:14:676 -
2017-10-16 09:20 Div: 01:16:116 -
2017-10-16 09:20 Div: 01:16:596 -
2017-10-16 09:20 Div: 01:18:036 -
2017-10-16 09:20 Div: 01:18:516 -
2017-10-16 09:20 Div: are u hearing this
2017-10-16 09:20 Chilly-: yes
2017-10-16 09:20 Div: yes
2017-10-16 09:21 Div: it makes it confusing to sightread
2017-10-16 09:21 Div: because only some of them are svs
2017-10-16 09:21 Chilly-: hmmm
2017-10-16 09:22 Chilly-: no idea how i would sv them though
2017-10-16 09:23 Div: yes
2017-10-16 09:23 Div: me either
2017-10-16 09:23 Div: also why are these all sv 01:33:724 -
2017-10-16 09:23 Div: from here
2017-10-16 09:23 Div: why not just slowjam
2017-10-16 09:24 Chilly-: ah yeah
2017-10-16 09:24 Div: then again
2017-10-16 09:24 Div: idk
2017-10-16 09:24 Chilly-: there
2017-10-16 09:24 Div: because thats one
2017-10-16 09:24 Div: long
2017-10-16 09:24 Div: fucking
2017-10-16 09:24 Div: slowjam
2017-10-16 09:24 Chilly-: shold b fixed
2017-10-16 09:24 Chilly-: yeah
2017-10-16 09:25 Chilly-: but the sv's should make it a bit less slowjam-ish
2017-10-16 09:25 Div: maybe
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: 04:29:214 (269214|1,269442|1,269669|1) -
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: what the fuck
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: is this
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: 04:27:169 (267169|1,267396|1,267623|1,267851|1) -
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: and this
2017-10-16 09:26 Chilly-: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Chilly-: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Chilly-: hgey
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: 04:30:123 (270123|2) -
2017-10-16 09:26 Chilly-: hey
2017-10-16 09:26 Chilly-: HEY
2017-10-16 09:26 Div: and this
2017-10-16 09:27 Chilly-: woops
2017-10-16 09:27 Div: i thought u knew
2017-10-16 09:27 Div: better
2017-10-16 09:27 Div: than this
2017-10-16 09:27 Div: smh
2017-10-16 09:27 Chilly-: its like
2017-10-16 09:27 Chilly-: they just
2017-10-16 09:27 Chilly-: blend in
2017-10-16 09:27 Chilly-: and i dont notice them
2017-10-16 09:27 Chilly-: until someone points them out
2017-10-16 09:27 Div: 04:42:623 (282623|0,282851|0,283078|0) -
2017-10-16 09:27 Div: like this one?
2017-10-16 09:28 Chilly-: that one is on purpose though
2017-10-16 09:28 Div: why not just move 04:42:851 (282851|0) - to 3
2017-10-16 09:29 Div: i think im missing the idea
2017-10-16 09:29 Chilly-: ah yes
2017-10-16 09:29 Div: 04:55:351 (295351|2,295351|3) - crasasasassh
2017-10-16 09:29 Chilly-: yes but
2017-10-16 09:29 Chilly-: in that part
2017-10-16 09:29 Chilly-: i ignored them
2017-10-16 09:29 Div: ok yes i see that now
2017-10-16 09:29 Chilly-: since it just made fucking
2017-10-16 09:30 Chilly-: a shit load of anchors
2017-10-16 09:30 Div: 05:04:442 (304442|2) -
2017-10-16 09:30 Div: this is weird
2017-10-16 09:30 Div: or maybe its just something i do
2017-10-16 09:30 Div: idK
2017-10-16 09:30 Div: i would have that on 2 tho
2017-10-16 09:31 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:31 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:31 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:31 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:31 Div: hey
2017-10-16 09:31 Div: 05:09:896 -
2017-10-16 09:31 Div: wtf
2017-10-16 09:31 Div: is this snapping
2017-10-16 09:33 Div: 05:23:532 (323532|2,323532|3,323532|0,323532|1) - vs 05:25:351 (325351|2,325351|0) -
2017-10-16 09:33 Div: same sound
2017-10-16 09:33 Chilly-: yeah ik
2017-10-16 09:33 Div: :thonk:
2017-10-16 09:33 Chilly-: its pretty awkward
2017-10-16 09:33 Chilly-: oh yeah
2017-10-16 09:33 Chilly-: i thought about that aswell
2017-10-16 09:33 Chilly-: you think i can make that a quad?
2017-10-16 09:33 Chilly-: or a triple
2017-10-16 09:33 Div: do u want my magix fix
2017-10-16 09:33 Chilly-: 05:25:123 (325123|3,325237|3) -
2017-10-16 09:33 Chilly-: cause of these
2017-10-16 09:33 Div: yes
2017-10-16 09:33 Chilly-: so that was intentional
2017-10-16 09:33 Div: yes
2017-10-16 09:34 Div: make it unintentional
2017-10-16 09:34 Div: and fiX it
2017-10-16 09:34 Div: make them doubles
2017-10-16 09:34 Div: 05:23:987 (323987|2,324214|2) - and remove these
2017-10-16 09:34 Div: because now they're just weird
2017-10-16 09:35 Div: 05:20:351 (320351|3,320578|1) - same thing here
2017-10-16 09:35 Div: 05:20:805 - this is a double for kick
2017-10-16 09:35 Div: which is fine
2017-10-16 09:35 Div: 05:20:351 - but these aren't kick
2017-10-16 09:35 Div: so why double
2017-10-16 09:35 Div: :thinking:
2017-10-16 09:36 Chilly-: hmnmm
2017-10-16 09:36 Chilly-: gonna check now
2017-10-16 09:37 Chilly-: its the
2017-10-16 09:37 Chilly-: background noise
2017-10-16 09:37 Chilly-: i get it that its pretty fuckin quiet but
2017-10-16 09:37 Chilly-: ye
2017-10-16 09:37 Chilly-: i added them to test and i didnt remove
2017-10-16 09:37 Div: ok yeah i hear it
2017-10-16 09:37 Div: but
2017-10-16 09:38 Div: same emphasis as kick
2017-10-16 09:38 Div: so
2017-10-16 09:38 Chilly-: i removed them though so dw
2017-10-16 09:38 Div: okok good
2017-10-16 09:38 Chilly-: and
2017-10-16 09:38 Chilly-: 05:25:351 -
2017-10-16 09:38 Chilly-: i make this into a triple?
2017-10-16 09:38 Div: ya
2017-10-16 09:38 Div: i would anyway
2017-10-16 09:38 Chilly-: so the triple jack is fine right?
2017-10-16 09:38 Div: yeah because its not a jump pattern
2017-10-16 09:38 Div: it's only not fine when it's uneven with the other jacks in the pattern
2017-10-16 09:39 Div: if it's by itself its ok
2017-10-16 09:39 Chilly-: ah yeah
2017-10-16 09:39 Div: 02:05:390 -
2017-10-16 09:40 Div: is there a sound here
2017-10-16 09:40 Div: or am i hearing things
2017-10-16 09:40 Chilly-: yeah
2017-10-16 09:40 Chilly-: a pretty quiet one
2017-10-16 09:40 Chilly-: it wouldt matter if you mapped it or not
2017-10-16 09:40 Chilly-: wouldnt*
2017-10-16 09:40 Div: ya
2017-10-16 09:40 Div: just felt weird watching it
2017-10-16 09:40 Div: idk
2017-10-16 09:41 Chilly-: maybe i should add a note there?
2017-10-16 09:41 Div: idk up to you
2017-10-16 09:41 Chilly-: oh yeah
2017-10-16 09:41 Chilly-: its like a snap sound
2017-10-16 09:41 Chilly-: i can hear it now
2017-10-16 09:41 Div: ye
2017-10-16 09:41 Chilly-: and it emphasizes on the transaction aswell
2017-10-16 09:41 Chilly-: cause of the vocal
2017-10-16 09:41 Chilly-: ye i'll add it
2017-10-16 09:41 Div: yeyeyeye
2017-10-16 09:41 Div: that's what i was thinking
2017-10-16 09:41 Chilly-: anything more that u found
2017-10-16 09:42 Div: that depends
2017-10-16 09:42 Div: do i get kds
2017-10-16 09:42 Div: : )
2017-10-16 09:42 Div: 00:11:316 -
2017-10-16 09:42 Chilly-: yes
2017-10-16 09:42 Chilly-: u can just make a reply saying "IRC MOD"
2017-10-16 09:42 Div: i will
2017-10-16 09:42 Chilly-: and i giv ekuDoSu
2017-10-16 09:42 Div: don't u worrY
2017-10-16 09:43 Div: single on 2 there btw ^^^^
2017-10-16 09:43 Chilly-: Y
2017-10-16 09:43 Chilly-: ah yes
2017-10-16 09:44 Div: 00:30:756 (30756|0) -
2017-10-16 09:44 Div: can this be on 2
2017-10-16 09:44 Div: or is it there for a reason
2017-10-16 09:44 Chilly-: hmm
2017-10-16 09:44 Chilly-: i mean
2017-10-16 09:44 Chilly-: it can but
2017-10-16 09:44 Chilly-: 00:30:036 (30036|1,30276|1,30516|1) -
2017-10-16 09:45 Chilly-: 00:30:516 (30516|0,30756|0,30996|0) -
2017-10-16 09:45 Chilly-: i think i made them like that on purpose
2017-10-16 09:45 Chilly-: after fixing anchors
2017-10-16 09:45 Chilly-: i think
2017-10-16 09:45 Div: ok
2017-10-16 09:45 Div: i mean its fine
2017-10-16 09:45 Div: it just bothered me
2017-10-16 09:45 Div: while i was playing through
2017-10-16 09:45 Div: the chart
2017-10-16 09:45 Div: : )
2017-10-16 09:45 Chilly-: ahh
2017-10-16 09:46 Div: 00:35:196 (35196|0,35316|0) - i thought u were avoiding these
2017-10-16 09:46 Div: in the last kiai
2017-10-16 09:46 Div: isn't that why u didn't map crashes
2017-10-16 09:46 Chilly-: yeah
2017-10-16 09:46 Chilly-: i was just thinking about that
2017-10-16 09:46 Div: then why is it hERe
2017-10-16 09:46 Div: minijacks REEEEE
2017-10-16 09:47 Chilly-: https://gyazo.com/190f229c2373018c008c2125c8b4a155
2017-10-16 09:47 Chilly-: friend modded and i just put it thre
2017-10-16 09:47 Chilly-: yes
2017-10-16 09:47 Div: ok leave it
2017-10-16 09:47 Chilly-: no i removed it, had it like that before
2017-10-16 09:47 Chilly-: and it doesnt make sense if i would keep it
2017-10-16 09:48 Chilly-: 00:35:196 (35196|0) -
2017-10-16 09:48 Div: 04:41:260 -
2017-10-16 09:48 Div: but i mean
2017-10-16 09:48 Div: why is this
2017-10-16 09:48 Chilly-: since then there would need to one here
2017-10-16 09:48 Div: a hand
2017-10-16 09:48 Div: if not for crash
2017-10-16 09:48 Div: i mean the one before it
2017-10-16 09:48 Div: lag
2017-10-16 09:49 Chilly-: ye
2017-10-16 09:49 Chilly-: i used triples when crash
2017-10-16 09:49 Chilly-: on that part
2017-10-16 09:49 Div: then why not
2017-10-16 09:49 Div: 05:02:623 -
2017-10-16 09:49 Div: just add one to 4
2017-10-16 09:49 Div: and the move 05:02:737 (302737|3) - to 3
2017-10-16 09:49 Div: and etc
2017-10-16 09:49 Div: for the rest
2017-10-16 09:49 Div: and then u can keep ur minijacks
2017-10-16 09:49 Chilly-: alright so basically
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: 00:35:196 (35196|0) - to 00:35:196 (35196|0) - here i think
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: is just normal handstream emphasizing the crash
2017-10-16 09:50 Div: what are you trying to paste XD
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: its the
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: stream part
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: and then
2017-10-16 09:50 Div: clear your selection before u paste timestamp :thonk:
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: oh
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: wait
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: did i just
2017-10-16 09:50 Div: yes
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: ow
2017-10-16 09:50 Div: u did
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: owH
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: OO H H
2017-10-16 09:50 Chilly-: FUCK
2017-10-16 09:51 Chilly-: 04:35:351 - to 04:49:896 - here emphasizes the crash
2017-10-16 09:51 Chilly-: and then after that the trills comes
2017-10-16 09:51 Chilly-: and i cant be fuCKED
2017-10-16 09:51 Div: well yeha
2017-10-16 09:51 Div: i understand that
2017-10-16 09:51 Div: im just implying
2017-10-16 09:52 Chilly-: to do jumptrills with a hand on the end
2017-10-16 09:52 Div: that
2017-10-16 09:52 Div: ur a
2017-10-16 09:52 Div: retORD
2017-10-16 09:52 Chilly-: ( :
2017-10-16 09:52 Div: : (
2017-10-16 09:53 Div: i have one more question
2017-10-16 09:53 Div: before i say thanks for kds
2017-10-16 09:53 Chilly-: yes
2017-10-16 09:53 Div: 00:20:436 -
2017-10-16 09:53 Div: why the fuCK
2017-10-16 09:53 Div: is this a kiai
2017-10-16 09:53 Chilly-: owh
2017-10-16 09:53 Chilly-: well
2017-10-16 09:53 Chilly-: hm
2017-10-16 09:53 Chilly-: yes
2017-10-16 09:53 Chilly-: i wonder
2017-10-16 09:53 Chilly-: myself
2017-10-16 09:53 Div: 03:52:667 - also this
2017-10-16 09:53 Chilly-: LOL
2017-10-16 09:54 Chilly-: thonk
2017-10-16 09:54 Chilly-: oh
2017-10-16 09:54 Chilly-: did i ignore that sound
2017-10-16 09:54 Chilly-: wtf
2017-10-16 09:54 Div: no
2017-10-16 09:54 Div: kiai
2017-10-16 09:54 Div: why is it
2017-10-16 09:54 Div: kiaiIIIIAIAIAI
2017-10-16 09:54 Chilly-: wait
2017-10-16 09:54 Chilly-: oh
2017-10-16 09:54 Div: well and u ignored the sound
2017-10-16 09:54 Div: but that was just a random timestamp
2017-10-16 09:54 Div: : )
2017-10-16 09:55 Chilly-: wait so i shuold have a kiai there
2017-10-16 09:55 Chilly-: but how the f UCK
2017-10-16 09:55 Chilly-: did it manage to get one there
2017-10-16 09:55 Chilly-: oh wait
2017-10-16 09:55 Chilly-: nvm
2017-10-16 09:55 Div: what
2017-10-16 09:55 Div: i mean
2017-10-16 09:55 Chilly-: so
2017-10-16 09:55 Div: it shouldn't be
2017-10-16 09:55 Div: kiaiaiia
2017-10-16 09:55 Div: its like a solo
2017-10-16 09:55 Div: not a chorus
2017-10-16 09:55 Chilly-: ah ye
2017-10-16 09:55 Chilly-: i'll remove it bb
2017-10-16 09:55 Div: idk maybe that's preference???
2017-10-16 09:55 Div: im not a bn : )
2017-10-16 09:56 Div: so
2017-10-16 09:56 Div: idk
2017-10-16 09:56 Div: : )
2017-10-16 09:56 Div: ( :
2017-10-16 09:56 Chilly-: ( :
2017-10-16 09:56 Chilly-: : )
2017-10-16 09:56 Chilly-: alright very good mod thz
2017-10-16 09:56 Chilly-: xh T
2017-10-16 09:56 Chilly-: th
2017-10-16 09:56 Chilly-: Xt hx
2017-10-16 09:56 Chilly-: t Th
2017-10-16 09:56 Chilly-: thx
2017-10-16 09:56 Chilly-: *

sex

MrAntagonizer wrote:

Hello! NM mod req from my queue.
Feel free to reject any of my mods!
|1|2|3|4|

Patchwork Memories

00:40:116 - Missing a note here?
03:43:447 - Maybe using a trill pattern here could accent the transition into this wub section better than a jack? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9648274 as an example
04:09:896 (249896|1) - 04:13:532 (253532|2) - Intentional lack of shielding at these points? This same sound shields at the other points in this section
04:24:896 (264896|3,264896|2,265010|2,265010|3) - Why does this jack when the same sound was treated like this earlier in the section? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9648347
04:26:828 (266828|1,266828|0,266942|2) - This chord here might be better suited as a single while the single is a chord, since the single carries the stronger sound atm
04:42:964 - I hear a sound here, maybe place a single in column 2?

I couldn't find many things to mod in this map and it feels very solid to me. Best of luck with ranking!

MrAntagonizer wrote:

Oh and also, because it won't let me edit my post.

bad joke

error_exe777 wrote:

i am literally in love with this song i swear to the lord its so beautiful

General

Difficulties: marathon
Spread: not needed
Hitsounds: not done
Metadata: good
AiMod: nothing
Other: nothing

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[Patchwork Memories]

00:11:796 (11796|0,11796|3,11796|1,11916|1,12036|3,12036|2,12036|0,12156|2) - i understand what you tried to do but tbh having singles representing literally the same sound is v silly imo and honestly making them all triples makes everything neater and more consistent. if you do that, make these all doubles consequently 00:12:276 (12276|1,12276|0,12396|0,12516|3,12516|2,12636|3) - fixed

00:19:476 (19476|3,19476|1,19476|0,19476|2) - i think this is suited better as a triple since 00:19:956 (19956|1,19956|2,19956|0,19956|3) - is a stronger sound fixed

00:19:956 (19956|1,19956|2,19956|0,19956|3) - i think you should add an LN or two to show that the sound continues beyond that point maybe i'll add this, gonna think about it

00:34:956 (34956|0,34956|1,35076|2,35076|3) - a CTRL+H would be cool fixed

00:59:106 (59106|0) - this should be on 1/4 to be consistent with the rest of the chart oh yes that was accidental, whoops

01:13:356 (73356|1,73476|2,73596|1,73716|2,73836|1) - unnecessary trill tbh Didnt notice this one either, fixed it ><

01:20:916 (80916|1,80916|3,80916|2,80916|0) - this should be a triple like the rest of the section fixed

01:29:076 (89076|1,89076|0,89196|0,89196|1,89316|3,89316|2,89436|3,89436|2) - making these 1/8th LNs would be cool yeah sounds like a good idea, might add it later though

01:33:724 (93724|1,93724|3,93724|0,93724|2,94390|2,94390|3,94390|0,94390|1) - these are different sounds so making 01:33:724 (93724|2,93724|0,93724|1,93724|3) - this a triple would suit better ok yes i fixed

01:36:390 (96390|3,96390|2,96390|1) - this should be a double, delete one note Tested it out, didnt really like it. Sorry but i will deny this for now :C

01:37:724 (97724|0,97724|3,97724|1) - ^^ ^

01:39:057 (99057|1,99057|0,99057|2,99057|3) - ^^ same but delete two here ^

01:41:724 (101724|1,101724|0,101724|2) - ^^ etc etc wont mention further ^


03:09:054 (189054|2,189054|3,189269|2,189269|3,189376|1,189376|0) - would like a CTRL+H here tbh fixed
03:10:876 (190876|2,190876|1) - there are some extra sounds behind all of these in this section and would be cool if they were mapped im gonna think about adding this, sounds like a good idea but im gonna think about it.

05:07:623 (307623|0,307623|1,307737|0,307737|1,307851|0,307851|1,307964|0,307964|1,308078|2,308078|1,308078|0) - 05:08:532 (308532|1,308532|0,308646|1,308646|0,308760|0,308760|1,308873|1,308873|0,308987|0,308987|1) - there are two stacks here in the same columns which is r e a l l y m e a n please move one oh yes i thought about the double stack but i was too lazy to change it. Anyways, changed it now cus u pointed it out Cx

smh good map

good luck