Enkrypton wrote:

from my mod queue
im a big fan of ur maps owo, its a pleasure modding for you

General

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9077378 - it would be cool if the white line in the BG is like 100% centered with the play field, its like a few pixels off right now. Nothing big just a suggestion lol yeah could be but really nitpicky and lazy to fix, since it's not really visible in game

Melancholy

00:06:799 (3,5) - stack the slider ends like you did here: 00:04:157 (2,4) its pretty much the same design i dont see why to have it unstacked that would've been unrankable you can't full overlap a reverse slider
00:13:328 (3,2) - try to avoid this overlap, it looks kinda random compared to the other overlaps, i think it can be easily avoided too overlap is fine here and perfectly readable
00:16:981 (4,5) - this is mapped to the same sound as 00:12:007 (4,5) - i dont think its necessary to change the DS.
00:20:400 (4,5) - although the sound is different it think its still good to have some consistency in the DS for these white -> blue double circles; at least for the intro part. check mod above
00:29:338 (4,1) - place the circle more in the "center" of the slider (so move the slider left a tiny bit), better aesthetics and quite easy to do with the current design
00:31:670 (3,4,5) - bring circle 3 to the right a little to form a triangle shape with the 2 slider heads, current triangle shape looks a little random
00:36:333 (2,3) - this looks inconsistent with the other blankets. it's not supposed to be a blanket
00:45:970 (1,3) - this overlapping looks kinda random. idk i don't want to space it too much
01:00:271 (8,9) - if this was a blanket, it is a little off, move slider 9 to the right a tiny bit
01:01:359 (3) - if u took the mod above, it would be good structuring to have the slider end of the highlighted slider to stack on with the slider head of 01:00:582 (9)
01:22:343 (8,9,10) - this feels really awkward due to the DS change
01:26:851 (1) - i can feel the choke already
01:45:193 (7,1) - i would try to make the straight part of these 2 sliders parallel for better looks
01:57:007 (5) - suggestion here: i think it would look better if it was flipped horizontally, it creates a nice mirror design with 01:56:696 (4) yeah but i prefer like htat
02:41:618 (1) - this is actually really cool
03:30:115 (1,2) - the overlapping between the slider ends here look quite small compared to the overlaps here: 03:30:737 (2,3,4)
03:41:929 (8,9,10,11) - placement looks a little random, center circle 11 between the 3 circles maybe?
03:50:867 (4) - move to the right a tiny bit, this looks kinda shifted
04:40:064 (4) - would be cool if the the slider head was like in the center of the triangle thats formed by 04:39:598 (1,2,3). 04:40:841 (7) - would probably have to be moved too to preserve that overlap overlap is fine here
05:02:136 (1) - nice added piano sound lol

I'm still a novice so pls don't roast if my mods are completely wrong lol. This was still very fun to mod tho.

Akitoshi wrote:

not ilya bg smhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

sleepy mod
Ultimate Wonder Melancholy

1. 00:06:799 (3) - brO clap on the head is really unnecessary as there's no drum hit in music :weary:
2. 00:37:577 (6) - might consider to trim this to 1/2 slider to unify with 00:36:333 (2,3) - i liek variety lo
3. 00:51:100 (2,3,4,5) - fix this linear structure lolz it's off
4. 01:27:784 (2) - try to stack this on 01:26:851 (1) - tail for better emphasis on 01:27:939 (1) -
5. 02:09:286 (1,2,3,4) - uhHhH why their distance is different while the drum beat is all the same? hm 02:09:908 (3) - this has more volume xd
6. 02:51:722 (2,3) - they can aesthetically better like this aaa
7. 03:24:520 (1,3,4,5,6,1) - structure might looks kinda messi there, i know ur not blanket mapper but if ur interested for som sick pattern from being way too nitpicky http://puu.sh/xyTt0/7b24e3b3ca.jpg aaa looks too clean this to me, i prefer my messi pattern xd
8. 03:49:623 (5) - clap is too loud, Drum sample is way better here
9. 04:02:447 (1) - this reminds me of some adult toys
10. 04:19:856 - no hitsounds on whole kiai section haha woah dude
11. 04:55:763 (1) - idk ctrl + g flows better tbh

DavidEd wrote:

blankets dude wtf dude cmon man wtf like i blanketed better on my first map ever dude like cmon man wtf? fk u man

00:00:582 - because youre pretty much following the vocals throughout the intro. feels weird to have the introductory lyrics left out. music starts 00:01:204 (1) - here my man
00:05:556 (6,7) - 1/2 slider? nah prefer circles
00:23:898 (2,3) - preferably if you could move these out a bit or overlap with previous slider because they are like a pixel in between each other.
00:28:250 (10,1) - should probably space (1) out because you have been good with emphasizing loud beats until this. same for 00:50:944 (1) -
01:23:198 - there's a vocal beat here so... up to you if you want to add that note nah i don't want 1/4 here
02:12:084 (1,2,1,2,1) - nc is weird. the sr changes are very slim so you wont need to nc those as it's still readable. 12121212
02:20:789 (2,3) - that overlap hurts my soul. please man. help a brother out this overlap is cool
02:21:722 (5,6) - oh youre killing me good
02:41:618 (1) - will probably make people break as previously, you've used a slow slider for the same sound. nah got testplays and no one borke on this
02:51:722 (2,3) - increase distance cause of the one pixel distance
03:42:395 (11) - x316 y144?
03:43:483 (2) - x103 y271?

last chorus isnt hitsounded baka bean sprout

Realazy wrote:

sick

lots of unsnapped things in aimod

00:15:426 (2) - move to 295 261 before i gouge my eyes out plz
00:18:613 - raise hs volume? whistles are a bit too quiet for these imo
00:27:628 (7) - this looks pretty out of place considering the rest of the combo, consider changing it to a curved slider?
00:31:048 (1,2) - i don't rly get the 1/1 here, unlike 00:21:411 - 00:22:343 - etc where there are actual pauses, here there's still constant 1/2 in the back and i think 3 stacked 1/2 notes would fit that greatly, but it's up to you 1/1 is fine here i wanna have 2 circles here for the clap emphasis
00:57:473 (2) - consider changing this to a circle i think the 1/1 gap would fit more because the only sounds here are very quiet compared to the other 3/4 sliders in that section nah wanna follow violin by holding them
00:59:960 (7,8,9) - would be cool if you could ctrl+g those or something so the vocals are on the 2 symmetrical sliders, would be a nice touch imo (also applies for all choruses) i like current pattern though
01:05:090 (7) - maybe remove the repeat to map the vocal on 01:05:400 - with something clickable, same for 02:49:545 (7) -
01:30:115 (6) - hey uhhhh higher spacing for the drum sound here? just like 01:32:602 (6) -
01:40:064 (6) - same want to have ds here
03:08:665 (1,2) - spacing is so low here compared to the other sliders rip
04:36:488 (3) - why is this slider not patterned with the other 3/4 sliders like usual?

yea i got bored

Asuka_- wrote:

nm
im not good at enlglsh, modding.

ai mod lol
00:15:038 (6,4,2) - stack? intentional?? yes
00:15:349 (1,2,3) - ulgy stacking xd. fix ds.
00:42:706 (7) - ctrl+g btter imo..... when i play, i felt 00:42:395 (6,7) - are too close. xd i like this current pattern
00:45:038 (7,8) - rhythm ctrl+g? because 00:44:260 (3,4,5) - 00:44:882 (6,7,8) - are identical to me. i think it will be more fun if you unify rhythm pattrn of them.
00:59:183 (4,6) - blanket is off
01:03:691 - 02:48:147 - clickable pls.... because almost all of the sliders' tails which you mapped in kiaitime dont have big vocal...
i'd like to change it to like 01:04:001 (3,4) - or 01:05:867 (1,2) - or 04:22:343 (1,2) - .... xD vocals are not so intense so releasing the finger is enough tbh
01:19:856 (7,5) - you can stack intentionnal
04:18:302 (1,2,3,1) - It is good to gradually increase the distance https://i.gyazo.com/c0d716c11eac588e236 ... 422398.png
04:37:499 - 04:37:810 - 5%?

not quick mod lol, nice map. good luck!!

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

m4m from queue
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/641711

Melancholy

1. 00:02:758 (5,6) - I don't really see why you used bigger spacing in this part than the objects before
2. 00:05:711 (7) - Same as above
3. 00:18:302 (3,4) - There's no sound on 4 (when you turn hitsounds off), I think it would work better if you used a slider from 00:18:302 - to 00:18:535 -
4. 00:22:343 (5) - There's no strong sound there without hitsounds so I don't see why you made it with bigger spacing
5. 00:25:453 (8) - I don't think this should be stacked since it's a fairly strong sound that you might wanna make a spacing change for. You could also put two circles instead of the slider for more pp because it fits better. that stack is intentionnal
6. 00:27:162 (5) - Not a strong sound, also make the slider end clickable cause there's a fairly strong sound there i like current emphasis here tbh
7. 00:27:939 (8,9,10) - Could use little bit less spacing to make a bigger difference with the slider after the jumps
8. 00:29:649 (1) - Space this more cause strong sound
9. 00:30:349 - Put a circle here, drums don't really want to spam 1/4 here
10. 00:30:426 (3,4) - Maybe make these two sliders into jumps to make bigger contrast with the next part which is relatively calm and low density, also the drums on the both sliders allow you to do that well i prefer getting emphasis on vocals here
11. 00:31:048 (1,2,3) - The 3 should have bigger spacing
12. 00:32:913 (7,8) - Ctrl+G for vocals also make the spacing bigger at 00:32:913 - because drums
13. 00:34:001 (3) - Make slider end clickable cause drums
14. 00:38:198 (3) - I don't get why you made the spacing bigger here but on 00:37:887 (1,2) - the jumps should be bigger than on 3 because drums
15. 00:46:592 (3) - It would fit more if you put circles instead of a slider
16. 00:47:836 (3,4) - 4 should be 1/4 beat bigger imo, it fits better
17. 00:54:286 (4,5) - Delete 4, there's no sound
18. 01:07:732 (4,5,6,7) - These beats aren't even that strong without the hitsounds so I think that you should make 2 1/2 sliders instead
19. 01:23:198 - Since you followed the vocals at 01:22:343 (8,9,10) - put a circle on 01:23:198 -
20. 01:32:602 (6) - Why the big spacing again? clap
21. 01:48:147 (1) - Space this out more
22. 02:26:851 (7) - Make slider end clickable
23. 02:32:913 (1) - Space this more cause stronger sound than the previous two objects
24. 02:36:489 (6) - Make the slider end clickable wanna get again the emphasis on vocals tbh
25. 03:29:494 (3,4,5) - I recommend you use different kind of rhythm, for example you could replace 3 and 4 with 1/2 sliders because some players might think it's 1/1 or 1
26. 03:36:644 (2) - I dunno why you ignored the drums here, it would be cool if you made it like [url]this[/url] because the drums get more quiet wanna keep emphasis on piano instead of clap tbh
27. 04:16:437 (1) - In all parts you were mapping the vocals but at this part you just map instrumental variation tbh
28. 05:00:737 (1) - Would be cool if you put a 1/4 slider here just like in this part 02:41:618 (1) - nah prefer 1 circle tbh

That's it, nice map thx