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im a big fan of ur maps owo, its a pleasure modding for you
General
Melancholy
I'm still a novice so pls don't roast if my mods are completely wrong lol. This was still very fun to mod tho.
im a big fan of ur maps owo, its a pleasure modding for you
General
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9077378 - it would be cool if the white line in the BG is like 100% centered with the play field, its like a few pixels off right now. Nothing big just a suggestion lol
Melancholy
00:06:799 (3,5) - stack the slider ends like you did here: 00:04:157 (2,4) its pretty much the same design i dont see why to have it unstacked
00:13:328 (3,2) - try to avoid this overlap, it looks kinda random compared to the other overlaps, i think it can be easily avoided too
00:16:981 (4,5) - this is mapped to the same sound as 00:12:007 (4,5) - i dont think its necessary to change the DS.
00:20:400 (4,5) - although the sound is different it think its still good to have some consistency in the DS for these white -> blue double circles; at least for the intro part. check mod above
00:29:338 (4,1) - place the circle more in the "center" of the slider (so move the slider left a tiny bit), better aesthetics and quite easy to do with the current design
00:31:670 (3,4,5) - bring circle 3 to the right a little to form a triangle shape with the 2 slider heads, current triangle shape looks a little random
00:36:333 (2,3) - this looks inconsistent with the other blankets.
00:45:970 (1,3) - this overlapping looks kinda random.
01:00:271 (8,9) - if this was a blanket, it is a little off, move slider 9 to the right a tiny bit
01:01:359 (3) - if u took the mod above, it would be good structuring to have the slider end of the highlighted slider to stack on with the slider head of 01:00:582 (9)
01:22:343 (8,9,10) - this feels really awkward due to the DS change
01:26:851 (1) - i can feel the choke already
01:45:193 (7,1) - i would try to make the straight part of these 2 sliders parallel for better looks
01:57:007 (5) - suggestion here: i think it would look better if it was flipped horizontally, it creates a nice mirror design with 01:56:696 (4)
02:41:618 (1) - this is actually really cool
03:30:115 (1,2) - the overlapping between the slider ends here look quite small compared to the overlaps here: 03:30:737 (2,3,4)
03:41:929 (8,9,10,11) - placement looks a little random, center circle 11 between the 3 circles maybe?
03:50:867 (4) - move to the right a tiny bit, this looks kinda shifted
04:40:064 (4) - would be cool if the the slider head was like in the center of the triangle thats formed by 04:39:598 (1,2,3). 04:40:841 (7) - would probably have to be moved too to preserve that overlap
05:02:136 (1) - nice added piano sound lol
00:13:328 (3,2) - try to avoid this overlap, it looks kinda random compared to the other overlaps, i think it can be easily avoided too
00:16:981 (4,5) - this is mapped to the same sound as 00:12:007 (4,5) - i dont think its necessary to change the DS.
00:20:400 (4,5) - although the sound is different it think its still good to have some consistency in the DS for these white -> blue double circles; at least for the intro part. check mod above
00:29:338 (4,1) - place the circle more in the "center" of the slider (so move the slider left a tiny bit), better aesthetics and quite easy to do with the current design
00:31:670 (3,4,5) - bring circle 3 to the right a little to form a triangle shape with the 2 slider heads, current triangle shape looks a little random
00:36:333 (2,3) - this looks inconsistent with the other blankets.
00:45:970 (1,3) - this overlapping looks kinda random.
01:00:271 (8,9) - if this was a blanket, it is a little off, move slider 9 to the right a tiny bit
01:01:359 (3) - if u took the mod above, it would be good structuring to have the slider end of the highlighted slider to stack on with the slider head of 01:00:582 (9)
01:22:343 (8,9,10) - this feels really awkward due to the DS change
01:26:851 (1) - i can feel the choke already
01:45:193 (7,1) - i would try to make the straight part of these 2 sliders parallel for better looks
01:57:007 (5) - suggestion here: i think it would look better if it was flipped horizontally, it creates a nice mirror design with 01:56:696 (4)
02:41:618 (1) - this is actually really cool
03:30:115 (1,2) - the overlapping between the slider ends here look quite small compared to the overlaps here: 03:30:737 (2,3,4)
03:41:929 (8,9,10,11) - placement looks a little random, center circle 11 between the 3 circles maybe?
03:50:867 (4) - move to the right a tiny bit, this looks kinda shifted
04:40:064 (4) - would be cool if the the slider head was like in the center of the triangle thats formed by 04:39:598 (1,2,3). 04:40:841 (7) - would probably have to be moved too to preserve that overlap
05:02:136 (1) - nice added piano sound lol
I'm still a novice so pls don't roast if my mods are completely wrong lol. This was still very fun to mod tho.