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Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size)

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f-INVERSE
41 posts
Joined June 2011
f-INVERSE
[C3]
Your hitsounds are silly. Especially after 00:25:422, it becomes really confusing. Please use those hitsounds from 00:14567 to that part. It sounds more better.
01:16:993 - Please move this slider a bit further away. Do not stack with the last slider.

[Cube]
Ditto for the hitsounds.
Please use stack leniency of 4. You can change this through the Advanced settings in the Song Setup.
No problem with this, seems legit. I don't mod combos btw.

[Curious](what is with all the weird names!?)
-shivers- (remembers scary repeat sliders from StrangeProgram)
Ditto for the hitsounds, stack leniency 4. Don't clump notes together. Very annoying. Please spread them out.

[Cursed]
My eyes hurt from the stacking. set stacking leniency to level 4. ditto hitsounds.
00:05:146 - don't put this circle here ; it gets confusing.
Please remap this. Don't put hitcircles at the same spot. VERY ANNOYING. Especially for those playing Hidden.
KayeSara
KayeSara
OK 还债，做的累死了，渣电脑还不能带动taiko（经常玩到中间就卡，要不就restart）
名字的话你自己取吧。
Edit：BG的话现在还拿不出来，等有好看的图再说吧。

Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Easy].osu
Sync
osu! Alumni
1,575 posts
Joined April 2011
Sync
General:
I have no idea why your offset is what it is; change it to 224. You'll have to reset your inhereting time sections, so go to the timing set up panel and highlight all of the inhereting sections before your second timing section and then Move by -24. Remember to resnap all of your notes etc

00:13:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Remember to move this to the white tick.
00:33:448 (5) - Straighten this slider out and move it over to the right by one.

This is a really fun map

Taiko:
Can't mod taiko that well, sorry. :( Looks fine, though

Curious:
00:06:299 (1) - Why not combo spam here and add a combo to 00:06:299 (6)?
00:17:726 (1) - Remove combo
00:18:688 (1) - Add combo
00:29:437 (5) - I think a triplet streamer would feel better here
00:39:705 (4) - ^
00:47:726 (1) - New combo
00:48:207 (1) - Remove combo
01:02:806 (4) - Maybe we can keep a few of these
01:23:341 (4) - I only said a few :lol:

Cube:
Woah, lots of stacking. Maybe you should get a second opinion, but I think you have way too many stacked notes for a difficulty like this.

Other than that, looks fine.

C3:
Nice easy difficulty.

Good luck, I hope I've helped you
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo
MOD前先一拜>3<

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. Tags里加上黄初音kayesara？
  2. 在前三个难度Resnap all notes?
[C3]
  1. 00:11:643 (3) - 这里的break完全没必要吧？(后记，看你后面的diff都加了break，要不只去掉HD不高的C3和Cube？真心觉得这break多余。。。>_>)
[Cube]
  1. ..没有吐槽点=A=
[Curious]
  1. 00:46:122 (4) - 我建议把这个和5，6独立出来？更好读而且和歌词比较配的说=。=
  2. 00:51:416 (5) - 把这个叠在后面的1上？
  3. 01:26:710 (5,6) - 。。。诶哆。。。略坑爹。。。
[Cursed]
  1. 00:05:567 (4) - 这形状。。直接光滑的弧形不是更好嘛。。>_>
  2. 00:23:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - (赞)好美=A=
连nazi都不会了我=A= 找KPYnazi吧液\:D/
滚走前再拜一下>3<
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
我是打酱油的.

C3:
例行吐槽:
开头间距未免也太近了 既然BPM低 考虑拉开点放?
00:11:643 (3) - 这后面BREAKTIME完全无用 弄掉吧
HITSOUND无力吐槽 你愿意这么用就用吧
01:16:924 (3) - spacing？
这节奏密度 真的可以当4星了

Cube:
开头间距同
breaktime同
HITSOUND同
果然么 normal286combo easy254，节奏密度未免也太一样了

Curious:
相同的不再提了
00:19:170 (5) - 这SLIDER真心没必要 变成一个NOTE就好得多
后面所有这样的SLIDER都是相同意见

Cursed:
串下的也太满了 不过你一向这样 那没啥槽点了



To Bakajo: 那个串美个头啊 = =


EDIT:关于他们说的重叠问题 我倒是没什么感觉 尤其说HD压力大的 我觉得毫无压力
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Requested Taiko Mod:

There isn't anything wrong with the note placement as far as I can see, it's a easy to follow the beat, and even though the BPM gets high it's still easy and enjoyable.

Timing Points:

Change the hits to Normal instead of Soft.
00:57:833 - This timing point is at 100% while the others are at 80%, change it to 80%.

Settings:

HP Drain: 7
Overall Difficulty: 6
KayeSara
KayeSara
OK Fix all
wcx大神可别改我的circle颜色啊，那是方便别人改图我才那样设置的

Download: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Taiko].osu
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
[Cursed]:
  1. shorter space for streams are general used, but seems too short lol, maybe only for me
  2. 01:21:416 (2,3,4) - cuz of the stacking, 2 is almost on the border of 1, it's fine though
[Curious]:
  1. hmm, slider velocity is a bit low for a Hard, it makes sliders like 01:23:341 (4) a bit awkward for playing
  2. 00:39:705 (4) - the slider-tail is covered by the hit burst of 00:38:742 (1), makes it look more like a single note
[Taiko]:
  1. cancel the C2 setting on all sections
that's all, and star for u
wcx19911123
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Topic Starter
wcx19911123
Colin Hou

Colin Hou wrote:

[Cursed]:
  1. shorter space for streams are general used, but seems too short lol, maybe only for me
    umm.. maybe just you 0.0
  2. 01:21:416 (2,3,4) - cuz of the stacking, 2 is almost on the border of 1, it's fine though
    thanks to point out this , yeah fixed
[Curious]:
  1. hmm, slider velocity is a bit low for a Hard, it makes sliders like 01:23:341 (4) a bit awkward for playing
    seems fine to me 0.0
  2. 00:39:705 (4) - the slider-tail is covered by the hit burst of 00:38:742 (1), makes it look more like a single note
    I used the same sliders at the same rhyme before here.. I think it is easy to know this is a slider even the tail is kinda hidden by something. and though even you read it as a single circle , it is fine to play and won't miss a combo here cuz the slider is short enough. so I think it is fine , just keep it for now 0.0
[Taiko]:
  1. cancel the C2 setting on all sections
    fixed
that's all, and star for u
thanks for modding
updated
thanks you all
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
Hi~ :3 howaaa love this beatmap!! >w<

Just some suggestion....

Cube
00:34:250 (6) NC?

Curious
00:06:327 (6) NC?
00:17:726 (1) del NC?
00:18:688 (2) NC?
01:23:501 (1) del NC?
01:24:143 (2) NC?

Oh very good beatmap....I can't find anything again... Just star~ ^w^/ *hope can fast ranked*
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
Ok, here we go!!

Overall:
- Maybe use other BG? This BG looks a bit pale.
- The MV makes me nosebleed!!
- I don't understand why you send this for mod, it's very rankable!!

C3: Nice and slow, Flawless!! :D


Cube: Very good rhythmic notes, perhaps I got distracted by the MV until I can't see any mistake!


Curious: I hope I can do Hard diff this good!


Cursed: Some streams are not very rhythmically correct, in fact, it looks very overmapped. But I don't know why I still love the song!
YTYuyu
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4,147 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Yo modding this song because of ur Request :)

C3:
00:52:699(1) - Make this repeat once. beginners won't know when this will end and replace the 2nd and 3rd repeat for circles.

Cube:
00:28:795(5) - can u put it down a bit. it looks like it's touching the Draining bar.

Curious:
No problems here.

Cursed:
No problems here

This is the best i can do. eveything is fine and this has potential for a rank. GL :D
Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
General:
Personally I'm not a fan of slider tick hitsounds (yeah you heard me say this already so I'll just end it there)

I think your snare hitsound loses it's meaning since you just kept using it throughout the music. It basically just feels like another hitnormal. Perhaps only the beginning (halved bpm) kiai and ending only?

C3:
00:25:426 (2,3) - This is probably like your only stack in this diff (I think) Perhaps you should just space this one?

Cubed:
00:44:357 (1,2,3) - I think you should replace this with a repeating slider. 187 bpm 1/2 would be rather fast for beginners to click.
00:56:549 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:100 (5,1) - I think swapping NC would be way better since 5 is where she sings a new verse.
01:13:234 (5,1) - ^

Curious:
Seems alright

Cursed:
00:13:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Honestly I really don't think you need this stream. You don't even hear a drum roll in the music. It's just 3 sound in the music.
01:02:806 (1,3) - Swap NC. It seems a lot better as it NCs on downbeat and new verse. Although tbh I don't know when you're NCing anymore..
wcx19911123
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Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
thanks for modding
but didn't change anything..
Raging Bull
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Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
It would be nice to explain why instead of a "no change"
wcx19911123
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Topic Starter
wcx19911123

Raging Bull wrote:

It would be nice to explain why instead of a "no change"
I just think no one would recheck the map cuz they are not MATs or BATs
if you need a post back to improve your modding skills , ok here it is :
Raging Bull

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Personally I'm not a fan of slider tick hitsounds (yeah you heard me say this already so I'll just end it there)
the slidertick hitsounds fit the song well , I do know someone hate this.. but it seems fine to me

I think your snare hitsound loses it's meaning since you just kept using it throughout the music. It basically just feels like another hitnormal. Perhaps only the beginning (halved bpm) kiai and ending only?
I just think it is another kind of hitsound style

C3:
00:25:426 (2,3) - This is probably like your only stack in this diff (I think) Perhaps you should just space this one?
it is fine , and I don't know why you didn't point out 00:27:993 (2,3) and 00:35:694 (2,3)

Cubed:
00:44:357 (1,2,3) - I think you should replace this with a repeating slider. 187 bpm 1/2 would be rather fast for beginners to click.
00:56:549 (1,2,3) - ^
this just a little challenge , it is not too hard to play cuz they are stack notes not a stream
01:08:100 (5,1) - I think swapping NC would be way better since 5 is where she sings a new verse.
01:13:234 (5,1) - ^
I feel it is ugly if there are 2 colors stack on same place..

Curious:
Seems alright

Cursed:
00:13:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Honestly I really don't think you need this stream. You don't even hear a drum roll in the music. It's just 3 sound in the music.
they are following the drums
01:02:806 (1,3) - Swap NC. It seems a lot better as it NCs on downbeat and new verse. Although tbh I don't know when you're NCing anymore..
same reason I said before
anyway thanks for your mod :3
Raging Bull
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Raging Bull
;_;

Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
嗨~王长喜~

我来支援啦~BG换了个更好的希望你采用~

继续膜拜LOLI控WCX~ :roll:

[General]

没问题,就是Break太短了 去掉Letterbox during breaks.


[Cursed]

00:11:643 (6) - 这里加SPIN怎么样？到 00:13:162.
00:50:774 (3) - Clap去掉加Finish试试看.
01:16:122 (2,3) - 2开头加Finish,3开头和结尾加Finish.


[Curious]

00:06:327 (6) - NC移动到这里吧，把后面1去掉.


[Cube]

没话说。。无语~


[C3]

00:44:357 (1,2) - 建议换个折返Slider.
00:56:549 (1,2) - ^


我KUDO清0了 T_T 现在还发高烧。。
去躺了T_T
good luck~ ;)

Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
Underwear BG gah.

Never mind I'll just think of them all as bikini now.
S h i a
397 posts
Joined December 2009
S h i a
王长喜神mapper \:D/
这根本不用mod了.快去要泡

[c3]

overall difficulty +1 ?
01:16:924 (3) - 这里spacing

[cube]

00:34:410 (7) - new combo从这里开始怎样？

[curious]

00:23:020 (2) - NEW COMBO从这里开始怎样？
00:46:282 (5) - 往右移打起来似乎更流畅？
SPOILER
01:08:582 (2) - 这note听起来有点多余？

[cursed]
<3
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
mod4mod~

[Easy]

  • Fine.
[Cube]
  1. 00:13:556 (1,2) - The volume of them is low, and the volume of the stream in the music is higher than it. That makes playing harder for normal players I guess. Turn it up please.
  2. 00:34:250 (6,7) - ^
[Curious]
  1. 00:10:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a perfectly pentagon? Move (3) to x:152 y:200?
  2. 00:19:170 (5) - Stream is better than slider imo.(In this case, slider is much harder tham stream for me.) Next same parttens are also.
  3. 00:47:565 (4) - Finish sound is kinda high for me. Turn it down a little?
  4. 01:18:368 (T) - How about turn the volume up to 60%~65%?
[Cursed]

  • The space of streams is fine imo :3
    Some sound suggestions.
  1. 00:29:437 (T) - I feel the volume is kinda low. How about turn it up to 60%?
  2. 00:42:432 (6) - Finish sound is kinda high for me. Turn it down a little?
  3. 00:47:565 (2) - ^
  4. 01:18:368 (T) - How about turn the volume up to 60%~65%?
Ya, most of them are just about sound :3
I couldn't find issue about formation because your mapset is really nice as always!
Good luck~ :)
Megurine Luka
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Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
/mod from Queue

基本上找了Luka图就算一不小心break rule我也都是无法拒绝的扭手帕。


[General]

目测没有

[Easy]

00:13:556 (1) - 建议换个地方开始，作为新手百分之百会早按。我直到会打四星图还是不会这种梗
00:25:747 (3) - 新手叠叠怕> <
00:28:314 (3) - slidertick伪和感略严重，其实我是觉得没有到副歌部分不需要那么密集的clap，或者clap声音不要那么重，不过这个还是随便你
00:36:015 (3) - 新手叠叠怕> <

[Normal]

CS-1?
00:18:047 (3) - 这么叠对NM的player来说略难了点，可以考虑NC
00:37:940 (3) - 对齐放直也挺好看的啊> http://puu.sh/79St
00:48:368 (x) - 可以考虑加一个note，因为我个人觉得NM的player还是不具备分辨两种速率的slider approach rate的
意思是他们极有可能认为这两种是一样的打法> http://puu.sh/79ST
00:52:699 (1) - 其实垂直挺好的
01:17:726 (1) - 这里开始这样试试看> http://puu.sh/79Tc

[Hard]

目测没啥问题

[Insane]

00:33:287 (4,5) - 还不如摆垂直直线
01:11:309 (5,6) - 可以考虑分再开点

其他没了

加油>,<
cmn_891127
1,308 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127
...基本没问题，射星吧...
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Hi~ 新手mod請見諒 王長喜是暱稱嗎?XD
C3:
SPOILER
做的真好 找不到 >_<
Cube:
SPOILER
00:56:549 (3) - 去掉NC?
01:16:924 (4) - 加clap?
Curious:
SPOILER
00:19:170 (5) - 我是覺得note比較好 不要用slider
00:29:437 (5) - ^
00:39:705 (4) - ^
01:02:806 (4) - ^
01:20:132 (X) - 加note?
Cursed:
SPOILER
00:57:191 (1) - 要不要BPMx0.8 讓Slider慢一點?
Great map~ mod很少...抱歉...
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[C3]

00:12:023 (x) - Useless break, remove it.

[Taiko]

HP Drain -1.

That's pretty much all, good map!
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123

osuplayer111 wrote:

[C3]

00:12:023 (x) - Useless break, remove it.

[Taiko]

HP Drain -1.

That's pretty much all, good map!
all fixed
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Taiko]

00:12:402 (2,1) - I lol'd at this.
KayeSara
KayeSara

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Taiko]

00:12:402 (2,1) - I lol'd at this.

lol，fix
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
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Topic Starter
wcx19911123

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Taiko]

00:12:402 (2,1) - I lol'd at this.
oops , my mistake..
seems click there when turn down the HD in Taiko..orz
ok fixed
KayeSara
KayeSara
其实还有几张图比较好，不过到处都是字就没打算用了
名字 TaikoBG

Edit：胖次什么的就不打算露出来了，这少女长的真像初音= =

wcx19911123
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Topic Starter
wcx19911123
full submitted
hope everything is ready now 0.0
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Ok, everything checks out.

Bubbled~
wcx19911123
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Topic Starter
wcx19911123
thanks you osuplayer111 :)
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
看来用不到我来看了\:D/
wcx19911123
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Topic Starter
wcx19911123

xierbaliti wrote:

看来用不到我来看了\:D/
我能换个图么 0.0？
hvick225
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hvick225
你們這些人怎麼拿bubble都神速
Sakura
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Sakura
I now pronounce you map and Rank you may get most played!
merchat7
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merchat7
Grats
Sallad4ever
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Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
oh good one more map gone from my queue with a good reason

Congratz for the rank~
Rieszn
27 posts
Joined August 2009
Rieszn
bpmたかすぎ

nice mapやｗ
Megurine Luka
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Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
神mapper

跪了
Love
osu! Alumni
1,267 posts
Joined August 2010
Love
nonononono... no actual mods for the taiko... time to play this..

Edit: yup, I raged, get some taiko modders next time @KS & jong. Horrible pitch hits, finishers that shouldn't be finishers. Now, to FC this. :x
JoJo
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Joined July 2010
JoJo
=A=

不自重神mapper Omedetou \:D/

跪了+1...
wcx19911123
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Topic Starter
wcx19911123
thanks you all
bakajo和baka大哥赶紧自重 0.0

@Love : I already found some taiko modders before add the taiko diff.. it is fine
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
王长喜 毁灭人类~

跪了+2 :)
Waryas
Waryas
This music is so good omg i can't stop listening to it. When will the full version be released?
Sakura
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Sakura
Ask lolcubes
Love
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Love

wcx19911123 wrote:

@Love : I already found some taiko modders before add the taiko diff.. it is fine
looks like you found lazy modders, because I have another friend that can hear the bad pitch hits as well, and you could've asked him, but eh.
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi

JesusYamato wrote:

This music is so good omg i can't stop listening to it. When will the full version be released?
Just to note the full version is already out. (There are already osu! maps in pending that are using it too)
KayeSara
KayeSara

Love wrote:

nonononono... no actual mods for the taiko... time to play this..

Edit: yup, I raged, get some taiko modders next time @KS & jong. Horrible pitch hits, finishers that shouldn't be finishers. Now, to FC this. :x
:oops: Someone always bark without nothing 0.0
I know that jealousy will take your raging, same as my other GD.
If you interest in such thing, write it down in all my GD MAP PLZ
Anyway, I'm not willing to argue with a kid.

Edit: 恭喜rank
hoge_old
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wcx19911123さんの作る譜面はとても楽しくて好きです！これからも頑張ってください！
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