Porter Robinson & Madeon - Shelter [Taiko] · forum

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

Joined April 2012

neonat 2017-10-04T19:28:33+00:00

Oni

00:22:002 (60) - just seems weird to go kat at that part, same thing at 00:31:602 (99) - with the impact given at 00:19:602 (51) and 00:29:202 (90) - it goes back to the same pitch, it's better to be similar. Likewise for the other kiais
00:28:827 (88) - because 00:28:152 (85) - follows the synth rather than the vocals, this note then becomes a little out of place because the rhythm switched over the music layer and is now the instrumentals, but the beat at 00:28:752 is overlooked and clashes with the vocals. Occurs in the other kiais too
00:47:052 - could use a beat here
00:53:802 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185) - the sequence of 2 3 3 2 like what you did at 00:44:202 (143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152) - seems to fit better, especially 00:54:702 (180,181,182) seems off
00:56:652 - could use a beat here
01:54:702 (7,8,9) - back to d d k instead? Now it's the opposite of 01:55:302 (10,11,12) - but the last 3 beats are distinctively different from 01:53:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - which repeats the same pitches, 01:55:302 (10,11,12) doesn't

davidminh's Muzukashii

00:29:202 (65) - K? Alternate like what you did before. But then comes the 2nd kiai where you did a different pattern, which somewhat suits the pitch better except for 1 note 01:22:002 (203) as the song returns to the same pitch 5 times on those places, so the last one distinctively differs from the rest
00:44:652 - could use a beat here, seems like the doubles of 00:44:202 (107,108) - is left unanswered by something to complement it
00:47:052 - likewise here as well, seems empty at the moment
00:49:602 - leaving just the vocals mapped, the strong beats on places like this and 00:51:402 - if you do not feel like having these at least have 00:50:502 mapped so the map keeps flowing
00:54:252 -could really do with a note here and at 00:56:652
01:22:002 (203) - now matching 01:31:602 (231) - but should it really? Unlike the former, the music pitch goes up at 01:31:602 (231)
01:41:202 (262) - similar to 01:22:002 (203)
01:54:402 (303) - the beat at 01:55:002 (305) should be higher up in priority to have a more distinct change in colour, as it has the same clap in the song like what you hear at 01:53:802 (301) - just slightly softer, but same nonetheless. I would say change 01:54:402 (303) to d and 01:55:002 (305) to k

Futsuu

00:27:702 (48) - rather than making it more dense here, the place at 00:28:902 seems more appropriate to have the note, leading in to the next section of the music, but currently this section is less dense. Similarly in the other kiais (01:25:302 (146) - 01:44:502 (188) - )
00:37:302 (69) - similar, or if you feel the song has become too soft just before the end of the chorus, remove. Similarly in the other kiais (01:54:102 (209) - )
00:51:702 (94) - seems more appropriate at 00:52:302 - 00:51:702 (94) just seems placed too centred in the phrase and is neither here nor there
00:55:002 (100,101) - could shift 1/2 beat forward, similar to the music section of 00:49:602 (89,90,91) -
00:57:702 - have a beat here?
01:07:002 (113,114,115,116,117,118) - pitch of 01:07:002 (113,114) - remains unchanged, those of 01:08:202 (115,116,117,118) - go down for each double notes, try to sync that with the colours as well? kk dk kd or a pattern along these lines
00:58:002 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - your section here is worryingly empty compared to Muzu, the density of this section does not progress well to the next difficulty, please add more notes to it
01:31:302 - could do with a note here
01:34:902 (166) - could remove, 01:36:102 (169) - does the job about intensifying and leading to the next part
01:38:502 - could add a note here, it's now the final kiai and you could try to round things up, the players have warmed up to the song and more familiar about the whole piece

Tyis' Kantan

00:14:802 (13) - k here instead? Out of all the rest, this one differs in the music compared to 00:02:802 (2,3) - 00:10:002 (8) - 00:11:202 (9,10) -
00:34:002 (17) - change to k? Likewise at 01:31:602 (17) - and 01:50:802 (39) - the music changes up here compared to the other components of similar area in the kiais
00:58:002 (16) - k instead?
01:44:802 (32) - change to k? Or change something within 01:38:802 (25,26,27) - 01:43:602 (30,31,32,33,34) - 01:48:402 (36,37,38) - or 01:53:202 (41,42,43,44,45) - there is totally no variance in pattern throughout the whole map, even in the kiai for 1/1 notes that are consecutively after each other. The map goes on monotonously. In the end, just changing up the last kiai might not help enough, but that should still be one of the most important bits to try and make it more unique to the song.

The whole Kantan only has dons on the 1st and 3rd beat, and kats on 2nd and 4th except for 2 objects which are 01:00:402 (17) and 01:05:202 (1)
I too think there needs to be a buff up, it's too empty. Example of a place to add notes is like 00:58:002 - 01:14:802 - as the Futsuu needs a boost there as well.

These are my main concerns, good luck and all the best

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-10-05T10:54:49+00:00

neonat wrote:
davidminh's Muzukashii

00:29:202 (65) - K? Alternate like what you did before. But then comes the 2nd kiai where you did a different pattern, which somewhat suits the pitch better except for 1 note 01:22:002 (203) as the song returns to the same pitch 5 times on those places, so the last one distinctively differs from the rest Fixed
00:44:652 - could use a beat here, seems like the doubles of 00:44:202 (107,108) - is left unanswered by something to complement it Fixed
00:47:052 - likewise here as well, seems empty at the moment I think it's okay now, because for the consistency spread
00:49:602 - leaving just the vocals mapped, the strong beats on places like this and 00:51:402 - if you do not feel like having these at least have 00:50:502 mapped so the map keeps flowing Added a note
00:54:252 -could really do with a note here and at 00:56:652 Added the 00:54:252 only
01:22:002 (203) - now matching 01:31:602 (231) - but should it really? Unlike the former, the music pitch goes up at 01:31:602 (231) The pitch is really the same
01:41:202 (262) - similar to 01:22:002 (203) ^
01:54:402 (303) - the beat at 01:55:002 (305) should be higher up in priority to have a more distinct change in colour, as it has the same clap in the song like what you hear at 01:53:802 (301) - just slightly softer, but same nonetheless. I would say change 01:54:402 (303) to d and 01:55:002 (305) to k Applied

These are my main concerns, good luck and all the best

Thank you for modding, neonat.
@Poii: Maybe just nerf a little bit for Futsuu, I'm close to that diff.

Muzukashii

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Tyistiana

osu! Alumni

541 posts

Joined February 2012

Tyistiana 2017-10-05T15:10:07+00:00

neonat wrote:
Tyis' Kantan

00:14:802 (13) - k here instead? Out of all the rest, this one differs in the music compared to 00:02:802 (2,3) - 00:10:002 (8) - 00:11:202 (9,10) -
I just think about this on yesterday too, maybe I forgot to make it become k.
00:34:002 (17) - change to k? Likewise at 01:31:602 (17) - and 01:50:802 (39) - the music changes up here compared to the other components of similar area in the kiais
Change for the overall consistency.
00:58:002 (16) - k instead?
Not have a snare drum pitch, like 00:57:402 (16,17)
01:44:802 (32) - change to k? Or change something within 01:38:802 (25,26,27) - 01:43:602 (30,31,32,33,34) - 01:48:402 (36,37,38) - or 01:53:202
(41,42,43,44,45) - there is totally no variance in pattern throughout the whole map, even in the kiai for 1/1 notes that are consecutively after each other. The map goes on monotonously. In the end, just changing up the last kiai might not help enough, but that should still be one of the most important bits to try and make it more unique to the song.
It's already k according to my changed yesterday.

The whole Kantan only has dons on the 1st and 3rd beat, and kats on 2nd and 4th except for 2 objects which are 01:00:402 (17) and 01:05:202 (1)
I too think there needs to be a buff up, it's too empty. Example of a place to add notes is like 00:58:002 - 01:14:802 - as the Futsuu needs a boost there as well.
These have been improved yesterday!! >w<

These are my main concerns, good luck and all the best

davidminh0111 wrote:
@Poii: Maybe just nerf a little bit for Futsuu, I'm close to that diff.
I'm agree, maybe to nerf Futsuu might be the best solution. To not make it not too close to davidminh's muzukashii. And not too far away from my Kantan. :3

Thanks, neonat!! >w<

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Poii

1,438 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Poii 2017-10-05T16:15:15+00:00

neonat wrote:
Oni

00:22:002 (60) - just seems weird to go kat at that part, same thing at 00:31:602 (99) - with the impact given at 00:19:602 (51) and 00:29:202 (90) - it goes back to the same pitch, it's better to be similar. Likewise for the other kiais i tried to follow the vocal, but yeah don is good
00:28:827 (88) - because 00:28:152 (85) - follows the synth rather than the vocals, this note then becomes a little out of place because the rhythm switched over the music layer and is now the instrumentals, but the beat at 00:28:752 is overlooked and clashes with the vocals. Occurs in the other kiais too i know that 85 is not following the vocal correctly but, i wont to lose the snare there, i'll keep this part(and others kai too) bcuz it still emphasize the both drum and vocal
00:47:052 - could use a beat here kat or don, kat ftw xD i dunno
00:53:802 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185) - the sequence of 2 3 3 2 like what you did at 00:44:202 (143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152) - seems to fit better, especially 00:54:702 (180,181,182) seems off yeeshhh
00:56:652 - could use a beat here
01:54:702 (7,8,9) - back to d d k instead? Now it's the opposite of 01:55:302 (10,11,12) - but the last 3 beats are distinctively different from 01:53:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - which repeats the same pitches, 01:55:302 (10,11,12) doesn't yesh bcuz the last 3 notes is special

Futsuu

00:27:702 (48) - rather than making it more dense here, the place at 00:28:902 seems more appropriate to have the note, leading in to the next section of the music, but currently this section is less dense. Similarly in the other kiais (01:25:302 (146) - 01:44:502 (188) - )
00:37:302 (69) - similar, or if you feel the song has become too soft just before the end of the chorus, remove. Similarly in the other kiais (01:54:102 (209) - )
00:51:702 (94) - seems more appropriate at 00:52:302 - 00:51:702 (94) just seems placed too centred in the phrase and is neither here nor there
00:55:002 (100,101) - could shift 1/2 beat forward, similar to the music section of 00:49:602 (89,90,91) -
00:57:702 - have a beat here?
01:07:002 (113,114,115,116,117,118) - pitch of 01:07:002 (113,114) - remains unchanged, those of 01:08:202 (115,116,117,118) - go down for each double notes, try to sync that with the colours as well? kk dk kd or a pattern along these lines
00:58:002 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - your section here is worryingly empty compared to Muzu, the density of this section does not progress well to the next difficulty, please add more notes to it ok, i fixed and re-arrange you mentioned above, del some note add slidder and spinner as well
01:31:302 - could do with a note here no
01:34:902 (166) - could remove, 01:36:102 (169) - does the job about intensifying and leading to the next part yes for the consistency
01:38:502 - could add a note here, it's now the final kiai and you could try to round things up, the players have warmed up to the song and more familiar about the whole piece maybe no, i want to keep this simple, maybe re-arrange this last kai

i nerf this lil bit and buff some part, i dunno its better or not, but for me this one is better than before
These are my main concerns, good luck and all the best

wat are you doin jarvis ? you waste your star xD

Last edited by Poii 2017-10-06T15:06:28+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

JarvisGaming

643 posts

Joined June 2016

JarvisGaming 2017-10-06T14:24:02+00:00

I HAVE TOO MUCH STARS ON ME

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-10-06T15:01:14+00:00

JarvisGaming YT wrote:
I HAVE TOO MUCH STARS ON ME

Go go!!! Make this map more priority

Blackener

295 posts

Joined November 2013

Blackener 2017-10-06T17:08:04+00:00

Hi ;3 From que... no I came here myself xd

My queue is free now. Actually, there's last req by Cocoaaa but I'm waiting for previous modder. So here comes this mod. :3

OMG 7-paged mods rip D: Accept as you agree :]

God Tyistiana's Kantan

Surono wrote:
Make some variation more, and a little buff kiais. it looks simple overall

Agreed, but if I overlook the variation and spread (which many modders mentioned about it), this is flawless in my opinion.

Oh, your map even got improved

00:41:202 - I feel little strange when it doesn't have note here. I don't know, but I see other diffs has a note at this point. ;-;

01:11:502 (7) - You placed note at this point while Futsuu doesn't OMG

01:35:202 (21) - Change to d? At least, it follows kick sound, it's the same pitch of previous note. and it also emphasizes incoming kkd

Old Futsuu

00:55:002 (100,101,102) - To be honest, I enjoy 00:48:402 until 00:47:802 (85,86,87) I feel NOOOOO why you did dkk D; I know it's for variation. So, can you try kkd instead ? Okay. For enough reason (?), The note at 00:55:602 (102) is d in other diffs while Futsuu isn't.

Poii wrote:
~~d k d k 1/1 too boring~~

~~Yeah, also this point 01:10:602 (119,120,121,122). Try to use d k k d or d d k d. Because Kantan used d 01:11:802 (6).~~

Woah, big change D;

Futsuu

00:10:602 (16) - k? If you want to follow umm.. percussion, and for overall consistency in the last kiai.

01:11:502 - Kantan has a note at this point while Futsuu doesn't OMG.

Wow, a lot of variations in this diff, nice. #TEAMCONSISTENCY :3

davidminh's Muzukashii

01:03:252 (158,159) - How about ctrl+g? It follows blackground instrument and vocal, it also emphasizes 01:04:302 (160) sound

Nice pattern! I cannot find what to fix in your diff, sorry for short mod. ;-;

Oni

00:21:702 (59) - k? Also other points like this. I'm really not sure. But I know that it follows high-pitched sound like vocal and emphasizes drum at 00:22:002 (60). Maybe forget it? cuz I think d is still okay.

00:56:652 (188) - d? The kick sound is clearer than hihat.

01:16:002 (231,232,233) - Wow xd

01:41:502 (25) - I don't know what are you following by k? Also this note 01:51:102 (67) D;

I can't find what to fix more because these are almost flawless. So, sorry for short mod D; , good luck on ranking! :3

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-10-07T14:32:13+00:00

Blackener wrote:
Hi ;3 From que... no I came here myself xd

My queue is free now. Actually, there's last req by Cocoaaa but I'm waiting for previous modder. So here comes this mod. :3

OMG 7-paged mods rip D: Accept as you agree :]

davidminh's Muzukashii
01:03:252 (158,159) - How about ctrl+g? It follows blackground instrument and vocal, it also emphasizes 01:04:302 (160) sound But I'm following vocal and fit the pitch no change xD!

Nice pattern! I cannot find what to fix in your diff, sorry for short mod. ;-;

I can't find what to fix more because these are almost flawless. So, sorry for short mod D; , good luck on ranking! :3

>Made some changes by myself, thank you for modding, Blackener. I hope you can improve more about modding Taiko

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Poii

1,438 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Poii 2017-10-07T15:37:51+00:00

Blackener wrote:
Hi ;3 From que... no I came here myself xd

My queue is free now. Actually, there's last req by Cocoaaa but I'm waiting for previous modder. So here comes this mod. :3

OMG 7-paged mods rip D: Accept as you agree :]

Old Futsuu
00:55:002 (100,101,102) - To be honest, I enjoy 00:48:402 until 00:47:802 (85,86,87) I feel NOOOOO why you did dkk D; I know it's for variation. So, can you try kkd instead ? Okay. For enough reason (?), The note at 00:55:602 (102) is d in other diffs while Futsuu isn't.

Poii wrote:
~~d k d k 1/1 too boring~~
~~Yeah, also this point 01:10:602 (119,120,121,122). Try to use d k k d or d d k d. Because Kantan used d 01:11:802 (6).~~

Woah, big change D;

Futsuu
00:10:602 (16) - k? If you want to follow umm.. percussion, and for overall consistency in the last kiai.naah dis one isnt for percusion

01:11:502 - Kantan has a note at this point while Futsuu doesn't OMG.i want to clearly follow the percusion, yeah i know kantan have note there bcuz previous part, kantan dont have much note

Wow, a lot of variations in this diff, nice. #TEAMCONSISTENCY :3

Oni
00:21:702 (59) - k? Also other points like this. I'm really not sure. But I know that it follows high-pitched sound like vocal and emphasizes drum at 00:22:002 (60). Maybe forget it? cuz I think d is still okay.

00:56:652 (188) - d? The kick sound is clearer than hihat.but the flow is not flat, will consider it

01:16:002 (231,232,233) - Wow xdwew

01:41:502 (25) - I don't know what are you following by k? Also this note 01:51:102 (67) D; the flow

I can't find what to fix more because these are almost flawless. So, sorry for short mod D; , good luck on ranking! :3

Tyistiana

osu! Alumni

541 posts

Joined February 2012

Tyistiana 2017-10-08T05:30:12+00:00

Blackener wrote:
Hi ;3 From que... no I came here myself xd

My queue is free now. Actually, there's last req by Cocoaaa but I'm waiting for previous modder. So here comes this mod. :3

OMG 7-paged mods rip D: Accept as you agree :]

Noob Tyistiana's Kantan
Surono wrote:
Make some variation more, and a little buff kiais. it looks simple overall
Agreed, but if I overlook the variation and spread (which many modders mentioned about it), this is flawless in my opinion.

Oh, your map even got improved
Thanks, I tried so hard ;-;

00:41:202 - I feel little strange when it doesn't have note here. I don't know, but I see other diffs has a note at this point. ;-;
Because it's the easiest diff. ;;w;;

01:11:502 (7) - You placed note at this point while Futsuu doesn't OMG
A variation of the pattern here considered by the vocal. Before this map will have only boring 1/1 pattern. But I'll delete this note if anyone else mention about this.

01:35:202 (21) - Change to d? At least, it follows kick sound, it's the same pitch of previous note. and it also emphasizes incoming kkd
It would break the consistency of kdkkd which I've use so far.

I can't find what to fix more because these are almost flawless. So, sorry for short mod D; , good luck on ranking! :3

Thanks, Blackener!!

Protonori

140 posts

Joined February 2015

Protonori 2017-10-11T00:19:59+00:00

From my modding queue~
These are mostly suggestions, so ignore them as necessary.

[Tyis' Kantan]
00:01:602 (2) - Change to d? I don't think the vocals are similar enough to justify the same pattern at 00:04:002.
00:56:802 (15,16,17,18) - Change to k dkd? I think it emphasizes the vocals better.

[Futsuu]
01:36:402 (43) - Maybe add a finisher like you did at 00:19:602 and 01:17:202?

[davidminh's Muzukashii]
01:50:802 (295) - Add a finisher? You did this at 00:34:002 and 01:31:602.

This is a really good set, so I couldn't find many things to mod.
I hope this pops up in qualified soon!

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-10-11T11:30:26+00:00

@Protonori changed
@Poii 01:50:802 change to big K Thank you

Poii

1,438 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Poii 2017-10-11T12:05:40+00:00

thanks proton xD

yee devid ok, updated! wait for tyis to check the mod

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-10-14T01:41:38+00:00

Made some changes by myself

Muzukashii

osu file format v14

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Version:davidminh's Muzukashii
Source:Shelter
Tags:A-1 Pictures Crunchyroll EDM Electronic Dance Music cut short version tyistiana davidminh0111
BeatmapID:1412625
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[Difficulty]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Tyistiana

osu! Alumni

541 posts

Joined February 2012

Tyistiana 2017-10-15T13:29:35+00:00

Protonori wrote:
From my modding queue~
These are mostly suggestions, so ignore them as necessary.

[Tyis' Kantan]
00:01:602 (2) - Change to d? I don't think the vocals are similar enough to justify the same pattern at 00:04:002.
This note have followed the snare drum sound. Just like 00:04:002
00:56:802 (15,16,17,18) - Change to k dkd? I think it emphasizes the vocals better.
It would break the consistency which I've represent the snare drum sound as k.
This is a really good set, so I couldn't find many things to mod.
I hope this pops up in qualified soon!

Thanks, Protonori!

@Poii
Sorry for late ;;w;;

Poii

1,438 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Poii 2017-10-15T14:53:20+00:00

Will update it tmr
Its oky tyis

Rossi

686 posts

Joined January 2015

Rossi 2017-10-15T14:57:41+00:00

Hi~

Request M4M from Poii~

This already good lol xD but I find some problem that heard strange

[Muzukashii]
01:40:902 (264,265) - Ctrl + G ? I think its better with pattern dkkD. Also emphasize with 01:37:902 (254,255,256,257) -

or If you want to keep your own, just change K finish to normal k. Same to 01:48:402 (287) - ; 01:50:802 (295) -

GL Poii with ranked this I hope my mod will help <3

Smallwu

572 posts

Joined April 2013

Smallwu 2017-10-15T15:23:04+00:00

Hello, mod via forum-PM
[Tyis' Kantan]

01:55:002 (47) - d would be better. Compared to (46), (47) sounds more like (48)

[Futsuu]

00:00:402 (1,2) - Ctrl+G because (1) sounds lower than (2)
00:05:202 (7,8) - Ctrl+G ^
00:10:602 (16) - kat here would be better. There's a sound effect that you follow on the other places [00:11:802 - 00:13:002 - 00:14:202 - for example] , but here you no follow.
00:15:402 (24) - kat, reason same as above.
00:19:602 - 00:38:802 - All of the kiai parts are perfect, I think they should be kept actually.
But you need to handle density problem. To handle it, I think here's the best part :3

Plan A: Make this part with 1/2 Beat Snap Divisor.
1/2 always shows good results in slow songs, so yea :3

Plan B: Just remove the note between triplets. For example, let this become this.
After you done, the whole part will seem like the beginning part. I more like this than plan A because it sounds better.

I have no more ideas, hope these suggestions will help you even just little ;3

=====
Can't find more things to mod, nice map!
GL with Rank~

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-10-16T10:22:51+00:00

Franklin_DeJavu wrote:
Hi~

Request M4M from Poii~

This already good lol xD but I find some problem that heard strange

[Muzukashii]
01:40:902 (264,265) - Ctrl + G ? I think its better with pattern dkkD. Also emphasize with 01:37:902 (254,255,256,257) -

or If you want to keep your own, just change K finish to normal k. Same to 01:48:402 (287) - ; 01:50:802 (295) -

GL Poii with ranked this I hope my mod will help <3

Will have a look when Poii update

Poii

1,438 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Poii 2017-10-16T11:30:06+00:00

Smallwu wrote:
Hello, mod via forum-PM
[Futsuu]
00:00:402 (1,2) - Ctrl+G because (1) sounds lower than (2)
00:05:202 (7,8) - Ctrl+G ^
00:10:602 (16) - kat here would be better. There's a sound effect that you follow on the other places [00:11:802 - 00:13:002 - 00:14:202 - for example] , but here you no follow.
00:15:402 (24) - kat, reason same as above.

00:19:602 - 00:38:802 - All of the kiai parts are perfect, I think they should be kept actually.
But you need to handle density problem. To handle it, I think here's the best part :3

Plan A: Make this part with 1/2 Beat Snap Divisor.
1/2 always shows good results in slow songs, so yea :3

Plan B: Just remove the note between triplets. For example, let this become this.
After you done, the whole part will seem like the beginning part. I more like this than plan A because it sounds better.

I have no more ideas, hope these suggestions will help you even just little ;3
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Can't find more things to mod, nice map!
GL with Rank~

thanks smallwu :3 yes i use plan A
also fixed all

devid updated :3

Arach

143 posts

Joined June 2016

Arach 2017-10-17T00:51:48+00:00

HIIIII POIIIIII
Here is my M4M from my queue ^^
Thank you for modding my map :3
You asked me to mod your low diffs, well, so I start from them ^^
(Reminder: this is my first mod ever, so please, reply to this, so I can understand if I made some mistakes)

[Tyis' Kantan]

00:02:202 (3,6) - This is the intro of a Kantan, personally I think that you can delete these notes: the intro is kinda quite and slow, they are not so necessary XD If it was a Futsuu they would have been ok. 00:12:402 (13,14,15) - For example these notes are ok because at 00:10:002 (11) - the intro gained "more" power than before, so extra notes are good here.

00:26:802 (8,9) - Here I would do ctrl+G because the 1st (and the 3rd) beat in this song it is always a kick, while the 2nd (and the 4th) it is always a snare (like the majority of the songs in the world), so having d and than k is more accurate than having k first and than d, plus I would change 00:28:002 (10) - this note in a d to replicate this pattern 00:07:602 (7,8,9,10,11) - for consistency. Same here: 00:36:402 (19,20,21,22) - and here 01:24:402 (8,9,10,11) - and also here 01:34:002 (19,20,21) - and here 01:43:602 (31,32,33,34) - too

00:40:602 (24) - This note is on the 4th beat, so (as I explained above), it is better with a k, like this 00:43:002 (1) -

I would put this note 01:07:602 (1) - in this place 01:06:402 - so it is the same patter as before (like 01:01:002 (21,22,23) - ), in this way you can save consistency.

Suggestion: I would delete this note 01:16:302 (2) - because it is a Kantan. It is ok that this song has low bpm, so triples like that are not so difficult, but I think that this triple in particular does not fit so well in this difficulty. 01:11:202 (6,7,8) - In my advice this is a good example of a good triple in a good place for this difficulty level.

01:31:602 (17) - why a k? 01:22:002 (6) - here it was a d so consider changing to d

01:35:802 (22,23,24) - This is a good triple in a good place, but as the standard says, you should not put anything before and after a big note in a Kantan, so there are two possibilities: if you want to keep the big note, I suggest you to delete this note 01:36:102 (23) - and maybe put a finisher on this note 01:35:802 (22) - too; if you want to keep the triple I suggest you to toggle the finisher on this note 01:36:402 (23) -

01:40:002 (27) - I suggest turning it into d to reflect other similar patterns (check my 2nd point)
01:49:602 (39,40,41) - Here and here 01:53:202 (43,44,45) - ctrl+G for the same reason

Suggestion: if you want, I think that a finisher here 01:55:602 (47) - fits well ^^

[Futsuu]

00:01:002 (2,3) - with these you follow the voice, but here 00:20:202 (30,31) - you follow the base. There is the same sound, I suggest you to choose which one you want to follow (voice or base) and being constant through the entire song (you can mix them, but it is not so recommended in low difficulties because new players need stability and consistency more than everyone else, so you can follow different things in a song, but it is not so productive for Kantan and Futsuu) obv your choice has to be applied at the entire song.
I noticed that in some points you follow the base with timing but the voice with d/k. I think this would be quite confusionary for new players. I think you have to see this difficulty again. Anyway feel free to ask me, I'm available for explanation and help, just pm me here or in game. I can mod this difficulty again (also in pm) after you decide which "road" you want to take ^^

Another thing: 00:47:802 (78,96,2) - I recommend to decrease slider ratio, remember that it is a Futsuu, so is for quite new players, and they do not expect to alternate finger so fast in those sliders XD

I tried to explain everything I said. I hope I have been useful ^^
Consider that everything I said has to be taken as a tip, of course you are free to decide what to do with your map :3

I wish you the best and good luck for ranking!
Have a nice day, everyone ^^

Poii

1,438 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Poii 2017-10-17T12:51:54+00:00

Arach wrote:
HIIIII POIIIIII
Here is my M4M from my queue ^^
Thank you for modding my map :3
You asked me to mod your low diffs, well, so I start from them ^^
(Reminder: this is my first mod ever, so please, reply to this, so I can understand if I made some mistakes)

[Futsuu]
00:01:002 (2,3) - with these you follow the voice, but here 00:20:202 (30,31) - you follow the base. There is the same sound, I suggest you to choose which one you want to follow (voice or base) and being constant through the entire song (you can mix them, but it is not so recommended in low difficulties because new players need stability and consistency more than everyone else, so you can follow different things in a song, but it is not so productive for Kantan and Futsuu) obv your choice has to be applied at the entire song.
I noticed that in some points you follow the base with timing but the voice with d/k. I think this would be quite confusionary for new players. I think you have to see this difficulty again. Anyway feel free to ask me, I'm available for explanation and help, just pm me here or in game. I can mod this difficulty again (also in pm) after you decide which "road" you want to take ^^
ok, yes i followed differ sound, recently before you mod this diff, i following the vocal in kai, and its feel lil bit meeh xD bcus it should be mapped at blue tick, and 1/4 doublet, thats make the density between this diff and kantan too far, this one is the simple and enjoyable way to map this kai(imo) thats why i wont to follow just the vocal for dis part

Another thing: 00:47:802 (78,96,2) - I recommend to decrease slider ratio, remember that it is a Futsuu, so is for quite new players, and they do not expect to alternate finger so fast in those sliders XD is that a real problem ?, i mean you dont have to hit the drumroll btw

I tried to explain everything I said. I hope I have been useful ^^
Consider that everything I said has to be taken as a tip, of course you are free to decide what to do with your map :3 thanks

I wish you the best and good luck for ranking!
Have a nice day, everyone ^^

Tyistiana

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541 posts

Joined February 2012

Tyistiana 2017-10-17T13:05:48+00:00

Smallwu wrote:
Hello, mod via forum-PM
[Tyis' Kantan]
01:55:002 (47) - d would be better. Compared to (46), (47) sounds more like (48)
It's sound like (44) more than imo. ;;w;;
I have no more ideas, hope these suggestions will help you even just little ;3[/list]
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Can't find more things to mod, nice map!
GL with Rank~

Arach wrote:
HIIIII POIIIIII
Here is my M4M from my queue ^^
Thank you for modding my map :3
You asked me to mod your low diffs, well, so I start from them ^^
(Reminder: this is my first mod ever, so please, reply to this, so I can understand if I made some mistakes)

[Tyis' Kantan]
00:02:202 (3,6) - This is the intro of a Kantan, personally I think that you can delete these notes: the intro is kinda quite and slow, they are not so necessary XD If it was a Futsuu they would have been ok. 00:12:402 (13,14,15) - For example these notes are ok because at 00:10:002 (11) - the intro gained "more" power than before, so extra notes are good here.
It would lead us to the bored pattern , d k d k d ....

00:26:802 (8,9) - Here I would do ctrl+G because the 1st (and the 3rd) beat in this song it is always a kick, while the 2nd (and the 4th) it is always a snare (like the majority of the songs in the world), so having d and than k is more accurate than having k first and than d, plus I would change 00:28:002 (10) - this note in a d to replicate this pattern 00:07:602 (7,8,9,10,11) - for consistency. Same here: 00:36:402 (19,20,21,22) - and here 01:24:402 (8,9,10,11) - and also here 01:34:002 (19,20,21) - and here 01:43:602 (31,32,33,34) - too
I'm convinced. Changed. :3

00:40:602 (24) - This note is on the 4th beat, so (as I explained above), it is better with a k, like this 00:43:002 (1) -
Okay~

I would put this note 01:07:602 (1) - in this place 01:06:402 - so it is the same patter as before (like 01:01:002 (21,22,23) - ), in this way you can save consistency.
Seems right. Changed.

Suggestion: I would delete this note 01:16:302 (2) - because it is a Kantan. It is ok that this song has low bpm, so triples like that are not so difficult, but I think that this triple in particular does not fit so well in this difficulty. 01:11:202 (6,7,8) - In my advice this is a good example of a good triple in a good place for this difficulty level.
Sounds cool , but I want to keep this as a challenge for the beginner player.

01:31:602 (17) - why a k? 01:22:002 (6) - here it was a d so consider changing to d
Same as 00:34:002 (17)

01:35:802 (22,23,24) - This is a good triple in a good place, but as the standard says, you should not put anything before and after a big note in a Kantan, so there are two possibilities: if you want to keep the big note, I suggest you to delete this note 01:36:102 (23) - and maybe put a finisher on this note 01:35:802 (22) - too; if you want to keep the triple I suggest you to toggle the finisher on this note 01:36:402 (23) -
Seems like this kind of triplet doesn't legit on Kantan. Delete the note to make that finisher become legit.

01:40:002 (27) - I suggest turning it into d to reflect other similar patterns (check my 2nd point)
01:49:602 (39,40,41) - Here and here 01:53:202 (43,44,45) - ctrl+G for the same reason
Manage some point to make the consistency.

Suggestion: if you want, I think that a finisher here 01:55:602 (47) - fits well ^^
Music end with calm. A finisher would be nice here too. But doesn't enough imo. ;;w;;

I tried to explain everything I said. I hope I have been useful ^^ It did help. Thanks :3
Consider that everything I said has to be taken as a tip, of course you are free to decide what to do with your map :3 thanks

I wish you the best and good luck for ranking!
Have a nice day, everyone ^^

Thanks, Smallwu and Arach!!

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Tyis' Kantan]
SR drop down again. uwu

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Poii

1,438 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Poii 2017-10-17T13:44:37+00:00

ty tyis

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2017-10-18T05:25:46+00:00

Hello from my modding queue!

Oni

00:27:852 (83,84,85,86,87,88) - On (83,84,85) Your note is follow a melody but (86,87,88) follow with a vocal. Change this to follow only one. The player can confuse to play this. I suggest 00:28:827 (88) - move to 00:28:752 ?
01:03:702 (206) - Change to k? 01:02:502 (203,204,205,206) - This part will opposite with 01:04:902 (208,209,210,211) -
01:16:602 (236) - Change to d? The sound is look different 01:16:002 (231,232,233,234,235) - a bit.
01:25:452 (271,272,273,274,275,276) - Same as first. I suggest 01:26:427 (276) - move to 01:26:352 ?

davidminh's Muzukashii

00:05:802 - Add note d? For consistency with 00:01:002 (2,3) - 00:03:402 (5,6) -
00:09:702 - Add note d? because in Oni is have a note. should be consistency.
00:57:402 (145,146) - Change this to same with 00:47:802 (117,118,119) - ? for consistency. The sound is not different for me.
01:04:902 (162) - Delete? for consistency with 00:59:502 (150,151) -
01:35:502 (246) - How about delete this, Add notes on 01:35:952 and 01:36:102 If you accept 01:36:702 (249) - Delete

Futsuu

00:02:802 (4,5) - Ctrl+g? For pattern same as Oni
00:12:402 (19,20) - Ctrl+g If you accept top.
00:14:802 (23) - Change to d? for consistency with 00:05:202 (7) -

Tyis' Kantan

00:02:202 (3) - Move to 00:01:002 For consistency with another diff.
00:04:602 (6) - Move to 00:03:402 For consistency with another diff.
00:05:802 - Add note If you accept the both top.
00:15:402 - Add note? For consistency with another diff.
00:22:602 (4) - Move to 00:21:402 For consistency with another diff.
00:23:802 - Add note? For consistency with another diff.
00:32:202 (15) - Move to 00:31:002 For consistency with another diff.
00:33:402 - Add note d? For consistency with another diff.
00:47:802 (5,6,7) - ??? Nerf this please. In Futsuu is not use like this.
00:50:202 - Add note? For consistency with another diff.
00:55:002 - Add note? For consistency with another diff.
00:57:402 (16,17,18) - Same as 00:47:802 (5,6,7) -
01:01:602 (22) - Delete. In Futsuu is not add this note.
01:06:402 (1) - Delete. In Futsuu is not add this note.
01:07:602 - Add note for consistency with another diff.
01:11:202 (6,7) - Delete this. In Futsuu is not use.
01:16:302 (2) - Delete this. 1/2 is shouldn't use in Kantan.
01:20:202 (4) - Move to 01:19:002 For consistency with another diff.
01:21:402 - Add note for consistency with another diff.
01:29:802 (15) - Move to 01:28:602 For consistency with another diff.
01:31:002 - Add note for consistency with another diff.
01:39:402 (26) - Move to 01:38:202 For consistency with another diff.
01:49:002 (38) - Move to 01:47:802 For consistency with another diff.

This is all from me. Hope it can help you. Good luck

Poii

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Topic Starter

Poii 2017-10-18T11:27:58+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
Hello from my modding queue!

Oni
00:27:852 (83,84,85,86,87,88) - On (83,84,85) Your note is follow a melody but (86,87,88) follow with a vocal. Change this to follow only one. The player can confuse to play this. I suggest 00:28:827 (88) - move to 00:28:752 ? already mentioned in other mod, i'll keep this, bcus that snare is too strong, i also mapped the vocal here, so yeah doble hit, both vocal and snare
01:03:702 (206) - Change to k? 01:02:502 (203,204,205,206) - This part will opposite with 01:04:902 (208,209,210,211) - seem good, since it have same pitch like 01:04:302 -
01:16:602 (236) - Change to d? The sound is look different 01:16:002 (231,232,233,234,235) - a bit.naah, the snare is clear for me
01:25:452 (271,272,273,274,275,276) - Same as first. I suggest 01:26:427 (276) - move to 01:26:352 ? same as the 1st

Futsuu
00:02:802 (4,5) - Ctrl+g? For pattern same as Oni
00:12:402 (19,20) - Ctrl+g If you accept top.
00:14:802 (23) - Change to d? for consistency with 00:05:202 (7) - fixed all

This is all from me. Hope it can help you. Good luck thanks rew

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-10-18T11:56:03+00:00

@Franklin no change, I think the pattern is fine imo

rew0825 wrote:
Hello from my modding queue!

davidminh's Muzukashii
00:05:802 - Add note d? For consistency with 00:01:002 (2,3) - 00:03:402 (5,6) - Ok, changed
00:09:702 - Add note d? because in Oni is have a note. should be consistency. Changed
00:57:402 (145,146) - Change this to same with 00:47:802 (117,118,119) - ? for consistency. The sound is not different for me. Remapped
01:04:902 (162) - Delete? for consistency with 00:59:502 (150,151) - Added a d instead
01:35:502 (246) - How about delete this, Add notes on 01:35:952 and 01:36:102 If you accept 01:36:702 (249) - Delete Nah, I don't like that way, your opinion is good but I'd rather keep it.

This is all from me. Hope it can help you. Good luck

Thank you for modding.

Muzukashii

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: shelter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 19602
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 1
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Shelter
TitleUnicode:Shelter
Artist:Porter Robinson & Madeon
ArtistUnicode:Porter Robinson & Madeon
Creator:Poii
Version:davidminh's Muzukashii
Source:Shelter
Tags:A-1 Pictures Crunchyroll EDM Electronic Dance Music cut short version tyistiana davidminh0111
BeatmapID:1412625
BeatmapSetID:665003

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Last edited by davidminh0111 2017-10-18T14:54:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Poii

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Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Poii 2017-10-18T11:58:57+00:00

thanks devid

Tyistiana

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Tyistiana 2017-10-18T12:16:05+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
Hello from my modding queue!

Tyis' Kantan
00:02:202 (3) - Move to 00:01:002 For consistency with another diff.
00:04:602 (6) - Move to 00:03:402 For consistency with another diff.
00:05:802 - Add note If you accept the both top.
This seems good to follow the vocal since maybe beginner will concentrate to the vocal more than a little tick sound.
00:15:402 - Add note? For consistency with another diff.
This is easiest difficulty, give some rest to the player. :3
00:22:602 (4) - Move to 00:21:402 For consistency with another diff.
00:23:802 - Add note? For consistency with another diff.
00:32:202 (15) - Move to 00:31:002 For consistency with another diff.
00:33:402 - Add note d? For consistency with another diff.
00:47:802 (5,6,7) - ??? Nerf this please. In Futsuu is not use like this.
Okay, nerfed.
00:50:202 - Add note? For consistency with another diff.
00:55:002 - Add note? For consistency with another diff.
00:57:402 (16,17,18) - Same as 00:47:802 (5,6,7) -
01:01:602 (22) - Delete. In Futsuu is not add this note.
01:06:402 (1) - Delete. In Futsuu is not add this note.
According to the below suggestion. This one will be deleted.
01:07:602 - Add note for consistency with another diff.
Sounds great.
01:11:202 (6,7) - Delete this. In Futsuu is not use.
01:16:302 (2) - Delete this. 1/2 is shouldn't use in Kantan.
01:20:202 (4) - Move to 01:19:002 For consistency with another diff.
01:21:402 - Add note for consistency with another diff.
01:29:802 (15) - Move to 01:28:602 For consistency with another diff.
01:31:002 - Add note for consistency with another diff.
01:39:402 (26) - Move to 01:38:202 For consistency with another diff.
01:49:002 (38) - Move to 01:47:802 For consistency with another diff.
About the others suggestion which I didn't answered, I think that the consistence in difficulty is more important. It would break overall consistency in this difficulty. Sorry ;;w;;
And about those 1/2 , I would like to wait the others BN to discussion about this , since Futsuu have used 1/4 doublets in some place too. If I didn't use 1/2 on some place, This Kantan's difficulty will be too far away from Futsuu.
This is all from me. Hope it can help you. Good luck

Thanks, rew0825

PS. ภาษาไทยก็ได้ คนไทยกันเอง 55555555

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Tyis' Kantan]
SR go down again... uwu

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Poii

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Poii 2017-10-18T14:19:42+00:00

ty tyis

salchow

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salchow 2017-10-18T14:37:21+00:00

Kantan

00:38:202 (22) - I think that k here fits better, becouse there is a click sound.

01:10:002 (4) - 01:11:202 (6) - I think you should remove these dd becouse there is no sound there.

00:40:602 (24,1) - remove those and just have a full break, becouse its the least intnse part of the song.

00:01:602 (2,3) - I think it would be good idea to remove the kk becouse there is almost no sond in there and its kinda overmapped for beginging of the song.

00:04:002 (5,6) - ^

00:06:402 (4) - ^ at the same time you can delete d.

01:48:402 (38,39,40,41,42) - Use the same pattern as here 01:38:802 (26,27,28,29,30) becouse there is the same sound but bit pitched, but I dont think you should change from dkkkd to dkkdk becouse kantan diff is heavy copy paste so please use the same pattern.

01:55:002 (47,48) - change dd to dk becouse on the 01:55:002 (47) there is the same clap as here but more quiet, and on the 01:55:602 (48) - There is more fade sound so you could use k instead

Futsuu

00:39:402 (71,72,73,74) - you can remove these becouse the same reason as for kantan, but now you are following the vocals so in adition its wierd.

00:23:802 (38,39,40) - Change into dkd becouse it just sounds better.

00:33:402 (59,60,61) - Here can you leave as it is ( kkd ), becouse its more pitched than the previus pattern and it gives more variety.

01:21:402 (12,13,14) - ^ This is less pitched so change it to dkd.

01:31:002 (33,34) - Forrgot to map this? ( kkd )

01:40:602 (52,53,54) - ^ This is less pitched so change it to dkd.

01:50:202 (73,74,75) - ^

Muzukashii

00:04:602 (7,8,9) - You can probobly use kdk becouse you can repeat that part like here 00:14:202 (26,27,28)

00:39:402 (94) - 00:42:402 (102) - You can nerf this part a bit and you can have some notes.

01:16:602 (190) - k probobly fits better because of the same claps.

Oni

Im not that good at the game...

Poii

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Poii 2017-10-18T14:47:36+00:00

salchow wrote:
Futsuu

00:39:402 (71,72,73,74) - you can remove these becouse the same reason as for kantan, but now you are following the vocals so in adition its wierd.

00:23:802 (38,39,40) - Change into dkd becouse it just sounds better.

00:33:402 (59,60,61) - Here can you leave as it is ( kkd ), becouse its more pitched than the previus pattern and it gives more variety.

01:21:402 (12,13,14) - ^ This is less pitched so change it to dkd.

01:31:002 (33,34) - Forrgot to map this? ( kkd )

01:40:602 (52,53,54) - ^ This is less pitched so change it to dkd.

01:50:202 (73,74,75) - ^

Oni

Im not that good at the game...

wait a sec, did you mod this before i updated all diffs ? i mean your timelink is incorrect also some part that you mentioned is already kkd :3 it feel like you mod this map 2 or 3 days ago

davidminh0111

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davidminh0111 2017-10-18T14:53:31+00:00

@salchow no change,
00:04:602 - Pitch is clearly different so it needs variation
00:39:402 till 00:42:402 - I don't get it, it's really simple now and you said I had to nerf a little bit?
01:16:602 - Retained to make a 1/2 space to the red note and I changed to follow the vocal

Thank you for modding, no change
Btw, david > devid (Poii called me :thenkong:)

Poii

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Poii 2017-10-18T14:58:16+00:00

davidminh0111 wrote:
@salchow no change,
00:04:602 - Pitch is clearly different so it needs variation
00:39:402 till 00:42:402 - I don't get it, it's really simple now and you said I had to nerf a little bit?
01:16:602 - Retained to make a 1/2 space to the red note and I changed to follow the vocal

Thank you for modding, no change
Btw, david > devid (Poii called me :thenkong:)

devid is better

salchow

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salchow 2017-10-18T19:39:06+00:00

lol, what? I finished my mod today

Poii

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Poii 2017-10-19T11:11:33+00:00

salchow wrote:
lol, what? I finished my mod today

but your mod on my futsuu is already kkd and somepart is already fixed before rew's mod :3

meeh nvm

salchow

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salchow 2017-10-19T14:07:50+00:00

no kudosu?

Poii

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Poii 2017-10-19T14:09:13+00:00

salchow wrote:
no kudosu?

tyis didnt respone it yet
just wait

Tyistiana

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Tyistiana 2017-10-20T02:22:37+00:00

salchow wrote:
Kantan

00:38:202 (22) - I think that k here fits better, becouse there is a click sound.
It's already k

01:10:002 (4) - 01:11:202 (6) - I think you should remove these dd becouse there is no sound there.
They were add to make a variance while playing.

00:40:602 (24,1) - remove those and just have a full break, becouse its the least intnse part of the song.
At first someone say that it shouldn't have a break, but as the easiest difficulty. It should have imo.

00:01:602 (2,3) - I think it would be good idea to remove the kk becouse there is almost no sond in there and its kinda overmapped for beginging of the song.
You have mod this map before update, I'm sure ;;w;;
Rearrange this part by myself.

00:04:002 (5,6) - ^
Rearrange this part by myself.

00:06:402 (4) - ^ at the same time you can delete d.
It will be too blank then.

01:48:402 (38,39,40,41,42) - Use the same pattern as here 01:38:802 (26,27,28,29,30) becouse there is the same sound but bit pitched, but I dont think you should change from dkkkd to dkkdk becouse kantan diff is heavy copy paste so please use the same pattern.
It would break consistency on 01:50:802 (41) which I tried to use k so far , to make a difference to 01:41:202 (29)

01:55:002 (47,48) - change dd to dk becouse on the 01:55:002 (47) there is the same clap as here but more quiet, and on the 01:55:602 (48) - There is more fade sound so you could use k instead
Seems doesn't correct. 01:55:602 isn't a clap sound.

Thanks , salchow. You made it

[

Tyis' Kantan]
I just modded myself too.

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