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Adraen + Renard - Punk Anthem Track

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Topic Starter
Aleks719
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 8 декабря 2011 г. at 22:03:31

Artist: Adraen + Renard
Title: Punk Anthem Track
Tags: vulpvibe records lapfox trax acid intravenous hamilton electronic backfire
BPM: 190,4
Filesize: 2265kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,47 stars, 37 notes)
  2. Hard (4,89 stars, 203 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 266 notes)
  4. Normal (3,65 stars, 90 notes)
  5. Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 590 notes)
Download: Adraen + Renard - Punk Anthem Track
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Well, it's #9. This map dedicated to one girl, who showed me what is love.
Yes, this map for you, Henna </3
Lyrics
you speak of unhappiness
you speak of the same old bleeding heart
you speak of wanting attention
and now we're back at the start
you speak of caring deeply
you speak of desiring only me
you speak of everything you want
just stop and listen to me speak

can i take you where you want to go
can i take you where you want to be
and will you let me hold your hand
and will you let me set you free
can i take you way up to the sky
can i take you deep below the sea
will you let me show you
a million miles from where you used to be

Ah, yes. Taiko Oni was made by Backfire. o/
IceBeam
what is love?
Niva
Hya Aleks ~ :3

Already playtested in-game as you requested. But you also asked me to mod the mapset, so...

[General]
-> SliderMultiplier in Normal is 0.79999999999999 lol

[Normal]
00:29:055 (6,7) - Curve it a bit like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/159782 looks neater imo. What's more, it gives more space between these two and (1) .
00:53:320 (1) - Add sliderwhistle here?
01:03:404 (1) - 3/4 slider sounds better here imo
01:14:433 (2) - Two grids right for the middle waypoint?
01:21:051 (2) - Uh... I can hear a loud background drum here, and it's weird for me to use whistle in such condition. Clap better imo

[Hard]
...uh, you saw me SS'ing this already, I'll just post the log then. Don't wanna mod anything, this is already good as is ><
SPOILER
16:18 <Aleks719> : Are yoo free now? :3
16:18 <Nivalis> : yep :D
16:19 <Aleks719> : Can you test my map(1 diff only)? >~<
16:19 <Nivalis> : sure :D
16:19 *Aleks719 is listening to (Adraen + Renard - Punk Anthem Track)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37709]
16:19 <Aleks719> : thanks ><
16:19 <Nivalis> : oh ok, downloading
16:20 <Aleks719> : Hard for testing ofc
16:20 <Nivalis> : for someone?
16:21 <Aleks719> : em?
16:21 <Nivalis> : ...in the description orz
16:22 <Aleks719> : ah, yes
16:22 <Aleks719> : -////-
16:22 <Nivalis> : SS o.o
16:23 <Aleks719> : like a pro
16:23 <Aleks719> : but : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/159680
16:23 <Nivalis> : ... I don't even recognize this is 190 BPM @_@
16:23 <Aleks719> : OO
16:24 <Nivalis> : o.o ?
16:24 <Nivalis> : well
16:24 <Aleks719> : So, i guess it playable at least)
16:24 <Nivalis> : the song's rhythm is guessable by me
16:24 <Aleks719> : double claps?
16:25 <Nivalis> : btw
16:25 <Nivalis> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/159681
16:25 <Nivalis> : no... I mean
16:25 <Aleks719> : lol
16:25 <Nivalis> : when will be triplets and when will be stacks, I could guess it
16:26 <Nivalis> : uh... let me try HR
16:27 <Nivalis> : looks possible :D
16:27 <Aleks719> : but looks like insane ><
16:27 <Nivalis> : btw
16:27 <Nivalis> : 01:06:871 (4)
16:28 <Nivalis> : for a moment I thought I did a miss here :D
16:28 <Aleks719> : high jump?
16:28 <Nivalis> : no, maybe just something's wrong with my eyes while playing back then
16:29 <Nivalis> : others are perfect (:
16:29 <Aleks719> : Thank you :P

Easy is unfinished? Also BG is quite random imo, go find something love-ish xD

And...

IceBeam wrote:

what is love?
A feeling I can't describe >< (seriously)
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Nivalis wrote:

Hya Aleks ~ :3 yay, Nivalis o/

[General]
-> SliderMultiplier in Normal is 0.79999999999999 lol 10^-14 changes nothing, but ok, fixed

[Normal]
00:29:055 (6,7) - Curve it a bit like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/159782 looks neater imo. What's more, it gives more space between these two and (1) . fixed
00:53:320 (1) - Add sliderwhistle here? added 2 whistles here
01:03:404 (1) - 3/4 slider sounds better here imo fixed + hitsounds fixed too
01:14:433 (2) - Two grids right for the middle waypoint? nazi, but ok
01:21:051 (2) - Uh... I can hear a loud background drum here, and it's weird for me to use whistle in such condition. Clap better imo I tried to use clap here, but it sounds random. so, i left whistle

[Hard]
...uh, you saw me SS'ing this already, I'll just post the log then. Don't wanna mod anything, this is already good as is >< yes

Easy is unfinished? Also BG is quite random imo, go find something love-ish xD Easy in process, I thought about BG ~hour :<

And...

IceBeam wrote:

what is love?
A feeling I can't describe >< (seriously)
Love is a challenge...
Thank you or mod o/
Backfire
Aleks! Can I make a taiko when I get back? D:
TicClick
Easy
00:34:570 (3) - кончается на 1/2 раньше?
01:00:568 (1) - поразительно, симметричная звезда (центральную нижнюю точку, если ну очень хочется, можно поднять на одну точку (не клетку) вверх, чтобы при зеркалировании вообще не двигалась)
01:09:864 (3) - 1/2 назад
01:16:797 (1) - 1/2 вперёд? Я, видимо, не понимаю твоей логики

Hard
01:10:022 (3,4) - 1/3, трёх рипитов каждому хватит

А больше я ничего и не нашёл, можешь ничего и не давать, хе-хе. Красивая карта.

И стандартное предупреждение про пустые 20% в начале. Даже 22.
Topic Starter
Aleks719

TicClick wrote:

Easy
00:34:570 (3) - кончается на 1/2 раньше? да, изи с 1/2 такой гемор
01:00:568 (1) - поразительно, симметричная звезда (центральную нижнюю точку, если ну очень хочется, можно поднять на одну точку (не клетку) вверх, чтобы при зеркалировании вообще не двигалась) поправил в блокноте :D
01:09:864 (3) - 1/2 назад нет пожалуй
01:16:797 (1) - 1/2 вперёд? Я, видимо, не понимаю твоей логики финиши на красных тиках, мапал под финиши.

Hard
01:10:022 (3,4) - 1/3, трёх рипитов каждому хватит точно, 1/3, переправил.
И везде в подобных местах поправил, хорошо поймал.

А больше я ничего и не нашёл, можешь ничего и не давать, хе-хе. Красивая карта.

И стандартное предупреждение про пустые 20% в начале. Даже 22. знаю, но из песни слов не выкинешь ;D
Спасибо о/
Jako87
Great map, good song, fun to play and no flaws.
where is the star button? i can't give a star? :o
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Jako87 wrote:

Great map, good song, fun to play and no flaws.
where is the star button? i can't give a star? :o
>__<
Ehhh, new rating system... you can give stars only for your kd points :S
Anyway, thanks for your support o/

@ Backfire : catch me in-game

Ready for mods :}
Backfire
Here's my taiko. Im gonna get some people to hopefully mod this. But I dont think it will need very many mods.

Download: Adraen + Renard - Punk Anthem Track (Aleks719) [Backfire's Taiko Oni].osu
OzzyOzrock
[Taiko]
- You can't have the kiai like it is now. Choose one of these.
1. Whole mapped part is kiai.
2. Pick two sections you want to have the kiai
- If this one, probably the first and third. http://puu.sh/70IB
3. Don't use kiai at all.

00:24:801 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - kdkdddk plays better
00:26:061 (54,55,56,57,58) - Use a pattern than begins with don here.
00:32:049 (105,106,107,108) - No doubles here, only place anyways.

Some stuff would sound sound and look better if kkd and ddk were used instead but this is still good.
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
Backfire
Fixed kiai. Fixed those other things. :D:D:D:D

Download: Adraen + Renard - Punk Anthem Track (Aleks719) [Backfire's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Aleks719
Updated~

Reminder for Backfire : you fixed old version of diff with wrong stats and without your nickname. In next time fix latest version of diff please :P
Backfire
Oh woops. Sorry about that.
Backfire
Aleks, change the diff name to Taiko Oni.

My name looks very unfitting with the names.

I'll get a bg.
NoHitter
Easy
00:29:528 (2) - Move 1/2 back.
00:35:988 (4) - New combo.
00:37:879 (3) - IMO move 1/2 forward to follow vocals instead.
00:44:181 (3) - The slider should have ended at 00:45:442 to match with the music. IDK how to fix and keep pattern at the same time.
00:50:484 (1) - Slider should end at 00:53:005.
01:09:864 (3) - Move 1/2 back then extend 1/2.
01:16:954 (1) - Same as above.

Normal
00:50:484 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency with other combos.
00:50:799 (5) - New combo for consistency with other combos.
01:03:404 (1,2,3) - The sudden change to the offbeat sounds weird.
01:05:925 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
01:27:353 (4) - Move 1/2 back.

Backfire's Taiko Oni
Aren't you supposed to have kiai and NOT have fountains?
IMO kiai should be at 01:00:568 to 01:20:736.
00:29:685 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - IMO repeat this 1/3 pattern more than twice throughout the song.

Hard
Not too comfortable about those slider-end spacing, but w/e.
00:20:548 (2) - Space this further.
00:58:363 (1) - Don't anti-jump this.
01:10:022 (3,4,5) - IMO use only notes like the previous pattern.
Backfire
NoHitter - Its allowed to have 3 kiais, period. No matter how small. But I agree with you. Aleks can do that ;w;

And I changed that pattern so there would be some variety in the second half. Both of them fit in the song D:
Topic Starter
Aleks719

NoHItter wrote:

Easy
00:29:528 (2) - Move 1/2 back.
00:35:988 (4) - New combo.
00:37:879 (3) - IMO move 1/2 forward to follow vocals instead.
00:44:181 (3) - The slider should have ended at 00:45:442 to match with the music. IDK how to fix and keep pattern at the same time.
00:50:484 (1) - Slider should end at 00:53:005.
01:09:864 (3) - Move 1/2 back then extend 1/2.
01:16:954 (1) - Same as above.

Normal
00:50:484 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency with other combos.
00:50:799 (5) - New combo for consistency with other combos.
01:03:404 (1,2,3) - The sudden change to the offbeat sounds weird.
01:05:925 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
01:27:353 (4) - Move 1/2 back.


Hard
Not too comfortable about those slider-end spacing, but w/e.
00:20:548 (2) - Space this further.
00:58:363 (1) - Don't anti-jump this.
01:10:022 (3,4,5) - IMO use only notes like the previous pattern.
Fixed all except red lines, thank you o/

Taiko : renamed, 3rd kiai added
YTYuyu
Sorry about the delay.

Easy:
00:54:265(3) - I recommend that u stack this on the end of the slider at 00:53:005
00:55:526(4) - x: 208 y:180
00:56:156(1) - x: 320 y:116
00:58:677(2,3) - x:64 y:240

Normal:
No problems here

Hard:
No problems here

This is the best i can do. GL :D
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Byakugan249 wrote:

Easy:
00:54:265(3) - I recommend that u stack this on the end of the slider at 00:53:005 Ah, i can't because of spacing and symmetry
00:55:526(4) - x: 208 y:180 ^
00:56:156(1) - x: 320 y:116 ^
00:58:677(2,3) - x:64 y:240 ^
Sorry, nothing changed from your suggestions :<
OzzyOzrock

Backfire wrote:

NoHitter - Its allowed to have 3 kiais, period. No matter how small.
this is wrong, for future reference
Luvdic
General:

It seems that offset needs a bit adjusting. I got an offset of 52, but it might just be me, so feel free to ignore me until someone else comments something about your timing :>


Hard:

01:28:299 (1) - Move 1/4 later, and add a note at 01:28:299. Same for the normal diff.

And I guess that this is all, no need for kds
Backfire

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Backfire wrote:

NoHitter - Its allowed to have 3 kiais, period. No matter how small.
this is wrong, for future reference
Uhhhhh its fine if I keep thinking it though :c
Topic Starter
Aleks719

ErufenRito wrote:

General:

It seems that offset needs a bit adjusting. I got an offset of 52, but it might just be me, so feel free to ignore me until someone else comments something about your timing :> Uh-oh, i watched how Nivalis made SS on Hard with the 1st try... So, i'll wait another opinions :S


Hard:

01:28:299 (1) - Move 1/4 later, and add a note at 01:28:299. Same for the normal diff. fixed in both diffs

And I guess that this is all, no need for kds
Thank you o/
Kurai
Little mod via IRC

Log
48 <KuraiPettan> : First, can you increase the hitsound volume by 15% ? They are hard to hear IMO
17:48 <Aleks719> : let's seee
17:49 <KuraiPettan> : In hard :
17:49 <Aleks719> : well, i'll increase
17:50 <KuraiPettan> : 00:24:014 (4) - I think this slider should start 1/2 earlier, otherwise it feels late
17:50 <KuraiPettan> : that's all ahah
17:51 <Aleks719> : true, i'll remap a bit this place
17:51 <Aleks719> : 3 1/2sliders plaued not perfect for me
17:51 <Aleks719> : *y

Bubbled ~
Backfire
Gogo rank
Kawayi Rika
GOGO~RANKED~

Aleks719 Fither~ ;)
Colin Hou
lol I'm just about to bubble this but find it's already there.

anyway good job~
Topic Starter
Aleks719
Kurai, thank you for bubble Orz

Backfire, Kawayi Rika i'll try, thanks guys o/
Also... fither? what is it? father, fisher or maybe fitter, lol?

Colin, awww >///< Thank you for support too Orz

... Waiting for BAT ...
Mismagius
How didn't I see this earlier.


Get this ranked as soon as possible :<
Backfire
Come onnnnnn
RandomJibberish
hurr

General
I'd suggest tick rate 2 on all difficulties
There is an enormous gap between Hard and Normal - I'd consider hard an insane and normal verging on easy, lol. I'd strongly suggest adding (or getting) an inbetween diff.

Hard
00:29:685 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The sudden 1/3 rhythm caught me off guard on the first couple plays. Maybe replace the first few notes with a repeating slider similar to this to make it a little more readable?


Otherwise looking fabulous.
Topic Starter
Aleks719

RandomJibberish wrote:

hurr

General
I'd suggest tick rate 2 on all difficulties questionable for me, but fixed
There is an enormous gap between Hard and Normal - I'd consider hard an insane and normal verging on easy, lol. I'd strongly suggest adding (or getting) an inbetween diff. grrrr

Hard
00:29:685 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The sudden 1/3 rhythm caught me off guard on the first couple plays. Maybe replace the first few notes with a repeating slider similar to this to make it a little more readable? not sure that it will help to read, but fine

Otherwise looking fabulous.
Updated :S

gogo graveyard
Kurai

RandomJibberish wrote:

There is an enormous gap between Hard and Normal - I'd consider hard an insane and normal verging on easy, lol. I'd strongly suggest adding (or getting) an inbetween diff.
According to me, there isn't such a huge gap between normal and hard (hard doesn't have lot of jumps and streams as a insane could have and normal looks like a normal+ to me). Consequently, I think it's fine like that.
However, we surely need more opinions about this.
IceBeam
I think it's balanced enough

hard isn't insane at all,it's just a high bpm song :/
nimi
little irc mod~
part of the log
18:19 <Aleks719> : Yo, Wiinter~ Do you want to get your 200th kd? From me! ofc you want, isn't it? :D
18:25 <Wiinter> : lol
18:25 <Wiinter> : that was a nice way to ask for a mod, haha
18:26 <Aleks719> : So... Are you taking this challenge(request)? :D
18:27 <Wiinter> : yea, sure ^^
18:27 <Wiinter> : just a sec, i'm on the phone atm
18:27 <Aleks719> : ofc, np
18:29 <Wiinter> : kk link me
18:29 *Aleks719 is listening to (Adraen + Renard - Punk Anthem Track)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37709]
18:30 <Aleks719> : Especially Hard diff
18:30 <Aleks719> : others were here before popping bubble
18:30 <Wiinter> : lool
18:30 <Wiinter> : sorry, i just remembered something, haha
18:31 <Aleks719> : W-what? ><
18:31 <Wiinter> : i got a dm on twitter today saying that the love of my life's name was alex and i tought "i don't even know any alex".. and here you are with a similar
18:31 <Wiinter> : name D:
18:31 <Wiinter> : yeah that was random. but anyways, haha
18:31 <Wiinter> : mind if it's irc mod?
18:32 <Aleks719> : lol'd, who knows :D
18:32 <Aleks719> : as yuo want
18:32 <Aleks719> : *you
18:32 <Aleks719> : no matter for me
18:32 <Wiinter> : oki :D better for me, lazy to make mod posts
18:33 <Aleks719> : B)
18:37 <Wiinter> : stupid one who popped the bubble
18:37 <Aleks719> : RJ o/
18:38 <Wiinter> : mmk
18:38 <Wiinter> : 00:39:927 (4) - maybe reverse it? follows the rest of the combo better imo
18:38 <Wiinter> : (hard diff)
18:39 <Aleks719> : yep, agree, but it will be copy of (2) :D
18:39 <Aleks719> : done anyway
18:39 <Wiinter> : 01:10:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same pattern as used before ;~; but i like it anyways, so
18:40 <Aleks719> : Yes, okay, will remap
18:40 <Wiinter> : 01:14:276 (4) - would look better without the red point here i guess.. but that's me being nazi XD it's ok like this
18:40 <Wiinter> : that's all i got for this diff
18:42 <Wiinter> : 01:20:736 (1) - that's pretty XD
18:42 <Aleks719> : >//<
18:42 <Wiinter> : gotta say that this easy diff surprised me o3o they're normally mapped using the white ticks mostly, and you used the red ones.. that's not a big problem
18:42 <Wiinter> : though, seems easy enough for me
18:43 <Aleks719> : yes, because of finishes
18:43 <Aleks719> : almost all place on red ticks
18:43 <Wiinter> : yeah..
18:43 <Wiinter> : mmk, normal diff
18:44 <Wiinter> : 00:45:757 (3) - maybe add new combo here to follow the "you speak" pattern used on the previous one?
18:44 <Aleks719> : yep, agree, too long
18:45 <Wiinter> : and this diff seems to be more like a normal+ but who actually cares about this Dx
18:46 <Aleks719> : Yes, these "pluses" are so uygly :<
18:46 <Aleks719> : *ugly
18:46 <Wiinter> : totally agree XD
18:50 <Aleks719> : well, any another suggestions?
18:50 <Wiinter> : sorry, my mom was here
18:50 <Wiinter> : and nope.
Kurai
Ok, Rechecked, IRC modded, don't need to kudo

I can rebubble now :)
Mismagius
1 month old bubble

IceBeam
fix last kiai offsets in all standard diffs
it should be 80736

[Insane]
00:38:983 (6,1) - disscuded via irc,fix it please
00:52:533 (9,10) - stack under previous notes

Edit: ranked
Kurai
\:D/
Kawayi Rika
Congrz ~ Aleks ~ :)
Colin Hou
lol I thought this has been ranked long time ago

nice choice for the first rank beam
Backfire
CAN I TAKE YOU BACK
Natteke
Not bad, Aleks, you certainly have potential
OzzyOzrock
\:3/
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