1. Hard (4,81 stars, 168 notes)
2. LRJ's Insane (4,84 stars, 198 notes)
3. Normal (2,96 stars, 79 notes)

Mustaash wrote:

Here's my mod

[Hard]

00:40:622 - Add a note There is nothing mappable here D:

[Normal]

Drain +1? Nope

00:02:771 (4) - New Combo
00:03:052 (1) - Remove new combo Nope, it follow the music
00:27:444 (3,4) - I think it's a bit confusing by the spacing used before But it's the proper spacing, I don't see how this could be better
00:36:416 (3) - New Combo ok

Nice Map.

Mustaash wrote:

[LRJ's]

00:01:369 (1) - Remove New Combo? nope
00:03:612 (1) - ^ ^
00:12:585 (1) - ^ ^
00:12:585 (1) - Grid +1Left Nope , it's fine here.(Grid Snap 4)
00:15:949 (4) - Clap Nope , le clap je devais le mettre au milieu du slider (3) , mais c'était pas vraiment possible =w= Je garde ça de façon régulière , sinon ça cassera tout
00:55:482 (1) - Remove New Combo Nah , je trouve que ça le fait assez bien. quoique...

Magicphoenix wrote:

[LRJ's Insane]

*00:08:940 (6) - I recommend a New Combo here since you've only used short combos on the start as well. Also a good sign to announce stream&sound change Nope ~
*00:29:407 - Make the New Combo like this ? :

SPOILER

looks funny and actually fits to the song Okay , fixed ~
*00:55:482 (1) - Remove New Combo or use New Combo for every reverse slider (like 01:03:332 - ) meh. 'k fixed

Magicphoenix wrote:

[Hard]

*00:40:762 - Consider adding a note here. (7) is on that "boing" sound as well and leaving the other empty seems a bit strange when playing. Yeah, nice suggestion.


That's all. Good luck on rank Kurai :3

Aleks719 wrote:

LRJ's Insane
00:02:911 (2) - x:440, y:56 nazi, yes :S
start of the diff sound very boring, try to use whistles, as example:
00:02:070 (3) - add whistles to the start, end okay
00:04:313 (3) - ^ ^
00:06:557 (4) - add whistle to the start okay
00:06:977 (5) - add whistle okay
00:32:491 (1) - imo, remove nc okay
00:42:164 (7) - no, this sounds and fits better :

nope ~
00:47:351 (6) - ^ better :

^ seems good here.

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,KuraiPettan~~ (M4M)

General
-Why normal has a different combo colour ? Wow, fixed

Normal
00:36:416 (1,2) - This rhythem is really hard to beginners,espeacially you don't have an easy diff in your map.
00:37:538 (1,2) - ^ (Use a slider instead?) It's fine D:

Hard
00:02:071 (3) - move to (404,128)
00:02:211 (4) - ^ (436, 88)
00:09:220 (6) - more curved ?

00:29:127 (5) - new combo
Everything fixed

Here's my star~

Go and rank ~

S h i o n wrote:

LRJ's Insane
00:58:706 (2) - delete this note and it may sound better~

1. 00:15:529 (3) - I didn't like this slider because you were mapping the drum hitsounds around here, which made you miss an important moment! Especially because you didn't map the melody exclusively here; which is 00:15:669. Here you have a drum in the music, along with the current slider end. You should probably change this somehow so you have both 00:15:669 and 00:15:809 mapped and put claps on them. Would sound damn awesome. Something like this perhaps?
2. 00:51:416 (6) - Similarly to the above, this slider isn't that great either. You missed both the drum and the melody. You should definitely map the white tick this slider is going over.
3. 00:57:444 (4) - Move this note to 00:57:304? Sounds better.

1. 00:39:781 (6,7) - Although seeing as you have a similar case at 00:44:968 (1), maybe you could do the same here. This still makes the note 00:40:762 (1) "extra" and would probably be the best to remove it. But if you really want it, I suggest that you reverse those 2 patterns, meaning you have a slider the first time and then 2 circles the 2nd time, this gives a more progressive feeling and I think it's a good idea.

1. 00:51:557 - Add a note with a clap?
2. 01:00:529 - ^

lolcubes wrote:

[LRJ's Insane]:

1. 00:15:529 (3) - I didn't like this slider because you were mapping the drum hitsounds around here, which made you miss an important moment! Especially because you didn't map the melody exclusively here; which is 00:15:669. Here you have a drum in the music, along with the current slider end. You should probably change this somehow so you have both 00:15:669 and 00:15:809 mapped and put claps on them. Would sound damn awesome. Something like this perhaps? orz , fixed ~
2. 00:51:416 (6) - Similarly to the above, this slider isn't that great either. You missed both the drum and the melody. You should definitely map the white tick this slider is going over. I think it sounds fine :<
3. 00:57:444 (4) - Move this note to 00:57:304? Sounds better. done , stacked with the previous slider

lolcubes wrote:

Hello there!
What a nice map, no errors, but there are suggestions!

[Hard]:

1. 00:39:781 (6,7) - Although seeing as you have a similar case at 00:44:968 (1), maybe you could do the same here. This still makes the note 00:40:762 (1) "extra" and would probably be the best to remove it. But if you really want it, I suggest that you reverse those 2 patterns, meaning you have a slider the first time and then 2 circles the 2nd time, this gives a more progressive feeling and I think it's a good idea.

[Normal]:

1. 00:51:557 - Add a note with a clap?
2. 01:00:529 - ^

Yep, short, simple, plays good.