1. C10H12N2O - 4Key (3.3 stars, 871 notes)
2. C2H2 - 4Key (1.61 stars, 363 notes)
3. C6H10Cl4 - 4Key (2.42 stars, 622 notes)
4. H2O - 4Key (0.85 stars, 164 notes)

Envory wrote:

Hi Fran! - please don't shorten my nickname ;-; I'm going to change it when I get my supp
Ok lets go..


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Pls check ur AiMod

C6H10Cl14

00:19:091 (19091|3,19091|2,19267|0,19267|1) - for this i've a suggest > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9026074 - ok!
00:30:562 (30562|0,30562|1) - Those kick sound didn't too loud so del that note at col 2 - ok!
02:14:591 (134591|3) - move to col 3 for jack layering.. ( more suitable) - I don't quite get what do you mean by "more suitable" but in my opinion it plays better when it's where it is.

C10H12N20

00:15:032 (15032|0) - this ln move to col 2 - That placement is not random, I wanted to make stress on this finger without making it this jack/slider shield thing. Yes I know the sound doesn't end there.
01:32:679 - add 1 note at col 1 - ok!
01:38:326 - add 2 notes? - Forgot about this sound :p Done!
02:02:503 (122503|3,122547|2,122591|1,122635|0,122679|3,122723|2,122767|1,122812|0,122856|3,122900|2,122944|1,123032|3,123032|0,123032|1) - ctrl+h for finger balancing - ok!
02:14:591 (134591|3) - move to col 3 for jack layering.. (more suitable) - I don't quite get what do you mean by "more suitable" but in my opinion it plays better when it's where it is.

Ok GL~

[ Scarlet Red ] wrote:

Alright! From my NM queue, let's see what this got.

C10H12N2O

1. 00:21:120 (21120|2,21209|3,21297|2,21385|3) - I'd personally change this section to something like this because it gives it more of a feel for the music. - ok
2. 00:24:385 (24385|1,24473|2,24562|0,24650|3,24738|0,24826|3) - I'd turn these into 1/8th stutter holds... I guess that's what they're called I have no idea. - I already had players complaining that such short lns just melt your accuracy so i decided to remove them.
3. 00:26:503 (26503|1,26767|3,26856|0) - I think a way better inverse LN section would work here and look neater as well! Try something like this. - ok
4. 00:29:767 (29767|2) - Turn this into a hold that reaches into the 1 2 4 hand. (it's a 1/4th hold) - ok
5. 00:30:385 (30385|3,30385|1) - Take this section and turn it into this. - ok
6. 00:31:091 (31091|3,31267|1,31267|2,31267|0) - You can add a triplet from the first note into the hand because that's what the music shows. - I hope that i did this right
7. 00:35:797 (35797|0,35878|1,35966|2,36010|0) - I'd turn these into short holds but I can see you added a hold at the end to signify the high pitch so this isn't too bad. - same as above, lns melt accuracy
8. 00:43:444 (43444|3,43620|2,43797|0,43885|1) - You can also make this an interesting LN section. Experiment with this one similar to the last one (at 00:26:503). - ok
9. 00:47:326 (47326|0,47326|1) - I don't think this jump is needed. Keep it a simple note. - ok
10. 00:51:209 (51209|1) - I would add a second hold here (and every other section like this that has a higher pitched synth). Just my opinion on how to go about emphasizing that different pitch. - I think it would play really weird with this ln trill.
11. 00:51:826 (51826|2,51914|0,52091|3,52267|2,52356|1) - Could make this LN section a bit better as well (like the previous two times). - ok
12. 00:57:562 (57562|1,57738|0,57914|2,57914|3) - Make this LN section more wavy because that's the vibe I get from this part of the song. - ok
13. 00:58:356 (58356|3,58422|2,58488|1,58554|3,58620|2) - This section actually has sounds at 00:58:267 so I'd start the section there. - ok
14. 01:00:385 (60385|3,60562|2,60606|1) - Have a drop off from 2, then 3, then 4. (like make 2 end first,then 3 shortly after, and finally 4. Gives it a bit of a wavy effect) - ok
15. 01:02:503 (62503|2) - Add a second note at the beginning of this hold. - ok
16. 01:06:253 (66253|0) - Turn this section into something like this. - This would be hard to play with sv meaning i'd have to remove it whereas i don't feel like it's necessairy
17. 01:54:032 (114032|1,114209|3,114297|2,114385|0) - You could add more of a wave-like affect here as well. <-- I guess I wont' explain to fix every LN section but try to fix these up and make these reflect more on the song. - Is this really necessairy? If so then explain what do you mean by wave-like :/
18. 02:06:120 (126120|3,126187|2,126253|0,126319|3,126385|1) - Make these 1/8th holds. - Again, much harder to acc.
19. 02:39:032 (159032|2,159120|1,159209|0,159297|2,159385|1,159473|0,159562|2,159650|1,159738|0,159826|2,159914|1,160003|0,160091|2,160179|1,160267|0,160356|2) - The sounds of this section are very similar to the section in 2:23:238 but they're a different length. I'd try to keep that consistent. - These are slower and so I feel like this is the best thing to do.

C6H10C14

1. 00:20:679 (20679|2) - This section (and sections like it) because of it being a "Hard" or "HD" difficulty I suppose, it's not supposed to be too simplistic. You could add another hold during the first to still kind of signify the wave sound. Like this - Uhh maybe however I'd like to leave that triple chord there and I think of the wobble as a progression of sound and not it's sudden new trait.
2. 00:32:944 (32944|0,33209|3) - I'd say turn these into short burst holds. - These don't feel like they ought to be lns at all nor bursts. I want to keep this diff simple even for hard diff.
3. 00:41:414 (41414|3,41679|0) - These should be 1/4th size - One of them should
4. 01:04:444 (64444|0) - I'd say add another note on 4 here. To I guess signify the crash and end the section better. - This sound is quiet, I don't think it's necessairy.
5. 01:59:679 (119679|1,119856|0) - Change these to 1/4th instead. - I don't think it's a good idea, it'd be harder to acc.
6. 02:03:297 (123297|1,123297|1,123562|2) - Change both to 1/4th holds. - They don't sound like held sounds at all...
7. 02:11:414 (131414|2) - I don't like this being directly after the hold. Please think about fixing it. - ok
8. 02:11:767 (131767|0,132032|3) - Change to 1/4th - ok
9. 02:17:679 (137679|2,137679|0) - This jump also does not need to be there. - ok
10. 02:23:326 (143326|3,143326|3,143326|2) - You could probably add some notes in the empty section right after this note. - These sounds begin early coming in the way of jumps. It'd be harder to play for no real reason, I'll leave it as it is.

C2H2

1. 00:41:414 (41414|1,41679|2) - I'd shrink these holds down. - One of them
2. 01:01:620 (61620|3,61797|0) - Make these both jumps. 3 4, then 1 2. - These sounds are always mapped with a single note, I don't see a reason to suddenly break it there
3. 02:25:885 (145885|2,145973|1,146062|0,146150|3,146238|2) - I think you did too many notes here. I'd prefer it if there were notes only on the more emphasized beats. - ok

H2O

Yeah, I'm gonna be honest. I can't find anything wrong with this difficulty, good job. - Thanks

Overall, really fun chart and very interesting. I didn't find anything wrong with the SVs so imo you should leave them how they are (unless you know what could be fixed). Good luck with whatever you want to do with this!

1. You don't need to put Water Ethyne in the tags just because it's used as diffname for lower difficulty. Just delete them.
2. Can you tell me what contribution does Evening has here? Didn't seem like he did an Edit for Background or contributing a GD here. All you wrote in the Creator's word is that he has suggestions here (probably the SVs). Since he only has suggestions in this map (which we can call modding a difficulty) you should remove his name.