Hello dude, finally i'm arrived :3
[General]
Do you have any reference that stated Baby's Breath as artist name? based on official site at
http://www.tenshi-no-3p.com/product/cd01.php , it should be "Baby's breath"
OD for ez probably should be 6.5?
Make sure to delete the hitsound difficulty before having this map bubbled.
[EZ]
00:22:982 (22982|0,23811|0) - Kinda awkward having this LN as jack when the pitch is already quite different, probably make something like this?
http://puu.sh/BuWhY/42f0797553.png , i think it will be more structured and overall give emphasis towards pitch differences.
00:33:922 (33922|0,34087|1,34419|1,34750|1) - Probably makes it 3-1-1-1 instead? from structure perspective it will be better and not makes all the note at left side too.
00:39:557 (39557|4,39723|2) - a bit ambiguous in terms of structure, having 00:39:557 (39557|4) - at col 4 instead will be better.
00:45:192 (45192|3,45358|3) - I don't think these notes should be jacked because both hold a different sound. even at NM diff you didn't jack these sounds.
00:53:148 (53148|3,53314|4) - Try makes it col 5 and col 4 to makes it more flow with the overall structure?
00:59:115 - Add note here to maintain the consistency with the main beat you mapped at 00:59:612 (59612|3,59944|4) - ? while i know you probably do this for easier pattern at easy difficulty, but even at normal diff you already have much harder 3 1/2 jack notes there, so from spread perspective i find it more promising to map the sound here and also be more consistent with the prominent beat of the song. try at col 1 to make it easier for beginner to press.
00:59:944 (59944|4) - I find it better to turn this into LN to make the vocal that you mapped be more consistent.
01:03:756 (63756|1,64087|3,64419|0,64750|2,65082|4,65413|1,65745|3,66076|0,66408|2,66739|4,67071|1,67402|3,67734|0,68065|2,68397|4,68728|1,69060|3) - I'm sorry if this appear to be nazi, but even for beginner difficulty, i find it a bit too monotonous if you mapped it with same exact pattern for quite long time here, i expect you to variate it so that the difficulty doesn't being too monotonous.
01:11:712 - Try map this drum with 1/2 stream note instead of only single LN? because your NM has pure 1/4 stream, so the gap is too large if you only map this with single LN.
01:12:375 - Same here, you probably wanna variate it for same reason as above.
01:17:016 (77016|1,77181|1) - Move the jack to col 5? because i find that 01:17:016 (77016|1,77181|1,77347|0,77513|2) - very difficult to alternate for beginner player with how it stacked to the left hand, so having more balance here will do good.
[NM]
00:23:811 (23811|4) - The LN intentionally be the different length with EZ diff? based on what i looked at 00:51:159 - , it's probably intentional, but i wanna make sure since you make it the same length between NM and EZ at 00:22:485 - and 00:22:982 -
00:40:552 - Add note here for finish sound? since even at 00:41:049 - and 00:41:712 - you make it 1 LN+ 1 note.
00:47:513 (47513|0,47844|3,48176|4) - Since these 3 sounds are the same distinct clap sound, probably you can try make the trill concept based on those sounds as the momentum? What i mean is something like
http://puu.sh/BuWWe/cad9a99497.png 00:56:960 (56960|1) - Try move to col 3 to avoid a bit awkward trill at 00:56:960 (56960|1,57126|0,57292|1) -
01:19:668 - At here the pattern structure should be changed again i think? what i mean is that, at 01:17:679 - you use 1st concept, at 01:18:673 - you use 2nd concept, and at 01:19:668 - it should be 3rd concept to make the changing concept be consistently different. I will suggest something like this:
http://puu.sh/BuX2Z/fee4f42f19.jpg01:22:319 - A bit awkward you didn't map the roll drum here when you did it at 01:11:712 -
[HD]
00:11:214 (11214|1) - Probably can move to col 4 to differentiate the triple with the one at 00:11:049 - , because both have different sound.
00:33:756 - Actually it's fine to add the note here so the short stream can be hit more naturally imo.
00:36:408 (36408|0,36574|1,36739|2,37071|0,37237|1,37402|2) - Actually i think this shouldn't be at same column. While it's true both are having the same pitch, however at 00:38:397 - you mapped all the guitar at all different column. So to make it consistent, you should make it different column too here. I will suggest something like
http://puu.sh/BuXeY/96d167d1a9.png00:49:046 (49046|4,49087|3,49129|2) - These are wrong snaps, should be 1/6 snap.
01:12:706 - until 01:13:535 - I think you should make jack pattern here? otherwise it's kinda awkward and inconsistent with how you did in comparison with other section where you use the jack rather consistently.
01:17:016 - Pattern here are kinda odd because of how you made 01:17:264 (77264|4,77347|1) - , i will probably do something like
https://puu.sh/BuXnQ/2dfd33e702.png01:20:662 - I think this should at least be double, because you even made the clap sound into triple at 01:04:750 - , so having this suddenly single becoming really inconsistent.
01:20:993 - Just to confirming, the whole double here following vocal or instrument? because you seemed to mixed them with double for instrument for something like 01:21:656 - , and it makes the whole layering kinda confusing imo.
Okay, call me again when you already done.
