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Shimokawa Mikuni - Kohaku

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Topic Starter
Nymph
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月14日 at 10:37:55

Artist: Shimokawa Mikuni
Title: KOHAKU
Source: Grenadier ~Hohoemi no Senshi~
Tags: Okui Masami MAD opening Spice and Wolf Ookami to Kohaku Iro no Tabi RL.MADteam
BPM: 101
Filesize: 17733kb
Play Time: 04:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.4 stars, 409 notes)
  2. Normal (2.34 stars, 239 notes)
Download: Shimokawa Mikuni - KOHAKU
Download: Shimokawa Mikuni - KOHAKU (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Nymph's 13th map~
KOHAKU by Shimokawa Mikuni~
MAD of Spice and wolf~
MP3 source: Grenadier ~Hohoemi no Senshi~
thanks for Lucifer's big help~
Bobo_old
Hi

Modded on request.

BG must be 1024x768 pixels.

-Normal-

00:27:130 - Back 2 ticks.
00:28:021 - Add a note.
01:01:585 - The new combo should start here.
03:11:090 - Delete new combo.
03:24:754 - Vertical Flip.
04:09:308 - ^

-Hard-

00:25:051 - The new combo should start here.
01:30:100 - Delete new combo.
02:19:407 - New combo for the slider speed change.

OK that's about it~ :)
Nice map.

Topic Starter
Nymph

Bobo wrote:

Hi

Modded on request.

BG must be 1024x768 pixels. 800 600 is allowed too~

-Normal-

00:27:130 - Back 2 ticks.sorry X
00:28:021 - Add a note.X
01:01:585 - The new combo should start here.sorry I don't think so^^;
03:11:090 - Delete new combo.it is necessary imo~
03:24:754 - Vertical Flip.
04:09:308 - ^ I think they are fine~

-Hard-

00:25:051 - The new combo should start here. sorry don't think so=.=
01:30:100 - Delete new combo.still think it is necesary.
02:19:407 - New combo for the slider speed change.OK

OK that's about it~ :)
Nice map.


thanks~
Kert
[General]
Tags: Spicy Wolf? I am not sure, but the name of anime is Spice and Wolf, so maybe fix to Spice?

[Hard]
00:47:922 (1) - The end point sounds a bit weird, can you shorten it to 00:48:219?
But I have a better idea to make it like this http://puu.sh/6oWJ
01:27:724 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Can you remap it so they won't be placed on top of each other in the center?
I am sure you can, and I believe it will be better in both terms: playabilty and look
01:41:387 (1) - Shorten this too? To 01:41:684
02:06:338 (1) - Same suggestion
02:29:506 (4,5,6) - Sounds not really good for me :< Unfortunately I can't think of anything, other then deleting the slider and the circle after and adding 2 circles at 02:30:397 and at 02:30:991
03:05:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The circles on top are a bit too high I think, I suggest remaking this pattern and moving it down a little
03:11:090 (2,3,4) - I suggest unstacking them from (1) and placing them as not a stack somewhere else
03:12:279 (x) - Maybe add a circle or a slider ending at this time.. I dunno
03:21:189 (x) - I think a circle here will fit well
03:21:486 (x) - With this one
03:55:051 (1) - The circles/sliders have smaller spacing and almost overlap in not a good way I think :I Can you increase it a little, so they won't touch each other?

[Normal]
03:12:279 (x) - Add a circle here?
03:21:189 (x) - ^
03:55:051 (1) - Shorten it to 03:59:803 and put a circle at 04:00:397
04:03:962 (1) - Remove nc
04:04:556 (2) - Add it here?

That's all. Decent map with a good song~
I suggest to work on patterns and slider shapes more to spice up your maps though
Topic Starter
Nymph

CracK wrote:

[General]
Tags: Spicy Wolf? I am not sure, but the name of anime is Spice and Wolf, so maybe fix to Spice? Oops..I can search both of these 2 names on internet... I will add both of them into tags.

[Hard]
00:47:922 (1) - The end point sounds a bit weird, can you shorten it to 00:48:219? Actually I like mine better~sorry
But I have a better idea to make it like this http://puu.sh/6oWJ
01:27:724 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Can you remap it so they won't be placed on top of each other in the center?
I am sure you can, and I believe it will be better in both terms: playabilty and look ...sorry but this is on purpose....I think it played pretty well...
01:41:387 (1) - Shorten this too? To 01:41:684 nah I want to keep it.
02:06:338 (1) - Same suggestion same.
02:29:506 (4,5,6) - Sounds not really good for me :< Unfortunately I can't think of anything, other then deleting the slider and the circle after and adding 2 circles at 02:30:397 and at 02:30:991 actually I think it is good..the kick sliders are comfort for me=.=
03:05:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The circles on top are a bit too high I think, I suggest remaking this pattern and moving it down a little yeah ok
03:11:090 (2,3,4) - I suggest unstacking them from (1) and placing them as not a stack somewhere else No this is on purpose.
03:12:279 (x) - Maybe add a circle or a slider ending at this time.. I dunno nah I really don't think so..
03:21:189 (x) - I think a circle here will fit well yeah good idea.
03:21:486 (x) - With this one no that is too much..
03:55:051 (1) - The circles/sliders have smaller spacing and almost overlap in not a good way I think :I Can you increase it a little, so they won't touch each other? nah I think it is pretty easy to read ^^

[Normal]
03:12:279 (x) - Add a circle here? nah
03:21:189 (x) - ^actually I don't want to add it on normal~
03:55:051 (1) - Shorten it to 03:59:803 and put a circle at 04:00:397 nah..
04:03:962 (1) - Remove nc
04:04:556 (2) - Add it here? nah...

That's all. Decent map with a good song~
I suggest to work on patterns and slider shapes more to spice up your maps though

thanks~
Neptunus
NOR
03:11:090 (1) - 这里的NC是为啥啊?
04:09:308 (1) - 这个也是,然而相应的,在hard里面结尾的风格没有NC04:08:120 (6) -
Hard里面也有几个
HARD
02:19:259 (3) - 建议去掉,无对应拍子或拍子不明显,无vocal对应
03:21:189 (1,1,2,3,4) - 关于这几个的NC也是,属于一段歌词


仅仅就是建议了,尼木弗的图挑不出啥毛病 :roll:
Topic Starter
Nymph

Neptunus wrote:

NOR
03:11:090 (1) - 这里的NC是为啥啊?突显一分之一重叠用..
04:09:308 (1) - 这个也是,然而相应的,在hard里面结尾的风格没有NC04:08:120 (6) - 因为HARD是SPINNER结尾 这个是重音我就加了个
Hard里面也有几个
HARD
02:19:259 (3) - 建议去掉,无对应拍子或拍子不明显,无vocal对应 嗯 这个是后改的 去掉吧
03:21:189 (1,1,2,3,4) - 关于这几个的NC也是,属于一段歌词 第一个重音是单独的而且这样的STACK 用一个NC比较好


仅仅就是建议了,尼木弗的图挑不出啥毛病 :roll:
谢了~
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[Normal]
00:51:783 (4) - spacing.
01:01:585 (3) - newcombo
02:58:021 (3) - 旋转个几十度吧。。和(2)近180°不怎么好看
04:02:180 (4) - spacing


[Hard]
00:46:734 (8) - ctrl+r 然后再排下位置
01:02:774 (x) - 要不要加note? 总感觉缺了点..
01:08:120 (3) - 同ctrl+r
-------------------------------------------------
妮姆芙神mapper \:D/
Topic Starter
Nymph

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Normal]
00:51:783 (4) - spacing.fixed
01:01:585 (3) - newcombo 感觉没必要
02:58:021 (3) - 旋转个几十度吧。。和(2)近180°不怎么好看 ..就这样吧 咋弄都不太好看
04:02:180 (4) - spacing fixed


[Hard]
00:46:734 (8) - ctrl+r 然后再排下位置
01:02:774 (x) - 要不要加note? 总感觉缺了点..
01:08:120 (3) - 同ctrl+r 这几个就算啦 感觉现在的SPACING就行 那里加NOTE就太紧了
-------------------------------------------------
妮姆芙神mapper \:D/

BAKA雪 =A=
JoJo
我来坑爹 XD

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. 狼与香辛料不是source?同人还是什么。。。@.@ 晕了这漫还没补我什么都不知道(逃)。。。
[Hard]
  1. 00:47:922 (1) - 为什么在蓝线上结束呢o.o 红线上有vocal呢。02:06:338 (1) as well.
  2. 01:25:348 (4) - New combo ?
  3. 02:43:764 (4) - ……^
  4. 02:57:427 (4) - 木哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈,终于能写个不扯淡的东西了。这个没叠好呢 XD
  5. 03:52:674 (4) - New combo .... 吗 ?
  6. OMG几乎全程DS啊 这也忒善良了= =
[Normal]
  1. 没啥好说的。。。
Holy shit. 这mod毛啊毫无吐槽点啊= =
Star for kami map.
Topic Starter
Nymph

JoJo wrote:

我来坑爹 XD

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. 狼与香辛料不是source?同人还是什么。。。@.@ 晕了这漫还没补我什么都不知道(逃)。。。
..MAD video是有关萌狼的..所以只能进TAG..歌曲不是萌狼

[Hard]
  1. 00:47:922 (1) - 为什么在蓝线上结束呢o.o 红线上有vocal呢。02:06:338 (1) as well.这个节奏故意的 为了紧跟SLIDER
  2. 01:25:348 (4) - New combo ?
  3. 02:43:764 (4) - ……^
  4. 02:57:427 (4) - 木哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈,终于能写个不扯淡的东西了。这个没叠好呢 XD 噗 重新叠了一下
  5. 03:52:674 (4) - New combo .... 吗 ? = =几个NC都没改 感觉没必要
  6. OMG几乎全程DS啊 这也忒善良了= =
[Normal]
  1. 没啥好说的。。。
Holy shit. 这mod毛啊毫无吐槽点啊= =
Star for kami map.
快赶黄初音萌了..
net45291
As per your Request

Nymph Chan >w< ~!

If this Mod not helpful , Don't KUDOS
General

  1. Nothing

Normal


  1. 00:26:833 (x) - Add Note ?
  2. 00:30:694 (3) - New Combo
    00:34:853 (4) - ^
    00:44:952 (3) - ^
  3. 00:52:972 (x) - Add Note ? Orz
  4. 00:59:209 (1) - Finish ?
  5. 01:11:981 (4) - New Combo
    02:53:269 (3) - ^
    02:58:021 (3) - ^
    03:02:774 (3) - ^
    04:06:338 (4) - ^
Hard

  1. 00:59:209 (5) - Finish ?
  2. 04:08:269 (1) - Sound Change to 5 %

Interesting Map >w<//~

Have a star ~!
Topic Starter
Nymph

net45291 wrote:

As per your Request

Nymph Chan >w< ~! hiyo~

If this Mod not helpful , Don't KUDOS
General

  1. Nothing

Normal


  1. 00:26:833 (x) - Add Note ? yeah sound better
  2. 00:30:694 (3) - New Combo seems not necessary =A=
    00:34:853 (4) - ^
    00:44:952 (3) - ^
  3. 00:52:972 (x) - Add Note ? Orz oops I think it doesn't fit~
  4. 00:59:209 (1) - Finish ? I think whistle is better~
  5. 01:11:981 (4) - New Combo
    02:53:269 (3) - ^
    02:58:021 (3) - ^
    03:02:774 (3) - ^
    04:06:338 (4) - ^ other didn't fix =.=
Hard

  1. 00:59:209 (5) - Finish ?
  2. 04:08:269 (1) - Sound Change to 5 % hmm but I think it is too low =A=

Interesting Map >w<//~ thanks~

Have a star ~!
only change one issue, but still work~
Miya
Hello Nymph :).. Thx for mod request~

Wow, very good map.. I should give you a star :D I like it.. My mod must have a lot of suggestion >.<

General
Why not filling the source with 'Spice and Wolf'. Your BG and video is from "Spice and Wolf'. So you should fill the source with it :)

Normal
01:00:397 (1) - remove new combo? (It still same rythim of the song, so i think it's better to remove the new combo :))
02:43:764 (1) - ^
03:52:675 (3) - ^
04:09:308 (8) - ^

Hard
00:29:209 (2) - 1 grid up?
00:50:892 (7) - 1 grid left?
01:15:546 (8) - 1 grid down?
01:20:001 (5) - 1 grid right?
04:06:932 (5,6) - 1 grid down?

Sorry if my mod doesn't help you. It doesn't mean i'm lazy.. But your map are good.. :D Good luck nymph :)
Topic Starter
Nymph

Miya wrote:

Hello Nymph :).. Thx for mod request~

Wow, very good map.. I should give you a star :D I like it.. My mod must have a lot of suggestion >.< thanks~ :>

General
Why not filling the source with 'Spice and Wolf'. Your BG and video is from "Spice and Wolf'. So you should fill the source with it :)
sorry but the song is not from spice and wolf... so it can only goes into the tags..
Normal
01:00:397 (1) - remove new combo? (It still same rythim of the song, so i think it's better to remove the new combo :)) yeah you are right, removed this one.
02:43:764 (1) - ^ sorry but gonna keep this one=A=
03:52:675 (3) - ^
04:09:308 (8) - ^ removed.

Hard
00:29:209 (2) - 1 grid up?
00:50:892 (7) - 1 grid left?
01:15:546 (8) - 1 grid down?
01:20:001 (5) - 1 grid right?
04:06:932 (5,6) - 1 grid down? sorry but these didn't fixed.. I think they are fine for me, so gonna to keep them~

Sorry if my mod doesn't help you. It doesn't mean i'm lazy.. But your map are good.. :D Good luck nymph :)
thanks again~
Gamu
hi- :)

[General]

  1. Title : KOHAKU
  2. Source : Grenadier ~The Senshi of Smiles~ (I found that the OP of this anime is this song called KOHAKU)
  3. Tags : "opening" add
References → Japanese page

All suggestions


[Normal]

  1. 00:58:021 (2) - 1 grid up
  2. 00:59:209 (1) - ^
  3. 01:27:724 (1) - finish or whistle add
  4. 01:41:387 (1) - circle add
  5. 01:43:170 (2) - try this
  6. 01:45:546 (5) - try this
[Hard]

  1. HP+1
  2. 00:29:209 (2) - 1 Repeat(here)
  3. 00:37:526 (4) - ^
  4. 00:55:348 (6) - new combo add
  5. 01:30:249 (1) - finish or whistle add
  6. 02:21:189 (2) - circle add

Good map!!!!
Topic Starter
Nymph

-Gamu- wrote:

hi- :)

[General]

  1. Title : KOHAKU
  2. Source : Grenadier ~The Senshi of Smiles~ (I found that the OP of this anime is this song called KOHAKU) yeah but this video is not from that source so I can't add it as source..
  3. Tags : "opening" add ok
References → Japanese page

All suggestions


[Normal]

  1. 00:58:021 (2) - 1 grid up
  2. 00:59:209 (1) - ^ fixed
  3. 01:27:724 (1) - finish or whistle add I prefer not imo.
  4. 01:41:387 (1) - circle add don't think so, just keeping now
  5. 01:43:170 (2) - try this
  6. 01:45:546 (5) - try this
    not bad, but I think mine is fine =A=
[Hard]

  1. HP+1
  2. 00:29:209 (2) - 1 Repeat(here)
  3. 00:37:526 (4) - ^ I don't think so, no repeat is on purpose~
  4. 00:55:348 (6) - new combo add not necessary imo
  5. 01:30:249 (1) - finish or whistle add
  6. 02:21:189 (2) - circle add Don't feel like this =A=

Good map!!!!

thanks~
HellDawn
Normal
00:59:209- move to (408,160) because hard to read for newbie
02:12:873- finish
02:17:625- ^

Hard
00:37:526- 1 repeat ?
00:54:457- finish
Topic Starter
Nymph

HellDawn wrote:

Normal
00:59:209- move to (408,160) because hard to read for newbie
02:12:873- finish
02:17:625- ^

Hard
00:37:526- 1 repeat ?
00:54:457- finish
sorry didn't change anything=.= still thanks for mod~
DeadAlready
\:D/ 8番目星get daze~(被打)
Topic Starter
Nymph

quintitem wrote:

\:D/ 8番目星get daze~(被打)
五条姐=A=
al2e10
[Hard]
00:22:972 (1,2) - Spacing right?
00:56:536 (9) - NEw combo and remove 00:56:833 (1)
01:22:378 (5) - New combo and remove 01:22:972 (1)
01:46:734 (6,7) - Sapcing or 01:47:031 (7) new combo and remove 01:47:328 (1)
02:40:793 (6) - NEw comb and remove 02:41:387 (1) -
Nice sound effect ~~~

Good luck STAR
Topic Starter
Nymph

KingsAL2 wrote:

[Hard]
00:22:972 (1,2) - Spacing right? on purpose~
00:56:536 (9) - NEw combo and remove 00:56:833 (1)
01:22:378 (5) - New combo and remove 01:22:972 (1)
01:46:734 (6,7) - Sapcing or 01:47:031 (7) new combo and remove 01:47:328 (1)
02:40:793 (6) - NEw comb and remove 02:41:387 (1) - nah I don't think so.
Nice sound effect ~~~

Good luck STAR
thanks~=A=
Lidan
Hey :3

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:754 (X) - Add circle?
  2. 02:35:447 (2) - Add a clap on first repeat?
    If done, add a clap on 02:36:635 (4).
[Normal]
  1. Couldn't find anything.
Nice map ^.^
Topic Starter
Nymph

L i d a N wrote:

Hey :3

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:754 (X) - Add circle? I think empty is better~
  2. 02:35:447 (2) - Add a clap on first repeat? sorry I don't like it that way =A=
    If done, add a clap on 02:36:635 (4).
[Normal]
  1. Couldn't find anything.
Nice map ^.^
thanks~
SapphireGhost
We meet again.

[General]
- Offset needs to be 4556. That's where the music starts (as opposed to the current offset, which is a measure before the music starts).
- There's a small kiai inconsistency as you can see here.
- Remove letterboxing during breaks due to video.

[Hard]
02:09:902 (5,6,1) - The switch from 1.07x to 2.42x spacing here is too sudden. Figure out a way to regulate the spacing a bit more.
03:09:308 (3,4,5) - Same thing but more extreme this time, do try to make the spacing a bit more readable.

[Normal]
For the easiest difficulty, it would be nice to have HP -1, OD -2, AR -1.
03:06:338 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - Pattern should be more centered.

I think that's around all I have to say. PM me after fixes and stuff.
Topic Starter
Nymph

SapphireGhost wrote:

We meet again. www

[General]
- Offset needs to be 4556. That's where the music starts (as opposed to the current offset, which is a measure before the music starts). fixed.
- There's a small kiai inconsistency as you can see here.oops fixed the kiai on hard.
- Remove letterboxing during breaks due to video.removed.

[Hard]
02:09:902 (5,6,1) - The switch from 1.07x to 2.42x spacing here is too sudden. Figure out a way to regulate the spacing a bit more.fixed.
03:09:308 (3,4,5) - Same thing but more extreme this time, do try to make the spacing a bit more readable.move to the right side.

[Normal]
For the easiest difficulty, it would be nice to have HP -1, OD -2, AR -1.ok.
03:06:338 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - Pattern should be more centered.spacing? then fixed.

I think that's around all I have to say. PM me after fixes and stuff.
thanks~all fixed
SapphireGhost
Fixed a note that was unsnapped on [Hard] for some reason. Usually I wouldn't approve of two-difficulty mapsets but I think this is alright. You also have five Pending bubbles now, which is sort of interesting. Er, anyways...
Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks Sapphire :> ~ (=A= I love my bubbles~
Colin Hou
as request~

I'm fan of Mikuni too :3 (from Full Metal Panic yeah)

[General]:
  1. Title: KOHAKU
  2. source: Grenadier ~Hohoemi no Senshi~
  3. Add tags: Okui Masami
poped in case of accidents for now, will do a full mod this evening I suppose.

------------------------ tsuzuku ------------------------

[General]:
  1. tags: Ookami to Kohaku Iro no Tabi RL.MADteam
  2. remove 'Spicy Wolf' from tags.
  3. I'd like to say, leave break during 02:50:892 ~ 03:09:902 and map the current break part is a quite better choice.
[Hard]:
  1. 01:03:368 (2,3) - ctrl + r them?
  2. 01:12:576 (3,4,1) - spacing a bit weird
  3. 01:22:378 (5) - new combo
  4. 01:22:378 (5) - disable new combo
  5. 01:46:734 (6,7,1) - spacing
  6. 01:47:774 (2,3,4,1) - ^ consider disable grid snap while adjusting
  7. 01:59:209 (1,2,3) - spacing
  8. 02:08:120 (1,2,3) - ^
  9. 02:40:793 (6) and 02:41:387 (1) - just you know
[Normal]:
  1. 04:07:526 (5,6,7,8) - a bit weird shape, 04:09:308 (8) 1 grid up then ok.
sore, ijou desu.
Topic Starter
Nymph

Colin Hou wrote:

as request~

I'm fan of Mikuni too :3 (from Full Metal Panic yeah) www

[General]:
  1. Title: KOHAKU OK
  2. source: Grenadier ~Hohoemi no Senshi~ this mp3 is from a video MAD and I am pretty sure I can't use the mp3 source as the map source.
  3. Add tags: Okui Masami added
poped in case of accidents for now, will do a full mod this evening I suppose.

------------------------ tsuzuku ------------------------

[General]:
  1. tags: Ookami to Kohaku Iro no Tabi RL.MADteam added
  2. remove 'Spicy Wolf' from tags. ok
  3. I'd like to say, leave break during 02:50:892 ~ 03:09:902 and map the current break part is a quite better choice. Sorry but I just don't want to map that part.
[Hard]:
  1. 01:03:368 (2,3) - ctrl + r them? sorry but don't want to.
  2. 01:12:576 (3,4,1) - spacing a bit weird 囧 I think it is fine
  3. 01:22:378 (5) - new combo k
  4. 01:22:378 (5) - disable new combo k
  5. 01:46:734 (6,7,1) - spacing k
  6. 01:47:774 (2,3,4,1) - ^ consider disable grid snap while adjusting k
  7. 01:59:209 (1,2,3) - spacing k
  8. 02:08:120 (1,2,3) - ^ k
  9. 02:40:793 (6) and 02:41:387 (1) - just you know k
[Normal]:
  1. 04:07:526 (5,6,7,8) - a bit weird shape, 04:09:308 (8) 1 grid up then ok. k


sore, ijou desu.


EDIT: Source added.
Colin Hou
need full-upload
Topic Starter
Nymph
Full uploaded done
Colin Hou
well, time to return the bubble
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks~
Sakura
Set slider tick rate to 2 on all difficulties and i'll rank it
Topic Starter
Nymph

Sakura Hana wrote:

Set slider tick rate to 2 on all difficulties and i'll rank it
fixed~
Sakura
Sounds much better now

Ranked!
Topic Starter
Nymph
Thanks Hana-chan~ :>~
Megurine Luka
结果这个最先rank

<3五泡大神现在变四泡了
tutuhaha
泡你妹,泡你全家Q皿Q.................
哭了T皿T...........
恭喜T皿Tb............
Topic Starter
Nymph
噗 Luka大哥兔兔蛤蛤姐你们2个太傲娇了 囧
S h i o n
恭喜⑤泡大神~~
hoLysoup
Nymph-sama
恭喜~^^
Topic Starter
Nymph
thx shion holysoup~
Kawayi Rika
恭喜~ Nymph 好善良~ ;)
wcx19911123
应该是不想6泡毁灭osu mapper界
所以只能委曲求全先rank一张0.0
Topic Starter
Nymph
谢了Rika~ 长喜你节操掉了注意拣
JoJo
啊咧...?? =——=|||

神速rank.....Omedeto~ >3<
IkkiMinami
:)
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