- t e n n y a - wrote:

[General]
nothing

[Easy]

1. 00:22:383: how about move them to x104 y68 ? it'll make a better flow
2. 00:41:738: 3rd slider point to x400 y8?
3. 01:12:706: 2nd slider point 2 grid up and 3rd point 3grid right?

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]

1. 00:48:706: nc?
2. 00:49:093: if you do so ^ then remove nc on here
3. 01:05:738: supposed to be 1 grid up

[Insane]

1. 00:35:351: add note?

[ExTrA]

1. In my opinion, this diff should be name as "Extra"
2. 01:27:802: add finish?

thats all I can find, nice map

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Sagisawa-Yukari~
Sorry for delay, my midterm is so crazy

[General]
NCs and hitsounds are really disorder in all diffs

[ExTrA]
00:31:093 (1) - remove NC
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - So cute, I like it, while I am not sure it is rankable. Maybe you can combine them into one slider
00:59:544 (x) - add a note here
01:15:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not so regular, you can use Ctrl+Shift+D
01:23:157 (1) - I suggest you to add a note in the center before spinner

[Insane]
01:12:318 (6,7,8,9) - I prefer the rhythm like x_xxx
01:15:415 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:18:512 (1,2,3,4) -

[Hard]
01:18:512 (7,8,9,1) - like [Insane]

[Normal]
00:32:060 (1,1) - in Normal/Easy diff, such spinner is not recommended, since it is too close to the next note, which is hard to the new play
00:55:286 (1) - ^
01:07:673 (1) - ^
01:23:157 (1) - ^
00:54:899 (x) - add a note here

[Easy]
00:38:254 (1) - same
01:13:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - why not set like pentagon

Good Luck~

Midasmens wrote:

小米來看圖~
request in-game~

General
為啥tags裡有自己的名字 lol
整體說一下~需要改進的地方很多w 音效、排列都有~
新手要學會積累經驗哦~
~~~~~~

Easy
HP & OD +1
首先這個難度的clap似乎沒有一定的規律像2 4 clap那樣~同時音效也比較雜亂無章呢~所以最好加強音效方面的能力哦~
00:16:577 (1) - 這一開始的spinner結尾怎麼那麼大聲吶~減小一點
00:25:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - combo數字達到6不適合easy難度~NC方面多考慮
00:38:254 (1,1) - 這個spinner後面的slider出現的實在是太快了~對於新手來說肯定會鬱悶的~一定要改（建議去掉spinner換成別的）
01:07:673 (1) - 在 01:09:222 這裡就結束吧
01:21:609 (1) - 後移1/2
01:21:609 (1) - 是想中線對稱麼?

SPOILER

01:26:254 (1) - 來個finish結尾
~~~~~~

Normal
00:16:576 (1) - 爲什麽不和easy一樣結尾消音呢?
00:23:931 (5) - NC
00:32:060 (1) - 結尾聲音小聲點
01:26:254 (1) - finish
~~~~~~

Hard
00:20:835 (6) - 碰到了血條~Rule裡有規定最好不要碰到~所以降低一點
01:04:576 (4,5) - 放正了~

SPOILER

01:05:738 (7) - NC
01:15:222 (1) - ^
01:20:060 (7) - ^
01:27:802 (13) - 這裡用finish不是很好嘛~~其它難度也要保持一樣w
~~~~~~

Insane
00:25:867 (8) - NC
00:55:286 (1) - 在 00:57:609 這裡結束~
01:09:415 - 明顯有個音~加note
~~~~~~

ExTrA
不覺得這個diff的clap有點大聲麼~~考慮換一個clap音或者降低音量w
00:16:577 - 好奇爲什麽其它diff都有的spinner在這裡卻沒有了~ ._.
00:24:125 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 喜歡這裡~梗不錯
00:30:802 - 這裡考慮價格note~否則會感覺太空了
00:45:996 (5) - NC
00:51:222 (7,8,9,10) - 略吵~
01:13:673 (2,4) - 雖然堆成梗很好~但總感覺有點違和~可能是vocal這裡是兩個音而卻用一個長slider導致少了什麽的感覺
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個打起來不舒服w
01:27:899 (1) - 結尾消音~
~~~~~~

好了~就這些~作為新手還算湊合~不過要改進的地方有很多很多~
多多領悟~積累經驗 ~ 一定能做的很好的吶 >3<
Good Luck~

٩(๑╹◡╹๑)۶

1. 00:46:770 (1,3) - 下移一格
2. 00:53:738 (1,2) - 结尾clap
3. 01:01:480 (1) - 上移一格 和00:58:383 (1) - 对齐
4. 01:07:673 (1) - finish

1. 01:10:770 (1) - 开头finish

1. delete bookmark
2. 00:19:673 (3) - 左移一格 放到y轴
3. 00:31:286 (8) - 和6没有重叠好
4. 00:32:060 (1) - +finish
5. 00:44:447 (7) - 这slider很坑 建议改成xxxxx x的节奏
6. 00:53:544 (4,5) - 右移一格 放到y轴
7. 00:59:544 (5) - 建议位置X:480 Y:252
8. 01:10:770 (1) - 开头finish
9. 01:23:157 (1) - finish
10. 01:25:867 (2,4) - 下移一小格

1. 00:21:028 (8) - 没有重叠好【←强迫症
2. 00:25:673 - +note
3. 00:31:673 (9) - NC
4. 00:33:609 (3) - 开头finish
5. 00:45:996 (1) - NC should be here and finish at start
6. 00:47:351 - add note x:268 y:112
7. 00:49:093 (1) - 最好和00:48:706 (10) - 重叠起来
8. 01:06:706 (4) - 不好好修下形会死嘛【←强迫症
9. 01:07:286 (5) - 右移一格 对准y轴【←强迫症
10. 01:10:770 (1) - 开头finish
11. 01:22:770 (9) - 也放y轴做对称好了【吗的这diff是不是专给强迫症找不痛快啊

1. 00:19:673 (1) - +finish
2. 00:21:028 (1) - 去掉NC 明明是一样的spacing
3. 00:25:383 (2,3) - 我觉得整体这两个往下移一格看上去比较得劲 也仅仅是比较得劲而已
4. 00:25:673 (4) - 中间加finish
5. 00:31:093 (2) - 这个前后spacing不一致却沿用相同排列的才需要+NC
6. 00:33:609 (1) - 开头finish
7. 00:43:673 (8) - 1 grid left(grid level 4
8. 00:45:996 (5) - NC?
9. 00:51:415 (8) - 强烈建议把这个note拿出来
10. 00:54:706 (11) - 删掉 把10换成折返 哦对10的尾和9的头贴在一起会影响美观 建议把10的角度换一下
11. 00:58:383 (1) - finish
12. 00:59:157 (4) - +reverse
13. 01:03:028 (8) - 同理和前面45贴在一起了
14. 01:04:576 (4) - finish
15. 01:27:802 (1) - finish

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

[General]
* Overall, you having a lacks of hitsound in all diff. Please add clap when the object is snap at 2nd and 4th ticks


[Easy]
01:25:480 (1,2) - This overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts from spinner. It can be hidden for players at gameplay


[Normal]
00:23:931 (1) - This slider looks awkward for me. Make a wave slider?
00:39:802 (1) - Too far from spinner, it could be hard to reach for beginners
00:45:996 (1) - ^
00:52:189 (1) - ^
00:52:576 (2) - It overlapped by spinner-osu, and it's hidden for beginners
01:25:480 (1,2) - Overlapped by hitbursts, it can be hidden for players


[Hard]
00:19:673 (3) - New combo?
00:30:318 (5,1) - These jump looks awkward and surprising for me. Consider to fix the spacing
00:44:447 (7) - New combo?
00:59:738 (1,2,3) - This doesn't looks stack correctly while gameplay


[Insane]
00:19:673 (5) - New combo?
00:22:770 (7) - ^
00:26:641 (3) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar
00:37:480 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This pattern part looks boring without any slider. Consider to add slider around this part


I guess this map needs a bit more mod before bubble. Get 3 or more mods, and then PM me for recheck

1. 00:34:383 (3) - 试试中间加个红点。两面。。。。orz像这样。。摆放位置自己调一下把~
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:41:738 (2) - 把1包好~>_>
3. 00:49:093 (1,2) - 2没拉好。。拉得和1一样>_>~

1. 00:23:931 (1) - 这是神马诡异的东西/。\...
2. 貌似没什么好看的了。。。很规矩~

1. 00:20:641 - add note？~距离和后面那个一样就好了~
2. 00:23:738 - add note？~
3. orz....没什么其他的了。orz。。。总感觉我的mod好少。orz

1. 01:27:899 - add spinner..在01:30:899 - 结束~？
2. 大体没问题、、、不过slider的美观就有点。。。试试把所有的slider都拉的好看点。。均匀点？~

1. 郁闷我pass不了。orz。。。跪了
2. 00:19:770 - delete？~然后移开点？~
3. 00:20:641 (7) - 这里节奏有问题。。。移到00:20:738 - ？。。。感觉有点奇葩。。。要不这里改成sldier？~
4. 00:23:738 (4) - ^....节奏问题。往后移1/4
5. 00:26:641 (8) - 延长1/4拍？~然后00:27:028 - +个note？~
6. 00:29:931 (4) - 你这个节奏是故意的么.....往后移1/4拍？~。。。orz
7. 01:20:060 (1,2) - 对称。。
8. 01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 全部改成1/4的节奏？~。。。1/6好诡异。
   SPOILER

   

1. Your taiko diff is still osu format V9, please open it and then save directly to update it to v10 and then upload your mapset
2. Uncheck Letterbox During Breaks due to there's video
3. Remove your name from tags........

1. 00:22:383 (3) - here. End a slider at long-white-tick (downbeat) is not a good idea except special cases. Both music(drum) and vocal start from 00:22:770 - , so it's better to place something for player to "click down" for better sense imo
   
   and it's not only issued in Easy diff but all other diffs
2. 00:31:867 - unnecessary break~
3. 00:39:802 (1,2) - make a better parallel?
4. 00:41:351 (1,2) - try to make the blanket here better?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:48:318 (3) - remove finish, it's too heavy here~
6. 01:16:964 (2) - move NC to here for downbeat

1. 00:24:706 (2) - looked weird... how about this shape?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:060 - remove break
3. 00:35:157 (1) - not a good shape : too curved... try this one?
   

   80,100,35157,6,0,B|48:140|60:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

4. 00:54:899 - add a note for consistent beat
5. 01:06:512 (2) - also weird shape~~ to this kinda short slider, red node may be a good choice
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:20:835 (3) - ^

1. 00:27:802 (6,7) - recommend to stack them, or don't stack 00:27:415 (4,5) -
2. 00:41:351 (4) - NC?
3. 00:44:447 (1) - it's really heard...weird....i think 1/4 beats here is unnecessary...
4. 00:49:480 (3) - change to a 1/2 repeat slider?
5. 00:53:738 (1) - bad stack here... i prefer a jump to stack..
6. 01:17:544 (2,3) - touch HP bar
7. 01:19:673 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow?
8. 01:25:867 - i can't understand why you leave a blank here...both drum and vocal has beat here so i highly recommend a note
9. 01:27:028 (3) - and this end is also a bad choice imo.

1. 00:22:383 (4,5,6) - an odd beat here~~hmm....i think here could be several shift like:
   
   
   
   
2. 00:28:964 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 00:40:673 (4,5) - move to next red-tick to make triplet with 00:40:964 (6) -
4. 00:41:351 (1) - how about change it to a 1/2 or 3/4 slider?
5. 00:43:673 (5,6,1) - also odd blanks here, why not fill some beats here?
6. 00:46:770 (4) - and this kinda slider... i notice similar shape many times in your map and i don't like the shape...either red-node or symmetrical is better than your choice imo
   
   red-node sample

   
   symmetrical sample

   
7. 00:48:512 - add a note here or make the beat here like:
   
   it is a good place for triplet
8. 01:02:641 (7,8,9) - suitable stack can improve the playability of your map but overuse it will ruin the flow
9. 01:04:189 (3,4,5) - still odd beats
10. 01:05:351 (7) - to be honest i can't very agree with it -- both placement and beat. If you wanna a symmetrical placement here, i highly recommend you to move it 1/2 tick prev for vocal and then add a note at 01:05:738 -
    
11. 01:07:480 - start spinner here?

1. HP+1 OD-1 to balance the difficulty
2. 00:31:673 (2) - +NC to emphasize
3. 00:35:157 (6,7) - i suppose this kinda stack may break the flow
4. 00:41:157 (5) - change to a 1/4 repeat slider?
5. 00:42:318 - add a note
6. 00:48:706 - ^
7. 00:50:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i cannot see any reason to place a stream here with weird claps at beginning and end
8. 00:51:609 (9,10) - remove claps
9. 00:59:157 (4) - add a repeat
10. and about kiai.... to be honest...symmetrical placement is not suitable imo

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod~

[Easy]

1. 00:34:383 (3) - 试试中间加个红点。两面。。。。orz像这样。。摆放位置自己调一下把~
   SPOILER

   
   --I'll fix it
2. 00:41:738 (2) - 把1包好~>_> --OK~
3. 00:49:093 (1,2) - 2没拉好。。拉得和1一样>_>~

--这里本来就打算一样啦

[Normal]

1. 00:23:931 (1) - 这是神马诡异的东西/。\...--I'll make a better,thanks~
2. 貌似没什么好看的了。。。很规矩~

[Hard]

1. 00:20:641 - add note？~距离和后面那个一样就好了~ --唔。。这里加了会不会感觉有点别扭。。
2. 00:23:738 - add note？~ --因为是hard所以不想要太多连打O3O
3. orz....没什么其他的了。orz。。。总感觉我的mod好少。orz

[Insane]

1. 01:27:899 - add spinner..在01:30:899 - 结束~？--除了EX其他我感觉到这里结束就可以了吧。。
2. 大体没问题、、、不过slider的美观就有点。。。试试把所有的slider都拉的好看点。。均匀点？~

[EXT燃?]

1. 郁闷我pass不了。orz。。。跪了
2. 00:19:770 - delete？~然后移开点？~ -- 感觉没什么问题。。
3. 00:20:641 (7) - 这里节奏有问题。。。移到00:20:738 - ？。。。感觉有点奇葩。。。要不这里改成sldier？~ --OK，I'll move to00:20:738 -
4. 00:23:738 (4) - ^....节奏问题。往后移1/4 --听上去没问题
5. 00:26:641 (8) - 延长1/4拍？~然后00:27:028 - +个note？~ --这样没问题吧
6. 00:29:931 (4) - 你这个节奏是故意的么.....往后移1/4拍？~。。。orz --听上去感觉没问题呀O3O
7. 01:20:060 (1,2) - 对称。。 --Let me think about it
8. 01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 全部改成1/4的节奏？~。。。1/6好诡异。
   SPOILER

   

--让几个人玩下来试试没啥问题不过还是谢谢~

Good Luck~=w=~
and Star！~

Pokie wrote:

General

1. 00:18:415 - , 01:24:512 - 說一下這種slider結尾靜音，其實不適合放在spinner的前1/4 或 1/2拍，後移到長白線的位置
2. SRWOG2.jpg 這張BG應該沒用上吧，可以刪掉
3. 話說Preview time的位置聽著不太對勁，是不想設在kiai嗎?
4. 之前雖然說過這歌不適合無腦下24clap，但最主要還是保持音效的規律，只是以目前來說…音效像時有時無的…或者說難度與難度之間基本沒有規律性可言。所以Leorda的建議其實沒有說錯，不過他一天mod那麼多圖懶的跟你細挑哪裡要怎麼補音效吧 囧

Easy

1. Easy跟24clap的話其實很傷感，畢竟節奏都基於13拍，加在13上反而更好
   00:33:996 (2,3,4,5) - 這邊不下clap是有什麼原因嗎? --OK，add clap now
   01:10:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 兩個slider各前移1/1拍 (音效也要一起修改)

--fix it,thanks~


01:13:867 (1,2,3,4) - ^

--fix it,thanks~

Normal

• 00:26:254 (2) - 這邊1/1疊的意義似乎不大，分開放打起來也比較順手: http://puu.sh/1qrcB --fix it,thanks~
  00:38:254 (1) - 為何放spinner在這奇葩的位置! 相比下00:32:060 - 這個位置用spinner比較正常，建議替換成長slider --fix it,thans~
  00:50:641 (1) - ^ --fix it,thanks~
  01:03:415 (1,3) - clap

--add clap now,thanks~

Hard

• 00:21:996 (3) - slider head加上whistle --add whistle now
  00:27:802 (6) - whistle --OK~
  00:28:189 (8) - slider head加上whistle --all right~
  00:41:738 (5,10) - clap --OK~
  00:44:447 (1) - 這一串的音量需要下調，其實保持60%也行，提高到80%反而有些礙耳的感覺…? --fix it,thanks~
  00:45:222 (2) - 可以挪開一些? 畢竟和前面的節拍是1/2，有重疊的話容易讀成1/4 --OK~
  00:45:996 (5,1) - 這邊clap就下太多了，如果打算紅線下clap就不如乾脆整段都這麼做 OK,remove clap in red line
  00:59:738 (1,2,3) - 連打沒有疊好 --重新叠过了，感谢~
  01:10:770 - 以我個人來說，kiai的音效必須比通常段要豐富，這裡給我感覺剛好相反…不夠激情!! (喂

--我试着改改，谢谢~

Insane

1. 音效要靠你修改了!
   00:24:318 (1,2) - 不太適合縮短間短 --改回来了~谢谢
   00:32:060 (1) - spinner結尾的音量可以稍往下降 --OK~
   00:34:770 (8) - 考慮在這邊new combo? --NC now
   00:44:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 同Hard, 另外看不太懂這一串的音量變化有何用…從80上升到100再馬上下降到60後接80? --已经删了~
   00:48:318 (4,5) - 這個位置00:48:512 - 有note的話，用這個間距也無妨…但現在沒有，所以間距需要修改 --修正了谢谢~
   01:09:222 (1,2,3,4) - 嚴重懷疑這裡是1/3拍子 --这里没问题吧。。
   

ExTrA

1. 感覺kiai前後的排列風格轉換挺突然的
   00:18:415 - 綠線後移1/4拍 --OK~
   00:25:093 (1) - 據說這種slider重疊需要做個小偏移 --好
   01:09:222 (1,2,3,4) - 換成1/3拍子 --考虑一下
   01:13:673 (2,3,4) - 由於目前的節奏沒有對上歌曲，建議將這三個note後移1/2拍，然後於01:13:673 - 這個位置補上一個circle

--这个也考虑下orz。。。


最後的難度保留意見，加油

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Your taiko diff is still osu format V9, please open it and then save directly to update it to v10 and then upload your mapset
2. Uncheck Letterbox During Breaks due to there's video
3. Remove your name from tags........

--OK,change v10 now

[Easy]

1. 00:22:383 (3) - here. End a slider at long-white-tick (downbeat) is not a good idea except special cases. Both music(drum) and vocal start from 00:22:770 - , so it's better to place something for player to "click down" for better sense imo --I think this part is ok...
   
   and it's not only issued in Easy diff but all other diffs
2. 00:31:867 - unnecessary break~ --Yes,remove break time now
3. 00:39:802 (1,2) - make a better parallel? --OK~I'll fix it
4. 00:41:351 (1,2) - try to make the blanket here better? --all right~fix it
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:48:318 (3) - remove finish, it's too heavy here~ --remove finish now
6. 01:16:964 (2) - move NC to here for downbeat

-- --ok,I'll do

[Normal]

1. 00:24:706 (2) - looked weird... how about this shape?
   
   SPOILER

   
   --fix it,thanks~
2. 00:32:060 - remove break --remove it now,thanks~
3. 00:35:157 (1) - not a good shape : too curved... try this one?
   

   80,100,35157,6,0,B|48:140|60:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   --Umm...I think miantian the status quo..
4. 00:54:899 - add a note for consistent beat --OK,add note now
5. 01:06:512 (2) - also weird shape~~ to this kinda short slider, red node may be a good choice
   
   SPOILER

   
   --ok,I'll fix it
6. 01:20:835 (3) - ^

--fix it now,thanks

[Hard]

1. 00:27:802 (6,7) - recommend to stack them, or don't stack 00:27:415 (4,5) - --both stack...
2. 00:41:351 (4) - NC? --Yes,NC now
3. 00:44:447 (1) - it's really heard...weird....i think 1/4 beats here is unnecessary... --Ummm...well,I'll change a spinner here
4. 00:49:480 (3) - change to a 1/2 repeat slider? --Ummm..I think it is ok now
5. 00:53:738 (1) - bad stack here... i prefer a jump to stack.. --OK, fix it
6. 01:17:544 (2,3) - touch HP bar --oh,fix it.Thanks a lot~
7. 01:19:673 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow? --I think it is ok now
8. 01:25:867 - i can't understand why you leave a blank here...both drum and vocal has beat here so i highly recommend a note --OK,fix it
9. 01:27:028 (3) - and this end is also a bad choice imo.

--change spinner here- -

[Insane]

1. 00:22:383 (4,5,6) - an odd beat here~~hmm....i think here could be several shift like:
   
   
   
   --oh,I think it is OK D:
2. 00:28:964 (1,2,3) - ^ --I think this part is no problem
3. 00:40:673 (4,5) - move to next red-tick to make triplet with 00:40:964 (6) - --miantian the status quo
4. 00:41:351 (1) - how about change it to a 1/2 or 3/4 slider? --Ummm...I'll think about it
5. 00:43:673 (5,6,1) - also odd blanks here, why not fill some beats here? --fix it
6. 00:46:770 (4) - and this kinda slider... i notice similar shape many times in your map and i don't like the shape...either red-node or symmetrical is better than your choice imo
   
   red-node sample

   
   --fix it ,thanks~
   
   symmetrical sample

   
7. 00:48:512 - add a note here or make the beat here like:
   
   it is a good place for triplet --fix it ,thanks~
8. 01:02:641 (7,8,9) - suitable stack can improve the playability of your map but overuse it will ruin the flow --I think it is ok now
9. 01:04:189 (3,4,5) - still odd beats --Ummm...I'll think about it
10. 01:05:351 (7) - to be honest i can't very agree with it -- both placement and beat. If you wanna a symmetrical placement here, i highly recommend you to move it 1/2 tick prev for vocal and then add a note at 01:05:738 - --OK~I'll fix it
    
11. 01:07:480 - start spinner here?

--All right~

[ExTrA]

1. HP+1 OD-1 to balance the difficulty --fix it
2. 00:31:673 (2) - +NC to emphasize --OK~
3. 00:35:157 (6,7) - i suppose this kinda stack may break the flow --I think this part will be no problem
4. 00:41:157 (5) - change to a 1/4 repeat slider? --I think it is ok now
5. 00:42:318 - add a note --fix it
6. 00:48:706 - ^ --fix it
7. 00:50:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i cannot see any reason to place a stream here with weird claps at beginning and end --I think it is no problem
8. 00:51:609 (9,10) - remove claps --I think it is no problem..
9. 00:59:157 (4) - add a repeat --OK~I'll fix it
10. and about kiai.... to be honest...symmetrical placement is not suitable imo

--Ummm...Let me think about it

that's all, good luck with the rank~

-[NYAN]- wrote:

[Easy]

00:32:060 - 加上break time --恩。。之前的版本有人说这里不要break time我就不加了
00:33:609 (1) - finish in slider's start --fixed
00:35:157 (1) - 去掉finish --fixed
00:40:964 (2) - ^ --fixed
00:42:512 - 去掉finish --fixed
00:45:996 - 加finish --fixed
00:47:544 (1) - 去掉finish和nc --fixed
00:49:093 (1,2,1,2) - 同改过的00:45:996 (1,2,1,2) - --fixed
00:52:189 (1) - 加上finish 于滑条的开始 --fixed
00:58:383 (1,1) - 两个滑条的开始处添加finish --fixed
01:03:415 (1) - clap --fixed
01:14:641 (2) - 用whistle代替吧 --这里用拍子也不是不行
01:15:415 (1) - 去掉ehistle --fixed
01:16:964 - finish --fixed
01:19:286 (2) - 去掉finish --fixed
01:20:060 - finish --fixed
01:25:480 (1,2) - easy里这种梗不要出现.. --fixed

[Normal]

OD+1 --I think OD3 is OK~

01:16:964 (3) - 用1/4滑条节奏能好些 --fixed
00:19:673 (1) - 加上finish在滑条的开始 --fixed
00:21:222 (1) - 去掉finish --fixed
00:23:931 (3) - 去掉finish --fixed
00:25:867 (1) - finish --fixed
01:25:480 (1,2) - normal最好别用这种梗...建议分开来 --fixed
从 00:19:673 -开始加finish，每隔一个大白线加一次，其余的finish去掉 结束于00:31:673 - ， 在00:31:673 -这个点不加finish --fixed

[Hard]

00:33:415 (1,2) - 这两个感觉多出来了，不符合节奏，建议删去 --这里没问题吧
00:36:706 (8,1) - 我建议节奏这样改改能好点 --fixed
--fixed
00:45:802 (1) - slider上红点完全可以去掉的，如果这里用了折返滑条，后面的00:46:383 (2,3) - 这个节奏会显得空旷 00:47:544 (1,2,3) - 这些地方的时间轴也建议填满（红线上有物件或者slider的头或者尾巴）比如
--感觉这样没问题了
00:58:286 - 不再加个note? --fixed
00:59:544 (4) - 挪到200|160 --fixed
00:59:835 - 同上 --fixed
01:03:028 (7,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 这段时间节奏和前半段整体不饱满，建议再填一填 --这里就这样吧，感觉没问题
01:11:351 - 再来个note --不用
01:12:318 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方做成用匀加DS的方式的跳能好点? --这样也不错
01:13:480 (6) - NC --fixed
01:13:867 (1) - 去掉NC --fixed
01:18:512 (1,2) - 这个跳有点过于突然了 --fixed，改过来了
01:20:641 - 加个note --还是别加了，这样就可以。。
01:20:835 (2,3) - 跳有点突然 --这点应该没什么吧。。
01:13:480 (6) - 换成clap --fixed
01:13:867 (1) - 加上finish在滑条的开始 --fixed
01:15:222 (4) - 去掉finish --fixed
01:20:060 (1) - 加上finish在滑条的开始 --fixed


说真的，小猫觉得EXTRA留着还不如删掉.....真的.......

lkx_shore wrote:

[Extra]
00:25:093 (1,2,3) - 为什么不取消grid snap手动对齐?(2)在x86 y232左右(3)在x89 y253左右 --fixed
00:31:480 (2) - 加个note,00:31:480放在橙色滑条上不容易路人 --感觉这里还是不要加的好
00:48:706 (13,1,2,3) - 13飞到1的轨迹非常绕,打起来会不舒服 --其实之前给几个人玩过都没注意到这点，所以最后还是考虑不变了
00:49:673 (5) - 换成这样顺手很多↓ --fixed

01:13:673 (2,3,4) - 唔...我感觉这里完全没融入节奏 --老实说我感觉这里跟的是歌词。。

[NYAN's Insane]
00:16:577 (1) - 消音比较好
00:23:351 (7) - 你整个铺面都快塞满了...这里漏一个感觉会有点不爽，在x328 y300加个note?
00:32:060 (1,1) - 白线都加上whistle吧
00:41:351 (1) - 滑条头finish
00:45:222 (8) - 加个note？
00:46:383 (3,1,2) - 很绕,1放在x132 y228,2放在x256 y288会好很多
00:49:867 (3,4) - 噗...偏点放吧?不过不改也没什么
01:06:125 (2) - 有点绕,不过不改也没什么问题

其实我感觉用ar9也不错的

[Hard]
00:33:415 (1,2) - 去掉whistle --fixed
00:33:609 (3) - 滑条头whistle --fixed
00:33:996 (4,5) - 滑条头whistle换成尾巴whistle --fixed
00:35:157 (1) - 去掉whistle --fixed
00:42:706 (1) - 不合节奏... --这里没问题
00:44:060 (3) - 放x168 y204吧 --fixed
00:45:802 (1) - 大白线whistle,尾巴的whistle去掉 --fixed
00:48:706 (4,5,6,7) - 去掉whistle --fixed
00:49:093 (1) - 滑条头whistle --fixed
00:49:867 (3) - 头whistle --fixed
00:58:964 (4) - 不合节奏 --没问题
01:00:512 (4) - ^ --同上
01:04:576 (1,2,1,2) - 感觉有点丑... --还好吧。。。
01:12:512 (2,3,4,5) - 这间距在hard里是不是有点太难了,这间距我怎么看都得用ar8...加个nc吧 --咦？长白线不是NC了么O3O
01:19:286 (6,7,8,9) - ^ --同上，持保留意见

[Normal]
00:21:609 (2) - 头的finish去掉，要加就在前面的大白线加 --fixed
00:58:383 (1) - 尾巴的whistle和finish去掉 --fixed
00:59:544 (3) - finish移到大白线上 --fixed
OD+1? --Normal的话我个人还是不倾向于AR OD相同啦。。

[Easy]
其实我觉得这和normal感觉好像...
HP-1 --fixed

Good luck

lkx_shore wrote:

[NYAN's Insane]
00:16:577 (1) - 消音比较好 嗯，这个不错
00:23:351 (7) - 你整个铺面都快塞满了...这里漏一个感觉会有点不爽，在x328 y300加个note? 我试过了，如果加了note感觉有点过于满，所以我决定还是不加
00:32:060 (1,1) - 白线都加上whistle吧 嗯好
00:41:351 (1) - 滑条头finish 好的
00:45:222 (8) - 加个note？ 直接搞成9 stream了
00:46:383 (3,1,2) - 很绕,1放在x132 y228,2放在x256 y288会好很多 换了一种排列，谢谢提醒啦
00:49:867 (3,4) - 噗...偏点放吧?不过不改也没什么 这个没管
01:06:125 (2) - 有点绕,不过不改也没什么问题 换了排列

其实我感觉用ar9也不错的 我的这个要是AR9下面的那个ex就没意义了吧...

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

01:12:512 (2,3,4,5) - 这间距在hard里是不是有点太难了,这间距我怎么看都得用ar8...加个nc吧 --咦？长白线不是NC了么O3O
01:19:286 (6,7,8,9) - ^ --同上，持保留意见 大跳加nc提示.这样好点

Flower wrote:

好老公你要的re-mod

[General]
原标题是「流星Lovers」，所以应当在tag里加上Ryuusei，或者把标题改成Ryuusei Lovers然后在tag加Meteor
然后麻烦把Jam Project和你自己的名字从tag里移掉……这个没必要 改了


[nyan]
00:39:609 (1,2) - 交换NC 这个我感觉我的挺好啊
00:45:415 - 00: 45:415 00:45:512 觉得这两处可以加上note，或者把00:45:609 (1) - 改成1/8并且渐强音量（30-80 Normal）光改了音效
00:49:867 (3) - 建议问一下XAT这个程度的reversearrow遮挡可不可以 KPY说能行
01:09:222 (1) - 没有鼓点节奏的话我觉得这里用切分音比较和谐 原先的更符合音乐


LAO GONG JIA YOU > <

Flower wrote:

好老公你要的re-mod

[General]
原标题是「流星Lovers」，所以应当在tag里加上Ryuusei，或者把标题改成Ryuusei Lovers然后在tag加Meteor --fixed
然后麻烦把Jam Project和你自己的名字从tag里移掉……这个没必要 --不是我说拿掉了我没法做user page

[Easy]
话说这回怎么感觉E跟N一样难了……
00:18:899 (1,2) - 可以交换 比较有flow（虽然我不知道flow是什么） --fixed
00:30:512 (1) - 往右下角移一点因为尾端碰到前面的00:28:964 (1) - 了 --fixed
00:32:060 - 只是建议：你可以放一段soft sample的长滑条 ---因为这是easy我想想还是别堆满的好
00:38:254 (1) - 我好像有提过这个转盘的问题 太短了而且后面的note也太近了 --fixed
00:44:447 - 同00:32:060 - --想想这是easy还是算了吧
00:55:286 (1) - 在00:57:609 - 结束 --fixed
01:07:673 (1) - 只是考虑一下在01:09:996 - 结束的可能性，可选 --fixed
01:24:706 - 完全可以一个N Finish敲上去的，而且听不见声音新手容易miss，建议考虑 --fixed

[Normal]
全曲哔哔哔的哨声让我有点想哭
建议你戴上耳机调大音量然后自己看 然后找LKs之类的人看下 我有点不会吐槽
00:33:609 - 00:44:447 - 这段降低音量到40%或者改成S之类的
00:45:996 - 00:55:286 - 这段调到50%
00:39:415 - clap --fixed
00:40:189 (1,2) - 往右调整一点避开遮挡 然后00:40:576 (2) - 这形状可以调整下…… --fixed
01:24:706 - 同EZ --fixed

[Hard]
音效问题见Normal 对照修改
这跳的难以直视……你确定一般的玩家能随手FC么
00:33:222 - 不要消音 实在是不能再说 --我。。这里本来没啥音乐啊O3O。。。
00:36:415 (6) - 这里三连摆在白线相当难听 我知道你肯定持相反意见 不过我的意见是删掉这个note --不愧是老婆就是了解我不过还是fixed了
00:45:609 - 不要消音 我就不写理由了 --这里还是消了好毕竟我也不是用自定义音效的233
01:09:512 - 01:09:512 - 01:09:512 - 太空了，可以在指定的三个地方加上note --下面还有个I呢。。
01:20:835 (2) - 突然来个Anti-Jump立刻就挂了。摆远一点，或者在01:20:641 - 加note --fixed

[nyan]
00:39:609 (1,2) - 交换NC
00:45:415 - 00: 45:415 00:45:512 - 觉得这两处可以加上note，或者把00:45:609 (1) - 改成1/8并且渐强音量（30-80 Normal）
00:49:867 (3) - 建议问一下XAT这个程度的reversearrow遮挡可不可以
01:09:222 (1) - 没有鼓点节奏的话我觉得这里用切分音比较和谐

[ExTrA]
00:31:673 (1) - 你没回我mod我也不知道你什么理由。这里还是那句，建议旋转180度放到对面，不然间隔不同不好读图
然后剩下的基本都是我在前面的mod里吐槽过然后你又没改的。麻烦这次你回一下我上次的ExTrA的mod。

[Taiko]
你问我的评价是什么，虽然我上次mod过了我觉得还是remap plz比较好。至于为什么，主要是节奏太乱，不是很整齐，kiai的节奏反而放的更散了，打起来也不是很爽。kiai完全可以用二四白线来下蓝，或者红线下蓝来体现热烈的感觉。



LAO GONG JIA YOU > <

Flower wrote:

Hi~ qq request~

[Extra]
叫Extra多没意思……而且也不是真的有那么难 换个名字多好 Suicidal啦Deadly啦Heroic啦Legendary啦
而且遮挡太乱 有时间最好remap一下对比一下梗然后再remap第三次（好吧当我没说）
00:21:028 (1,1) - 遮挡丑 往下移 --下面？再下面没地方了
00:25:093 (1,2,3) - 很难读而且没有什么梗 建议向左下至少偏移两格 --fixed
00:25:093 (1,4) - 交换NC --fixed
00:27:802 (3,4,5,7) - 移到上面去 00:27:802 (3) - 的位置大致是x=328 y=68 其他顺移，这样可以不让00:28:964 (1) - 被遮挡 --这里挡住也没什么不好吧
00:28:964 (1) - 建议略微顺时针旋转以使滑条尾对准00:29:544 (2) --可以这样
00:31:673 (3) - 间距一样不好读图 建议旋转180放到对面 --我个人认为能打这种难度的多数难不倒他了况且这都是滑条。。
00:51:802 - 可加个note，一般这种二连有点讨厌 --这样不是正好对上节奏么，不用了
00:54:318 (10,11) - 敢放开点么>_< --fixed
00:59:157 (4) - 挡住略难看 要么叠在00:58:189 (15) - 下面 --就这样吧。。
00:58:189 (15) - 这么明显一个finish还用我说么…… --fixed
01:01:480 (3) - reverse arrow被挡住了 nuke --fixed
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 放到01:16:189 - 好听些，但是01:16:770 - 01:16:867 - 还是要加note --这个就这样。。
01:16:964 (5) - NC --fixed
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这什么……1/4滑条摆满都好听一些 或者删掉01:27:544 (6) ，在01:27:415 - 01:27:609 - 各加一个1/4滑条
01:30:802 - 虽然别人也这么摆但建议在01:30:899 - 结束 因为最后转盘声音会突然降低 --转盘的话fixed，其他的保留





Good luck~

Pokie wrote:

General

1. 新Guest diff的Tags還沒弄好

--这个我看了，的确没弄好现在更正

Hard

• 
  00:30:899 (1) - 建議改成2連+1/4 slider來回 (記得補上音效)
  
  
  --fixed
  00:33:996 (4,5) - 這裡節奏nooooooooo, remap前我不記得有這種問題…改成這樣吧 (同記得補音效)
  --fixed
  
  00:35:157 (1,2,3) - 這三個的間距我看不太懂…前面雖然也有這種情況, 勉強可以算是隨音樂變化弄的…但這邊就沒原因要弄不相等間距 --fixed，已经改成等距了
  00:40:770 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這部份突然就成Insane了, 至少得把連打的間距降低, 然後(6,7)的間距放大一點
  
  
  --fixed
  00:42:706 (1,2) - 節奏noooooooo, 放slider時應該多考慮一下到底有沒踩中vocal/鼓點…否則就像現在這樣各種off-beat
  將(1,2)後移1/2拍, 空出的位置加個circle吧
  --fixed
  
  00:45:802 (1) - 中間兩個紅點看不懂…但主要問題是00:46:383 (2) - 這個要移除, slider應該後移1/2, 結尾加clap --fixed
  00:47:544 (1,3) - clap錯位了, 倒是可以選擇加在00:47:931 (2,3,4) - --fixed
  00:50:254 (4) - 目測很多不刪300的人, 或HD玩家要淚流滿面…換一個比較容易看見的地方? (雖然我這建議的也不是好位置2333)
  
  
  --fixed
  
  00:51:222 (5) - 疊好? --fixed
  00:52:964 (4,5) - 00:53:738 (7,1) - 別這樣! 這兩組的間距為什麼差這麼遠(runs, 解決方案:
  
  
  --fixed
  
  01:09:222 (1) - 不放正中嗎, 反正都會被combo burst擋的 --fixed
  01:13:093 (5,1) - 間距開大一些 --fixed
  01:18:899 (4) - clap --fixed
  01:20:641 (2) - 移到 01:21:222 - , 01:20:835 (3) - 前移1/2拍 (記得修音效)
  --fixed

目測我不說你也看的出來, 間距的問題挺嚴重的…不是要求整張圖都要依照distance snap來弄, 而是間距要下的合理
非特殊idea的情況下, 比如說前一combo開的1.2左右, 接下個note只有0.6的話…就會很獵奇的

Easy

• 
  00:39:802 (1) - 移到這邊?
  
  
  --这里的话从中间开始对新手比较友好吧
  
  00:39:802 (1,2,1,2) - clap錯位了 --fixed
  00:50:641 (3) - 漏刪的whistle? --fixed
  01:06:899 (3) - ^ --fixed
  01:25:480 (1,2) - 建議移到屏幕中下方的位置, 因為會被spinner-clear/osu擋到
  
  
  --fixed

mod完才發現這個不是Normal, 再點進N看了眼覺得E跟N長的好像…

Normal

• 00:58:383 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 節奏微妙的違和, 整段改成這樣: (00:59:157 - 01:00:706 - clap / 00:59:544 - 01:01:093 - finish)
  --fixed
  
  01:04:576 (1) - 刪一下new combo --fixed
  01:04:964 (5) - new combo --fixed
  01:12:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - clap錯位 --fixed
  01:25:480 (1,2) - 同Easy --fixed

Guest I就交給別人挑了>_< 做的還是可以的, 不過有幾個地方需要改進一下…不過略沒動力寫了(喂

Mythol wrote:

[General]
Add whistle on the last spinner for all diffs! I used 50% volume's normal-finish.

[Insane]
00:18:899 (1,2) - Remove 1 repeat from both I don't like this rhythm...
00:32:060 (1) - Ctrl + G not mod it
00:32:835 (1) - ^ changed
00:34:964 (4) - Try 284/204? okey
00:36:706 (2) - NC here instead of previous slider fixed
01:07:673 (1) - Ctrl + G not mod it
01:08:060 (2) - ^ not mod it
01:09:222 (1) - Make this repeat on 01:09:512 It's a syncopation.....
I like this insane thank you~ ><


gl~

Mythol wrote:

[General]
Add whistle on the last spinner for all diffs! --fixed

[Easy]
00:35:931 (2) - Remove clap --fixed
00:41:738 (2) - Remove the clap on repeat and change the finish to clap on tail -fixed
00:48:318 (4) - Remove clap --fixed
00:51:415 (4) - ^ --fixed
00:55:286 (1) - Remove finish --fixed
01:03:802 (2,3,1) - Try
2 = Finish
3 = Clap
1 = Finish (head) --fixed
01:07:673 (1) - Finish + clap? sounds good o: --fixed
01:14:641 (2) - Remove clap --fixed

[Normal]
00:21:609 (2) - Fix claps starting from here they are on 1+3 beats --fixed
00:39:415 (3) - Remove all claps on this slider --fixed
00:40:189 (1) - Clap --fixed
00:51:028 (2) - Remove clap on end --fixed
00:51:802 (3) - Clap --fixed
Don't forget to re add claps
00:58:383 (1,2,3,1,2) - This will play better and follows vocals better
--oh,I think now it is well
01:03:415 (1) - Fix claps from here, they became every 1+3 beats again.. --fixed
01:04:576 (4) - Replace clap with finish --fixed
01:15:415 (1) - This is more accurate if you make the slider repeat on 01:15:706 but I guess current one is also fine.. ---Ummm...

[Hard]
00:34:189 (5) - Move this clap to previous note --fixed
00:38:835 (2,3) - Like this~
--all right~fixed
00:43:480 (2,3) - Same ^ --fixed
00:58:964 (4) - Change to this!
--fixed >A<
01:00:512 (4,5) - ^ --fixed
01:20:641 (2) - Remove clap on end --fixed
01:21:222 (3) - Clap --fixed



[Extra]
00:20:447 (7) - Add NC here to make this rhythm easier to read --fixed
00:23:738 (4) - Move this to 00:23:544 and fix spacing (I suggest 304/256) --not mod it
00:26:641 (5) - Extend to 00:26:931 --not mod it
00:29:931 (4) - Move to 00:30:028 (296/16) ---not mod it
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wow lol I'm not sure if this is rankable.. --no problem...
00:51:706 (10) - Remove this note, and make 5 note stream starting 00:51:802 --not mod it
01:13:673 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is not good.. change to this
--OK,fixed
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is really not good ._. --no mod it

gl~