1. Usagi no Youna (6.28 stars, 367 notes)

Jakomo73 wrote:

Hey, back with the m4m. Do you want me to mod the other maps too to try and fit same drain time? D: nah my guy you're good

1. HP 4 seems a bit low for this high of an SR. What about 6? hp was usually too taxing to make it high.may reconsider.
2. OD 7 seems pretty low for a technical map like this. What about 9.2? high od makes it possible to hit a few of the spaced beats.without it,this map would be much harder.
3. AR seems a little low for how reading heavy this map is, what about 9.7? done.
4. Check AIMod for some timing point conflicts oof
5. 00:16:052 - The sound here should be clickable imo since it's such a prominent sound i take this as contrasting with 00:16:143 (4) after it,but i might reconsider.
6. 00:18:870 (2,1,2,3) - slider-tail stack machine broke (some more in the map but dont wanna spam you) osu! keeps putting it back to 0.2
7. 00:19:688 (1) - move a bit to fix blanket on 2 didn't even consider.done.
8. 00:21:325 (1,2,1) - Imo these types of overlaps are really ugly, where there's just a tiny bit that overlaps. It would look a lot better if you made 2 a bit smaller so it overlaps more like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019879 sdrfeg
9. 00:24:597 (1) - I think this should be split into to circles, as although it is the same rhythm as 00:24:052 (1) - it has two distinct syllables which warrants a change to reflect that not too sure on this one my gui
10. 00:27:234 (6,1) - since it's perfectly stacked it's pretty hard to read. If you want the player to have a stop motion for the 1 slider, you could maybe do something like this which achieves pretty much the same thing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019894 i wanna prepare the player for the rest of the map that comes after this though,especially since stacking is heavily exploited in the kiai sections.
11. 00:34:143 (2) - shouldn't this be a slow slider like 00:30:325 (2) - there's a pattern to be made here my guy:
    
12. 00:43:688 - 00:45:870 - entirely up to you, but it would be cool to have a circle on each of these noises i considered it and i'll still consider it,even if it goes to rank (lol not happening) and no one opposes this.i might,but i tried it once and didn't like it.
13. 00:56:779 (1) - I don't really like this, it goes over a lot of sounds. Like at 00:57:324 - there is a drum hit that is ignored, along with the 1/3 at 00:57:597 - similar to ^,i tried doing something like this,but this stuck.i might reconsider,but atm i don't think i'll change it.
14. 01:04:779 (2,2,2) - Another thing entirely up to you, but I would prefer these to be circles for more aim intensity in the buildup it already uses uncomfortable flow and decreasing sv to make its point that there's hype,so i dunno.
15. 01:28:688 (3) - make this a repeat like 01:29:233 (7) - ? the difference between the two sliders is that one has three rhythms (the latter)
    while the other has two noticable ones.plus i don't personally like it.
16. 01:32:779 (1,2) - Make some extra overlapping and sharp movements like at 01:15:324 (1,2) - consider it done.
17. 01:41:233 (4) - What about placing this out of the pattern like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019918 I think it needs to be placed out of pattern like at 01:23:779 (4) - just for consistency's sake sdfheruagi9

This map is actually really cool, I can't wait to see the finished result good luck!! (Also lmk if u want the other maps modded)