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Monstrata
Hitsounding

00:14:677 - 00:17:534 - Places like this could use a drum-whistle for the hihat.

Shining


00:04:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Keep the intro a bit less dense. Use more 1/4 repeat sliders and less consecutive circles. That way when the instruments join in at 00:07:177 - it gives the map a more noticeable step up in pacing that fits the song.
00:51:105 (2,3) - Kinda nitpicky but move it up a bit so 2>3 fits the curve of 3 a bit better? Like so:
01:15:034 (7) - I think this also deserves a spacing increase.
01:23:708 (3,4) - While this is okay, you might want to consider changing this to a 1/2 slider instead cuz it is kinda hard to acc bpm changes. I usually use sliders cuz of the slider-head leniency. You could also add a circle on 01:24:769 - and have the spinner begin 1/8 of a beat later.

Normal

00:43:605 (4,1) - Make the curve fit a bit better here too?
01:24:769 (1) - Consider adding a circle and beginning the spinner like on the blue tick

Easy

00:21:462 (5) - Beginning here, you start NC"ing every two measures instead of every measure, so please fix them all.

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Call me back when you're ready! (Don't forget to give my map a quick check when you have time, i'd appreciate it ^^)
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Shunao

Monstrata wrote:

Hitsounding

00:14:677 - 00:17:534 - Places like this could use a drum-whistle for the hihat.

Shining


00:04:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Keep the intro a bit less dense. Use more 1/4 repeat sliders and less consecutive circles. That way when the instruments join in at 00:07:177 - it gives the map a more noticeable step up in pacing that fits the song. I put 2 more 1/4 repeat sliders, i hope it's fine lul
00:51:105 (2,3) - Kinda nitpicky but move it up a bit so 2>3 fits the curve of 3 a bit better? Like so:
01:15:034 (7) - I think this also deserves a spacing increase.
01:23:708 (3,4) - While this is okay, you might want to consider changing this to a 1/2 slider instead cuz it is kinda hard to acc bpm changes. I usually use sliders cuz of the slider-head leniency. You could also add a circle on 01:24:769 - and have the spinner begin 1/8 of a beat later.

Normal

00:43:605 (4,1) - Make the curve fit a bit better here too?
01:24:769 (1) - Consider adding a circle and beginning the spinner like on the blue tick

Easy

00:21:462 (5) - Beginning here, you start NC"ing every two measures instead of every measure, so please fix them all.

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Call me back when you're ready! (Don't forget to give my map a quick check when you have time, i'd appreciate it ^^) No problem!~
All fixed!!~

Thanks for modding!~
Battle

[easy]
00:40:034 (3,4) - tbh these kinda look ugly so could you change the shape of these or change how close they are cuz wow they're really close to each other lol
01:21:284 (1) - tbh you could put a whistle for the end, i think it fits well
[top]
00:02:891 (1,2,3,4) - i would think a little bit of movement, but not like, a lot, would make this flow a bit smoother cuz it's somewhat easy to stumble on the note presses ingame since the stacks are a bit confusing with the approach circles

kinda applies to other situations similar to it, stuff like 00:52:177 (5,6,1) - is fine tho

normal is fine too
Topic Starter
Shunao

Battle wrote:


[easy]
00:40:034 (3,4) - tbh these kinda look ugly so could you change the shape of these or change how close they are cuz wow they're really close to each other lol
01:21:284 (1) - tbh you could put a whistle for the end, i think it fits well I fixed a normal-finish on the big white tick like the others diffs, i think it's fine
[top]
00:02:891 (1,2,3,4) - i would think a little bit of movement, but not like, a lot, would make this flow a bit smoother cuz it's somewhat easy to stumble on the note presses ingame since the stacks are a bit confusing with the approach circles

kinda applies to other situations similar to it, stuff like 00:52:177 (5,6,1) - is fine tho

normal is fine too
ALL FIXED!~

Thanks for modding!~
CucumberCuc
Hi

[Easy]
00:02:891 (2,3) for other objects on diff you not to do so far, maybe do slightly are close?

[Normal]
00:57:891 (6,1) it's far, do are close

[Shining]
00:04:855 (2,3,4,5) slightly different range
00:08:605 (6,7,8,9) ^
00:13:605 (2,3,4) ^
00:24:320 (1,2,3) ^
00:51:284 (3,4,5) ^
01:12:891 (1,2,3) do the same distance?
Topic Starter
Shunao

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi

[Easy]
00:02:891 (2,3) for other objects on diff you not to do so far, maybe do slightly are close? i think it's fixed~

[Normal]
00:57:891 (6,1) it's far, do are close it's Distance Snap

[Shining]
00:04:855 (2,3,4,5) slightly different range it's fine imo
00:08:605 (6,7,8,9) ^ ^
00:13:605 (2,3,4) ^ ^
00:24:320 (1,2,3) ^ ^
00:51:284 (3,4,5) ^ ^
01:12:891 (1,2,3) do the same distance? 01:13:605 - here vocals are more strong than 01:12:891 - this is why i make a jump
Thanks for modding!~
Topic Starter
Shunao
added some tags~
Chihara Minori
me myself feel the placement on the water drop sampleset applied to fast and give less impact than it should
00:17:177 - for example, it could be stronger by just move it 1 beat after which it 00:17:891 -
ye I pointing it until 00:35:748 -

no kds
(will throw proper mod later if necessary)
Topic Starter
Shunao

Time Capsule wrote:

me myself feel the placement on the water drop sampleset applied to fast and give less impact than it should
00:17:177 - for example, it could be stronger by just move it 1 beat after which it 00:17:891 -
ye I pointing it until 00:35:748 -

no kds
(will throw proper mod later if necessary)

00:16:462 (2) - and 00:16:820 (4) - they have the same sound as 00:17:177 (5) - (sounds like a water drop) so i emphasis this sound with a hs on the last water drop which is on 00:17:177 (5) .
00:17:891 (8) - i preferred another hs for emphasis the strong sound (i've been trying the opposite but it's sound off tbh..)
Monstrata
Bubbled~
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Shunao
Nice~ d
Kurai
o 3 o
Battle
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Shunao
Nice~ xd
Pachiru
Bravo Shogun, tu rank pas mal de choses en ce moment, c'est cool :)
GG!
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Shunao

Pachiru wrote:

Bravo Shogun, tu rank pas mal de choses en ce moment, c'est cool :)
GG!
Mercii!~ :D
Imakuri
speedranking :vvvvvvvvvvvvv
gg kan mm
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Shunao

Imakuri wrote:

speedranking :vvvvvvvvvvvvv
gg kan mm
Tkt thanks!~
-NanoRIPE-
Nice
gratz!!
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Shunao

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Nice
gratz!!
Thaanks!!
AzureDoctor
Grats on speedrank, lol
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Shunao

AzureDoctor wrote:

Grats on speedrank, lol
Thanks!!
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