1. Easy (0.62 stars, 60 notes)
2. Insane (4.96 stars, 376 notes)
3. Normal (3.37 stars, 138 notes)
4. S o r d a's Hard (4.92 stars, 280 notes)

Byakugan249 wrote:

i thought u put aozora no yakusoku but this will do.

Easy:
00:29:735(3) - Make this slider the same as (2) at 00:26:735 // Nope
00:33:485(3) - Aline this with (2). it should look like this http://puu.sh/6tja // Fixed appropriately
00:37:047(1) - Aline the end point to (2) it should look like this http://puu.sh/6tnF // I don't see any problem

Normal:
00:13:047(4) - 1 grid left for the end point // I don't see any problem

Insane:
01:38:922(7) - NC // Nope
01:44:922(5) - ^

This is the best i can do and it's an honor for me to mod ur map. Star and GL

1. 00:31:047 Add a timing section with offset 31047? http://puu.sh/6wvK

1. It's ok

1. 01:05:547 (3) - I don't like the finish here, I suggest you to remove it
2. Good job.

1. 00:28:797 (4) - Fix the waypoint http://puu.sh/6wyU
2. 00:31:047 (1) - Finish
3. 00:32:547 (1) - Clap
4. 00:49:047 (3) - Finish
5. 00:49:610 (4,5) - Set in this way? http://puu.sh/6wzE
6. 00:57:860 (3) - Move the second waypoint at x282 y288 and the last x376 y332
7. 00:58:422 (1) - Spinner, end it on 01:00:485
8. 01:01:047 (2) - No whistle, add finish
9. 01:07:047 (3) - Start it with a finish
10. 01:13:047 (2) - Finish is better..
11. 01:19:047 (3) - ^
12. 01:27:860 Add a circle, with a finish?
13. 01:29:547 (4) - Finish
14. 01:30:485 - Add a circle
15. 01:30:853 The same, add a circle with finish?
16. 01:33:860 ^

1. 00:17:172 (9) - Finish?
2. Nothing to say, good map!

Chewin wrote:

General:

1. 00:31:047 Add a timing section with offset 31047? http://puu.sh/6wvK

// That's wrong metronome

Easy:

1. It's ok

Normal:

1. 01:05:547 (3) - I don't like the finish here, I suggest you to remove it
2. Good job.

Insane:

1. 00:17:172 (9) - Finish?
2. Nothing to say, good map!

I wish you good luck

Faust wrote:

Heh, ykcarrot is an eroge master

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
- Consider adding "S o r d a" to all of your tags // It doesn't work
- there is a kiai time in S o r d a's Hard different with other diffs : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:17:547, ends on 00:17:641

[Easy]
00:26:735 (2) - http://puu.sh/7086 // Fixed

[Normal]
01:40:235 (5,1,2) - cool sliders
uh.. nothing found..

[Insane]
00:58:235 (1) - ctrl + r ? // Nope

uh.. awesome map , can't find anything.. orz

winber1 wrote:

General

--"S_o_r_d_a" should be S o r d a, cuz i'm pretty those underscores work way differently than spaces lol // RB already said, it doesn't work.

Insane

00:04:047 (5) - add whistle to beginning? // Nope
00:10:047 (3) - ^?
00:44:547 (1,2) - you could follow your pattern by turning this into a slider that starts at 00:44:547 and ends at 00:44:922, and then add a note at 00:45:110. This really doesn't make any difference at all, but it just follows your pattern everywhere else (e.g. 00:31:047 (1), 00:32:547 (1), 00:37:047 (1) blah blah blah etc. in fact that was the only place where you didn't use a long slider ._.)
// I see what you say. But I follow vocal if possible. This part is quite different to others.

Normal[/b]

01:14:547 (6) - i like it better if you ended this slider 1/2 tick earlier and added a note at 01:15:110 // Good

Easy

looks fine. and lol so easy :3

nothing much to say
Nice map! :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

- there is a kiai time in S o r d a's Hard different with other diffs : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:17:547, ends on 00:17:641

winber1 wrote:

--I would just take out the kiai fountain just to be consistent, and it's not all the necessary imo. if ykcarrot wants to add it in his diffs, that's fine too i guess.

• 
  Design mod.

1. 00:19:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
   
   SPOILER

   

   388,212,19235,5,0
   344,124,19422,1,0
   256,80,19610,1,2
   168,124,19797,1,0
   124,212,19985,1,0
   168,296,20172,1,2
   256,336,20360,5,0
   256,336,20453,1,0
   256,336,20547,1,0
   256,336,20641,1,0
   256,336,20735,2,0,B|276:244|384:244,1,160,4|0

2. 00:38:922 (2,3,4,5,6,1) -
   
   SPOILER

   

   344,104,38922,1,0
   256,60,39110,1,2
   168,104,39297,1,0
   128,192,39485,1,2
   168,280,39672,1,0
   344,280,40047,6,0,B|376:248|440:248,1,80

3. 01:23:547 (1,2,3,4,5) -
   

   408,312,83547,5,0
   332,252,83735,1,2
   256,192,83922,1,0
   180,132,84110,1,2
   104,72,84297,1,0

4. 01:29:547 (4) - finish削除。
5. 01:31:235 (1) - finish追加。

Lissette wrote:

Annyung o/

S o r d a's Hard
00:04:235 (3) - delete note? Since you mostly mapping the vocalsnot fixed
00:13:985 (5) - move half beat later, sounds better imo, also if you do fix spacing^
00:35:922 (1) - remove new combo to make it the same as this one 00:48:110 (8) - or add new combo to this one, just try to make it consistence :p00:48:110 (8) -Add new combo~
01:23:360 - feels good if you add a note here, makes it more comfortable to play ^^fixed
01:44:735 (4) - delete note? fixed

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song better